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Neduzze5: I've been following.

Buh just commenting now.

Nice work.

You've a mail.

hmm, thanks. Seen and replied

elyna: i've been a silent reader,and i have to say you're a very talented writer,very nice story,keep up the good work.

thanks 4 commenting.. But see what yu av cause now, my head is swelling

adeswags dmj: which secondary did u go 2 nd wat year wen u in Adams

ermm, FGC odogolu and 2010 i guess, nt quite sure, but y d question?

dhonei: Seriously?? den ild be waiting for that story

yup... Keep yur fingers crossed, and you and kizzoh would definitely feature in the story, i would open you guys yansh.. Hahaha

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Lol, ermm, you guys shouldnt critize like that nah, you could atleast let her know her mistakes so she can make corrections.

But that aside.. Ermm Wat are you talking about @OP i dont get the story line atall, what clearance? What skul? And make good use to paragraphs and puntuations.

#Typing new update#

NB: guys pls, i understand everybody wants to contribute to the story, but pls lets make each update ryhme, you cant be talking about stephen now and at the very next update be talking about henry.

I like the storyline we haave choosen, in which stephen is wealthy and his elder brother isnt , but stephen shop being burnt down now implies he too is now on the road to poverty, and that spoils the storyline. And besides, the 1st update states he is an oil mugul, not a trader.

Ill try to arrange tyns in with my continuation downwards, and please lets not loose the storyline this time. Thanks

**continuation**

After the painful incidence of stephen's shop being burnt down, he was lucky to have listened to the wise words of his lawyer who said..

'stephen, insure your poperties just incase of any mishap'

So after a couple of calls and about three months of the usual Redtapism and beaucracy involved in such cases, he was restored back to his formal state of wealth and affluent.

Henry his elder brother on the other had was didnt want to take any help from stephen, because of pride. He believed that its wrong for his junior Brother to give him finacial aid when its meant to be the other way round. So he kept struggling and hustling to make ends meet, but at the same time, he was jealous of his brothers success. (next)

Aghagba: .ph gal,hwf [B]don't tell me u know chistar[/B] .sha lips sealed

lol, what if she knows me?

@valdes, ermm, bros calm down na..

NOTICE

Its true i was banned yesterday evenining, and i immeditely pleaded with Yemi to inform you guys about it so my absence wont have been misunderstood.

I emailed the MOD and he made immediate corrections therefore lifting my ban, but i couldnt contact Yemi to inform him about my lifted ban before he updated that post.

So in summary i want to thank Yemi for helping out and all of you that wanted to cause wahala because of my, lol .

Saturdays are basicaly a stressfull and busy day for me, so i wont be able to update till later in the day.

Thanks for you understanding.

With love, chistar.

iamlincoln01: Quite an interesting Story........So fascinating too I must say
As the saying goes, when a music is sweet, u play it twice. But me I will say when a NL Post is interesting, U Read&Bookmark it
**BOOKMARKED**

thanks

[NB: if you dont want to comment on the story, just read along, please dont make off point comments or promises to contribut, until we are done with the story, thanks]

**continuation**

Stephen some how managed to get to Germany which was the destination where he was expected to deliver the drugs he had to swallow in other to get past immigration officers and other securities.

It was his 1st time of crossing the boarders of his beloved country, Nigeria. So he didnt know what to expect, nor where to go next from the airport.

He was lost in the thought of thinking of what to do next when he remembered he had been given a phone number by 'Rogers', inwhich he was meant to call when he landed in the strange country.

So he gave a heavy sigh of relief as he brought out his phone from his bag, and dialed the number..

'hello, frank here, who is this?', was the straight reply he got when the call was picked up.

The straight reply and harsh tone of the recipeient of the call, made Stephen loose his confidence and conposure so he stammered as he replied..

'i..i..it is mee... Stttee...stteeephheen'

'stephen?' rogers tried to recal who the hell was the stephen that was disturbing him... Then he remembered...

'oh wait! Is it stephen, asin the stephen rogers sent with my package?' rogers asked with a calmer voice, which gave stephen a little confidence.

'yes, its me'

'ok, you have landed right'

'yes i have, am at the airport in berin' stephen replied, trying to be more specific.

