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Re: The Devils Touch by mekussa(m): 10:52am On Jul 11, 2019
Bro, I understand your schedule IS TIGHT. However, you would do your fans and followers a BIG FAVOUR if you can give us a workable schedule for the release of the episodes.
If its one every two or three days, that's okay so we know when to expect it and reduce the suspence.

GREAT STORY BY THE WAY.... BIG FAN OF SAM AND THE PRINCIPAL.

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Re: The Devils Touch by greatme2good(f): 11:10am On Jul 11, 2019
Short update after a long wait. Anyways thanks for the update. Igbudu is now wanted by every spirit.

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Re: The Devils Touch by topher052: 12:25pm On Jul 11, 2019
mekussa:
Bro, I understand your schedule IS TIGHT. However, you would do your fans and followers a BIG FAVOUR if you can give us a workable schedule for the release of the episodes.
If its one every two or three days, that's okay so we know when to expect it and reduce the suspence.

GREAT STORY BY THE WAY.... BIG FAN OF SAM AND THE PRINCIPAL.

Thank you very much brother

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Re: The Devils Touch by topher052: 12:26pm On Jul 11, 2019
The next story will be updated on Saturday, look forward to it.

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Re: The Devils Touch by topher052: 12:27pm On Jul 11, 2019
greatme2good:
Short update after a long wait. Anyways thanks for the update. Igbudu is now wanted by every spirit.
I'll try to be making it longer

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Re: The Devils Touch by SirJonse(m): 1:42pm On Jul 11, 2019
Mike and Igbudu are related smiley

Nice one Topher.

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Re: The Devils Touch by germaphobe(m): 4:14pm On Jul 11, 2019
continue bro, we're all getting addicted.

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Re: The Devils Touch by greatme2good(f): 11:28pm On Jul 11, 2019
SirJonse:
Mike and Igbudu are related smiley

Nice one Topher.
Lol how cheesy

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Re: The Devils Touch by SirJonse(m): 1:39pm On Jul 12, 2019
greatme2good:

Lol how cheesy


They have 9 lives and always have a way of escaping dangers. cool

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Re: The Devils Touch by greatme2good(f): 3:28pm On Jul 12, 2019
SirJonse:



They have 9 lives and always have a way of escaping dangers. cool
grin now I get it but Igbudu haven't reached Mike's level...at a stage, I thought Mike was unkillable and Mike survived by shear luck while Igbudu is spiritually fortified.

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Re: The Devils Touch by SirJonse(m): 4:53pm On Jul 12, 2019
greatme2good:

grin now I get it but Igbudu haven't reached Mike's level...at a stage, I thought Mike was unkillable and Mike survived by shear luck while Igbudu is spiritually fortified.

Hehehe. Okay. Let's see what the story holds for Mike sorry Igbudu smiley

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Re: The Devils Touch by topher052: 12:29pm On Jul 13, 2019
The burnt boy’s name is Mamood, he is a particular kind of demon that survives in a human flesh. They possess newly born babies and grow with the child. But some 200 years ago, they experienced some kind of extinction for their circle is meant to last 5000 years before they disappear. Mamood is one of the last of its kind living his last years in the body of his host.

In the forest with ghost roaming around, Mamood pointed a little girl beckoning them over to Sam. They both followed her through a narrow path and walked until the ghost stopped and pointed ahead and walked away. Sam looked at Mamood and said,

“what does she mean?”.

“I think she wants us to go there”. Mamood said.

‘who are they?”. Sam asked.

“they were killed here by the old undead demons”. Mamood said moving towards the direction shown by the ghost.

Sam followed him from behind looking at the ghost who stopped roaming and watching them walk the direction. He looked out for the girl ghost and found her staring with fear writing on her face. Sam wondered who she was scared for as they descended into the deep forest.

Mamood suddenly stopped and held Sam back. He looked around at the trees and said whispering.

“They are watching us?”.

“Who?”. Sam asked completely oblivious of the happenings.

“The old undead, they live in these trees and these grasses”. Mamood said observing the grass around us.

“So what do we do?”. Sam asked.

“We have to be as fast as the speed of light, or this is our end”.

“You know I cannot be that fast”. Sam said .

