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SETHWORLD:
Hmmm make Kate no die o

you read the update at all?
Hmmm!!

wizsolzy:
Kudos man. Nice write up. Gab is d most annoying character in dis story

chai!

U JUST JOINED US , WELCOME , which chapter did you read last, to make that conclusion?

Missmore mztemmy and hardybattee45 ( I always catch this guy , when you go repent o ? ghost mode too sweet you ni?)

Tulz15:
Creeza, u are one of the best writers I respect here on nairaland, keep it up bro!

I'm humbled ma!! Thanks for the endorsement.

Chai! I pity Daniella

Ehmjay:
I've been reading diz since mawinq,glad i finally finished am...Your greatness creeza am enjoying dz walahi!

thanks

YINKS89:
Creeza u mst b jokin how kan Kate die u beta twist d story nw or else.

Baba !!! or else ? What ? Pls o!!!

mujybee:
creeza do u knw dat i ddnt open dis thread tru out yestadae thinking dat wen i do 2dae i wl gt loads of updates



and here i am witout ani update 2 read its nt fair o

just did, please don't be angry... I'm very busy, my daily activities are eating most of my time .

cerowo:
Waiting 4 updates creeza

just did.

dimssy:
Now that im here all the way from the first page,Creeza,I order you to update for your fans....
Hmmmm,temptations indeed.*wipe tears*

Bros, I thought you were a lady o anyways thats by the way, thanks for putting the gender in your profile.


Your wish has been granted

harameede99:
Tnx for d mention nd update crushie nd m sure its nt andy see twist nd turns m fucking luving dis story

Crushie , let's just watch out

Babysuccess02:
Action Film. Enjoying Every Update Back To Back.

it s not just only action , please read other scenes

A strory needs action, pacing , narration and dialogue ...

I'm only combining the elements

mercichoco:
Fair one, nope! this once is darker and prettier.

OK I remember

rachealfst:
In Simi's voice- "Soldier go soldier come soldier do wetin you want but don't fall in love with me" Well done Creeza.

Lol , you got the drill there...

harameede99:
Tnx for d mention buh dis nosa ehn hez giving me shivers oo

He is? Chai !! Don't worry I'll protect you from him

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I'm sorry for the late update


Continues*




Gabriel





The blood on her face had masked her completely , it took only her dark bunny- like eyes and her clothing to recognise her. ( meaning: if one hadn't been sure, but no . I knew my wife's figure , it was definitely her). Her hair was messy and sand mixed with dust crowned her once black jewel of hair strands.This was very painful for me to endure, I couldn't imagine the depth of cluelessness and hopelessness that overwhelmed me at that crucial moment. What could I do?




" Kate.. Love , Its me ,I'm here ---it Ga--" tears escaped my eyes.



Pull yourself together man* An inner voice said. But how could I ? My decisions and stupid actions had lead to my wife's misfortune.



I bent down on both knees and held her neck round my arm," Please hold on-- just hang in there -- dear God, Please! " Pain in my already craoaked voice.


She tried to utter something, but the words wouldnt come out, her lips were soaked in blood and she coughed out even more.




" My ba-- my baby, Gabe my--- our baby, save our -" she muttered into my ears .



" I know, she will be fine". I said trying to give her an assurance ,even though I was clueless of its gender or even if it were still alive.


" Please hold on , Kate. Just a little longer. "

I got confused and and knew not what to do. I couldnt move her, or I was afraid it would cause more harm than good.


People started popping out of their various homes or holes where they had hid, I suddenly became paranoid and glanced through their faces with anger. It could have been any one of them: Maybe that grumpy looking guy in brown shirts, No, maybe that one eyed fellow with a walking stick? Or maybe still that old looking hag o'er there. Who could have done this hideous act?



" Kate tell me, who did this to you"



She whispered the name of the culprit and I clutched my fist in anger. I carried her in my arms and blood stained my sky blue shirt, dust was all over my arm.


