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HANNAH! 18+(Complete). / Crazy Hannah - By Lady C (2) (3) (4)
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Re: ****Hannah by MhizDherbee(f): 10:35am On Jul 13, 2017 |
I also dint get th mention buh i've been following... Nice jab! Please let dem not harm Tomiwa o.... 1 Like |
Re: ****Hannah by charlesucheh(m): 11:51am On Jul 13, 2017 |
Ayoomodaddy:Bro! how do I get the entire story? Pls let me know! |
Re: ****Hannah by Boyooosa(m): 1:57pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
Ayoomodaddy:with this, i know tha you are 'ibile paraku' Continlue, mo n gba dun e! 1 Like |
Re: ****Hannah by Boyooosa(m): 3:07pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
Ayoomodaddy:Money I do not have but I dedicate this for this episode, for that was what my mind processed when I read the emboldened...
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Re: ****Hannah by oluwafemi1993: 4:04pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
Ayo+Omo+daddy=AYOOMODADDY Now d suspense begins.... May be she saw shanawole or scorpion or shadow or Babanla Sha bring d update quickly because my popcorn don finish 1 Like |
Re: ****Hannah by Ayoomodaddy(f): 4:44pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
****HANNAH**** CONTINUATION... Tomiwa lay on the floor covered in his own blood, he looked dead, Yejide and Korede screamed too, at the sight of their father as Hannah threw down everything in her hands and rushed to her husbands’ side. “Tomiwa! Tomiwa!! Tomiwa!!! Dide, laju e (stand up, open your eyes), please, Tomiwa wake up, say something…” she pleaded shaking the almost lifeless body vigorously in between sobs, sniffs and free flowing tears; Yejide was crying by her side too, that seemed like the most reasonable thing to do but Korede thought otherwise, he rushed forward and felt his father’s inner wrist for a pulse then checked his beat, it was very slow but he still had a pulse; he ran out of the room to Mr Badejo’s house (he lived with his family in the next house) teary-eyed. “Good afternoon sir, please…” he said and broke down in tears. “Korede, talk to me, what’s the matter? Why are you crying?” the alarmed Badejo asked. “My, m-my daddy, blood, plenty blood, pl-ple-p-please come…” he stuttered but Badejo immediately rushed out of the house to see what was happening then came back to get his car keys before going back to help Hannah carry Tomiwa into back seat of the car then sped off to the general hospital with Hannah desperately holding unto her husband, the other tenants in the house had come out by now and were full of sympathy for the family but Korede wasn’t ready for that so he half dragged his sister back to the room and locked the door. He got to work immediately and started cleaning the blood stains while Yejide sat in a corner and cried. *** FIFTEEN HOURS LATER. His head was aching, more like a competition of the best yam ‘pounder’ was taking place right in the centre of his skull, few inches away from his brain, Tomiwa tried to sit up but her strong hand gently pushed him back. ‘Who is this one’ he thought and ‘why can’t I see?” he asked himself then touched a finger to his eyes, something was covering them, much as he tried, he couldn’t take whatever it was off. He heard voices speaking in low tones followed by a sniff, who are they? Where am I? He thought to himself. He tried to sit up again, glad that there was no restriction this time but his body ached so bad that he groaned deeply from the pain and effort then he heard his name, ‘Tomiwa!’ he’d heard Hannah scream, ‘Am I in danger?’ he asked himself. “Doctor, what happened?” he heard Hannah ask again, why did she sound scared, he tried to speak but his voice failed him then another question popped in his brain; DOCTOR! ‘Doctor ke! Doctor bawo!! Olorun ma je ki emi rogun doctor laye mi (May God never allow me visit a doctor)’ he said to himself then he heard a tiny voice speak, a sing-song female voice. “Madam your husband will be okay, he just needs to rest for a few more hours…” “Few more hours again, doctor yii (this doctor) that’s what you said when we first came o and now, more than ten hours later, he still needs to rest ehn, okay o.” ‘This doctor must be a patient woman o but I’m very sure Hannah has not displayed for her yet’ Tomiwa thought to himself. “Madam, please be patient (pause) oh good, the nurse is here with his medication, this is the last dose.” The doctor concluded, seconds passed then Tomiwa felt a needle pierce his forearm and gradually, as the liquid flowed through his veins, the pain he felt eased until there was no more pain, just peace, don’t get scared, he’s not dead yet, he just fell into a deep sleep so he can properly recover. TBC _____________________________________ Thanks for following o, chai see comments, lemme now take my time to read through and reply. A very big shoutout to these ghost readers I caught online Righthappenings, sexyslim001, Masol, Clearboos, I see you o (I hope I mentioned right sha) I love you all 2 Likes |
Re: ****Hannah by Ayoomodaddy(f): 4:50pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