Mamood looked at him and said.

“I have seen you do wonders, the white ghost lives in you”.

Sam said nothing more and waited for Mamoods signal.

Soon, Mamood adjusted himself and was set to take off. He changed into his original form and jumped on a palm tree and immediately eyes shot out from the trunk of the tree and the tree shook violently. Mamood flew from the palm tree and somersaulted and perched on another tree, grasses jumped from the ground and attacked Mamood but he dodged it and mounted another tree, four trees pulled it selves from the root and smashed where Mamood was but he narrowly escaped and jumped on one of the trees attacking, one swung again towards him and yet missed and Mamood landed on the other side, the trees went back to their positions and remained still, even the soil that was disturbed covered up like nothing happened.

Sam looked at it and was scared to the marrow. Mamood beckoned him over but he shook his head and remained where he was.

“You have to come over right now! The undead will soon come out of the tree!”. Mamood shouted.

Sam encouraged himself recounting number of times he survived danger and then summoned courage before stepping a foot in, he waited for any provocation but heard nothing. He looked at Mamood who nodded and beckoned him over. He stepped his two feet in and looked at the trees shivering in fear, yet nothing happened. Immediately, he started running and some grasses swiftly tied his two legs and dragged him up a tall tree. He screamed as he ascended and then they stopped him up the uppermost branch with his two feet suspended and his body swinging upside down.

Mamood was confused, he didn’t know what to do to help. He made to jump in but six flexible trees stood in front of the tree Sam was hanging. He looked for a way across but stopped when the trunks of the trees started opening and men in white started coming out of it, they were 7 of them old men, but this time their eyes were fire.

Mamood decided to reason with them and so he said.

“I greet my fellow demons, we are only passing through, please let my human friend go!”.

“We are hungry! And you look like food too!”. One of them said then turned behind him and looked up at Sam. Then added .“we are going to set him free after we eat him”.

Mamood looked up at Sam who was swinging frighteningly, then he said.

“I’ll get you an animal, name any!”.

“Does it have a soul? “. Another asked, and they all laughed nefariously.

Mamood discovered there was nothing he could do, so he leaped up and mounted one of the trees in front of him, jumped off almost immediately to three other trees before he stopped at the branch Sam was tied to.

The men looked at him expressionlessly . Mamood quickly tried to set Sam free but a big branched swept him off and he fell from a 50 feet tall tree. The bind Sam’s feet loosened and Sam fell from the top, he was about reaching the floor when a white light suspended him in the air. He was shinning allover and his eyes became white as he suspended in the air standing with his hands stretched out.

The undead looked at him and whispered among themselves. Then one said to him.

“so you’re the boy we are looking for? Let me tell you so you know. We are not afraid of the white ghost”.

Sam said nothing but remained in same position. Mamood slowly stood up and when he saw Sam, he smiled and regained confidence.

One of the men attacked first, flying towards Sam with his hand stretched out in a knuckle. Sam placed his palm together and opened it towards him abruptly, a white ball flew from his palm and scattered him in shreds. Then Sam went back to his position looking at them.

The rest of the six were surprised and immediately the trees and grasses jointly charged to attack Sam all surrounding him. They covered him up hitting violently raising dust. Mamood was overtaken by fear when he couldn’t see Sam’s light anymore. He jumped forward like a frog and pulled out a reasonable bunch of grasses from the root and threw them away, he pulled another and was going to grab a tree when a tree full upper branch shot him a distance away. He rolled over severally before he remained still faced down.

All the trees and jumped on Sam, pounding him into the ground, they couldn’t get to his flesh due to the white light covering him. They continued until he was almost buried. Then the biggest tree amongst them mounted its root on him and began to dig deep into the soil.

Everywhere became calm as if nothing happened, the men kept their eyes on the root of the tree as though expecting something to happen. Mamood slowly pulled himself up, looked towards their direction and couldn’t find Sam. He rose up and wanted to rush forward but fell . He was struggling to his feet again when he spotted a bright light shooting out from the root of the tree, the light shook the tree and started bringing out rays of white lights from different part of the tree. The men watched in awe as the tree expanded and puffed up, then exploded making a loud noise blasting everything around it and scattering them into pieces including the trees and the men. Mamood shielded his head from the heat of the explosion and when he raised his head again, everything around Sam was cleared smoothly save for Sam who squatted with his head bent still covered in light.

