PamelB:
success dear and tanx for the story. I enjoyed every bit of the ride.

thanks a bunch!!!!

even though its s tragic ending I still love the story. creeza you are good. Best of luck in your exams.

Gabriel died..
Well, sh*t happens. Well done creeza and Goodluck in your exams.

Why na Creeza why
Sh!t happens, and life has a way of phucking people's life up... Good work

Waoh.......been a ghost reader on this thread since the beginning but I can't just help buh to comment at the end... . this is a very nice work creeza more grease to ur elbow

Nice story creeza. I like the fact that it is narrated from the point of view of the characters involved. It is immersive. I was expecting a much happier ending sha, all the same happy endings don't happen all the the time. I was also expecting a twist of event when the grandpa grabbed the gun. A twist that would prolong the story and the suspense. Good job and good luck in your exams.

cutediva87:
even though its s tragic ending I still love the story. creeza you are good. Best of luck in your exams.

thanks ,

the title makes it tragic.... I'm sorry , don't worry next story I write will have a happy ending.

manuel80:
Gabriel died..

Well, sh*t happens. Well done creeza and Goodluck in your exams.

Thanks a lot...

shit happens indeed.

id intended to make a long comment after the story but u cut it short with the tragedy...... ive neva been a fan of tragic story but nonetheless thumbs up nd to the story ill juz say wow! nd wow! again... i drop ma pen hre.

The story ended unexpectedly still somethings are not meant to be, know when to let go. Creeza you are too much, thanks.

Tears in my eyez! Just thesame feeling when i lost the only man i ever loved to kidnappers (12/11/14). Maybe 1day I'l share my story.

Nice story creeza, your gift must surely make way for you. life is full shit, I've learnt alot from your story, Dami's desperation for love got her into palava, Gabriel's quest of "get rich" took a wrong turn. In the end, everybody was hurt.

Good luck in your exams Creeza

mercichoco:
Tears in my eyez! Just thesame feeling when i lost the only man i ever loved to kidnappers (12/11/14). Maybe 1day I'l share my story.

Nice story creeza, your gift must surely make way for you. life is full shit, I've learnt alot from your story, Dami's desperation for love got her into palava, Gabriel's quest of "get rich" took a wrong turn. In the end, everybody was hurt.

your story would be a blockbuster. Spare no detail

yorhmienerd:
Why na Creeza why

Sh!t happens, and life has a way of phucking people's life up... Good work

Bros mi!


how is you man? longest o

YINKS89:
id intended to make a long comment after the story but u cut it short with the tragedy...... ive neva been a fan of tragic story but nonetheless thumbs up nd to the story ill juz say wow! nd wow! again... i drop ma pen hre.

You are an avid reader and I respect your reviews. . Please dont hesitate to give me more of these reviews on subsequent stories..

mercichoco:
Tears in my eyez! Just thesame feeling when i lost the only man i ever loved to kidnappers (12/11/14). Maybe 1day I'l share my story.

Nice story creeza, your gift must surely make way for you. life is full shit, I've learnt alot from your story, Dami's desperation for love got her into palava, Gabriel's quest of "get rich" took a wrong turn. In the end, everybody was hurt.

I'm anxious to read the story.... pls do share with us...





And thanks for sticking all through the ride

mirob:
The story ended unexpectedly still somethings are not meant to be, know when to let go. Creeza you are too much, thanks.

Thanks

Lleigh:
Good luck in your exams Creeza

thanks a lot lani

Creeza my man,well done,you have done well. Perfect ending mehn,pain is part of human existence

wow, what . a great story ....... thank you so much, when love dies

Creeza,you sha made me cry in the end abi?see twist,I never thought Gabe would die..
So touching.When love dies
Life is funny sometimes,so also is death.


Best of luck and God in your exams.

Creeza:
You are an avid reader and I respect your reviews. . Please dont hesitate to give me more of these reviews on subsequent stories..

u kan count on mi.

Bless you Creeza,am sorry for not following this story for a long point in time,but this an A+ story.

queenitee:
na joke

Better o

Creeza,to be frank wid u,i dont like dz ending@all.
Wah happnd to d dami dt supposd 2die nah,cant a man be offerd a second chance afta he retrace his step?
So u wonna tel me dt d guilty one is roaming around d earth lyk nfn happnd while d innocent jst kpai like dt(beta try put finishing touches to dz story ooo).
Wil andy nd kate end up 2geda,wah bout kemi 2?biko clearify us b4 dt tin dt happnd in 1883 wil repeat itself again.lemme stop here for now cus of ma MB.nyc1 shaa.

am just speechless..... you really took me by surprise and am impress, I have nothing more to say than thank you for taking your time in finishing this work of art.
God bless you.

Thanks for the story creeza.Don't forget slaves in the soul and good luck in your exams.

Creeza:
thanks a lot.

I have exams coming soon, just wish me luck

Success in yr exam nd tnks 4 completing d story...keep it up

Katherine dear That man deserve to died.
I'm just angry that her father's hands was stained with Gabriel's dirty blood. Come with sense in your next world. Good job Creeza

Katherine dear That man deserve to died.
I'm just angry that her father's hands was stained with Gabriel's dirty blood. Come with sense in your next world. Good job Creeza

Waoh dnt no wat to say. Ds story is a bomb, it teaches us mostly d men Dat every tyn doesn't revolves abt money. Wish u all d best in ur coming exams

wow wow wow
u deserve a standing ovation.I love d story from d beginning till were it ends. it is just sooo wow
though couldn't folo up properly but d time d use stickied to my fone really worth it


tank u so much for dis wondaful story,more wisdom unto u.d story was EMOTIONAL,LESSONS TO B LEARNT N MIND BLOWING

ALL I CAN SAY IS
A JOB WELDON
#THUMB UP