bummybummy:Em, it's not like am forming o but my Yoruba no too fluent buh lemme translate in literal terms sha 'death dey chop banana, him dey shake yansh, he no know say na the thing wey him dey chop na im go kill am' pardon the pidgin though, I no too sabi English like that |
Re: ****Hannah by Ayoomodaddy(f): 4:52pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
charlesucheh:Em, I'm sorry sir, I don't understand o, please explain, thank you. |
Re: ****Hannah by Ayoomodaddy(f): 4:54pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
Omo iya mi, mo loyal o, welcome aboard, thanks for following. Boyooosa: |
Re: ****Hannah by Ayoomodaddy(f): 4:55pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
oluwafemi1993:Lol... So sorry for the delay sir, send me your account details make I transfer fresh popcorn and juice for you... |
Re: ****Hannah by Ayoomodaddy(f): 4:57pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
viewing this topic: Ofez, mhizjessy, Ayoomodaddy and 1 other guest(s) Una welcome o... |
Re: ****Hannah by bummybummy(f): 5:01pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
Ayoomodaddy:lolz |
Re: ****Hannah by Boyooosa(m): 5:02pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
Ayoomodaddy:no p, your talent and skills got my attention not you 1 Like |
Re: ****Hannah by oluwafemi1993: 5:50pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
Gen gheen, this life is beauriful (wale adenuga production family drama "this life" song) The more u see, d less u know. I love korede, boy with a heart of man Ayoomodaddy, you are really a prolific writer Fire on!!! |
Re: ****Hannah by Toyin223(f): 5:52pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
Made He No Die Ooo |
Re: ****Hannah by Rapoo(m): 7:04pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
am kinda lost Ayoomodaddy please why did tomiwa lay on the floor covered by his own blood, you didn't state the cause for his injuries, I think something is missing or maybe I need a clarification |
Re: ****Hannah by SlimBae(f): 12:19am On Jul 14, 2017 |
I'm quite sure this is the hand work of Shadow. |
Re: ****Hannah by Eniqurl(f): 4:28am On Jul 14, 2017 |
I feel so sorry for Hannah, Tomiwa shld have just told her the kinda business he's into mtsheew. |
Re: ****Hannah by Dopeyomi(m): 6:52am On Jul 14, 2017 |
Rapoo: Wait for d next update.. she's gonna put the cause.. just chill na so pro dey write story.. na suspense.. 1 Like |
Re: ****Hannah by Rapoo(m): 8:34am On Jul 14, 2017 |
Dopeyomi: alright bro, fingers crossed |
Re: ****Hannah by Ayoomodaddy(f): 1:50pm On Jul 14, 2017 |
****HANNAH**** CONTINUATION... *** Hannah sat dozing in the waiting room, she was drained, both physically and mentally, she’d been in the hospital all night and all day and now, twenty-six hours after Tomiwa was rushed here, she could only boast of three hours of sleep, not all at once but in bits and pieces. She hadn’t slept not because she wasn’t tired but her worrying mind just wouldn’t let her be. Her phone rang, the caller ID displayed ‘mummy’, that was Tomiwa’s mother calling, Hannah was afraid to answer the call, ‘what does she want, abi somebody has gone to do amebo for her ni’ she thought to herself and decided it was best for her to answer the call and find out for herself. “Mummy, e kale ma.” (Mummy, good evening ma) “Aya mi, kale bawo ni o?” (My wife, good evening, how are you) “Daada ni ma.” (very well ma) “O kare. Ehn, Tomiwa nko.” (Very good. Ehn what of Tomiwa) “He’s fine ma.” Hannah replied and iya Tomiwa sighed deeply. “Are you sure?” “Yes ma, what’s the matter?” she said trying to mask her emotions. “Nothing but I’ve just been thinking of him lately.” She said and Hannah laughed. “Mummy, mummy, I know you’re fond of your only child, Tomiwa is fine.” “Okay, if you say so. Is he there? Let me speak with him.” “No