A young man offered to help, he was in his twenties and I couldnt explain how happy I was at that moment.



" Oga , lemme drive the car, stay with her at the back seat. She is still breathing, and loneliness won't do her any good. She needs you now, more than ever."

Indeed I wanted nothing more than to be with my wife ,not just that moment but forever.

I opened the passengers seats' door and carefully placed her on the seat, shut the door and went over to the other side to enter the vehicle.


The young lad ignited the the engine and we sped off.

There she lay on my laps and life gradually eluding her.


*****





We arrived the general hospital ,the same one where Tayo had been all these while .And the thought of it, brought omen of bad luck.

Thankfully , Kate was still breathing, she was indeed a fighter and all along she kept muttering " My baby,..my little baby"

The young man parked into a space, without thinking twice and he stopped the engine.

I hesitated to move, but his voice brought me back to reality,




" Bros, carry her down nah. Person go die here o!"


Kate's heart pace reduced, and she gasped for air, I jumped out of the car and carried her like a mad man. My shirt was flying in different directions.


I ran into the ER ( Emergency room).




" Help o .. nurse , doctor? Anybody" I cried out. " Norsuuuuuuuuuu!!!?
Dokkkuuuuu!!!! Help me o my wife is dying here"



In a blink. Emergency props became utilised to full potentials. The entire staff in the ER , abandoned other patients, which were too numerous to count .it was a busy day indeed.



" Code blue-- code blue" A tall doctor with moustache announced.


An alarm went off , and started ringing in the entire hospital block.
Whatever that code meant, I knew it was the clarion call for all hands to be on deck. And it wasnt a code for good news.

They put her on a bed . They flattened the bed and removed all pillows. and pulled it into a corner, covered its surroundings with curtains. They plugged machines to wall sockets. More doctors came rushing from other wards.




" Check for pulse ? " the doctor said to one of his surbodniates


"Carotid pulse is dropping " someone replied.



The doctor began manual resuscitation as he compressed Kate's chest with his palms.


CPR was taking place. And I suspected that she had gone into cardiac arrest.




" What's happening , Doctor she suddenly shut her eyelids " I became afraid " Don't let her die ,please . "

Kate eyes closed and in the light of reality that dawned on me , it was obvious she was loosing grip onto life.



" Pulse is 30 and descending, sir, " A female doctor said calmly.



" Bring in the E -cart and Charge AED " He commanded again



Everyone was active , I was the only helpless individual present, I rubbed my palms on my lower lips and scratched my head , paced up and down and couldn't stop fidgeting.

"Lord Please, I will change for the good , don't let this befall, me " I prayed in my heart " Kate is innocent, take me instead , please"



" AED charged " another female doctor responded " Clear " she concluded.



The machine zapped electricity and the impact on Kate's chest yanked her up the the bed and down again.


" she has lost a lot of blood, get the I.V fluids" The doctor commanded and a nurse did the job immediately.



I stood there , silent , not knowing if I should cry or join the medical team.



" We are loosing her " A fair skinned doctor said " Pulse rate is flat"




" No, no-- " I cried " Do something, please ... She can't die.. Kate!!!! "





" Somebody get this man out here ,now" The first doctor commanded. More doctors came , amd the guy with moustache was still in command, I suspected him to be the attending physician.



A nurse dragged me out , " sir , we will try our best. Please move back a little."

A security officer in white vest, pulled me back as he tried to control the crowd in the ER, there were a lot of people there, everyone was inquisitive as they giraffe just to get a glance.



" sir , kindly step back please , be calm. Put yourself together. Madam " he spotted another intruder " move back please, don't crowd that response team"



I could hear the voice of the doctor again as he dished out orders " Get me the head of plastics.. Where is the second respnse team?..Check for inter cranial activity and suture that bleeding.. Increase charge "



The AED machine zapped again and this time the charge was prolonged..



"Come on, Come on!!! Dammit !! " The doctor cursed under his breathe. " come on!"



