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Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by damynj(m): 4:59pm On Dec 30, 2018
Can't wait bro...
You're one in a million write...
God bless your hustle and writings...
Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by tunjilomo(m): 10:41pm On Jan 01
Happy New Year, Apollux.
Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by Apollux(m): 8:46am On Jan 02
tunjilomo:
Happy New Year, Apollux.
Same to you
Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by selimdeon: 4:25pm On Jan 04
Apollux, compliments to you brother...
I do prefer the first picture, kinda depicts a heavy dose of gunfire and determination. mention me when u start
Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by Pheezie(m): 7:43am On Jan 05
Apollux We your people are still waiting for Penance oooh. Compliment of the season bruh.
Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by Jackossky(m): 10:26pm On Jan 20
Dear Marvel, I don't know if you still remember my sobriquet but nice reading your fiction. I am enthralled.
Okay, I hope you don't mind if I add some of the little flaws I noticed?

I noticed that in the sequence of your story, most tough villains, even the common ones divulge their secret easily when faced with a foe, especially when the enemy is Marvel or Jade. I will be anticipating a villain that is tight lipped, battle marvel to a point that he would narrowly escape and it will take the combined effort of hardwire and his goons before they can 'desecrate' or annihilate such villain.

I started having true predictions of what's going to happen next, please I need a twist, we need a thriller. I believe you will dish out more.


Also, there is that 'intradollar' currency concept,a consortium of America, Brazil , Canada and a country like that. Now, the way you explained it was okay but to an economist or political scientist, there are flaws in it.
For Britain to be subjected to eradicate their monarchical system, there are political manipulations that will be involved except if it's a 'fictional' Britain.
When I was in a lower class, I was taught about GLOBALISATION. Under it, for Britain to be suppressed, these are things that must take place
Free trade area
Common Market
Custom Union
Economic Union
And finally,
Political union.


I saw that you asked for help around that area, if you can take a bit of your time to read about the concepts above, I am hopeful of a 'Blast' sci-fi from you.

All love from Vainearth, I do love how you intricate your words to describe the surroundings and the actions, it was as if I was watching 'Dark Matters' but in another prospect.


Nice style of writing, copacetic usage of lexicons. To be succinct, I will say you ROCK.


shocked
Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by Apollux(m): 10:55pm On Jan 20
Jackossky:
Dear Marvel, I don't know if you still remember my sobriquet but nice reading your fiction. I am enthralled.
Okay, I hope you don't mind if I add some of the little flaws I noticed?

I noticed that in the sequence of your story, most tough villains, even the common ones divulge their secret easily when faced with a foe, especially when the enemy is Marvel or Jade. I will be anticipating a villain that is tight lipped, battle marvel to a point that he would narrowly escape and it will take the combined effort of hardwire and his goons before they can 'desecrate' or annihilate such villain.

I started having true predictions of what's going to happen next, please I need a twist, we need a thriller. I believe you will dish out more.


Also, there is that 'intradollar' currency concept,a consortium of America, Brazil , Canada and a country like that. Now, the way you explained it was okay but to an economist or political scientist, there are flaws in it.
For Britain to be subjected to eradicate their monarchical system, there are political manipulations that will be involved except if it's a 'fictional' Britain.
When I was in a lower class, I was taught about GLOBALISATION. Under it, for Britain to be suppressed, these are things that must take place
Free trade area
Common Market
Custom Union
Economic Union
And finally,
Political union.


I saw that you asked for help around that area, if you can take a bit of your time to read about the concepts above, I am hopeful of a 'Blast' sci-fi from you.

All love from Vainearth, I do love how you intricate your words to describe the surroundings and the actions, it was as if I was watching 'Dark Matters' but in another prospect.


Nice style of writing, copacetic usage of lexicons. To be succinct, I will say you ROCK.


shocked
Thanks for your contributions, I appreciated them. About Marvel and the villains he faced, I think the only one that really came close to killing him was Cedric. Marvel's victory was actually a chanced thing and the over confidence of Cedric. But trust me in the final part, Marvel won't find it funny and the story will get more expanded.
As of the currency issue.. lol, well I'm not an Economist not even a good student of history anyway. All I wrote there were just from my imagination. But still looking at the setting, it actually took a long time for Britain to cave in. The global market was changing, America was merging with other bigger markets, countries and corporations to put pressure on the economic power house of Europe. And note that Britain still refused to back down until there was a Civil War. Of course that will tell you the war was influenced by those who want Britain to join the global market. Well I laughed when I created that line because I knew then that the chances of that ever happening is slim or next to none (but at the same time who can tell. No one have been able to perfectly predict history)
Anyway glad you liked the story. I'm working on a story now which will push the third installment of Marvel to a later date. Try seeing PENANCE, I hope you will enjoy that too.

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Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by ADECULATE(f): 2:33pm On Jan 21
Apollux weldone dear, pls do mention me wen u start penance
Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by Apollux(m): 4:05pm On Jan 21
ADECULATE:
Apollux weldone dear, pls do mention me wen u start penance

Penance has already started since early this month. Check my signature to locate it.
Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by ADECULATE(f): 9:28pm On Jan 21
Apollux:


Penance has already started since early this month. Check my signature to locate it.
ok tank u
Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by patoranfire(m): 6:45pm On Jan 24
Nice Story Appollux, pls i need the last episode of marvel chronicles. my email is adeagbofemi123@gmail.com
Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by dailynaijanews(m): 12:43pm On Jun 12
Re: Marvel Chronicles 2 :executive Sanction by Apollux(m): 1:04pm On Jun 12
patoranfire:
Nice Story Appollux, pls i need the last episode of marvel chronicles. my email is adeagbofemi123@gmail.com
Pls send a message to my email so I can get ur correct email address

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