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LiteratureRe: ROYAL PALAVER by Neduzze5 & Chistar01 by chistar01(m): 7:36pm On Jul 19, 2013
CHAPTER TWO

It was barely sunrise in the kingdom of Ikoro when the first cock within the palace crowed. Lolo Ugomma was already awake and was pondering about the eventful previous day especially the haunting words of the village drunkard about her having a bastard child.

She had always been a light sleeper and now that she had things on her mind, she couldnt sleep well atall, she turned and rolled all night in search of a comfortable posture to sleep but rather than a comfortable sleep, she had nightmares each time she closed her eyes.

She vividly recalled the very last dream she dreamt before fully waking up...

It was a casual day in Ikoro kingdom and as she went to the village stream to have her bath alongside her servants who were to bath her due to the fact that she was the queen. She entered the stream and her servants went down to business, scrubbing Ugomma in the right and wrong places, when out of the blues, she was starled when she suddenly heard the voice of a very young child saying "mummy dont let me go".. She thought it was just her imagination at first when the servants claimed not to hear anything, but when voice kept on repeating same statement in her head, she was convinced it wasnt her imagination, so she started screaming out of fear until she suddenly woke up.

"what was that about?" she asked herself, but couldnt answer it, so she stayed awake all through the early hours of the morning in deep thoughts.

The morning sun had risen fully before Igwe Nelson finally woke up, he strecthed and was about to say a prayer to the gods of the land when he turned to kneel only for him to see a sight that caught his attention.

Lolo Ugomma, who hadnt slept all night was sitting on the bare floor at the extreme corner of the room lost in deep thought that she didnt even know when her husband woke up and walked up to her side.

For a short moment Igwe Nelson starred at his beautiful queen and he could see deep into her heart to know that she was realy bothered, so he cleared his throat then finally spoke..

"Our people have a saying, they say 'the real foundation of a kingdom doesnt rest on the shoulder of the king but that of queen', So unless you want the foundation of our kingdom to be broken, you had better tell me whats bothering your tender heart".

Lolo ugomma was starled by her husband statment because of she was absent minded, but she replied after she came back to reality...

"Nnanyi, it concerns the same issue i told you of last night, only that...'

"i thought i told you not to worry?" Igwe Nelson cut in getting impatient with his wife.

"yes i know, only that i had series of confusing nightmares last night" Lolo Ugomma replied calmly, with a sincere look of worry on her face.

"Hmm, you are only having bad dreams because you thought so much about it before you slept" Igwe Nelson replied.

"Honey, this is more than just a normal dream, it felt so real.."

"hmm, ok, so what do you have in mind?" Igwe Nelson asked.

"I thought you agreed to call the village dibia this morning on my behalf?"

"oh! That?.. Hmm, ok, if that would make you less bothered ill call him" Igwe Nelson replied relunctantly.

"dim daalu" she replied and hugged her husband totally excited.

***

The village dibia was one of the most powerful dibias in the entire eastern region, It was rumoured that he had direct contact with the gods and even ate on the same table with them. History also stated that there was a certain time there was a Two years drought in the Kingdom because He cursed the land for reasons unknown to the present world.

He wasnt fond of being late or wasting time when his attention was needed, so soon as He was informed by the King messenger to go to the palace, He quickly picked up a goat skin bag which contained coweries and a calabash which he intended to use for the incantations and consultation with the gods.

Just as he walked into the palace a thick dark cloud came over it and shaded the sun from penetrating through the windows.

King Nelson and the rest of the Palace occupants werent suprised at this sight because the were used to it since it happened anytime he came over. Why it always happened is a story for another day.

***

He was directed to go into the inner chambers of the palace to meet the king by the messenger which he did.

He sang a song of praise to the King as soon as he got to the chambers and quickly dropped his bag and sat on the mat which was placed at the middle of the chamber.

When he was done with the normal rites he looked up at Igwe Nelson and asked..

'My king what is the problem?'...

Igwe Nelson gave his wife a 'should i go ahead?' look, and after she approved it, He turned back to the dibia who was waiting patiently for a responce, cleared his throat and started talking..

'It has been....'

TO BE CONTINUED ON SUNDAY:
LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 7:34pm On Jul 19, 2013
Sorry guys 4 not being able to update today. Its due to multiple reasons, 1, no power supply, 2, my data plan has expired, 3, my 1st post of the day was hidden due to reasons best know whoever tha hid it.

In summary there wont be a second update 2day because ive got to buy a new data plan and i plan on doing that tommorow, im presently browsing wit my phone and i cant type too long on my keypad.

AM sorry 4 d inconviniences and i hope you guys understand.

Ill start tomorrow updates with a new style and touch, expect lotta suspence.

