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Re: Melina by Dapsy07: 2:00pm On Jul 27, 2018 |
Pls keep us updated.. |
Re: Melina by rukidanty: 3:12pm On Jul 27, 2018 |
nice one keep it rolling and I hope we will see frequent updates o |
Re: Melina by Adegbem01(m): 5:46pm On Jul 27, 2018 |
This just damn interesting OP great story, keep it up am following bumper to bumper... No too put us for suspension sha oooo |
Re: Melina by Juniorangel(m): 10:43pm On Jul 27, 2018 |
This is raw talent... So this country has writers and story tellers that are this good. Op keep it up |
Re: Melina by derachokolate(m): 12:04am On Jul 28, 2018 |
Its being a while Sorry for the long delay . ERM we are still with it . Read and enjoy ��✌� ******************************************* MELINA Episode 32 It was three weeks gone , Lina's dad was getting better , yesterday , some bandages were removed , then the police came for statement in other to carry out the investigations regarding the kidnap , they paused the investigation because Lina's dad wasn't so strong to speak frequently . I was staying with Lina as the mom instructed , some times our friends do sleep over , but Susan who stays with her parents has never slept over for once . Monday , Lina had arranged with the doctor that will conduct the surgery on my dad's leg . "Hello , good morning dad " .. I greeted him "Morning my son , how are you ?" ... He said . "I am fine , what about you ?" .. I asked . " I am fine , what about senator maxwell " .. "He is responding to treatment dad , what about mom ?" " she is fine , what about melina " .. He asked like an already father in law. "She is fine " ... "Um!!" "What is it my son " .. " the driver is coming to pick you dad , we will get the surgery done today , just get ready , I am sure he will be there in minutes , I am sorry its so sudden " ... I said expecting tons of questions but I was prepared to leave him to a bootless inquisition. " How , why , who is footing the bills ?" .. He asked . " will you get prepared already , and stop asking questions " .. I said out laughing . "Uhmmm okay " ... He replied unlike him . I still had the number of the driver that drove us the last time , so instead of going to pick him , I called the driver to go pick him . "He is coming right " ... Lina asked as she walked in to the sitting room from the kitchen . "Uhm yes " .. I said checking her out in her bum short and a singlet and no bra . " when you are done checking me put , you follow me to the dinning , I made us break fast " ... She said with a smirk " I wish I can say that I am checking you out , but you ain't lucky enough " ... I said sardonically " how comfortable are you with that lie " .. She said and coming close . I was lost in words, looking at her defines lost and lust . She came so close , her scent taking my breath away . Her mouth so close to mine , I closed my eyes , vibrations . " open your eyes Mr man " .. She said and she started laughing so hard . " what!!? ! Lina !" .. I shouted as she raced to the dinning and I followed her . " fried eggs and plantain " ..... She said as she sat . " yummy !!" ... I sat opposite her . We didn't go to school , we went to the hospital , to give them food , and then we went to the supermarket to check on sales , we have been the managers for the few weeks . At 2pm , dad arrived . "Good afternoon sir " .. I heard Lina say as she opened the door . " my daughter " .. I recognise his voice . I stood from the seat I was sitting ,I headed to The door , I collected the bag from the driver and paid him off . We gave him food to eat while we headed to the to the room get prepared . In thirty minutes , we were done . and then we used Lina's car to go on a 1hr30mins ride . I dont know the place but the hospital read " peter's medical abode " . A man ,that should be in his Mid thirties was standing in front of the hospital , with a white lab coat . "Long time little friend " .. He said as he hugged Lina . "Long time doc " .. Lina replied . "Hey, whatsup man " .. He stretched for a handshake . "Good day " ... I said with a smile and shaking his hands "Bring him here " ...he said .. We followed behind him to room 10 , a well equipped room. I helped my dad get him on the bed , and then he said we should be back in 5 hours, that we can stay in the reception hall . We went to the reception hall , waiting patiently . My phone rang. "Henry whatsup " .. I picked up . " I am cool bro , you guys ain't in school , you guys ain't at home and you guys ain't in