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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Amnik: 11:00am On Nov 09, 2016
i av bt i no wan give u @horlorlardaey
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 11:29am On Nov 09, 2016
*Continues*


Sylvester



I jerked awake as I felt a hand on my chest, I pushed off the trespasser while I swiftly pulled out my gun from underneath my pillow. The light in the room flickered on and Annie stared at me. I sighed and shoved the gun under the pillow.


" What was that about?" She asked, looking frightened


" I'm sorry. I forgot you were here"


" I didn't do anything to warrant you pulling out a gun"


" Annie you knew not to touch me!" I growled," Why the hell did you put your hands on me?"


" Why are you so against being touched? You make love with your shirt on, you sleep with a shirt on and it took me months of begging before you even allowed me to sleep in the same bed with you! Why's that?" She asked dramatically


" I sleep in my shirt because of emergencies such as this, if you were an assailant I would have knocked you out cold and still flee before the rest of you get here." I explained


" How does that explain you making love to me with your shirt on?. I have never seen you naked from your waist up." She fumed," Or do you have an ugly scar on your upper body?"


" I don't like being touched. I wouldn't want you to mistakenly touch me"


" Why?"


" You ask too many questions Annie," I said, " Go back to sleep"


"And risk you blowing off my head? No thanks.",
She stood up and gathered her clothes on the floor.


" What are you doing?"


" Going to the guest room"


She walked out and slammed the door behind her.
************

" Shark, why didn't you tell me you had an appointment?" Mrs.Ahmed asked, glaring at me. She placed a cup of dark steaming coffee on my desk.


" I don't have an appointment, if i do won't you be the first to know about it?'' I asked, seething silently. I should just fire her while I still have the strength.


"There's a young man at the reception,he claimed to have an appointment with you today."


" Name?"


" Uchenna Nwafor" She said


" Send him in"


" But you said...."


" Send him in Please! "


" What a mood we are in this morning " She muttered before walking out


" Arrggh!"


A knock sounded on my door and Uche walked in. He looked smart in an expensive navy blue suit.


" Good Morning," He said.


" Morning, please sit down"


" Thank you," he said, " I'm sorry I had to tell your secretary I had an appointment. She almost chased me away"


" She's too tough for my own good. How may I help you?"


" I came to seek your legal assistance,"


" Have 1 k on you?" I asked,"


"Yes, why?"


" Slip it here" I said, touching my desk.


He brought out a crispy one thousand naira note from a ward of notes and slipped it on my desk. My fingers grasped it and I slip it into my pocket.


" I now represent you. Shoot"


" Oh" he said in surprise,"My younger sister was raped to death before my eyes and I want to bring the culprits to book."


I felt like a huge fist had been slammed into my chest. The images flickered in my memory quickly. Baby Bose in Mama's hands as the blood drained out of her. We had seeked shelter in an uncompleted building when the landlord ejected us, I had gone to hawk on that fateful day and Mama had left the four year old child sleeping on the floor in one of the uncompleted rooms. When she came back from where she had gone to buy garri, she had met the child awake and crying. Her pant was bloodied, she had finger nail marks and bruises on her young thighs.None of the other occupant of the uncompleted building owned up to the crime or named any suspect. My baby sister died few days later as a result of infection.


I signalled Uche to continue and he related the whole sordid event to me. I could feel my blood boiling in my veins by the time he was done talking.


" Give your brother a call, he should know who they are. Hire a detective to get dirt on them and leave the rest to me. They will never see the light of day again." I promised.


He sighed as if a great chip had been taken off his shoulders. " Thank you" he stood up," I will keep you informed"


" Do so," I said, standing up. " By the way, you mentioned during dinner last night that your girlfriend sells jewels, I want to get a special one for my mother"


" I will get her card for you, it's in my car"


" Thank you," I said, walking him out.

********
Funmi


" Afolabi residence," I said, the house phone had been ringing for a while until i decided to take the call.