o, em, he’s not back yet, maybe he’s in traffic, and his phone is off gan, I’ll tell him to call you when he gets back.” “Oshey omo mi (thank you my child) my regards to the children abi are they there, let me talk to them.” “Em, no, I, the thing is that me, I’m not at home, I rushed out to buy salt while Yejide is checking the food on fire.” Iya Tomiwa sighed deeply. “Okay then, give them my blessings.” “Thank you so much mummy, God bless you.” “Amen, please remind Tomiwa to call me o.” “Yes ma, o dabo (bye)” “Ehn o.” Iya Tomiwa said finally and ended the call. Hannah knew mummy would call back if she didn’t hear from Tomiwa soon so she decided to switch off her phone, she’d done enough lying for one night. She stared at the basket of food her children had brought earlier and smiled, they’d persuaded her to eat a few spoons before they left and she’d not bothered to touch it since then, she had no appetite for food, how could she eat when her husband was lying unconscious on a hospital bed. She stood and paced up and down the room, the doctor had said she could go in to see Tomiwa when it was twelve AM. “Mrs Ogungbe?” she heard a male voice ask and turned immediately to see an older doctor in white overalls with a stethoscope hung across his neck. “Yes sir.” “Okay, doctor Nike Oriowo is done with her shift and has handed over your husband’s file to me.” “Okay sir.” “I’m doctor Philip Enang.” He said and stretched his arm for a handshake. His grip was firm and professional. “Thank you doctor, please when is it likely that my husband will be discharged?” “I can’t say precisely but from doctor Nike’s comments, I see he’s responding well to treatment.” “Okay sir but please, em, when will the bandages on his head be removed?” “Oh, on doctor Nike’s instruction, they will be removed first thing in the morning.” “Em, okay sir.” “It is my duty ma’am, will that be all for now?” Hannah noticed that the doctor was in a hurry but was also trying his best to be polite. “Em, I’m sorry if I’m delaying sir, when can I go and see him?” “Oh, very soon, presently, he’s sleeping, his next observation is in thirty minutes, I’ll have a nurse let you know when it’s okay to go in.” “Okay thank you sir.” “It is my duty ma’am, my office is the third from doctor Nike’s, feel free to let me know if you need anything.” He said and left when Hannah nodded. Hannah’s mind was askance; she'd racked her brain all day but was still at a loss of what could have happened, she had too little information to decipher anything. She knew Tomiwa too much to believe he’d gotten in a fight with someone, he was never a fan of physical combat even if he was pushed, he was too calm for that. She knew something was fishy but couldn’t put a lid to it, she needed answers and fast too. TBC _________________________________________________ Thanks for following, next update by Monday, have a lovely weekend fam. 1 Like |
Re: ****Hannah by EvaJael(f): 1:58pm On Jul 14, 2017 |
Thumbs up ayoomodaddy |
Re: ****Hannah by bummybummy(f): 5:11pm On Jul 14, 2017 |
i know dat tomiwa will soon get into trouble, Tanx for the update 1 Like |
Re: ****Hannah by charlesucheh(m): 9:07pm On Jul 14, 2017 |
Ayoomodaddy:I read and stopped at the point where TOMIWA entered his house looking tensed. Is that where it ended? If not, can you please send it's concluding episode to me? |
Re: ****Hannah by oluwafemi1993: 9:53pm On Jul 14, 2017 |
Ride on ayoomodaddy I will follow this story from bumper to bumper and from keke napep to keke napep, from tricycle to tricycle 1 Like |
Re: ****Hannah by swankmee(f): 11:13pm On Jul 14, 2017 |
Interesting storyline.... More ink dear |
Re: ****Hannah by OlufemiWhit(m): 7:08am On Jul 15, 2017 |
Good work dear...keep it up |
Re: ****Hannah by Eniqurl(f): 11:09am On Jul 15, 2017 |
Nice update.... Tomiwa should wake up ASAP and tell his wife the truth. |
Re: ****Hannah by queenDD(f): 5:03pm On Jul 15, 2017 |
Interesting read, more mb to your phone dear. 1 Like |
Re: ****Hannah by Ayoomodaddy(f): 4:32pm On Jul 17, 2017 |