" Fight it!! Fight for me Kate ! Fight !!" he said trying to remain calm.








Andrew




The gate was left open and I'd never do such . I never enjoyed the intrusion of others into my compound and my neighbors thought me to be awkward. I never kept pets, neither did I enjoy blasting music or even throwing parties. I liked it cool and calm.



Kemi probably left the gate as it were , when I drove in. What kind of tricks was she up to ? She now lived in my home and practically assumed the role of madam already, women and their thinking faculty.


" Well too bad, I am not ready for a life time commitment " I thought to myself.

" what had she been thinking that made her leave the gate unlocked ? I questioned my subconscious mind and pulled the gate as it gave out a metallic cry. It could only be shut properly through the control room and that was inside the house.

My mobile had been vibrating all day in my pocket and I was too busy to even take a glance . I often missed unimportant calls like Kemi calling when I'm in the middle of a board meeting, that's stupid.

10 missed calls ? Who the heck left me these much?
Mimi? What did she want. It's been ages since we last talked and for her calling every two minutes ,it had to be urgent.

I walked into the living room ,while I dialed Mimi's line but it didn't connect. I put it back into my pocket.




" Baby " I called out " Baby I'm home " I tried to sound romantic , like I forgot she left the gate open, which was a taboo.




" Kemi? .



I got no reply . It became suspicious enough for me to conclude that some fool had burgled into my home, but how did he breach my security code?

I unlocked my brief case and brought out a 9mm pistol gun. I never thought a day would come when I'd have to use it , after purchasing it for self defence.


Time to work o'l boy " I entrusted my life in its capabilities. I clicked the cartridge and it cocked with affirmation.


This was why I lived a private life, I had trust issues.


I moved into the control room and checked the camera footage., All clear. So where in the world was she, only one place had not camera installed in the entire house.




I light footed my way to the bedroom and my right hand twisted the lock handle, to give way into the room. Every breathe I took was important as I tried to be as quiet as possible. Fear sipped into my veins and shivers ran down my spine. My enemy could attack from any angle.



' Oh yes this was scary, but I took courage"


When I opened the door, I heaved a sigh of relief.
I lowered the weapon. Kemi sat near the half length mirror, adjacent my shower room's door , she made up her face.



I hid the gun behind as she turned , a bit surprised to see me.
I carefully put away the gun when she wasnt looking . I hid it in the bed's drawer.




" How long have you been there?




" Two minutes - " I began " why do you enjoy leaving the gate open ? . Thats the second time now--"




She cut me short of words as she turned and stared lustfully into my eyes. She packed her hair in a bathroom towel and was in a bathrobe.



She came forward and kissed me.
Where ever she took this , I was still to know. On several occasions when we made out, she never kissed me -- she'd never do that before growling lustfully into my ears -- wait ,something was fishy here.




" what's wrong? I looked her in the eye.





" I'm sorry .. Andy, they forced me to do it "




She hid something from me, and I wanted to know " Who forced you, what are you saying? " I pushed her slightly and went backwards.




" I'm sorry ..I truly am " She began in tears.




" What have you done , Kemi? " I asked " What the hell is going on ? Talk--"




Before I could say anymore, the door behind me rammed open and I turned with fear, to behold my captors.

Police officers ? In my house ? What the hell was happening?




" Get down, on your knees!! NOW !!! " a fierce looking man commanded." Your hands behind your head , I said your hands behind your head."




" what's this ?? I havent done anything wrong? I'm not a criminal , why ?--"





He pointed the gun at my forehead and I shook with fear. They were five in number, even if I outsmarted two, I'd be dead before I jumped out the window.



" What are you doing in my house? Do you know I can sue you for breaking into my privacy? , whatever happened to human rights in this country? " I used the last resort I could think of.



I glanced at Kemi who was terrified as fuvck. I was disappointed.




Then a familiar figure entered the room, he was blue all over with pain and anger.



