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Goalnaldo:
awww. I'm flattered. I actually saw the story on my Quora feed and decided to use it. If you aren't on Quora, I'll advice you to sign up, there are numerous real life story you can use for your email copywriting.

Foluwadamilare:
Good morning, comments on this please:


How Winter almost Died on me

Hi Evelyn,

I lost my job when this corona shii started.
It was a difficult time as companies all over the world were letting off their staffs to minimize losses.

It was horrid for me, Evelyn.

So when I landed a new job two months ago, I was over the moon.

My new job was way better than the one I lost,

It paid better and I won't even have to go into overdrive like I did working my ass off on my previous job.

It was Heavensent.

Fast forward to my first day on the job..

I walked into the office and it was like the winter had died there

ACs were on full blast, the office was freezingly cold.

At first, I acted like the coldness had no effect on me, being a first timer…. plus there were other staffs there so I didn't wanna be seen as a grouch.

But after a week of pretense, when I started coming down with all sorts of cold-related sicknesses,

I knew the only way to fight for my life- and my job- was to get myself a warm and comfy sweatshirt.

Evelyn, that was how my horrible journey in the world of sweatshirts began.

Would you believe me if i told you I have ordered for more than five sweatshirts over the past one month?

If they aren't too tight, they would be too baggy making me look like a crisscross high school teenager

Just last week, I lost my wallet because one sweatshirt I bought had shallow pockets.

Man, I was frustrated!

I was about to quit my job- since I couldn't cope with the degrees and finding a sweatshirt was becoming impossible- when my aunt gifted me a sweatshirt from Belgium.

The sweatshirt was absolutus et perfectus!!!

It was a hoodless hoodie- with side pockets- made from materials that made it breathably lightweight but heavyweight enough so you can't see through.

It fitted very well and was so roomy you could sleep comfortably in it all day.

It provided just the right amount of warmth anyone would need without making them feel hot.

Its pocket are deep enough, I had no need to worry about my phone or wallet slipping out.

It was very easy to wash and wear, You wouldn't even have to worry about your sweatshirt shrinking in the dryer or after washing (perfect for my travels)

It felt good and looks good.

I asked my aunt where she made the order and she sent me the address [Link]

I checked the website and saw that more of the sweatshirt was available at a 40% discount price!!

Man, I wasn't gonna miss this call.

I immediately ordered for 3 more and guess what??
They fit perfectly just like the first one!

Amazing!

I really do not think you wanna miss this call either

Harmattan is gonna be here soon and we both know what that means..

The sweatshirts[link] are still available at a 40% discount price till the end of this week.

Just place your order here[link] and get ready to be WOWed!

Warmest regards,
Deet

WordsWriter:
Congratulations chasevibes. More to come!!

Virgo01:
Congratulations man.

OYENIYIJK:
yea bro. When you want to submit proposal, it do say you should attach a file. Do you craft something related to their work or what is the file all about? Clear me on this

OYENIYIJK:
weytin I gain if I no congratulate you. This is massive. More winnings BRO

giftedhands101:
Hey guys, please come to my rescue...

How do I create a link for clients to see my samples?

Should my samples be on Google doc or Ms word?

Thanks



P.S. Congrats ChaseVibes!!!

SeyiAyorinde:
congrats bro

Valwezzy:
Congratulations, more to come!

SuleimanKano:
Good afternoon my people,

A client on Upwork said he needs 20 suggested business name for a Medical/Legal Company a while ago.

Na so I quickly went to SH to search under the aforementioned categories.


I packaged some names in my cover letter for consideration.


Patiently waiting for the client feedback.


Follow the money....

shakyum:
someone of us that have not worked with any client, how are we going to set up our portfolio

Esteedee12:
Just finished writing my 67th email...
Still heading to a century
But I just want to again show my appreciation to you venzal and other bosses who have been keeping this page going. Whatever you produce shall all pass the "Product profitability test".

Venzal:
MAN, this is brilliant!

The subject line is a killer.

That is going to arouse a ton of curiosity. And in writing emails, your ability to sprinkle in a heavy dose of curiosity will help a lot.

You did it again at the end of the copy by teasing them about a secret without giving full details.