" Funmi," Mabel said, " I have been trying to reach you but your line isn't available"


" Mabel! " I said, pretending to be happy." My phone is getting faulty"


" So sorry about that, please do try to get a new one" She said," Are you alright? You don't sound cheerful"


" I am missing you" I said hastily," How was your trip?"


" It was fine. My mother has been admitted, the doctors are yet to give us her diagnosis but we are keeping our fingers crossed it won't be something too serious. I called Tade but he's at work, Is Serwa there?" She asked.


I glanced at the little girl glued to the TV set, watching her favorite cartoon.


" No," I replied.


" Awwn, Where is she?" She moaned, " I miss her terribly,"


" She's taking a nap." I said, " I will give you a call when she wakes up so you can talk to her" I said


" Thank you my dear, hope she is behaving" Mabel asked


" Yes she is."


" I see a doctor approaching, I want to talk to him. I will call before Serwa's bedtime, precisely 8:30 Ghana time. Give her my love. Bye"


" Bye" I said and dropped the call, wondering why I felt so much at peace in her absence. It was like the house, the girl and the man belonged to me. A girl can only but dream, I thought.


" Miss Funmi, who was that?" Serwa asked, looking back.

" A wrong number." I snapped and the young girl resumed watching her cartoon.


Later in the evening, I was setting the dinner table when Tade walked in.He looked so rugged, tired and sexy just like the verile men I saw in e.rotic videos online. He gave me a tired smile and I felt my heart flipping. Serwa had taken her dinner and I had already sent her to bed although she begged to wait up for her dad.


" Welcome Sir,"


" Thank you," he said, " I hope you are not setting dinner because of me" he held up a white fast food carrier bag. " I got takeout"


" Oh, I went to so much trouble to make dinner. Besides Mabel will be pissed at me if she learn I didn't take good care of you" I pouted, thanks to all the foreign movies I have been watching online.



He gave a throaty deep laugh." You know that's the first full sentence you have directed at me and you have been here for almost four months.What's for dinner?"


I laughed." Amala, gbegiri and Ewedu"


He whistled and dropped the carrier bag on the ground. " For real? damn! I forgot you are a born and bred Nigerian." I totally forgot if not I would have asked you to teach Bell how to make our local delicacies."


" No problem about that," I said


" Where is Serwa?" He asked, glancing around the living room


" She's already in bed,"


" Wow, so early?" He asked, " This is just eight.O'Clock "


" She didn't take a nap at noon," I lied, the truth of the matter was I sent her to bed early because I didn't want her to talk to Mabel when she calls in some thirty minutes time"


" Hope she did not miss her mother much?"He said, " Bell called me earlier in the day"


" No, she was pretty much herself"


" Thank you for taking good care of her. I will go shower and come down shortly for dinner. Thank you Funmi,"


" You are welcome Sir, " I said, smiling.
*********

Uche


" Mama," I called, walking into the living room. I dropped the carrier bag containing the provisions I bought for her on the table in the living room.She had called me to inform me of her Illness so I quickly dashed over there when I rounded up at the office.


" In here!" A familiar voiced called out from the kitchen.


A tall, curvaceous ebony skinned lady was in the kitchen although she had her back to me, I would recognize the woman who caused me so much pains even in the darkness." Cecilia," I said in surprise." What are you doing here?"


" Good to see you too Uche," She said, frowning


" You haven't replied me." I said, marching towards her in anger." What the hell are you doing here?"


" Don't talk to me like that!" She fumed," Your mother was sick and she called me to assist her."


" I don't know what games you are both up to but I won't allow it. Since when did you become a doctor?''


Mama came into the kitchen, a wrapper was draped around her shoulders." Uche, you are here" Mama said softly, " Please thank Cecilia for me o"


" What is she doing here?" I spat out in anger


" Cecilia has been helping me since Chinasa returned to her boarding school" Mama replied, patting her on the back.


" Why is she helping you? Since when did she become a nurse maid?"


