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Amen.

candy: Yes o, ain't easy having kids run all over you while trying to edit a story! Bless them sha.

Nice update.... But seriously where do you live in Ibadan?
Which of the Olodos are u referring to?

don't mind me....

princesssusan: Hahaha nawah 4 u o

Emzy at it.... kip it up bro

--continuation--


TIME: 11AM
VENUE: SANDRA OSELU'S RESIDENCE.
__________________________________________
Sandra walked into her living room which was painted sky blue. The
curtains that stood on the window and the doorways is a combination on
sky blue and white and a rug of skyblue covered the floor. The couches
are suede black made by a popular furniture company in italy. Opposite
the two seater couch stood a television set hung to the wall and a HD
kodak camera layed on the table.
Barrister Benson was seated flipping through the pages of a beauty
magazine with a bottle of Ciroc and a glass cup on the stool before him.
"Sorry for the delay. I've been making some calls." Sandra
apologised as she walked in in a short flaying skirt that stopped above
her knee, and a tank top that showed a large amount of her cleavage.
"What do you think o this company?" She asked.
"It is good but you know their offer is not up to our
standard.They are not ready to pay sign on fees neither are there any
chances of renewing the contract once this one expires. The only thing
that excited me is the fact that they'll give both the model and her
agent/lawyer a car." Benson explained.
"Will the car be every year?" Sandra asked.
"No. Just once." Benson replied.
"Its better we let this one pass. Moreso, our current contract with
Levis&Paige is an interesting one."
"Yeah. They'll come back with a beeter offer if they realise our
worth." Benson added.
"I'll be back." Sandra said exiting the living room.
Benson who has been having a hard time coping with Sandra's presence,
her exposed laps are not helping matters neither is her exposed
cleavege. She made it worse by sitting down very close to him. He often
found his eyes wandering to those exposed part of her body.
Janet walked into the room carrying a basket full of clothes.
"Hello sir." She greeted for the upteenth time.
"Hey"
"My name is Janet."
"The maid?" He asked.
"Yeah."
Janet is beautiful on her own part. She should be contented with the
level of her beauty, she is not rich and she has no class.
"You are handsome." She complimented walking towards him in a seductive manner.
"Thank you." Benson replied without battling an eyelid.
"Am single though. You may want to try me out. This is my pin." She said dropping a piece of paper on his laps.
"Thank you but am not interested."
"I know you won't be. You are interested in Madam S."
"Your headache." He said spitefully.
"Let's see whose headache it is." She said before carrying her basket of clothes and walked out of the living room.
"Hello sir. I did it, yes he refused. The game is on." She whispered to someone on phone.
--to be continued--
This update is short and I know it. But the next update comes up after 12noon. Thanks for your understanding.

This thread is turning to something else. Incantation?....
You guys settle your differences and the story resumes afterwards.
In other news, this story has been suspended.