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Igbudu found himself in a car and the car took off immediately. They had driven for few minutes when they heard a loud explosion few distance away and saw a bright light shooting up into the sky. Igbudu looked to see what it was all about as the car zoomed off.

They drove in silence with Igbudu seated in the midst of two men in black suit and one in the front seat with the driver. All covered their eyes with dark sunshade seriously looking in front of them. He feared for Grin, the boy and the fate of the world.

After 6 hours of driving, and one stop at a gas station they drove into a big compound and packed in front of a green painted mansion. The compound had lots of men in black suit hanging in different positions fully armed. At once he knew they were humans and kept still as the car came to a halt. The men opened the doors simultaneously like they planned it, and the two with him gave him a stiff stare he needed no explanation to know he was to alight, so he joined them out of the car.

A man in a red rope and sparkling white boxers with his tummy remarkably bulky showing from the opened rope and his fluffy red slippers, gold chains on his neck and wrist gave him the look of a money mogul was walking down the stairs with two Spanish models in bikini walking behind him. He had in his hand a bottle of whisky and Cuban cigar on the other.

“Hoola! Hoola!”” he said as he descended the stairs.

Igbudu looked at him and wondered who he was, not until he came closer that he recognized him as the president. He looked different outside his suit and presidential poise. Fear gripped Igbudu, because he is standing before the man who marked him for death.

“who do we have here? Great Igbudu the 7 mountains knows his name, the great rivers of the nine demonic kingdoms trembles at his name, you are here before me at my mercy”. He turned to the girls and said. “is life not funny? You don’t know this pathetic insane looking man, he’s Igbudu!”.

The girls just smiled but understood nothing. Then he turned to the men and said.

“take him to a nice room, let him shower and eat. Get him a doctor and afterwards give him the kind of woman he likes for the night”. Then he faced Igbudu and said. “welcome to the presidential mansion, you are my guest. Get better, we have a deal afterwards”.

Then he crossed his hands around the neck of his girls and walked away. Igbudu still couldn’t believe what happened. He looked as the president walked away and then turned to the men who motioned him to move forward.

They escorted Igbudu into a exquisitely furnished big room with everything in gold. He looked around and still couldn’t believe his eyes. The men bowed and one of them said.

“Anything we can get you aside what the president asked us to get you sir?”.

He looked startled at them and shook his head. They bowed again and walked away closing the door gently. Igbudu looked around again and slowly went to the glass bathroom, opened the door and looked at the golden bathtub, golden shower and golden WC, then slowly closed the glass door, then sat on a chair looking at the room.

A knock startled him, he looked at the door and the knock came again.

‘’Come in!”. he said, not recognizing his own voice.

Two male maids in white overall came in with trays; they dropped it on the dinning and bowed. One tray contained plates of food and the other juice and fruits.

‘Any other thing sir?”. One of the maids asked.

“no! no!”. igbudu said and looked at the trays on the table.

‘The doctor will be here soon”. They said, bowed and walked away.

He slowly went to the table and opened the plate; fried rice and salad, with different kinds of meats. He opened the other and saw pies ,cakes and sandwich. He immediately started with the rice, throwing the chicken into his mouth as he ate horridly. A knock startled him again, he was going to say something but his mouth was filled up, a young beautiful, nubile dark girl in black bum short and t shirt walked in smiling at him. He looked at her and didn’t know whether to continue eating or to hear her out first. She just went ahead to say without his consent.

“I’m here to do whatever you want, anything at all”. She said smiling seductively.

Igbudu couldn’t believe anything he is seeing and hearing, he was yet to digest it when a doctor and two nurses walked in.

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Re: The Devils Touch by topher052: 1:00pm On Jul 13, 2019
NEXT UPDATE ON MONDAY

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Re: The Devils Touch by Nobody: 1:12pm On Jul 13, 2019
Topher igbudu dont want Me I wantgrin

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Re: The Devils Touch by BankyGee(m): 2:45pm On Jul 13, 2019
Weldone topher052.