" Calm down nah, is that how to talk to your wife? " Mama said, " She has been of great help to me unlike that other girl"


" Wife? " I laughed in mockery, " Please don't start."

I made to leave but both women blocked my path.


" Where do you think you are going? " they both chorused.


" Please leave my way"


" You are very wicked Uche," Cecilia said, " After you made me lose my baby you ran into the arms of another woman. A Yoruba woman for that matter! now she has turned you against your own mother?"


" Where were you when we were in abject poverty?, where have you been for the last two years?." I asked Cecilia, I turned my anger on my mother." Despite all Dupe has done for this family is this how you choose to reward her?. Mama, You will regret ever dragging this girl back into your life." I said and walked out of the kitchen, I vowed within never to step my feet into my mother's apartment again.
********

The next day, I dialed the number Chidubem called me with to no avail while I packed my suitcase in preparation of my travel. I picked up the black velvet box holding the engagement ring i bought and kept it back in a safe smiling. I had already reserved a seat at the restaurant I want to propose to my sweetheart. I walked out of the house with my suitcase, my phone went off in my pocket and I slipped it out.


" Hello Uche," Dupe said, in a low voice.


" Hello baby," I said, " What happened? are you crying?"


" Your mother and ......." She choked on tears


" What did my mother do to you again?, What did she do?" I asked in anger


" She came to my shop with a lady, the lady said I snatched you away from her. They both damaged my goods, they tore my shop apart. My showcase glass was broken........" She said, sniffling." Uche, I am getting tired of this"


"Damn.Are they still there? Call the police!" I said


" They have left."


" I' m so sorry dear, honestly I don't know why my mother is hell bent on tearing us apart. I will pay for all the damages incurred, Please get them arrested when next they try to pull such crazy thing on you again. I am waiting for the taxi that will take me to the airport, remember I told you I will be away for two weeks? Site supervision"


"You did.have a safe trip" She disconnected before I could reply.

" I love you, we will talk when I get back" I said.

******

Sylvester


I have been following the girl for reasons I couldn't explain even to myself. She was a sweet kind soul and she always wore a bright smile on her face. No wonder a magnetic force seemed to be pulling me to her. After a victory in court, I felt like celebrating with her, sometimes I get tired of trying alone, sometimes I feel so small and uncertain.Sometimes I wish someone could hold my hands and tell me not to worry too much and that it would be alright. There are several women who would be more than glad to hold my hands but it won't be to comfort me. I drove down to her shop in the evening and I parked few meters away, I was wondering how best to announce my presence to her when a taxi stopped in front of the shop. Two women alighted, the younger one had a long stick in her hand.I didn't think it was weird of her to be carrying such big log since she was going into a luxury shop. Maybe they wanted to do some carpentry work for Dupe so I paid them no heed.


Some minutes later they emerged and re_entered the taxi which zoomed off. I alighted, prepared my lines and headed in the direction of her shop. I was perplexed to see the shop in disarray when I entered, a glass which must have held some jewelry lay broken on the ground. Some Jewelry cases was broken, some strings of beads was on the ground and a box of beads was scattered all over the place. Dupe had her back to me but I knew she was crying and sniffling back tears as she tentatively picked up each of the Jewelry cases.


" Dupe," I called gently


She whirled around and froze, her eyes was bloodshot and her cheeks was stained with her tears. She wiped away the tears with the back of her hand. " Hello,"


" What happened? Were you robbed by the women who left here some seconds ago?" I said without thinking. " Should I call the police?"


" No. It's okay " She said, standing up.


" Your goods have been compromised and your shop is in disarray. It is not OK"


" How did you know here?" She asked." I mean how did you...."


" Your boyfriend gave me your card. I wanted to buy a jewelry for my mother"


" That's .....that's nice. I will put things in order, so you can choose what you want" she bent to retrieve another jewelry case and pricked her finger on a shard of glass. She snatched away her finger but the damage was already done. Her blood trickled down her hand and landed on the floor.