" Gabriel? What the fuvck is he doing here?




" Mr Andrew , Esele. " the police Sergeant said, while hand cuffing me" You are under arrest for the murder of Mrs Katherine Egedege ...you have the right to remain silent ,as any..."



He kept on with his speech ,but I was shocked to listen anymore.



Kate?? Murder? No way " the thought ate me up"





Tbc

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Continues *



Efua



I took my time to prepare . The air in that room was rush hour, as I got ready for the day's activity It would be a long one. We were sheduled for an overtime.

" Oh lord ,please give me strength"


I prayed in my heart as the task ahead reminded me of my camp days- NYSC training camp. During which , we underwent early morning drills ; evening parades and the last of it all, which consumed me was the endurance trekking- it drained my energy -of one kilometre, cross county. I gasped for air and sat on the floor occasionally during the exercise.


Now I could endure anything , a slap, being scolded and shouted at, snubbed or even starved but this , this ,I just couldnt take the torture on my legs and kneecap.

All these events though, prepared me for the task ahead, : this moment. I did my laces and adjusted my karky trousers, my white vest was left untucked.


I went into the corridor and approached the parlour. I heard voices.



" But bros " Uyi's clear and calm voice based through air " why are you always on the negative side to Efua?


After my dream , I became very catious of the duo. I planned on reducing the pressure on Nosa ,to change his ways. He'd change eventually, I was going to make it happen.

I stopped and began eavesdropping.



" Why would you think so? Nosa queried.



" why won't I? . You always find fault in what she says or does. Are you that cold to girls who love Christ?



" Love Christ? Nosa started with a sinister and wicked voice . he 'd normally do that when he found something unbelievable. It melted my heart.



" I don't have a grudge against her" I heard him dust his boot with a rag, and continued " I just hate ladies who pretend so much, it gets on my nerves "



A moment of silence sliced the air.




Then he continued " she too do holy holy, like say her papa nah Jesus last born".



Oh God have mercy , I couldn't take it anymore. He mocked the holy spirit.



I heard him clap his hands together and rubbed it on his face- probably powder. Fine boy no pimples.



" Mind how you talk . Don't joke with a thing like that " Uyi corrected " And besides , I don't know why it borthers you, except you like the girl, and you are forming stunch ."


" Me ? Godforbid. It can't happen ,me and Mother Theresa. Never "


Having said that, the air became quiet again. I popped out of hiding, and behaved like I hadn't heard a thing.



"Good morning "


" Efua , how are you? Good morning " Uyi said, but my eyes were fixed on Nosakhare .


" good morning o, Im--"



" Keep it to yourself" He said and laced his boots without glancing .



Uyi touched me on the arm, and I knew what he meant. Just let him be.



" Okay " I began " Let's say a short prayer befor-"


Nosa immediately stood up and walked towards the door. He hissed .


" At least let's thank God for life " Uyi called him back .


" I already did night vigil " he looked at me and I put down my head, " Oh you didn't know, when you wanted to bring down this roof with prayer, last night . Thanks to you , I had no sleep, "


" And no thanks for the invitation , just use my name as a prayer point , like you did last night.mtcheww" he said and banged the door behind him.


I raised my head . I was angry. I clutched my fingers , Would it be a crime if I jabbed his left eye with a pen cover?






Iziegbe




I checked my wrist watch,it was damn slow. I wanted to be anywhere but here, I couldn't take it anymore. I wished time would just fly.

I wanted the world to just end, and the lecturer who bored me to the bones would just die. His speech and manner of teaching just ate me up.



" argggh"

I yelled out and focused my head down the hall. Eyes turned toward me . who cared? Nobody . Not me ,as far I could remember.


" so that will be all for today " the lecturer said , amidst a standing ovation. " We shall continue next time"

I wondered why the hall filled with over a hundred students started clapping all of a sudden.These were the same people who had divided the lecture room into cliques. The noise makers , the iPhone users wannabes, and the gum chewers.


