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[quote author=damsel_Me]@Whiteguru and ATMc, Thanks so much for taking the time out to read my draft and for your sincere suggestions. My plan is to make it an african sci-fi. Abi aliens no fit invade africa? lol .well, It really isn't an invasion, the aliens never wanted to be seen by human eyes that was the reason the lived in the forest and also the reason they made sure they kill or take anyone that sets eyes on them. I have reconciled the sci fi/african differences by making the story a journal found by a young girl sometime in the future. The journal is dated two centuries ago when there was no western education in africa but after the victims escaped from the aliens, they never grew old nor died. Something strange was did to them. They were tired of living and seeing thier loved ones die and leave them. They lived and saw it all...in every generation, they had no choice but to adjust to the civilized culture so that they could fit in. The two victims planned their death own plots, they didnt want to live forever. The last victim whose journal is to be found by a girl in the future died some few years ago........ I don't know if it makes sense at all but i'm trying to africanise sci fi using the past, present and future africa.. it has not been done before...All i see is traditional african novels. I want to explore my imagination and see how civilized our continent will be in the future, that's why i want the journal to be found in the future......Please i want to see more critics for more encouragement.........will post more soon.[/quote]wohw!!! Few centuries ago, do africans know jesus?? Eno shouted jesus, u remember? U 'll do well, d ones dt r doing well so far do not have anything special dt u don't...keep it up |
Goshen360: Seriously, am DONE with this topic IF NOT THE FACT THAT YOU MENTIONED MY I.D. Can you and I deal with this issue here step-by-step or do we create another thread to deal with this? We will explain biblical meaning of sin and ask/answer some basic questions about sin/mastubation. Let me know what you want and we delve into it. Thankshere is ok, d matter we r dealing wit is 'mastur.b@tion, a sin'. Nd pls lets not digress, nd lets leave any pastor out of this, talk to me...if u agree, go on with ur points, i'm all ears |
I suggest u try as much as possible not to say d first thing dt comes to ur mind nd also learn to speak ur mind in ur mind:-D, it works for me. For instance someone spoils something dt belongs to me by mistake nd shows it to me, i say within 'will u ever learn to be careful!' but to d person i say 'ah ah, what happened nah?' then cool off as d person explains...try it nd add ur style, this two things work. Say what u'd love to say to d person in ur mind but come out wit something dt won't get d person upset afterall ur goal is not to upset d person. Dt way u wont be hurt nd d person wont be hurt as well, unless u want to hurt d person then be blunt but its usually not worth it. With time u 'll improve nd u will see nothing really will get at u like dt, talk of making u go wild...believe me people don't like to stay around blunt nd domineering pple. Yeah, they might put up with every other fault but u see these two: 'no go areas'. one more thing, pple like kind pple nd kindness wont permit u to be blunt...pls do let me know if u give it a try :-D |
Snowwy: Hi Ozegbe,those 2 points of urs r talking of different kingdoms...d kingdom of god which differs from d kingdom of heaven. Jn 3:5 talks about being born of water nd spirit or being bornagain as a prerequisite to entering d kingdom of god which is righteousness, peace nd joy in d holyghost whereas having d heart of a child is a prerequisite for entering d kingdom of heaven... Now concerning d statement in matt 11:11- among all born of women refers to every other person in d world, john is greater than all because he was filled with d holy spirit from d womb but then d least in d kingdom of god, remember is born of water nd d spirit ie born again nd so is greater than john...we were not told dt john was baptized. |
Poor boy, would have loved to know their reason |
Ur style has too many unnecessary words. Eg ...nd two others were shot dead nd one shot at d leg, y not three were shot, two died, one survived with wound Again, ...and on d wall behind...behind what? Again, ...d uniform man in his late forties... What is his rank, use d technical term lieutenant, corporal sergent etc, it will help u to reconstruct d next sentence...d man dt just entered d office... |
@op, jes...i covered her mouth...dt sounds like a direct translation, u hope to be heard not just in nigeria right? Again, then she woke up...at d begining of ur story, eno was awake dt she was shoutin jesus...so i didn't get this part, be clear on dt. Aside d above 2 points, ...our hands were tied to our body nd our legs too...was d legs also tied to ur body, be clear on dt. Is it to ur body or back...picture not clear. Again, ...we were encircled by...idon't know. But u just described d creature, put d described creature there, u know u can say i don't know if u were talking but not when u r writting, u have to know o.if u don't know, who will know then, d reader? Another point is ... Dared to enter into d forest...this gives me d pix dt d forest is not to be entered by pple, is dt ur point? D teenager dt never returned from palm fruit cutting, was it in d same forest. I commend ur vivid description nd ur use of figures of speech...its cool...keep it up |