--Continuation--
TIME: 10AM
VENUE: THE UNIVERSITY'S GIRL'S HOSTEL.
_________________________________________
Clement drove into the less spacious compund which shows a typical
environment occupied by students. Even though the concrete floor was
clean to some extent, litters were all over the place. A few rooms
downstairs were locked, meaning the occupants have either ran away from
school or taken cover somewhere. He proceeded to the stairs and ascended
to the second floor. He knocked on the door of room 16A.
"Yes, am coming." A female voice replied.
The door opened and a beautiful girl of about twenty one opened the
door. She smiled at Clement.
"Is Chioma in?" He asked.
"Yes." The lady replied opening the door wider.
Clement stepped into the room which was painted pink and white with
three matresses placed around the room. Dolapao was lying down on one
of the matresses while Tola was seated behind the only reading table in
the room pressing her phone. Chioma walked in from within the inner
room.
"Welcome sir." She greeted their visitor.
"Thank you. How you today?"
"Am fine. Dolapo, Tola, Darasimi, this is Inspector Clement." She
introduced formally.
"You are welcome sir." Darasimi replied while Tola was shaking
her
head to the music being played through the headset connected to her
laptop. Dolapo only smiled sadly.
"Toooooolaaaa!" Chioma called.
"Yes!" She replied with a start.
"This is Inspector Clement."
"Welcome sir." She said smiling before slipping the headset back
to her ears.
"Can we talk here?" He asked.
"Yes but....." Chioma looked at Dolapo's pale figure lying on the
bed.
"Okay." Clement replied as if he knew what she was try to pass
accross but his gentleman's instinct told him, Dolapo doesn't want
Dayo's death to be mentioned in her presense.
"Let's go outside." Chioma said rising up and picking two plastic
chairs from the inner room.
Clement walked outside to wait for her on the corridor where they last
had their conversation.
"How far have you gone in your investigation?" Chioma asked.
"We are almost done with the investigation but you girl's
cooperation will take us closer to the end. I appreciate your personal
contribution but your friends are not helping matters. If we can get
information from them, I believe it'll take us a step further. By the
way, who is that new girl?"
"Darasimi. She is a friend." Chioma replied.
"She has always lived here with you girls or what?"
"She came over this morning to console Dolapo." She replied.
"Are you girls that close?"
"Not really but she is and engineering student who lived in the
same hostel with late Hadiza's boyfriend." Chioma explained.
"Have you seen Hadiza's boyfriend lately?" He asked.
"No. He is probably mourning over her death." She replied.
"He must be heartbroken by now." He said sympathetically.
Darasimi walked out of the room dresses in a blue t-shirt and a black jean trouser.
"Where are you going?" Chioma asked.
"I need to pick some things in my room." She replied looking tensed.
"When are you coming back?" Chioma asked.
"I'll come back later in the evening." She replied.
"Okay. Bye." Chioma said.
"Take care. Bye sir." She said to Clement who replied her by nodding his head.
Darasimi walked along the corridor until she got to the end where she took the turning the the right and descended the staircase.
"Mike, a girl will come out of the gate now. Monitor her movement, report strange things to me directly and send pictures of people she converse with to me on whatsapp. Copy that?" Clement instructed.
Chioma was looking at the police officer before her in a way that clearly showed her displeasure.
"Its nothing serious. Am just suspecting her." He said assuringly.
"Hope she won't be arrested sha?" She asked with concern written all over her face.
"Not at all. She will only lead us to our suspect." He replied throwing her into more confusion but she decided not to probe further.

--to be continued--

Did I just hear you say kids? Ah dun know o.

candy: Your comments just have a way of motivating me! Thanks.

Though I'm quite busy with work, kids and all, I'll try and drop 2 updates today at once.

I dey hail.

Divepen: oga, weldone...

I tot you wanted to say a welcome kiss... lol

princesssusan: New member, i need a wlkum update plzzz

November 1 you called it bah? And today is October 31 abi?
November 1 is far o jare.
Anyways gimme a call when you start officially.

More comments and criticisms. They keep me going.
Two more updates and we call it a day.

@Queenxster: I have never being in a coma before and I don't know how it feels. I just wrote what I imagined. I promise to change it.

It was as a result of mistake in typing from the paper. I jumped the part where it took place and fastforwarded to later in the evening. So I just mentioned it.
[quote
author=Queenxstar]Still following... I don't know if I miss an update
but how did Ngozi become comatose and how did Okoro get abducted, kindly
put me through Duro.

If Ngozi had been in coma for two days, she wouldn't be so alert as
you've presented.[/quote]

You know I'll jump at it. As soon as I repair my whatsapp phone I'll do that.
[quote
author=AudreyTimms]D9ty7, come and join us whatsapp na. I mean writers
group. Please send your phone number to my mailbox if you are
interested.[/quote]Chatting with AudreyTimms the great and others.

This update is too short naw.....

More comments and criticisms as we all waiit for the next update.
@Eniqurl: I just dropped another update.