****HANNAH**** CONTINUATION... “Baba, this is rubbish, you should have let me handle it.” “What do you want me to do, the deed has been done.” “I know but it could have been avoided, mark my words, I’ll personally deal with Shanawole.” Shadow said angrily. “We have to be careful, this guy has proven to be a cat with nine lives, if we’re not careful, the police might be on our tail sooner than we expect.” Scorpion chipped in. “Will you shut your mouth?” Shadow thundered “All thanks to you and that idiot, we all have to look over our shoulders while we walk in the street.” He added now towering over Scorpion. “Shadow…” Babanla called “… shouting won’t solve anything so please sit.” “Baba, you’re the cause of all this for trusting such inexperienced fools over me.” The still angry Shadow fired. Scorpion looked away, he was bigger and more hefty in size than Shadow but he knew Shadow had the power to kill him right there and then and nobody would question him. He couldn’t say a word, he knew he’d messed up and had put the gang at risk, he shouldn’t have left Tomiwa to Shanawole knowing fully well that he had a soft spot for him, he should have handled the job himself now he was in trouble with the boss. “Baba, I accept my fault for this gbege (problem) but please give me one more chance and I’ll clean this up, I promise.” Scorpion pleaded. “Scorpion, I swear to God, if you say one more word there, I’ll squeeze that useless life out of your worthless body with my bare hands.” Shadow shouted. “It’s okay boys…” Babanla chided “…Scorpion, you have disappointed me and proven yourself unworthy of jobs like this, there will be no opportunity to redeem yourself on this matter because this is the second time you’ve failed so Shadow will take it up from here and that is final.” He concluded. “Scorpion, you and Shanawole must see me this evening if you know you don’t want to kiss the earth.” Shadow said. “Y-y-y-yes-ye-yes-yessir.” Scorpion stammered and Shadow stormed out of the house. Scorpion pleade with Babanla for a while before he took his leave but Baba had no say in the matter, Shadow’s decision was final so Scorpion prepared his mind for the worst but was grateful that his life would be spared. *** Back in the hospital, Tomiwa was awake, the bandages on his head had been taken off, he could see better; the doctor had said he was lucky because the knife cut had miraculously missed his optic nerve, Hannah was full of joy but was still sad that her husband hadn’t told her the full details of his calamity. Tomiwa sat quietly on the hospital bed, watching Hannah pack his things into a bag. He was afraid, the worst was not over, he knew his life, worse still, his family was in danger, he was thinking of where to run to or at least where to hide his family. he remembered the blow he’d received from Scorpion that fateful day he’d been bold enough to tell him he was longer interested in being their chauffer, the blow had sent him reeling backwards then straight to the ground then a fierce kick to his stomach followed. He’d begged but his pleas had fallen on deaf ears. He didn’t know as much as they thought he knew but he was certain that they were drug dealers and political thugs, he knew their boss was wanted by the drug agency and that the secret service was on them for some political crimes, but that was not his business, he just wanted out, he wondered why they wouldn’t leave him alone. Three days after he’d first indicated that he wanted to leave, Shanawole called and he’d agreed to meet him out of fear, he’d promised that he didn’t know much and that he’d never tell a soul the little he knew but Shanawole would have none of that, he’d turned his back and left him at the mercy of three other guys. He was battered, he face was bloodied, his clothes were thorn and blood stained, he’d even lost a tooth but the torture wasn’t over yet, the blood thirsty hounds that had been unleashed on him were not satisfied yet; they carried him back to his house in his semi-conscious state and had left a scar on the right side of his face with a sharp pocket knife, the pain had been excruciating but he’d mustered enough strength not to shout, well, he’d been gagged during the process, he’d watched his blood drip from the knife to the floor before they’d wiped it clean on his already bloodied shirt. The gag was removed and his consciousness was slipping away, the gang left and locked the door behind them, most likely, they’d kept the key with them. He was now afraid that his whole family was in trouble because of his foolishness. TBC __________________________ Thanks for following and commenting, I really appreciate it... Trust you had a fab weekend. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: ****Hannah by Rapoo(m): 4:42pm On Jul 17, 2017 |
well-done lady, we gat your back, really enjoying the piece |
Re: ****Hannah by Dopeyomi(m): 6:25am On Jul 18, 2017 |
YoLo.. |
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