Why were they clapping? It was sheer mockery and a way of saying" Oya ,bye bye, you have tried "

Pathetic, in the most sincere manner. I shook my head and grinned.




" This man sef, he can preach for Africa, thank God he has left. "


" Abi o, ehen Babes, I just bought that latest jeans..."



Those girls had been gossiping behind me, since morning. University. I shook my head again.



"Let me pass " the cute looking boy next to me said . I adjusted my leg and he moved past without even glancing . He had ear phone buds in his ear all through the lecture , listening to music. He was even moving his head rhythmically.



Chai!! I exclaimed in disappointment, " At least I better pass some people. "


I stood up, and left and didnt evn jot down a single sentence from the lecture.

I was two rows near the door, when a very cute looking guy stopped me.



" please can I have your notes" he smiled " you got everything he said , right ?


" I already gave it out , to a friend" I lied and put up a fake smile.


" oh ! but you- excuse me"


A girl touched him from behind . I assumed her , to be his girlfriend.


" here, take mine, Aaron. You can have it ". She said and eyed me .


" for your mind o! Who you EPP? Abeggi don't give me that kind eyes. I almost said it, but rolled my eyes instead.


Actually she helped me, if she hadn't intervened, I could imagine the embarrassment. I wondered if the guy was trying to ask me out, but his line was whack .

" Can I have your notes? " Seriously ? Are we still in KG? Well, Boys will always be boys untill they mature into men .





" OK thank you for your time, I hope I didn't take much? Mr cute asked .


I shook my head and smiled . It changed to a frown immediately I was outside .


There were already packs of students outside. Each cluster discussing on different topics, course reps and dept reps shouting and calling their fellows.

I just wanted to get myself a good smoke and eat a nice lunch.



My phone beeped in my green leather jacket. I brought it out and checked the mail.



An unknown sender and it read


" Hi beautiful. I know this is unofficial but I would like to meet you, let's meet so we can discuss. Just meet me at the main gate .please. *Ade*



" Hiahn Oh !! I sighed out, " see me see wahala and command. What does this guy want from me?




Tbc

Daniella yaff carry belle!
Tunde ,your handwork now has proof!

interesting , im following

where are they, oya come this side and grab seat, before you pipo kill me with '' Creeza , update! ,update na!

Come and do it for Aunty Rachealfst,

and if I dialed a '' wrong number '' indicate by buying me one bottle of goldberg!

harameede99
kisschrix
queenitee
teleboiz005
pureheart91
mozb
mirob
dimssy
saraphina
perfectionist11
arosunshine
sunshine46
mercichoco
muyjbe
mzzamiable ( she will reply when Jesus comes
adesina12

and all and co, lets ride this one jejely!

harameede99:
creeza cum an see mercichoco we avnt even gotten far she wants to scatter us tell me its nt tru huh?

believe only me , dont mind what people say

mercichoco:
Pretty lady, i already fixed creeza with my sister, and they are moving on well. Isn't it creeza? So don't be a "dami"

that fair one shey?

mercichoco:
Hello Creeza, thanks for the mentions. Happy new year, sorry for being late, thanks to poor netwrk and activities in the villa.
I rilly enjoyed the updates, esp that fighting scene.
Andy should be castrated, i feel for Kate, Gabriel shall have learned his lessons. As for Dami, i comment my reserve.

Thanks again.

thanks too, for reading always.

Pureheart91:
Oya creeza confess!!
WHICH SEASONAL MOVIE YOU DY ALWAYS WATCH.
cos dis ur tori don dy take style resemble one seasonal movie lyk dat wey i watch oo:::: Uhmm be lyk say na Chinko dem act am...

Make i no talk dy name yet

na u sabi, Read my first post on this thread

AND hey! Every story in this world , if it doesnt sound real, it aint real!