Igbudu aff blow nah... They need to give him gold chain, Nike singlet and golden nickerbugger seff grin, pu7pl3 whaddya think?



I just love Sam and his Avatar State ability grin

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Re: The Devils Touch by greatme2good(f): 9:51pm On Jul 13, 2019
Igbudu has become a VIP overnight.

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Re: The Devils Touch by pu7pl3(m): 10:36pm On Jul 13, 2019
BankyGee:
Weldone topher052.

Igbudu aff blow nah... They need to give him gold chain, Nike singlet and golden nickerbugger seff grin, pu7p3 whaddya think?

I just love Sam and his Avatar State ability grin



I second this notion grin...


I swear I was thinking about avatar too when I was reading that part grin

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Re: The Devils Touch by BankyGee(m): 7:11am On Jul 14, 2019
pu7pl3:




I second this notion grin...


I swear I was thinking about avatar too when I was reading that part grin

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Re: The Devils Touch by MoxxxxO123(m): 10:03am On Jul 14, 2019
U are good really

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Re: The Devils Touch by tunjilee003: 7:48pm On Jul 14, 2019
igbudu now given a special treat....kudos op,keep it coming

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Re: The Devils Touch by topher052: 6:17pm On Jul 15, 2019
Crusial was worried when she got to Johns place, she kept checking the window for any sign of him. It was almost dark and past the normal time he ought have returned. She stayed up till 2 am, she had his number severally it kept ringing with no response.

She dozed off on the couch and when she opened her eyes again it was day light, she immediately tried Johns number again and it rang severally but no response. She immediately stood up, poured went to the bathroom, poured water on her face, brushed her teeth and set out for the hospital.

At the hospital was as busy as a market place. Everyone seem to be occupied with emergency cases. She looked around the badly injured patients in pain and wondered what happened. She approached a slim short dark nurse with a note pad penning down something and asked.

"have you seen doctor John?".

She took a quick glance at her returned to her pad and said without looking at her walking away.

"look for him, i dunno".

Crusial felt even worried with these much casualties and mutilated patients, she feared maybe John must have met such fate. She saw a chubby fair nurse directing other nurses on where to take some patients on a stretcher. She rushed to her and asked.

''please, have you seen doctor John?"

The lady didn't look at her and said still motioning a nurse to an almost filled up ward.

"i don't know! i don't know!".

Crusial then decided to sniff him out. She closed her eyes and inhale large air in, but she only perceived the smell of blood and it began turning her into a monstrous form as she enjoyed it. Immediately, she opened her eyes and shove the urge away by shaking her head vigorously. Nobody noticed her and she was grateful no one did.

A huge tall dark man in a blood stained yellow T-shirt rushed in carrying a young dying girl in his arm screaming.

"help! help!".

Nobody took notice of him as they were all occupied with one case or the other. He ran to Crusial and she looked at the blood gushing out from the girls chest and mouth, she got lost looking hungrily at it.

''please, help me! My girl is dying". The man said.

This called Crusial back to consciousness, she looked up at the man and noticed tears rushing down his cheeks. She pointed him to the chubby lady and he rushed off to her.

She noticed that she couldn't stand the urge anymore, she ran faraway from the hospital and sat under a tree breathing fast.

"what is the problem young lady?". Said a man in his late 60's in pink sleeve top and white short with hairs and full beards decorating his dark skin.

She looked sharply at him and fought to urge to eat him, then said looking away.

"Nothing".

"you seem worried". He said.

"what happened here?". she asked to change to topic.

"I don't know what's going on, some said the end is here, others said an evil man caused it. There was a massacre last night, strange things attacked people, killed may'.

Crusial immediately tried Johns number again and it was switched off. She looked at the man with horror in her eyes.

'What is it?". The man asked with concern.

She ignored him, stood up and ran to the hospital again, with then looking behind her.

At the entrance she had that strange feeling again, but she had to fight, she closed her eyes and inhaled blocking every blood smell with every will strength in her and she she couldn't catch his smell. She was still sniffing when someone pushed her, she moved a side and opened her eyes and saw a man rushing in with a lady in wheelchair. She went to a side and closed her eyes again, inhaling heavily. She caught his smell faintly and she tried harder and was smelt it harder.