"Now you have hurt yourself" I wrapped the bloody finger with my handkerchief." Let me drive you home"


She shook her head." I want to put this place in order"

" Dupe don't be stubborn about this please. Lock up the shop I will drive you home"


" I can't go home.....now." She said, " I need to pull myself together first" She dapped at the tears streaming down her cheeks with her good hand".


" Where's the key to the shop?"


She fished it out of her bag and I took it away from her.I led her outside, locked up the shop and I coerced her into having some hot chocolate drinks.She was silent all through the short drive to the hot chocolate cafe. I ordered two hot cups and handed her one as we took our sit.


"Thank you," She said, lifting the cup to her full lips.


"You are welcome," I replied " Why did the women attack you?"


She sighed and placed her cup on the table,"She said my shop belongs to her son."


" Who? the older woman? " I asked," Who is her son? Is she Uche's mother?"


She nodded and took a sip of her chocolate.


" Do you want to sue her? She damaged your goods?"


She smiled," No, Thank you Shark. I can take care of myself "



TBC

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 11:31am On Nov 09, 2016
iwakacome:
Bibi abeg post nau

Pele. Updated. You asked abt my day yesterday, it was good hope urs was too kiss

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Roseygold(f): 11:55am On Nov 09, 2016
bibijay123:

Loool laughing in Chinese grin cheesy, bibiola grin
yes o. My own christain naa original. Ok waiting patiently for today update nice work madam bibi more data to your phone and more strenght to your finger

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by veekid(m): 11:55am On Nov 09, 2016
Flat headz are wicked

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Roseygold(f): 12:19pm On Nov 09, 2016
Madam b i dont no u ve update. This uche mother need deliverance o i prefer silv for dupe because of that stupid mother. Hmmm funmi u beter don't disgrace urself

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by dominique(f): 12:41pm On Nov 09, 2016
I looove this lenghty update Bibi, keep it coming.
You have successfully turned Funmi into an evil manipulative winch. Diaris God o
N.B The word Jewellery is not pluralized.


veekid:
Flat headz are wicked

Rule 2! angry
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 12:57pm On Nov 09, 2016
dominique:
I looove this lenghty update Bibi, keep it coming.
You have successfully turned Funmi into an evil manipulative winch. Diaris God o
N.B The word Jewellery is not pluralized.




Rule 2! angry

Thank you dear, will modify now. Pls pardon my boo embarassed

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by iwakacome: 1:14pm On Nov 09, 2016
Yeah it was. Nice update. Am enjoying the twist but Funmi's part isnt fair frm an introvert christian girly to a bi.tc.h.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 1:15pm On Nov 09, 2016
LeMubs:
Update please


Meanwhile please vote my write up in the etisalat prize for literature....
it won't take your time
Here is the link

https://prize.etisalat.com.ng/flash-fiction/voteall.php?id=696

God bless you.
NOTE - to vote without stress please use any other browser aside from opera mini

Hi dear, it seems their site is down for now but I will try again later.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by dominique(f): 1:17pm On Nov 09, 2016
bibijay123:


Thank you dear, will modify now. Pls pardon my boo embarassed

He should take his time o. That's how tribal war starts.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by yorhmienerd(m): 1:43pm On Nov 09, 2016
Cool!
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by LeMubs(f): 2:11pm On Nov 09, 2016
bibijay123:


Hi dear, it seems their site is down for now but I will try again later.



Thanks so much
do try again
God bless you
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 2:29pm On Nov 09, 2016
Fumni has turned into a psycho.... I'm ashamed of her... even Dupe wouldn't do all these things...
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by adebriana(f): 3:43pm On Nov 09, 2016
Uche's mom is really getting on my nerves, what a witch. I feel so bad for Uche, he really loves Dupe but she might give up soon cos of his mom... poor guy. As for Funmi, what a b*tch,is she trying to steal Mabel's family... Damn.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by noblet2(f): 6:47pm On Nov 09, 2016
So Bibi wants to turn sister Funmi to an Esu..

