skarlett:
Wow! If I tell you I'm flabbergasted now, that will be a huge understatement. But I want to say this competition was a whole lot of fun while it lasted.

My gratitude goes to the organizers and sponsors of this competition especially Divepen1. It took a lot for you to come up with the idea of organizing this contest in Literature section and seeing it through to the end despite the challenges. More power to your elbow sir

Next is the panel of judges especially Larrysun. Your constructive criticism made me work harder at improving my craft and more importantly, made me never give up. I feel honoured to have been on your team.

I also want to appreciate my fellow contestants and all the others I cannot remember their monikers for their display of good sportsmanship and for encouraging me directly or indirectly to hone my craft.

Finally I want to appreciate my e-fam and fans: abeg if I no metion you nor vex . I want to thank all of you for turning up for me and giving me your support. Migwo! Ose! Daalu! Danke!


I've been trying to post this since but my network has been really crappy so I apologize for the late post.

And yeah, I got the 23k alert Divepen1

Divepen1:



Meanwhile, acknowledge receipt oo.. Sponsors are watching...


Piroux

Thanks

AudreyTimms:
Hey everybody. Firstly, I must say it's a privilege to be here. Secondly, you all did well. Some caught my attention while others didn't but in all, I give kudos to everyone. Thirdly, I chose the following entries based on the style of writing, how I connected with the story and how much I want to read more from the writer. No hard feelings please if I didn't choose you. I'm not going to talk much here. I'll do all the talking in the mentoring room. Okay. Let's go there.

1. Entry 2
Great analysis.

I chose this story because I loved the message it was trying to portray. One lives on no matter the pain. It could have been written better to draw more emotion from readers but with the word limitation, I say kudos. Looking forward to reading more from you.

2. Entry 6

I loved this story because it was written for the average Nigerian. I could relate with it (Nigerian mothers!). The writing style was simple and straight to the point. At first I thought it was gonna be scary but it ended on a hilarious note. Typos here and there but I believe you can do better in the next round. I also learnt a new word.

3. Entry 7 - The Boy In Blue

Hmm...I had to read this twice before I got who was actually narrating the story. It was confusing at first but I smiled in the end. Dramatic exit! Me likey. I believe with a little direction here and there, you will do a better job in the next round. 

4. Entry 10

*side eyes repogirl* Nicceeee! Beautiful concept. Reminds me of The African Child or is it Stillborn? Can't remember. You did a good job. I could literally see the various characters and scenes even though you didn't expatiate on them. And you left us hanging, salivating for more. Who really sired you? 
* brings out a sword* Stay away, LarrySun. Want some, repogirl?

5. Entry 14

It wasn't written well but I just loved it. I laughed till tears fell from my eyes. I shared it with my colleagues and we all had a good laugh. It's relatable. At this juncture, I must say I'm not just looking for the strong ones. I like underdogs (Not calling you one though) Okay. Lemme stop here. We'll get to the finish line together.

6. Entry 16 - Survivor

You're a survivor. You made the cut! Okay. The story is hella cliche, I know, but I kinda loved it. I didn't particularly like the way it was written but I know you can do better. You need to learn how to put a story together (compartmentalize). You started the story with your psychologist, then ended it with your best friend. It made me wonder about some things. Was your best friend there with you in the psychologist's office or is the psychologist your best friend? It seemed like jumping from one scene straight into another. You need to also watch your use of punctuation marks. Not to worry, we are in this together. Lemme go and play 'Destiny Child's Survivor jor.

Okay. There you have it. My six BFFs for the next few weeks. We will meet in the other room for tutoring and pairing. Writers' luck fall on you all.

And hey, repogirl, poaching is allowed! 

davide470:
Skarlett, Congrats dear! Making us proud as always.. Oya, bring the money!

OluwabuqqyYOLO You are Good!

To all them Judges, respect for you guys.

Missnande:
Yes please @Divepen1, I don't want my name to appear.

Debbietiyan:
Divepen1, I'd like to use my moniker (though separated), and not my full name too.

Jazmiynne:
@Divepen please kindly use my Nairaland moniker (Jazmiynne), thanks very much.

Missnande:


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