nextstep:
Both these forms are correct:

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to administrative staff
Request for the redesignation of my appointment as administrative staff

In the first, redesignation is a verb. I prefer it because it emphasizes change from-to
In the second, redesignation is a state of being. It doesn't really emphasize the change. It can be ambiguous: redesignate (to what?) as administrative staff.

You also won't use the form with "an administrative staff", because staff is plural. (e.g. a member of staff; a staff member; but not a staff)

You're too much!

NairaMaster1:


Non of the above Sir.

Ok...

This thing is simple brother.

Just change the word redesign with another meaning. Redesignation means "Change....* So, I believe this should be more apt in that context.

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to administrative staff.

Cheers! I scored A1 in English..lol!

Use 'as' and not 'to'.

Loewe:


None of the above. Below is what you should use:

Request for Redesignation as Administrative Staff

Lacking proper punctuation and using capital letters in inappropriate ways because those words are not proper nouns.

ultimateprof:


Lacking proper punctuation and using capital letters in inappropriate ways because those words are not proper nouns.

I drafted it as the subject of the letter, which I believe is the intent of the OP. I explained that in my second post, although I don't expect you to have read that, as it seems you were more bent on 'correcting' me

By the way, your comment lacks proper syntax. I suggest you put more effort into constructing your sentences for others to make sense of it... Ciao!

nextstep:
Both these forms are correct:

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to administrative staff
Request for the redesignation of my appointment as administrative staff

In the first, redesignation is a verb. I prefer it because it emphasizes change from-to
In the second, redesignation is a state of being. It doesn't really emphasize the change. It can be ambiguous: redesignate (to what?) as administrative staff.

You also won't use the form with "an administrative staff", because staff is plural. (e.g. a member of staff; a staff member; but not a staff)

Redesignation is a NOUN, not a verb! Redesignate is the verb form i.e. it can be in the present or past tense. Redesignation is the noun form. You may confirm this on google...

Request for redesignation of my appointment to administrative staff
This is correct.

quote author=Beress
post=111583417]Request for the redesignation of my appointment to an administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as an administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as administrative staff


Pls which is the best to use among all these. It's meant to be the title of an official letter I want to write. I want to change from clerical staff to administrative staff.

I will appreciate your response


MODIFIED

Having listened to some grammarians here, I now have two options:

Request for Redesignation to Administrative Staff

OR

Request for Redesignation as Administrative Staff

Pls which is the most appropriate[/quote]

Beress:
Request for the redesignation of my appointment to an administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as an administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as administrative staff


Pls which is the best to use among all these. It's meant to be the title of an official letter I want to write. I want to change from clerical staff to administrative staff.

I will appreciate your response


MODIFIED

Having listened to some grammarians here, I now have two options:

Request for Redesignation to Administrative Staff

OR

Request for Redesignation as Administrative Staff

Pls which is the most appropriate

The first instance for when you were not an Admin staff, neither do u occupy a position with roles similar to an Admin staff, but now desire to be one. The second is for the situation that you occupy a role, say perhaps secretarial, but you'd rather not be called secretary but Admin staff

You tried there but your request should be captured properly bc they are 2 different cadres that will be considered by SSC of your MDA before forwarding to FCSC, "REQUEST FOR REDESIGNATION OF CADRE FROM CLERICAL TO ADMINISTRATIVE " bear in mind that they may invoke APD rule to kill it on arrival

It depends on the context.

For clarity, use "Request for Redesignation as ___ to ___"

Beress:
Request for the redesignation of my appointment to an administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as an administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as administrative staff


Pls which is the best to use among all these. It's meant to be the title of an official letter I want to write. I want to change from clerical staff to administrative staff.

I will appreciate your response


MODIFIED

Having listened to some grammarians here, I now have two options:

Request for Redesignation to Administrative Staff

OR

Request for Redesignation as Administrative Staff

Pls which is the most appropriate

Loewe:


I drafted it as the subject of the letter, which I believe is the intent of the OP. I explained that in my second post, although I don't expect you to have read that, as it seems you were more bent on 'correcting' me

By the way, your comment lacks proper syntax. I suggest you put more effort into constructing your sentences for others to make sense of it... Ciao!

An amateur sensed and this is one of the shortcomings of this forum.

Beress:
Request for the redesignation of my appointment to an administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as an administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to administrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as administrative staff


Pls which is the best to use among all these. It's meant to be the title of an official letter I want to write. I want to change from clerical staff to administrative staff.

I will appreciate your response


MODIFIED

Having listened to some grammarians here, I now have two options:

Request for Redesignation to Administrative Staff

OR

Request for Redesignation as Administrative Staff

Pls which is the most appropriate

Install Grammarly on your system and thank me later.

layycon:
Request for the redesignation of my appointment as an administrative staff

This is the correct one

this is the correct one i believe you should us.

Ask Buhari .

ultimateprof:

An amateur sensed and this is one of the shortcomings of this forum.

Another blunder! Work on ur grammar before trying to correct ur big bros

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as administrative staff

Redesignation does not mean posted so using to in this regard is wrong. It means renaming basically, so as is correct. Its a noun, not a verb

Nothing like request for the, it is request the

godofuck231:
A request to to effect a redesignation of my appointment from an executive staff to the position as an administrative staff ( the title of your letter should speak in brief and state your intent not confuse or hide intents )

op follow this guy method here it will help you thanks.

ultimatekint:
Ask Buhari .

waka, you want make em fail like super eagles abi

the first one is correct.

godofuck231:
waka, you want make em fail like super eagles abi

Mr fool.