I can see my boss Temitope Daniel viewing this thread.
Morning sir.

--continuation--
TIME: 9AM.
VENUE: KHAL ABDUL REBEL CORPORATION BUILDING.
__________________________________________
Hakym walked into the cell where Detective Okoro was being held early
in the morning. Okoro opened his eyes immediately he noticed someone's
presence in his cell.
"Who are you?" Okoro asked.
Hakym kicked him hard in the face thereby causing him to fall down and
roll on the floor. He was bounded with a rope and had bruises all over
his body. Hakym squatted beside him and puffed smoke of cigaret on his
face.
Okoro coughed as he tried to prevent percieving the odour.
"Do you know how long you've been here?" Hakym asked.
Okoro kept mute.
"You've been here for over three days and you are not co-operating
with us. Tell us all we need to know and you'll become a free man once
again with compensations." Hakym adviced.
"I don't need your compensation here. As a matter of fact, I
don't see myself getting out of here but believe me. You'll get your
as5 kicked by the police." Okoro replied spatting on Hakym thereby
provoking Hakym's anger.
"I'll be back for you." Hakym said immediately he recieved a message
summoning his presence inside the great hall where Maleek sits and
deliberate with his top officials.
++++Inside the great hall+++++
The walls of the hall was painted red and a big throne stood in the
middle of the hall with nothing less than fifteen chairs arranged around
it. Eight out of the fifteen chairs were already occupied by men who
had their head bent. Just then the door opened and another man walked in
with a mask. His name was inscribed on his attire, 'Hakym.'
"Welcome, you men of the Khabal. The time is now to let the
government know what's going on. The government is our sponsor but it is
high time to attack one of them. Our next target is the deputy governor
of the state we are in now. Ten men should be enough." Abdul Maleek
explained without mincing words.
"Long live Abdul the great." The men who sat around his chair
hailed.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Ngozi woke up with a start, she has been in coma for two days now.
"Thank God you are awake now." The policeman sitting on the bedside chair said.
"How are you Thomas?" Ngozi asked.
"Thank God you still remember my name." Thomas said smiling.
Ngozi smiled too, trying to remember some things.
"Okoro. Where is he?" She asked.
"Who is Okoro?" Thomas asked.
Thomas had no idea who Okoro is. Reason being that Okoro was an officer from the headquarters while Thomas is a full time Area F officer who has never met Okoro before.
"I believe he is fine." Thomas replied trying to calm her down. He thought Ngozi and Okoro are lovers and that's the reason why she asked after him immediately she woke up. And to avoid any more problems, he had to tell her he is fine.
"I have to go. Where's my gun?" Ngozi asked standing up.
"Where are you going?"
"Back to the field." She replied.

--to be continued--

Are you kidding me?

Vibra: 'Insp clement'..hmm
D9ty7 that's my dad's rank + name so nothing should happen to him

Nothing will happen to him.

I've made the update lengthier so read again.

Eniqurl: NB: He had a small back (BAG) with him,in which he put his laptop. Oya correct shaperly.
What a Nice update for a beautiful mawninq. Weldne ma Oqa at d top.

I just made it lengthier.

princesssusan: FTC(first to chop)

CHAPTER TWO
TIME: 7AM
VENUE: INSPECTOR CLEMENT'S RESIDENCE.
__________________________________________
Rachel walked out of the kitchen in her pink coloured night robes
with her apron tied over it and her white and pink slippers. She walked
into the living room where there were litters on the three seater sofa.
The sitting room is a very coulourful one painted in brown and milky
white colour. The curtains that hung on the window and the doorway was a
combination of the milky colour and brown patches. The chairs were made
of brown leather and the pillows milky white.
A 42-inches television hung perfectly to the wall opposite the three
seater and the dinning area which stood right behind the three seater. A
glass cabinet stood below the television set on which a dvd stood. Two
sound speakers stood beside the glass cabinet nad two others at the far
corner of the spacious living room.