the hospital " .. He said . "ERM we went on a date somewhere , we don't want anyone to know ,we deserve some alone time " ... I covered up immediately . " Awwwwn Married man "... He cooed me . We weren't there up to an hour already but we were tired . Lina slept off already , I was playing games on my phone . My phone battery died , and then I looked at the clock , and it was 7:30pm , just three hours . I woke Lina up , I bent and kissed her nose. " let's go for dinner in any restaurant near here " ... I said to the already waken angel . "Sure, how long did I sleep" .. She asked . "Two hours " .. I pointed at the clock . "Ohh , let me use the toilet , I need to wash my face too " .. She said as . She went to the toilet . and the back in ten minutes and then we went out in search for dinner . "What do I offer you" ... The waiter asked . " I want a need burger and a yoghurt " .. I turned to look at Lina who nodded . " get it two " .. We waited and then we were served . We entered the next store to get provisions for my dad , the doctor said he can leave after a week , but he will give us directions on what to do . When we got back , it was already five hours . We went straight to the room , we saw my dad smiling . "How are you dad" .. I asked . " I am fine , but who is footing this bill " .. He asked . "Get well first sir , you are worrying to much on your sick bed and that is real bad for health " .. Lina said . "Okay" .. He said but he still wanted to ask . We stayed with him throughout the night , then we got a nurse and paid her extra for a special attention . We left very early the next morning so that we will be able to catch up with school , friends and visiting Lina's dad in the hospital so that nobody knows . Exam was in few weeks , and we needed to buckle up , we started studying together, we were going to help each other out . ******************************************* Written by Chidera chokolate ©oracle 3 Likes |
Re: Melina by rukidanty: 3:01am On Jul 28, 2018 |
thanks man for the updates |
Re: Melina by skubido(m): 8:55am On Jul 28, 2018 |
OP wagbayiii.. u too much |
Re: Melina by kayusdguy(m): 10:15am On Jul 28, 2018 |
cool update |
Re: Melina by devilmaycry1(m): 11:45am On Jul 28, 2018 |
nice one |
Re: Melina by Nobody: 11:50am On Jul 28, 2018 |
Well done oo |
Re: Melina by Preciousbouy(m): 12:29pm On Jul 28, 2018 |
nice story you got here op..... More greez to your elbows |
Re: Melina by cyndyuc(f): 1:08pm On Jul 28, 2018 |
Nice story.....patiently waiting for an update..... |
Re: Melina by nkbeauty(f): 7:19pm On Jul 28, 2018 |
Nice updates....waiting 4 the next updates |
Re: Melina by Preciousbouy(m): 6:49am On Jul 29, 2018 |
bia chokolate come and update nah bikonu ..... |
Re: Melina by skubido(m): 7:38am On Jul 29, 2018 |
OP congrat oooo. FP tinz,, jah bless ya hand work |
Re: Melina by devilmaycry: 7:42am On Jul 29, 2018 |
devilmaycry1:warris dis |
Re: Melina by Nobody: 7:47am On Jul 29, 2018 |
Re: Melina by Naviystiles(m): 8:29am On Jul 29, 2018 |
Mehn. I love ❤ this.. Oya more update o |
Re: Melina by Dapsy07: 12:32pm On Jul 29, 2018 |
More update ooo |
Re: Melina by devilmaycry1(m): 12:35pm On Jul 29, 2018 |
come give me food na update update na |
Re: Melina by Danavast(m): 12:51pm On Jul 29, 2018 |
Cool |
Re: Melina by cenaman(m): 1:24pm On Jul 29, 2018 |
why is my mind telling that christie and charity one of them is grace. nice story thumb up. 1 Like |
Re: Melina by Abeeja: 4:38pm On Jul 29, 2018 |
More grease to your elbow bro...We are waiting for updates tho |
Re: Melina by Nobody: 6:27pm On Jul 29, 2018 |
Nice piece of work. Thumbs up bro. Keep it up. God bless. |
Re: Melina by demex24(m): 7:38pm On Jul 29, 2018 |
Interesting!!! |
Re: Melina by Jessycares: 12:32am On Jul 30, 2018 |
Please next episode ooooo Super nice! |
Re: Melina by bencolevic(m): 8:43am On Jul 30, 2018 |
Wow, what a superb write up... Kudos 2 u |
Re: Melina by izaray(f): 9:55am On Jul 30, 2018 |
More grace to your eye elbow, more data to ur phone, and more ink to ur pen! Thanks bro! |
Re: Melina by AlphaFox(m): 1:27pm On Jul 30, 2018 |
I'm enjoying this interesting write up, pls keep the update going smooth and as early as possible. Thank you. |
Re: Melina by Pilopher: 2:57pm On Jul 30, 2018 |
bt ... Mmmm let me reserv my comment for d now |
Re: Melina by Kentro2(m): 8:53pm On Jul 30, 2018 |
Speechless |
Re: Melina by zeko172(m): 2:17pm On Aug 01, 2018 |
Derachokolate come and update o,your readers are waiting |
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