'’Crusial!".

She opened her eyes and saw John in his theater suit; she gave a wide grin and ran to hug him. He looked around stylishly at the glances from other staff of the hospital.
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“What do we do next?”. Asked the snake like demon.

“Let’s wait for the next order”. The water demon answered.

“Do we really need approval after we have been told to destroy and curse ciaos?”. The monkey demon added.

“I think we have done enough today”. Said the water demon.

“So what do you suggest?”. Asked the snake demon.

“Let’s give them our report”. The water demon said .

‘’What report? We only killed a few, I’m hungry for more”. The snake demon said.

“I think we should go back”. Said the monkey demon.

They later agreed and left the cave they were having their talk.

Few hours ago, the three of them entered a busy road with cars and pedestrians going about their business. The snake like demon swiftly moved in front of a moving car and stood with her human part, the driver saw her and dodged running into a another car coming from the fro direction.


Her presence triggered a frenzy as everyone ran helter-skelter for the fear of the strange creature. She moved under a Toyota corolla car and picked it up above her head, threw it into Lexus car, killing everyone in the Lexus.

The monkey came from nowhere jumped on a man running and beat him to death, then jumped on top of a car, break the windscreen, the passengers alighted and took to their heels, the money jumped on a girl running for her life, hit her several time and flung her away.

The water demon spread on the floor and immediately rose with a huge splash trapping some persons inside and drowned them, then threw them off different directions with another mighty splash.

There were screaming as people ran in different directions, some falling and trodden upon, others scaling over cars and anything on their part. The demons kept attacking killing anyone on their part.

The snake saw woman running with her daughter and chased after her. She got closer, leaped to fall on her but a man from nowhere jumped in-between them saving the lady. The snake coiled around the man, leaving his head out, then used her two hands to beat his head viciously while she broke his bone as she stretched him in her grip. The lady had long escaped the scene by the time she went to her next victim.

Two boys in school uniform hid under a car, the bigger one of 7 years old crossed his hand around his brother of 4 years old. They watched as peoples feet ran pass, water mixed with blood flowed to where they were, the senior pushed the younger down who wanted to move away from the water and whispered.

“Remain where you are!”.

The younger obeyed and they remained where they were as the water soaked their uniforms. Then suddenly it started increasing, the younger made to move but the senior bushed him down again, the younger protested and they began arguing when five water fingers rose in their midst. The senior crawled out of dragging his younger with him. The water threw the car some distance away and the blast threw the boys apart.

The landed on the side of the road, few people ran pass him; he shielded himself from being trodden on. Then he remembered his brother and immediately stood up staggering in pain. He looked for him but the confused crowed in the dark made it difficult for him to find him.

“Jude! Jude!”. He called as he forced his way forward.

The snake appeared in his front and swung her hand towards him, he bent in a reflex and she mixed. Quickly he ran and the snake caught another person and threw him up, chasing another to kill.

The boy rushed and hid himself behind a tree still looking out for his brother. While he stayed out of sight peeping, a fat boy of a about 15 years old in blue jean and t-shirt came to where he was, hesitated a little looking on different directions, then went to the boy and pushed away taking his position.

“That’s my spot!”. The boy cried trying to push the fat boy away.

The fat boy pushed him so hard he fell with his buttocks. He wanted to stand and fight back but stopped when he saw the monkey standing behind the fat boy. The fat boy saw the horror in the boy’s face and slowly looked behind him, the monkey grabbed him and trampled him death while the boy ran away.

He ran so fat he stood up again each time he tripped and continued without hesitation. Then he stopped when he saw someone like his brother lying on his side in a gutter. He quickly went in and checked, indeed it was his brother. He shook him and discovered he was bleeding on his head. The water demon moved pass and he hid himself shielding his brother with his body. He raised his head again and checked if the coast was clear, then dragged his brother out of the gutter. He was still breathing but still.

All of a sudden, the demons disappeared, but the crowed was still crazy. The boy shook his brother under a tree crying; suddenly it started raining drenching him and his brother.

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Zarac felt tired and weak, he hadn’t had anything for three days tied to a tree. He bent his head sleeping when a touch spooked him, he rose abruptly to find two little boys around him, at first he thought they were demons, but when he looked closely he discovered it was Sam and Mamood trying to untie him.