Bros pack wello o

harameede99:
if u dnt lyk it i culd change it or u culd help me giv it a name rememba u my crush i jst wanted to always rememba u dats y i gave it ya nick

cha!!! Love wantin ti! (ibo voice)

u're the lady nah, Do ur wish, but as long as I approve it first. Ok?

harameede99:
creeza dnt b speechless oo shey u get gf for here ni??

nah, its just you nd only yu

It will

queenitee:
You better don't finish the rice,or I will ask harameede99 to give the teddy my nick

After you chop rice finish,comman update

pls bear with me, I am in a very tight corner today...

Work overload . I JUST BATTLED with a gas cooker that just wont burn well. of all days, it chose today. CHAI!!!


My villagers are indeed at work.

Speaking about, work, I updated but had to take it off, yes, I saw some leakholes and it didnt even flow in terms of storytelling.

I need more editing...
So that every moment you spend on this thread will be worth your stress and mb

Queenitee teleboiz005 pureheart91 harameede99

Please o, let me cook breakfast abeg, me too am worried here.


This thing sef, who sabi cook coconut rice,the thing is doing me like maths here


Mtchewww!!!

Don't laugh me o

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harameede99:
wow glad u chose creeza as my mate hez my crushie

Meet me in room 3. Let's talk

jagugu88li:
Creeza! Oya now......letting the mating game begin

*Modified*

Chai! Ayaff finally finished reading. Lol, Rinaldi can't handle Kylie's yabbing. Cassie come now....You wolf now wants you raped because of tour stubbornness. Okay.....i want to see Miss Cockhead Kennedy's reaction to all of this. On second thought, the cockiness has been outplayed already, wolves have no control I see.

Lol , Mate in this manner, and I'll be left without ball energy for weeks

But I kind of imagine what wolf bleeping would feel like, the energy and aura , whoosh!!


Nanao bots just ran down my spineless spine ( metaphor)


On a second thought, since its a wolf and human thingy thing, , let's make it balanced, you and harameede99 , you can interchange roles often as you like


Nice work op. Creativity runs in your veins.

Nmaglit:
Nice one creeza the story is getting more interesting

thanks

rachealfst:
This dami is evil, as much as i don't like Andy, I want to believe he knew nothing about it. i think It's a set up.
As for Gab, he brought all this on his family. I just pray Kate and her baby survive. Thumbs up Creeza. Thanks for the mention

You are welcome,

remiseyi:
wow.. You've got a nice work going creeza

Thanks bro

olite93:
your crush. mk ur bf hear am. i no de o. creeza[b] no let ur gf hear am too o. [/b]

p.s i b chelsea fan til i die. keep the blue flag flying high

I'm speechless

triplemmm3:
Thanks for the update Creeza, it's now becoming interesting

you re welcome

mhisbliss:
holy wetin

I'm holy like that !!! just a gentleman , doing things Inna bad way

harameede99:
smiles nokia no dey quick die na nine lives e get..u welcum crushie i jst got a pink medium sized bear my sis got it for me i named it creeza

Imagine, teddy bear and you gave it my nick

Cuddle it well o

saraphina:
she was raped according to the prologue

good observation ,

harameede99:
wow crushie u bursting my brain here nd WLD....nd we undastand u almighty nepa knws hw to make us cry nd swear attimes

dn mind the yeye people, they can fustrate person, and to modify the post with my nokia (chai , this phone hv been saving my life since 2015 ) wont be possible,

Anyways thanks, for undastnding.

jagugu88li:
Mm mm mm *clearing throat* Ma'am above me.......eh lankyannie, e be like say you dey follow me. How market?

"we want that thing" dead.

These two Kechi and Izzy are wahala's friends. Izzy mostly

boiz are not smiling, Konji thingy things...

Just give them the thing, mae em use am to hold body!


Iye meh (mummy o! )
rtflmao

SETHWORLD:
Creeza make sure that your writing skills don't just end here on nairaland o

So many twist and turns...hmmm

I like
Keep it up

thank you sir, Im here to learn. I appreciate the endorsement.