@goshen nd others, mast.ur.b@tion is NOT a SIN...people believe dt what makes it a sin is d thought dt accompanies it but i want to ask u a question...those times u eat with negative thought or imagination, did eating become a sin? Nothing is wrong with eating rather with d thought so u change ur thought. D act on its own is not in anyway sin when carried out for d motive of self relief, d urge will always be there, its part of us just like hunger for food is part of us.when david was hungry, how did he satisfy himself...he ate d shew bread meant for priest, god does not see d way u see...one man may satisfy his sexual urge by adultery nd another by self relief nd its not of u to judge them. This is because he dt said do not commit adultery also said do not judge, so when u judge/condemn, u r no different from d person. MIND U, D ONLY PERSON PERMITTED TO REPLY ME IS HE WHO HAS NEVER DONE IT B4, ELSE PLS DON'T, RESERVE UR COMMENT. Again, who cares if u reject pastor chris' preaching if god approves him. Moreover pastor chris does not know dt u care less of his preaching. |
ismhab: U b1tch keep quite, ewu igbo.once again, growing up lessons!!! |
ismhab: u bitch keep quite.u need growing up lessons! |
bobosydney: Look at the village boy from igbo land that want to tell me to open my eyes . I had more exposure than you and i'm not a ignorant parasites like your stink mouth. bobosydney: Look at the village boy from igbo land that want to tell me to open my eyes . I had more exposure than you and i'm not a ignorant parasites like your stink mouth. bobosydney: Look at the village boy from igbo land that want to tell me to open my eyes . I had more exposure than you and i'm not a ignorant parasites like your stink mouth.can u correct urself pleeease...a ignorant? |
@paris10, u r mature in ur thinking. Its just dt u were misunderstood...d harm done by alcohol cannot be compared to dt of drug... |
@bobosydney with ur claims u still can't make good use of an article...'i'm not a one' nd 'not a ignorant' sorry...young man u don't know dt that on its own is a CRIME. Remove d plank in ur eyes b4 seeking to remove d speck in another's |
bobosydney: Ofcourse , i will always be saint and i will continue go against people that tarnish Nigerians name.u dull, he dt judges another is same as he dt is judged...as u watch their back, someoneelse is watching ur back |
bobosydney: This is not about dissing igbos , is about igbos always commit 90% of crime commit by Nigerians in overseas . Because 2 weeks ago 8 igbo boys were arrested in sydney australia with drugs and i was there at that time watching them . This people won't listen because they love money and they don't care about how they make it . many igbos i've been killed in indonesia, malaysia , thailand and singapore because of drugs trafficking . Enough is enough for this disgrace and you people should stop giving Nigeria bad names[/b].[/b]look who's talking? Saint bobosydney:-P |
ismhab: When will Ndi Igbo become good citizen of this country, may be we should give them blue passport and it should be written on it biafra-naija so that they can stop giving Nigeria bad names.who is nigeria? go nd trace ur origin...u r claiming another man's land, what pursued u from ur land? OKPO! |
9jadelta: na so my brother..na so my bro, dey no fit beat us, dey no fit join us! |
Siga: Please, please, please guys....dont let us make this a tribal rubbish again....no matter where they are from...they are Nigerians, Africans and blacks....so, please read, give appropriate response and stop tribalising every damn thing....Remember...we all carry same green passport....anywaz...olosi ni awon boys yen oo...make dem suffer well for jail...dem all be bastards...they r nigerians nd they r bastard. YOU ARE A NIGERIAN AND U ARE A BASTARD! |
Find out from ur dad if he found out what to do nd about ur mum dem culture through d media... |
@ deep sight, u 've really swallowed ab-dru-shin's lectures hook, line nd sinker...d same way d xtians did d bible...d probability dt neither of u-jesoul nd u- r right is 1. Dt's cos u r judging by anothers view...i suggest u listen to urself more even as u check out other's opinion nd views. There's no need for arguments cos d very thing u argue about, u have not grasped in its entirety. |
JeSoul: ^Awesome btwthere is d fourth member nd dt is u...jesus nd god r one abi, dt same way u r one with god no be so? Na im be say there is god d father, d son, holy ghost nd god d u :-D quadrinity! |
U saw something on d net nd did copy nd paste- god, angels ur dead relatives nd 24 elders in heaven r watching uuuu! |
U just dey answer to ur name |
Nd u r a member, ignorance is not an excuse at al:-P |
buchi4action: what do you expect me to tell her people?ah! What did u tell d girl:-P its d same tori nah |
Going to meet her folks b4 starting d rship is not in itself wrong but d outcome may not be so wonderful. I think u shld find out y she wants u to, if insecurity is her reason, i suggest u leave her to sort herself out or better still tell her dt she shld give u benefit of trust nd also give her instances of pple dt started seeing each other nd wit time went to meet d family, her parents inclusive...but if she has a reason other than insecurity, see how it goes with u. |
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