A flower vase stood on the table as well as on the cabinet beside the
dvd and on the floor beside the two speakers.
Just then Clement emerged from within one of the rooms, already
dressed in a black t-shirt and a black trouser. He had his small bag
with him, in which he put his laptop.
"Darling, are you leaving already?" Rachel asked.
"Yeah. The issue at hand requires me to be at the office before
eight." Clement replied.
"Will you at least have your breakfast? It is almost done." Rachel
who was heavily pregnant asked.
"I wish I could but right now. I have to run." He replied dropping
his bag. He unzipped it and started packing the papers which litered
the three seater chair and kept them inside the bag.
"See you later in the evening." He said as he walked up to her and
kissed her.
"Bye sweety." She said to him as he opened the front door and
slipped out of the house.

She walked back into the kitchen to finish up with the cooking out of
which she will only eat a little before seeting out to her boutique .
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
VENUE: THE UNIVERSITY'S GIRL'S HOSTEL.
TIME: 7:30AM.
__________________________________________
All packed and set. Tola zipped up her travelling bag and lifted it to
her shoulder.
"Hey girls. Am set. Lets get out of here." She called her friends.
Dolapo and Chioma came in with their respective portable travelling
bags.
"Lets go." Tola said unlocking the door.
"Wait. Lets say our prayers." Chioma said.
The other two girls dropped their bags and held hands to form a circle
and Chioma started praying.
"Heavenly father we bless your name because you are the alpha and
the omega. The king of kings and the lord of lords......." She began and her friends were saying amen to the prayers.
"I pray you grant eternal rest to our dear sisters, Hadiza and Dayo."
She got no replies and she was forced to open her eyes. She saw her two friends crying again. Knowing there is little to what she can do, she decided to end the prayer.
"I pray you be with us and our families. And quick justice is what we crave for. Thank you because you have answered our prayers. In Jesus name we prayed." She concluded.
She embraced Tola and whispered words of assurance to her before walking over to Dolapo.
Just then her phone rang.
"Hello sir." She said on picking the call.
"Am in school. Okay, I'll be expecting you." She replied before ending the call.
She dropped the bombshell.
"Inspector Clement is coming over to see me. So I won't be leaving with you guys." She said.
"No one is leaving then Abi?" Tola said referring her question Dolapo who could only nod in approval.
They all sat down awaiting the arrival of Inspector Clement.

--to be continued--

Emzypaz and Gracy295, you guys have been wonderful so far.
Gracy watch it, you just did a double post.

A piece of advice to my wonderful readers.
Please don't grow to like any of th characters in this story. You know why? They can die anytime.
The story is not as bloody as you think. But expect the unexpected.
I will introduce some new characters to you in Chapter 2. You'll get to know Inspector Clement's wife, know more about our model, Sandra Oselu, know more about Barrister Ben(Sandra's lawyer) and their significance. Including some new characters.
In AudreyTimms' voice; "so many twists and turns."

Lol....

Vibra: *Am still in shock*
Dayo please don't sleep yet,help unravel this mystery

The one in progress.
[quote
author=SexySapphire]Pls which of ur threads is the cure cos I rili nid sometin to heal me
fast. I hope it is mixed wit a good amount of codeine?[/quote]

@Audrey Timms: Am yet to see you here today.
@Seunviju: Where you dey?
@Vibra: You are reading and running away. Won't you comment?
@Everyone who will view this thread before I update tommorrow morning: As you read comment, as you notice, point out. I'll only get better.

You wanna improve? That's a good news for me. Then I will gladly lear from you.

KingzPen: I am set and ready to make my fans happy by updating regularly, atleast an update a day... And bonus update once in a while...

Don't wanna rush my updates cos I wanna deliver well and improve myself...

Thankz Boss...

@sexysapphire: Sorry about the cough but guess what. The cure on my thread. check it out.