Lemme just be looking at her.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Jay542(m): 6:49pm On Nov 09, 2016
I finally caught upgrin See my very own Funmi sha embarassed
bibijay123❤❤

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Horlorlardaey: 7:08pm On Nov 09, 2016
Amnik:
i av bt i no wan give u @horlorlardaey

lo gimme sef

aunty bibi will gimme her own

lemme goan meet her in the other room
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by veekid(m): 8:08pm On Nov 09, 2016
dominique:


He should take his time o. That's how tribal war starts.

I'm sorry ma'am; was only kidding. Plz pardon my manners lipsrsealed

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Orlolahdey(f): 8:14pm On Nov 09, 2016
Uche's mother is a witch....Aunty Funmi waka y?...lovely story dearie, keep rocking

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 8:41pm On Nov 09, 2016
Chapter Thirteen


Dedicated to olatex25,Jay542,Toboski1, Iamlukas




Funmi


Mabel called everyday but I always told her Serwa just ran out or she was down for her nap. In the first two weeks she didn't make anything of it but she was becoming anxious to speak to her. She sent her friend Rose over to check up on us, luckily for me Serwa was actually down for her nap that day. Rose promised to check back and left. Every evening, a hot and delicious Nigerian delicacy awaits Tade on the dinning table.


After he had his meals, we would talk about his day and how I and Serwa's day went. sometimes we would sprawl on the living room floor playing monopoly while the three of us banter with each playfully. Occasionally he would slip Mabel into the conversation and remind me to give her a call. I don't know why I felt the way I did, It feels like Tade and Serwa were mine and they belonged to me alone. I had a deep sickening feeling of keeping them to myself forever. I made his meals, gave him a listening ear when he needed it and I took care of his child. I read her bed time stories, I attend her Pta meetings and I taught how to make a kite. Just like a loving mother would do.


Somehow it felt right that they should be mine. I never wanted to hurt Mabel but to me she didn't deserve them. She ignored the young girl when she was around and she led Tade by the nose. She didn't treat him with the respect he deserved, she doesn't call her mother_ in_ law or care about her husband's friends. It was always about her, her friends, her life and her pleasure.


" How's your boyfriend? " Tade asked, one evening during dinner.


"I don't have one and I have never had one before"


He looked shocked " Interesting, You are quiet young. Don't you desire to be in a relationship and eventually settle down?"


" I do. I am still waiting on the lord" I replied honestly


" There's this guy I know. He's a good guy and he's single too." He said," besides he's also a good christian. Can I hook you guys?"


" I don't know....."


" Don't worry. He's a good friend of mine. His name is Fola, a Nigerian "


" Alright." I replied uncertainly


" I will give him your phone number. If you don't like him, there are more fishes in the river" he said, laughing.


The only fish I want to hook is you but I don't know why. It should feel wrong and I should be feeling guilty but I don't, I thought." How did you meet Mabel?"I asked instead.


" We met at a dinner party." He replied, " We were attracted to each other from the moment we set eyes on each other." He sighed, " I miss my Bell so much,"


I nodded and stuck the prongs of my fork into the chicken on my plate. " When is she coming back?"


" That reminds me. She said you have been keeping Serwa from her and she was worried that we were hiding something from her. She actually thought Serwa was sick. I assured her Serwa is fine, please do try to call her as often as you can and let her speak to serwa. I know Bell is a worrywart"


" I call her often but the thing is she usually calls when Serwa is down for her nap."


" I think I will get Serwa a phone, so Bell can reach her directly." He said


" That's a good idea" The chicken in my mouth suddenly turned sour. I don't want Mabel anywhere near my child_ I mean my ward.
*********

Fola turned out to be a starchy looking man in an expensive car but his fashion sense was zero. I cringed when I saw his churchy gray and blue suit jacket and pant and his oldskool hair cut. There was nothing sexy, charming or rugged about him. He smiled too much and he was just too nice for my liking. He picked me up from the house while Tade sat Serwa. He took me to an expensive restaurant, he tried to know me but my mind was elsewhere. I couldn't even enjoy my dinner because I was worried.