"Sam?". Zarac called.

Sam smiled and continued untying him.

"get away from here! go and get an adult! They are around, leave!". Zarac tried to shoo them away.

But Sam ignored him and went to look for something sharp, while Mamood tried to use his teeth. Before Sam returned Mamood had loosened the knot with his teeth, and Zarack sagged on the floor. He breathed heavily and tried to stand again saying.

''let's leave here! lets go!".

Mamood helped him up and assisted him as he staggered walking away with Sam behind.

"how did you guys find me? Where is your mother?". Zarac asked as they struggled through the forest.

"Don't worry sir, she's fine". Mamood said.




The mermaid stayed hidden behind a leaf watching Bruno and Sandra trying to find their way out of the forest. They heard the explosion and was overtaken by fear.

They had walked some distance and got to a place they recognized.

'i think i remember this place". Sandra said.

'i think i do too". Bruno replied moving forward.

The mermaid followed them circumspectly, her interest was on Bruno. They walked for another hour and decided to rest under a shade. The mermaid remained observant in her hidden place.

"where is my husband?". Sandra asked sadly.

"We are going to find him, lets leave first".

Bruno caught sight of a cigarette and quickly went to pick it up.

'what is it?". Sandra asked out of curiousity.

"Ishaw's best cigarette. I think i remember here, we are close!". Bruno said excitedly moving without Sandra.

She stood up and joined him. The mermaid followed too and stepped on can drink that made a noise to attract Bruno's attention. He quickly took out his gun and shouted.

"who's there?''.

The mermaid hid in a grass out of fear and remained still.

"who's that?". Sandra asked hiding behind Bruno.

'stay back!". Bruno said, moving carefully forward. "who's that!". he said again.

The girl remained still shaking in fear. Bruno caught sight of her flesh and pointed the gun and fired.

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A servant came to report to the mermaid king that his only daughter was missing, he stood up abruptly and ordered two of his best warriors to go and look for her.

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Re: The Devils Touch by BankyGee(m): 6:19pm On Jul 15, 2019
First To Like, Share and Comment!
Bruno aff kee my mamee water o cry cry...

Re: The Devils Touch by statistics1(m): 6:55pm On Jul 15, 2019
very long interesting update... thanks much

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Re: The Devils Touch by dawno2008(m): 8:00pm On Jul 15, 2019
@topher052 you three much jare

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Re: The Devils Touch by Hardes(m): 8:16pm On Jul 15, 2019
E be lyk say Bruno don find trouble

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Re: The Devils Touch by pu7pl3(m): 12:35am On Jul 16, 2019
Topher the hospital scene was meant to be crusial not Sandra....

And there were too many typos in this one...good job nonetheless

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Re: The Devils Touch by greatme2good(f): 2:43am On Jul 16, 2019
There's a mix-up with the names dear OP. It's Crusial not Sandra in respect to the hospital scene. Why didn't Sam speak to his father? That scene will be interesting. Meanwhile Bruno just attracted another spiritual wrath...must he even fire sef

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Re: The Devils Touch by MoxxxxO123(m): 5:48am On Jul 16, 2019
This episode touch me

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Re: The Devils Touch by MoxxxxO123(m): 5:48am On Jul 16, 2019
I hope bruno missed the target

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Re: The Devils Touch by topher052: 8:26am On Jul 16, 2019
Thanks greatme2good and puf7pI3 for pointing out the error. Just modifies. Next episode tomorrow

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Re: The Devils Touch by greatme2good(f): 8:47am On Jul 16, 2019
Nice but the spelling changed. Please be mindful of typo errors though I understand it's not easy doing this. Bless you bro.
topher052:
Thanks greatme2good and puf7pI3 for pointing out the error. Just modifies. Next episode tomorrow

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Re: The Devils Touch by pu7pl3(m): 11:00am On Jul 16, 2019
greatme2good:
There's a mix-up with the names dear OP. It's Crusial not Sandra in respect to the hospital scene. Why didn't Sam speak to his father? That scene will be interesting. Meanwhile Bruno just attracted another spiritual wrath...must he even fire sef


The bullet won't hit her smiley

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