Can we vote for more than one person for best updater?

Dave, my poor Dave I forgive you wholeheartedly
I couldn't control my tears, I kept on thinking abt d whole scenario like it was real, like I was there. It felt so real n I cried real hard cos I loved Dave.
But am happy he was able to right his wrongs b4 dying, n he found peace at last. Even as am typing ds am crying..

Audrey you are so good, ds episode is so real n emotional. Nobody does it better, you are d best! Thank you.

TiffanyJ:
a mother-in-law? You're welcome ma

That was y I said "if no be one thing" cos aside the fact that she is his mother inlaw, she's also an elderly woman. Don't get me wrong boo

I've not been on NL just yesterday n av missed ds much. Lemme start by congratulating you on ur victory, you so deserve it.

And like someone noted you always av a good n encouraging responses to comments, I love you for that.

Nice updates, Dave disappointed me. He's so deceptive n callous. Oleng brace up n accept ur future.

Weldone Audrey, love you.

JeffreyJamez: Wait,I thought Dave had 2 sisters?

Yea, two sisters and a brother. Making them a total number of 4

I trust my Henry, if no be one thing I for tell am to slap her back. Very wicked n selfish woman, Tiffany you do well jare cos I wud av been angry with you if Henry hadn't collected the money from that woman.

And Linda you better stand up to her.

Tiffany thanks jare for the update e sweet me well.

Audrey you are the best. Crislyn said to tell you that you are just too much!

I feel sorry for oleng and Dave. I don't really know wah to say, maybe its because I still like Dave. I'm just sad for them.

Btw, thanks for the updates.

Hmmm, Dave...
What has happened to Oleng now? She has suffered a lot, why is her life so unhappy? Why was she born to be unlucky?

Thanks Audrey and please give us answers by updating again.
Nice update...

Dave is wicked, he betrayed me.

gaczee99: i dont think its a mistake that you made it public because this has brought u out. I didnt AuderyTimms before now but from now anywhere i'm passing by and comes accross any article, write up, novel or whatever by Audery Timms, i surely wont hesitate to buy it cos i know it will be woww. Besides u still can present this to a big producer to buy, it will surely sell. I'm sure i wont mind watching d acted version of this piece over and over again. Dats if they dont water it down during the acting

Exactly, Audrey this person has said it all. Many people know you now through this work n we won't think twice before buying any of your published work. So don't regret putting it here cos it has brought you to limelight.

As gaczee said, you could sell it to a producer for it to be acted on the condition that they'd put your name as the script writer.

Hope to see you going places, love ya mucho mucho.

No mind the nurse joor, she's doing busybody. Is it in her place to deliver such news? If they had sent her nau she wudnt av been able to tell them. She better be careful so she won't lose her job.

Cos Hakeem is not dead. It can't be true. He will fight it.

OMG!! All this happened? Oleng why? Audrey why? I dunno wah to say again, anything that wants to happen shud happen.

Audrey you are the best!

Would have voted for Temitope Daniel but he's not eligible.

My votes are for;
AudreyTimms and TiffanyJ.

I love them, their stories and their consistency.

Nuffn shud happen to Hakeem n Aisha oo.
Azeezat, so sorry for what Hakeem did to you, just try n forgive him and move on.

Tee'dan, nice one as usual. Keep on d good work, love ya.

Balley: Ooooh! Audrey wan kil person oo, see goose bumps on my body 4 dat action part. Dat part was like Eric don land!!! Gen gen gen gen!! U knw dat sound in action films. Mennnn babe u're d best. Muaaah. Lol

I dey tell you. Cold wan kill me for here. Oh Dave what have you done? Tell me the truth.
This is getting hotter n I'm loving it the more.

Btw, Audrey there was a tiny mistake, instead of breath you wrote breadth.

In all you are the best, love you loads.

AudreyTimms:
Tanx dear. Part 2 is abt 2 stat. I hpe u tuk d first flight sha so u won't arrive late.

Of course I did, I was about boarding wen I said that. I just arrived PH. Hope to see you soon.

Thank God Dave didn't die.

Nice one Audrey, I'm waiting for part two.

Port Harcourt, here I come.

Dave? Awww

Audrey, you always keep me fascinated n spellbound. Your updates are always 'wowing'.. More wisdom to you.

Please tell network to allow you give us another update. Thanks a lot dear.

Ruhbiee: Gosh!! Oleng is too too soft for my liking

Really? What wud she have done? You didn't expect her to fight them, did you?
What she did was the only thing one could do in such situation n if her mother inlaw didn't hate her already she wud have felt pity for her.

So sorry Oleng, such is life.

shomart: This is a very intriguing piece, [b][/b]I really think Dave is the problem, he can't give birth and he probably heard of it the day he said he wanted to kill himself.

I kinda agree with you there. I feel so sorry for Olenge.

PrinceAdepoju: yea, I believe Dave is hiding something too.

How in the world would he have accepted Oleng's confession that way??!

...some gentle, but very secretive guy like me.

Hmmm, so you are very secretive.. Easy with it o

But wait o, they got married just like that. Dave didn't tell her his secrets before the wedding.
Oleng why? Why didn't you insist to know first.

Audery, should we be scared for oleng? Hope she didn't make a mistake?

Wow! Nice. I'm glad Dave took it well but I wonder what he's hiding..
And his stewpeed sister, serves her right. Oleng shud av given her like three slaps, she shud take care of her family ist.
That's how they'd be calling all calabar girls prostitute.

Thanks Audrey, we are expecting more

Nice one Tiffany. Henry is now a changed person, that's good.

I almost tot the story had come to an end at that point until I saw d update about Terry.

You are really doing a great job Tiffany. Weldone dear.

Audery see whr u left us, I know u xed its gonna be short but this is super short n u left us here to be pondering over d outcome of their discuss well God dey.

Dave, its normal to be disappointed and angry. Very normal but please don't change.

Happy sunday Audery n lovers of unfulfilled promises, God bless you all.

AudreyTimms: Hmm......

Audery nau, nothing for us? Please nau give us small again .

Candis009: No no no... I don't want it to work out between Oleng and Dave. I still av a strong feeling Eric don't send that message. ever since I read dat msg,I knew something was wrong. Eric,y u being a coward and not a man to face her?



When will Bby Eric surface from where he s hidden? oh my sweet boy

I pray Oleng finds it in her h@ to forgive Aunt Vien wen she finds out ha Bby did not die



N all in all I wish ds writer d best in all endeavors for he kept me busy since yesterday and not lonely as always, good job

The writer is a 'she'.

bountiouz:

I agree with you, don't want dave getting hurt or being made the bad guy, but it seems one of these is bound to happen along the line.

Great work ma'am Audrey!

Yea, and now his family does not like Oleng. I feel sorry for them

Awww my poor Oleng, I'm so sorry dear. Dave pls be d man.

Audery please don't toture us like ds, feed us more.
Btw, ur updates keep me spellbound. It keeps getting interesting.

avuekwe:

Me, I'm suspecting that eric's neighbour. Remember she didn't sound like she liked oleng at all.

On a second tot that could be true o, I didn't even remember her sef.

Eh hen! Thank God collins aff gone. I like that part.
N I also second pammusphy for thinking its Eric's brother that sent Oleng the message. Notwithstanding, I kinda don't want Oleng to go back to Eric when he eventually comes.
Oleng, pls stick with Dave. Don't break his heart.

Thanks Audery n am waiting for your loonngg update.

Congrats for hitting front page, we now av more followers. You deserve it dear n am happy for you.

I keep loving the story more n more, I trust Oleng to make d ryt choice.

Oya nau come and update.. Much love.