I wondered if Serwa was already in bed, did Tade give her a good bath?, did he read her favorite stories from a book or did he make it up as I often did? I wondered what Tade was doing and all I wanted was to run back to my family at home.


" So tell me something about you which I don't know," Fola said


I love watching e.rotic videos while I fantasize about your friend. I wondered what his reaction would be if I actually told him that." You already know all there is to know about me," I replied



He nodded his head and gave me a pleasant smile." You are a lovely lady and I want to know more about you. I want to invite you to my church this Sunday and I would also like you to meet my pastor"


I flashed him a fake smile, " That would be nice, I look forward to that"
********


Tade stayed up waiting for me when Fola dropped me off at 11 pm. He was in a bathrobe, nursing a glass of wine.


" How was your first official date?" He asked,


I shrugged, " Okay. I guess"


" Geez, was it that bad?" He asked, " Or did he make any move you did not like?"


I dropped on the sofa and he sat down beside me. " Please pour me a glass, "


" Oh. I didn't know you drink" He asked, filling a glass for me.



" I don't "


" Here," he handed me a glass of wine." What happened?"


" He was nice, kind and charming but I didn't feel any connection towards him"


" This is just the first date Funmi," he said, " You will feel more connected to him when you get to know him better. Fola is a good guy and he earns well too."


" I don't know.....I...have never felt connected to any guy before or crushed on one"


" Maybe...... maybe......you feel more chemistry with women?" He asked



" Women?" I asked, "No I don't"


" You can't say for sure until you have had an encounter with one. Have you ever gotten intimate with the opposite sex before?"


" No,"

He whistled, " How about a kiss?"


" No."


" I think you are into women then,"


" I am not!" I stated vehemently, I made to stand up but he pulled me back on the sofa.


" I know this is crazy.....but", he pulled my face closer and kissed me softly on my lips. My mouth closed over his, he deepened the kiss and abruptly stood up." You are definitely not into women."


"Y.....yea I guess,"


" I am sorry. I shouldn't have done that. It's just that......you looked so miserable not knowing your sexuality."


" Thank you.....for helping me find out"


" Ummn, we.....we shouldn't have this conversation again. Goodnight Funmi,"


" Night Tade," I said, using his first name for the first time.
***************
Dupe


Sylvester sent a cleaning company to clean up my shop and put it back in order. Despite his mean reputation he seemed so different in person. He was so soft spoken and gentle, his dark eyes never missed a thing and he seemed so perceptive to my feelings. He always knew what I was feeling and thinking, sometimes it feels like he was in my head.


For the duration of the two weeks Uche was not around, Sylvester and I seemed to have stepped over the formal boundaries. He was gradually becoming a friend to lean on, I don't know what Uche would make of our friendship so I kept it from him. I wished Funmi and I hadn't grown apart, I wished I could call her and dump it all on her. She would listen, beret me for putting up with Uche's mom, give me a hug and offer to pray for me. Although Sylvester was also a good listener, he had so many mysteries surrounding his person and he was too close mouthed. He rarely talks about himself, he dodges any question about his family and he always found a way to shift the conversation away from himself.Besides, he wasn't a girlfriend who you can totally bare your heart and soul to.


I dialed Funmi's line and waited for her to pick up.

" Hello," She said breathlessly


" Hello stranger, what are you up to?"


" Sorry Dupe, I have been so busy. Mabel traveled so I am left on my own to deal with her daughter and the girl is a handful. How are you?"


" I' m alright. How about you? met any hunk yet?"I asked.


She laughed." As a matter of fact, yes"


" Wow! what's his name? his he a Nigerian? "


" He's a Nigerian " She replied.


" Have you been on a date with him?"


" Not yet," She replied, " how's Uche?"


