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Bless you. |
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I am also posted to Anambra state... (08130898772, if there is a whatsapp group). |
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Soon an Otondo would be born... Soon a new page be turn The journey of years gradually coming to an end Life we've spent, memories made, foes and friends. Soon there would be one in khaki Soon there would be one in white shorts, shopping in mammy Soon an Otondo would be born. An Otondo who have lived for several years But not as an Otondo, for sure, yes He had spent time staring at different pages And those time became ages Of pain, joy and love Of hate and many moments he could, yet, not get enough. Soon an Otondo emerge the stage With dreams, hopes and aspirations brimming his baggage May this world goodies not hide from him May the Creator's mercy on him continually beam. For years I have been struggling with thy truths Always with the Jezebels never seeing the Ruths. May this journey lead me right To you, Creator of all, I bequeath, this fun filled night. Dedicated to all prospective Nigerian Youth Service Corp Member (Otondo). 2 Likes |
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A very rhetorical piece filled with deep truth. Nice one. 2 Likes |
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Bangalee wan go sing for lawyer inside court... |
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Wow! This poem is like a fire to the bones.. alas dry bone, up ye get and rise again!! You really nailed it 'Muser'. Though I think you might like to look at this line again: -Those people who 'thinks' I am not 'wealthy' to accompany their trust. Nice creativity. My part of the poem is actually the last stanza. For me, that is where you killed the Goliath ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Nice one... But watch out for your spellings carefully, (it adds quality to your name!). And also your lines, are you using end rhymes, or internal rhymes or you just combining the two? Though i think it would be beautiful if you arrange the lines properly so the end would rhyme. Nice creativity though. |
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mrjoshyssb:You really doing well with the diction. This is just the way a typical local Yoruba girl speaks o.. ![]() ![]() You should cross check your work, I think you are speeding things up and by so doing, making some little errors and omissions in your writing and spelling. Nice creativity though. |
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mrjoshyssb:Thanks.... 1 Like |
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[quote author=Khrisfame post=50687461]"Yes. Just feeling a little tired, that's all."..... Who is talking here...the author or character? ![]() ![]() |
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"Yes. Just feeling a little tired, that's all."..... Who is talking here...the author or character? ![]() ![]() |
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Very interesting piece. O boi do com finish this story sharp sharp... |
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This is beautiful! 1 Like |
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Hi beautiful people, my hands just got 'itchy' ![]() ![]() Thanks in anticipation. There is something you hide in your pant Even though everybody knows it's there Leaving it open is something you can't Yea no sane person dare. That stuff you got, I garrit too, But we are both hideous of it like a cat's poo. There are two types; it's only like this or like that And everyone, normally, have one in their pant. In your pant, there is the greatest thing about life Determining how you'll be treated, how you love and strife. The power to replenish this earth and this race The source of your strength, feelings and face The ability to give life, stocked in that which you got enpanted. And don't be surprised, for because of it, many can get enchanted. Little Angelica, today she run this street n*ked But tomorrow there will be men in hundred Staring for their lustful hunger be fed Don't you know there is no bigger way to paint the town red? There is that thing in your pant, child When it meet with the other you can go wild. Moans, whimpers, shouts and shakes This is the one, true, sweetest of all cakes Do not wake, carelessly, a sleeping giant Please keep it safe, softly that which is in your pant. 3 Likes 2 Shares |
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supergata:You're welcome. |
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supergata:Well, the obvious advantage there is, is getting your work out to the public. Your work, been uploaded on Nairaland, stand a chance of being viewed/ getting to the knowledge of different range of people, beyond you could possibly get to meet in physical. For example, you have no idea how many people have got to know about whatever you post here. The disadvantages, so far I don't have much to say about that. But I see, at least, a thread everyday in nairaland about plegiarism and I think that's a problem, a kind of disadvantage; don't you think? |
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larabae13:I think it's 'normal' as a writer to have this experience. You cannot possibly write down everything that's in your head. There are times, it just flow freely and there are other times, even when you force it, you realise you are not even feeling what you are writing yourself! |
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larabae13:I think it's 'normal' as a writer to have this experience. You cannot possibly write down everything that's in your head. |
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This poem was inspired by a poem I read online sometimes ago (www.nairaland.com/2721570/one-love) and also by my crush or rather still 'impending girlfriend'. Please, your review and comments are highly welcome. Thanks. There is this girl I love She ain't a beauty queen or a being from above. She is a girl I can't put in a word Just a girl I would gladly give my world. Her love did not come at first sight It began when everyday with her became right. It's like unwrapping something you don't really know Then you want it today, tomorrow, you never wan' let it go. She is like a gift, long staring me in the eyes Waiting patiently, tirelessly, when I would realize. Love, now I'm here a melted ice You are my crown, my queen, my prize. Life became more beautiful since I said 'I love you' And these days I smile instead of feeling blue. There is this girl I told 'I love you ' Who replied me 'I love you too' She would take me up Kilimanjaro To tell me what she want is down, below. But I don't mind For with you whatever I seek, I find. 2 Likes 3 Shares |
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kennedymonk:Yes. |
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supergata:Well I use nairaland inclusively. |
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As for me, in regards to your second question. I think the hardest is finding the courage to write on even when you've put something out there and you are not getting positive headlight. For example, you written this and put it here in good hope that people are going to read and respond to you, but funny enough you might not get any even return. And happenings as this, don't add up to one's encouragement. However, this could be converted as strength, because knowing the society your work is going to, its 'mean' disposition to literary work, especially from a not so popular individual, helps you challenge yourself and be your own first critic before bringing anything out to them. 1 Like |
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nice one bro. I must say you have a very catchy title. But i think the write up still needs some attention from you, as it seems like something you just wrote lazily (no offence pls). I'll agree with you that there are truly stories that are never told. But what's about them? You are to tell us this and beside I think the write up is somehow blurred in regards to the genre of literature which this should appropriately be. No offence inteneded. |
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PoundspassDolla:Abeg help me ask them... ![]() ![]() 1 Like |
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For a long time, I've been obsessed with William Wordsworth poem titled, 'the world too much with us'. This week I finally did something inspired by it and decided to name it same. Please your comments and reviews are highly welcome. Thanks. The world, too much with us (Miliyano's version). The world is beautiful but with plenty trouble. So thin the air that you can't grasp it The land fruitful, yet sweat and toil must tap it. Time is all there is about life, yet too fast and delicate. The world a stage, we actors Too hard we get, too fast we lost The world, too much with us. Innocent, every life at green But before we go the world creates another being. Something in the very air you breathes Something in this life we see but cannot touch We do, yes, want and love but even that we cannot get enough. Look around and see the world today So here right now but would not forever stay Look around the world and say What would you give, take, if you can? |
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Hmm.. where the money.. where the food? Let the change begins. |
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i just hope she reads this... i hope somehow this girl see this write up on time. |
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I admire your courage bro. |
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