'ok, you know what, just wait for about 30 minutes, am sending someone down there to pick you up'

'ok sir' stephen replied with courtesy.

He looked for a comfortable spot to sit and wait for his ride to arrive.

(next...)

@Ewoma... lol, i didnt know i could too oh, im guessing its 'First timers' luck.., i started the story hoping to get jst about 100 views, but i guess im just lucky, and thanks to the comments readers made in the past, i made my corrections in my present posts and modified the older posts.

@deiok, realy? Its a lie jhur.. I got all of you heart pumping faster.!!

@Valdes, hian!, ermm.. TO BE CONTINUED.. Lol:p.. Ntoiiiii

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kizzoh01: Why dem no kill u na?? Na since we dey 'fedgo' You don dey scam pipo..if u lik no learn ur lesson...lord scammer..lolz....

lmao!! Bad belle, God pass you.. Na you wey teach me aw 2 scam nah, you be my role model dat year. You just gave me an idea of my next story self... 'fedgo tyns'

Ice4jez: i don tire abeg when u go update now

ermm, im presently drafting d new update down, not yet typing it yet tho, so lets say ill upload it around 6

READ THIS
Do you think you can be a writter or add to a story? Then check this out. Its a platform to create your story the way you like. https://www.nairaland.com/1356577 /test-creativity#16762288, LETS HAVE FUN , pardon this comment please @OP

READ THIS

Do you think you can be a writter or add to a story? Then check this out. Its a platform to create your story the way you like. https://www.nairaland.com/1356577/test-creativity#16762288 , LETS HAVE FUN , pardon this comment please @OP

READ THIS

Do you think you can be a writter or add to a story? Then check this out. Its a platform to create your story the way you like. https://www.nairaland.com/1356577/test-creativity#16762288 , LETS HAVE FUN , pardon this comment please @OP

Aghagba: Gud story tanks 4 allown me to spill my juice o.ehn ehn,u scared me.u almost gave me high b.p sha.

, lmao!! Hehehe, you are welcome.. Thanks tho

READ THIS

Do you think you can be a writter or add to a story? Then check this out. Its a platform to create your story the way you like. https://www.nairaland.com/1356577/test-creativity#16762288 , LETS HAVE FUN , pardon this comment please @OP

READ THIS

Do you think you can be a writter or add to a story? Then check this out. Its a platform to create your story the way you like. https://www.nairaland.com/1356577/test-creativity#16762288 , LETS HAVE FUN

A STORY BY US.

THE BEGINNING

It was an unusualy rainning day in the city of lagos, it was just January when the harmathan were meant to be kicking it, but rather it was raining.

Stephen who was a very rich oil mogul sat in his $20 billion mansion staring at 64 inch mega sized LCD bluetooth TV set no caring or giving a sh*t about the weather, 'i could rain cat and dog' for all he cared.

He was watching the famous 'WHO WANT TO BE A MILLIONIARE' tv series, and he wondered why people have to go through such easy way to make money.

He started thinking about his rise to fame and wealth which was a realy rough and bumpy road.

Firstly he remebered when his first... (next person to update should continue the story).

[INTRODUCTION

So i was busy roaming around NL literature/writting forums checking out random stories and i came to the conclusion that NL and Nigerians at large are a realy creative bunch, so an idea strucked me when i came across a thread in which the readers where the writters of the story.

here's how it works..

Firstly i start with a random story line, then the next person to comment, continues the story and takes it what ever direction he wishes to and the next person who comments after that continues the story.

RULES AND REGULATIONS

1: Your comment must be related to the story.

2: NO abuses or curses allowed.

3: All comments must be in a story form, no comment of appreciation or correction should be made, just add to the story.

4: i dont want to decide how long or short your post would be, but, please be resonable.

5: you are not allowed to make two straight posts consecutively, there must be an update from someone else in between.

6: Any member of NL is allowed to post on the story and continue it, irrespective of your sex, race or other barriers.

NB: this is just majorly for fun and we should all have fun. Also there wont be much suspence like my story at my signature, since you can create what will happen next. ..

So great niaralanders.. Lets see how creative WE are.

I'll start the stroy in the next update.