Thanks,
Chistar01
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LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 7:29pm On Jul 19, 2013
yemi2plus2: I've be following this thread while serving my two day vacation from mynd, i must confuse, you're good.
But i have a little observation to make, in one of your post.
You said 2scar wanted to kill a 300level student in his final year. How can a 3L student be in his finals?
he planned on killing the guy when he was in his finals to make it more painful.
LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 9:03am On Jul 19, 2013
Popowaa: Nice and funny story.U are one hell of a funny guy.
ermm, am i? ..thanks babes cheesycheesy
LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 8:37am On Jul 19, 2013
Good morning guys.. TYPING New update
LiteratureRe: ... by chistar01(m): 7:59am On Jul 19, 2013
I'VE GOT SOMETHINGS ON MY MIND

Ermm, Firstly, personally ive been following this thread since day one and frankly speaking, i expected it to flop because of the total conflict of Ideas on a large scale and i was right at some point but the update of the last few writers happens to be different and a match too, so i guess i might just have been proven wrong.

I mean its not a masters piece and more work could be done but its still a pretty nice story, its got comedy and its insightful, atleast now i know MM and a couple new charaters on NL, this is just fantabulous.

Also, ive been seeing some boring derailing comments on the other thread about flow vs other writers, you guys should just quit it!, when i say 'you guys' i mean flow and other writers that are beefing (defending, commenting or whatever you want to call it) eachother. We all are writers and unique in our own ways meaning we all have our different ways of viewing things and reacting to things, so lets just forget about some old foul posts that mynd has already hidden and focus on the betterment of this thread.

I'll have love to write but im kinda new on NL and dont realy know much people so ill just sit back and read.

QUESTION TIME

1. WHEN is the next update coming?

2. Shouldnt there be a roaster or something like that? So we would know exactly when to expect a new update.

3.How many writers are expected to join before you guys start the rotation?

4.How long is the story gonna be?

KUDOS guys.

I think thats all on my mind, FOR NOW
LiteratureRe: A Pleasant Surprise by chistar01(m): 9:59pm On Jul 18, 2013
DNA1: Hi, thanks for your comment...
I'm a young lady.... Like u must av guessed
and yeah I would love to do a collabo someday...
Hugs...
DNA1
hmmmmsmiley
LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 9:25pm On Jul 18, 2013
Ms Spaqs: Hmm..badt sharp guy
lol.. No time to check time.

@Kizzoh, lol.. Was rome built in 1 day? You no fit read everything once and forall na..
LiteratureRe: A Pleasant Surprise by chistar01(m): 8:08pm On Jul 18, 2013
Hmm.. Nice story!!, i love the ending and the fact the got married made it more special. .. But ive got 1 question tho, are you male or female? ..im kinda trying to ignore the (f) written after the 'DNA1' for reason best known to me.

Probably you could teach me how to write, and maybe we could co-write a story...#JustSaying.
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LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 3:13pm On Jul 18, 2013
Mercykayy: Haha! Nooooo... just some parts ni nw.... can't wait 4 d nxt episode ooo.
LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 1:42pm On Jul 18, 2013
@bikkeson , na so i see am o

@kizzoh, na so you dey tell yur elders goodmorning?

@mercy, wait oh, you read everything to your mum? Even that part with sandra when...? wink

@natkel, thanks
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LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 9:28pm On Jul 17, 2013
Deiok: From the beginning of your story, you say urch has been involve in cult activities, my question is was he once a cult member? Or is he still one?
WAS, chisom made him quit cultism and a couple of other bad habits.
LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 9:17pm On Jul 17, 2013
Ms Spaqs: 4 ur mind u don becom love doctor tongue
hehehe.. wink, dont mind me jhur
LiteratureRe: Story: Taking Chances by chistar01(m): 8:31pm On Jul 17, 2013
Attime i just sit and wonder how princesa does it. smiley.
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Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by chistar01(m): 6:55pm On Jul 17, 2013
Lol.. I like this thread.. 'OFF TOPIC' .. Hehehe.. Anyway check out the link in my signature, trust me, you would thank me later... ..., by the way, where are the single ladies??
RomanceRe: ~Welcome To The Romance Section (New Members Introduce Yourselves)~ by chistar01(m): 6:53pm On Jul 17, 2013
Romance forum? Hmm... Ok, now im finally here. You can check out my bio for my 'romance story' ... So hi y'allsmiley
LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 6:48pm On Jul 17, 2013
Viewing this topic: stella gabriel(f), pwettytemmy(f), spyzup(f), Mo creations(f), abisquare(f), hirety(f) cheesycheesycheesy.. Where are all the guys?
LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 6:39pm On Jul 17, 2013
@luvlystar, ermm... Calm down na..

@kizzoh, boi?
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LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 4:20pm On Jul 17, 2013
[quote author=valdes00]I even tink say u get mind, common to say AMEN na him ur mind cut lik dat. Abeg drop one update for us jare, before we help u talk the amen/quote] .ok, NEW UPDATE IN A BIT....
LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 3:01pm On Jul 17, 2013
valdes00: Chistar, i want make you say amen to dis prayer if wetin u dey do girls good - may ur daughters be treated the same way you treat other girls. Can i hear a SOUNDING AMEN from u chistar
LMFAO!! Come if na play stop am o
LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 11:48am On Jul 17, 2013
okulajaadewumi: Eeyah, shedding tears with sandra =))º=))˚нa=))нa˚=))º‎​=)).
lol
LiteratureRe: My Complicated Love Story by chistar01(op): 10:27am On Jul 17, 2013
Bimfo: ^ ^ ^ You are a real devil!!!! Walahi.. grin
lol.. cheesy

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