This is my first time commenting on nairaland... I just had to, this story is awesome

please continue o! very interesting

This guy reminds me of me. i can't stay in love with anyone

Quite engaging. Keep going OP

very interesting and healthy write-up for the Christian faith. but still waiting though cos i took my time 2 follow it to this point. kudos, OP.

It's a 'wow' story,bt wat's it wt d suspense now...cnt wait to hear Dave's confession

I am following with keen interest here@ op please update oooo and I need to share this with someone dearest to my heart I am following with keen interest here@ op please update oooo and I need to share this with someone dearest to my heart

and that is with your approval @ op

Interesting story, Pls more more! Kudos!

I pray for you @op dat d spirit that's making u keep us in undeserved suspense will die IJN. PLEASE DON'T LET ME START looking for u oooo. Come and finish ur story.

This is cool I actually saw this story on Gospel breed thank God it's in fp. Kudos to the Author..i love all of your writeups in Gospel breed.

nice story,was touched............update please

I really love dis story, its educative can't wait 4 dave confession

It's not right to play with people's emotions.
you start a story , then you string people along making them desperate for the concluding part .
That's why I stopped reading literature from NL after what safari girl did to me !

This is a well plotted story and we'll written. It deserves an award or transformation into a short movie. Kudos.

This story has taught me a lesson I pray Jehovah God helps me put in practice.

u are d boss

Olajhidey22:

Thanks Pal

u are d boss

Olajhidey22:

Thanks Pal

very wonderful piece. am learning alot here. more grace!

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Following with keen interest! Pls continue o before suspense will injure somebody.

mikezuruki:
It's not right to play with people's emotions.
you start a story , then you string people along making them desperate for the concluding part .
That's why I stopped reading literature from NL after what safari girl did to me !

same here.

Your story line Is very wonderful and unique. I like the way you streamlined it. It shows that this could happen in real life. Nice work. Keep it up.

Nice story.more updates please

Where are you na? come kwontinu

LOVeeeeely......ur storyline is interesting. I hope ure nt the kinda writer dat updates once in a month. Pls don't keep ur readers on suspense for long.
Thumbs up

Patiently following.weldone sis

Wer Ar U O? D Suspence Is Killing

Please kwantinue the story na...

Wow. So interesting

As a sharp girl, I couldn't wait so I had to go to gospelbreed.com and read up the rest.

Same thing I do with Oyinprince, I just go to youngicee.com and finish reading the interesting story.

Thanks op, I learnt a lot from this story.