You have kind of caused an itch that they'd be naturally inclined to 'scratch'. And the only way to do that is to click on the damned link. That's why curiosity is powerful.

I have a little correction, though...

The TURN was too sharp. It'd throw a lot of people off.

What I am talking about is the part where you went "you don't want this for yourself?"

The transition, in my opinion, was too sudden.

You could have fed them a lot more details to ramp up desire before asking:

How would you want this for yourself?

Overall, you did amazing.

By the way, your moniker sounds like you're into PUA stuff. If I am correct, kindly shoot me a mail. We could work on something together.

maddman:
From the little mails I've read from both of 'em, Chris is humorous, and his emails are not only specific but also evoke emotions – there's one he wrote recently about Fox.

But you can tell he's trying to sell something, sometimes.

Ben Settle, on the other hand, seems like that super-knowledgeable guy that gives you helpful advice always and you end up paying him to learn more.

His emails are longer and packed with stuff.

There's a lot to learn from both of em though.

So after days of lecture from Venzal and writing out Ben's newsletter daily, I decided to try out my first sample

Kindly rate it over 10

Category: Dating Course ("Now she's wrapped in your palm" )

Email 1

Subject: She's obsessed with you man, how did you do it?

"She's been texting you all day man,respond! The relentless chirping of your phone won't let me rest"

Those were the exact words Samuel, a reader of my newsletter, sent to me in an email.

Apparently, his roommate has like a "container-load" of girls in his life and he literally has a timetable for each of them - and I'm not even kidding.

Samuel asked his roommate why he didn't flinch or respond to the incessant texts from his "supposed" girl.

His roommate told him he had earlier informed the girl to come over on Tuesday evening - meanwhile this event occurred on a Saturday.

"Why Tuesday? Why not tomorrow? Since you said you'll be home all day" Samuel asked.

His roommate responded saying he was going to be busy doing a lot of exercises.

Samuel immediately understood what he meant and asked how he does it - make these girls crave him so bad and even be so needy about it.

I mean, these are girls that have other guys literally begging them in their DMs.

These girls ignore over 50 guys only for them to be ignored by the one guy they want so badly.

You don't want that for yourself?

You don't want these girls all over you, craving your attention?

Samuel wanted that for himself and that was why he shot me that email.

Now don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to turn you into a "brostitute" or a serial player, I'm just going to show you how you can have that girl wrapped in your palm.

Samuel said his roommate didn't want to let him on the secret.

Let me give you one for free my man:

Be playfully challenging.

That's it.

This was the tip of the iceberg I gave Samuel,now he's definitely chewing neck-deep into the barbecued whole chicken of value he ordered here:

[Link]

[Your name]

ImahGabi22:
@venzal
For students like us who only have student ID

Can u help us to explain the process of getting a national ID card?

Venzal:
Hello everyone...

I was supposed to drop another written lesson today to talk about the SIX email disciplines.

But then, a question from someone yesterday prompted an idea.

Hence I recorded another video:


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XQs3jCYsixY

Watch to see a LIVE proposal that won an actual job on Upwork... PLUS how I got the information I needed to write the emails for the job.

fmcjunior:
I just created a new prolly US account10mins ago and its not on hold. I've not done paypal and number verification but I've filled the about you section and I've not started receiving surveys. The account is up for sale for[b] 4k.[/b] If you're interested Whatsapp: zero 8 one six 99 zero 1 seventy-seven 6, or quote me

kingsonJR:
Cc Chuksbaby isn't there a way to stop people from commenting on this page again and maybe create a WhatsApp group for them to ask their questions and dedicate this thread for what it was meant for from the start...please this is getting too fustrating meeting like 10 pages after just like two hours haa

Teerc4:
Please any solution to this on my PayPal account?

newman0017:
If you would be so kind as to giving me an email to reach you with

Joecristiano7:
Pls how can I unlink my PayPal account from prolific

Joecristiano7:
So I should prolly just create another PayPal account. I haven't linked my bank card to this present one

Joecristiano7:
Guys abeg I need help. I tried linking my PayPal account to prolific, it worked. But PayPal sent me a mail that my account has been limited and it will remain so until I upload a photo ID. Please is it safe to upload the ID.
Ps: I accessed PayPal from prolific with my VPN on. Was that why I was l was flagged?