Nigerian writers just keep churning out versions of Nollywood in script. Isn't this all predictable? Doesn't one know already this is the usual innocent-girl-gone-bad drama? One can never get enough of such pathetic stories which continue to sell as Nigerian literature.
Can't these girl-writers never get a grip on their love for "love", romance and romantic intrigue?

the length is enough to make me sleep off... i beta not read....

Nice one... I enjoyed reading every bit of it... Is there a continuation perhaps? Even if there isn't, it's still a good read. Would have fun tryna figure out what happened next... Thanks

This is our very own version of PRETTY WOMAN

Nice piece umari ayim. Patricia was js lucky so it doesn't mean Stephanie wil be cos chances of dat happening realistically is very, very, slim.

CyberG: Funny that people did not even read the story in less than 5 minutes! Almost everyone associated with Nigeria is growing dumber and mentally lazier, what is hard in reading just a few paragraphs of prose? The poster clearly indicated "Umari Ayim" as the writer, yet people are complaining about the poster!? I hope you can see there is talent from every part of Nigeria!

my bros i wonder o.that's why white men tag us as lazy pple dat cannot read.bt cm to tink of it "why r nigerians so lazy wen it comes to books?".an indian man i used to work for always sent same proposal nd changed jst d figures to same company for 10yrs nd wen i asked him why he said nigerians dnt read nd they just look at figures nd endorse.seriously,that's pathetic

Lovely story. Really enjoyed reading the piece. Kudos Seun

Dis story is unsubstantial n stupid,d format is stupid.people in d text stupid,d summary stupid an d writer stupid.wat a conglomerated rezmerezed cocomerism n a fraudulated dextromerous woowoo,ad-infinitum

Ok, i attempted to read it...but when i realised it was this LONG,i skipped it. Yeah, somewhere around the 3rd paragraph,i couldn't help but notice "as i stared at the 35INCH PLASMA infront of me....bla bla bla" Emmm...point of correction,HD flast screen TVs don't come in 35inch...its 32,42,46,52 etc. Especially plasma. LOL. Typical of an Ota boy...Heehee. Good write up, but not without the USUAL Nollywood blunders

deeflamez: Ok, i attempted to read it...but when i realised it was this LONG,i skipped it. Yeah, somewhere around the 3rd paragraph,i couldn't help but notice "as i stared at the 35INCH PLASMA infront of me....bla bla bla" Emmm...point of correction,HD flast screen TVs don't come in 35inch...its 32,42,46,52 etc. Especially plasma. LOL. Typical of an Ota boy...Heehee. Good write up, but not without the USUAL Nollywood blunders

Interesting story. Part two pls??

This the first and probably only lengthy post on NL that I've read wit rapt attention. Really interesting piece. Would love to read more

lt4u: Good job.
Continuation plzzzzz

This the first and probably only lengthy post on NL that I've read wit rapt attention. Really interesting piece. Would love to read more

Absolutely no desire to put creative efforts into writing. Read Ken Saro Wiwa's Soulja Boy and experience the wise use of pidgin English in a stream-of-consciousness book. Read Burma Boy!

daniel michael: Dis story is unsubstantial n stupid,d format is stupid.people in d text stupid,d summary stupid an d writer stupid.wat a conglomerated rezmerezed cocomerism n a fraudulated dextromerous woowoo,ad-infinitum

take it easy bro...
No vex abeg!

*lookin for my father's medicated glasses*

Hmm seems like i get to read new stories from a new writer any time my writers on NL go on break.

Nice work though its what we already know,the next thing Patricia and the dude falls in love and the likes,Btw those people talking about it being seun's work,can't y'all read that its by "umari Ayim"? Seun just posted it,na wa o.

Who is Umari Ayim? If seun can't tell us who he is then Seun is the writer

freecocoa: Hmm seems like i get to read new stories from a new writer any time my writers on NL go on break.

Nice work though its what we already know,the next thing Patricia and the dude falls in love and the likes,Btw those people talking about it being seun's work,can't y'all read that its by "umari Ayim"? Seun just posted it,na wa o.

No mind dem.
Ugo nwayi, hw was ur nyt?

freecocoa: Hmm seems like i get to read new stories from a new writer any time my writers on NL go on break.

Nice work though its what we already know,the next thing Patricia and the dude falls in love and the likes,Btw those people talking about it being seun's work,can't y'all read that its by "umari Ayim"? Seun just posted it,na wa o.

No mind dem.
Ugo nwayi, hw was ur nyt?

Read through the post..
It was an intresting one
Nice write up

Dem don talk say if you wan hide somtin from african put am inside book cos dem no dey read.
Wetin dey too much for this prose wey una no fit read? Na wa oo and this na jus chapter 1

@OP,
Moral of the story- na ashawo dey get connection pass?

Why wont our education sector dwindle down, why wont the NECO result be poor, why wont the Jamb result be poor....all we do is to blame govt for everything.....Just to read a page of a well written prose...everybody is complaing and asking for the summary...schhh!!! this country is in trouble. Most of u complaining can chat or ping from morning to night. GOOD WORK from ANYIM...keep it up.

slimyem: take it easy bro...
No vex abeg!

sis, are we safe?

daniel michael: Dis story is unsubstantial n stupid,d format is stupid.people in d text stupid,d summary stupid an d writer stupid.wat a conglomerated rezmerezed cocomerism n a fraudulated dextromerous woowoo,ad-infinitum

bros are we safe?

Nigerians!!! Smh!!! Must you always complain? Any little thing Seun does, you'd complain. Why can't some of you grow some sense?

The writer's style is really good and commendable for a Nigerian fiction writer. Kudos Umari Ayim. I'd like to buy the full novel when its out. Story line may be a bit predictable but its classic and timeless and im sure the writer can throw in a few twists later on. who knows?

linsa01:

sis, are we safe?

slim, not meant for you.

atuboweke: Why wont our education sector dwindle down, why wont the NECO result be poor, why wont the Jamb result be poor....all we do is to blame govt for everything.....Just to read a page of a well written prose...everybody is complaing and asking for the summary...schhh!!! this country is in trouble. Most of u complaining can chat or ping from morning to night. GOOD WORK from ANYIM...keep it up.

I tire o. 'Just to read a page of well written prose' and peeps be complaining as if the price of fuel has gone up again. Some too dumb to even realise that its not written by Seun. Smh

So Seun what do want us to learn from this your "positive" superstory eeh? I think i'll recommend this story to your sister for motivation. Let her go out there and try her luck, maybe the son Ubama might be her catch. Dont try this next time,av forgiven you.....

bennyraz: Who is Umari Ayim? If seun can't tell us who he is then Seun is the writer

Google it http://www.umariayim.com/

Maybe she paid Seun for a publicity stunt.

slimyem: ....mtcheeeeeeeeeeeew.
Like say this kain thing dey happen for real life...
Same old,same old fake recycled story!
Nansense!

U sound like the story is talking about u?
I m confused!