I sighed and narrated everything to her." His mother really want to tear us apart and I am getting tired. I don't know what to, I have prayed and fasted"


" I know what you can do. I have a solution,"


" Oh Funmi, You are a life saver! what should I do?"


" Poison her," She stated.
*********

Uche


I was bubbling with excitement as I led Dupe into the elegant restaurant. Our seat was by the fountain in the open court yard.Today was the 'D' day, I couldn't wait to see the wonderful expression on her face as I go down on bended knees to propose to her. I had discreetly slipped the ring to the waiter who would bring it to her on a sliver platter, some guitarist was also waiting by the corner to start playing a favorite tune of hers as soon as I went on my knee.


" I have something to say to you," Dupe said, as soon as we sat down.


" I have something to say to you too but ladies first. I' m listening"


She suddenly looked nervous and her eyes were downcast. " I have had time to think while you were away. About us,"



" Yes, I thought a lot about us too," I chipped in, beaming.


" Uche, please don't interrupt me. This is hard for me as it is,"


I sat upright, suddenly feeling tense." Alright"


" I also prayed a lot about what I am about to say," She sighed heavily, " I can't continue with this anymore."


" Continue with what?" I asked, " What are you trying to say?"


" I want out. I can't keep looking after my back every second. I am not happy and your mother too isn't happy. This is best for all of us, I' m sorry."


" Wait, wait. You are breaking up with me? because of my mother?" I asked in disbelief


" I'm sorry."


" Here's what I have for you." I said, slipping the cheque out of my inner suit pocket.


She accepted it, took a look at me and pushed it back to me." 1 million naira. I can't accept it."


" Why?"


" I......I don't know. It will feel like you are paying me off,"


" I am not paying you off! I love you! I want to...."


" Keep your voice down! You are shouting, " She said, scrapping her chair backwards. " I wanted to tell you in person, don't tell me you love me please, it will only make it hurt more. It is better I walk away now, I' m sorry Uche,"


" Dupe, wait. I....."


" Take care Uche,"


" Please hear me out. Tonight is...."


" Please be good to yourself," She said, backing away before fleeing out of the open court yard.


I felt a hand on my shoulder and I whirled around. The waiter, stood beside me with the silver platter containing the ring in his palm. I took the platter from him, retrieved my ring and walked out dejectedly.



TBC

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 8:41pm On Nov 09, 2016
veekid:


I'm sorry ma'am; was only kidding. Plz pardon my manners lipsrsealed

angry

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by yorhmienerd(m): 8:52pm On Nov 09, 2016
Bibi why? I'm sad really sad
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by veekid(m): 9:04pm On Nov 09, 2016
Intriguing; Bibi is truly intelligent....... more more and more

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Lleigh(f): 9:24pm On Nov 09, 2016
Nice one bibijay

Keep up the good work

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Jay542(m): 9:38pm On Nov 09, 2016
What a good way to know whether Funmi was into womensad Tade na badguysmiley.
Thanks Bibi.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 9:47pm On Nov 09, 2016
Orlolahdey:
Uche's mother is a witch....Aunty Funmi waka y?...lovely story dearie, keep rocking


Thanks

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 9:48pm On Nov 09, 2016
Jay542:
What a good way to know whether Funmi was into womensad Tade na badguysmiley.
Thanks Bibi.

Lol na experiment nah cheesy

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 9:49pm On Nov 09, 2016
Lleigh:
Nice one bibijay

Keep up the good work

Thank you dear

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 9:51pm On Nov 09, 2016
yorhmienerd:
Bibi why? I'm sad really sad
Kissing away the sadness kiss

Cc Toboski1 thank you bro, I saw your footprints kiss

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by crazygod(m): 9:51pm On Nov 09, 2016
Funmi have spoil o cry
By the way......Bibijay123..... Are u into women and how can I know? Oya bring ur lips let me find out. grin

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Jay542(m): 9:55pm On Nov 09, 2016
bibijay123:


Lol na experiment nah cheesy
Make we do that experiment bikowink

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