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Vibra, tell me you want to read and run away without commenting. That's impossible cos I saw you viewing.

I hail!
[quote
author=dammygoody]Emzypaz literally dragged me here....

I can sight my bosses in the house, D9ty7 et al , I pay obeisance

Well done ma'am Cheryluv...you've got a nice concept.... Just some
corrections though....
Can I proceed? **whispers "Yes"**
Don't worry, they won't make you cry

Please, personal pronoun, I , is always written in uppercase, as
in, "I" anytime, any where...

I also noticed some shortened words like "msg" for message, I don't
think it's right for a write-up, except, of course when you're writing
out a chat conversation...

What else??

It haf finish jare...for now..

I must commend your use of punctuation marks, brilliant ma'am!!
God bless.
Finally, is this a true life story or fictional? You didn't
specify...[/quote]Let me come to her aid, from the title I think its a true life story but am not cheryluv. Let her come and defend herself.
I rest my case!

It has been modified.
ma'am.

seunviju: This update is just too short but hope the problem has been rectify?

POST HIDDEN

You are doing a good job here but I noticed something.
Alma's family issues seems to have be over... I know its not important but they are details that we ought to pay attention to.
I may be wrong tho!

I heard u've bought a brand new Chrysler300 is that true? Why e dey breakdown.

Onemansquad: okada stop na here...
wooo!!! Guess am late, ma car broke dwn on d way *winks*
walks into the thread and hails evry1,..double twale 4 anoda boss here @D9ty7

cheryluv wat a nice story u got here mehn am already in love wit d story...*mor grease 2 ur elbow ma'am

#following

Hope its not what am thinking. Anyways welcome here, Cheryluv dey dish it as e dey hot.

Tarh! You no do well lyk Diego Costa did today o. Why I no dey see you for my thread again?

Onemansquad: mehn lyk dix guy...u dy give hope 2 dix thread

Don't leave your thread, make it lively. Always be active even when you don't update, let pple know the thread is still very much alive.
You know what I mean right?
see you later at the top.

Am sure you are working on the next update right now... Dnt keep your loyal readers waiting.

Good morning Cheryluv how was your nite?
I can see the rate at which this thread has increased in terms of comments and views. you are almost there.
See you later at the top.

Cheryluv where thou art?

I appreciate it bro.

arabaribiti: Sorry oga mi we go carry go fight the guy for fb na bad belly dey worry am

Now I get it.
[quote
author=pureIvory]Thanks a lot D9ty7. To answer you, it is fictional and
it's not a short story even though am breaking it down very much in
order to finish soon.[/quote]

Hi guys!
Am putting this story on a temporary hold until I win this war on plagiarism. A guy named Richy Nelly Richmond on facebook has been posting one of my previous stories on his timeline or so.
Until I stop him I won't post anything here but you guys can help me out by adding him and telling him a piece of your mind.
Thanks for your understanding.

I agree with you. I am a great writer and you are what? A greater writer or even the greatest writer.

TemitopeDaniel: Why always Temitope Daniel? You 're a great writer too aren't u??

Lol. Weldone Marioking m back and better

BTW, D9ty7 una weldone ooh!

Long live Prof T.Dan the great!

Am not advocating for my colleague here but don't you think reading this story free of charge and not dropping a comment is like stealing one most priced asset.
The best way we can encourage Cheryluv is by dropping our comments.

Mr Obinnau, there is a guy called Richy nelly Richmond on facebook plagiarising my work on his facebook account.
Please sir if there is something we can do about it, please let me know.
Thanks in anticipation.

Sorry ma'am, I was only interested in the message you had for me.

Deefuray: You are welcome. By the way I'm female

thanks man.

Deefuray: I tried stopping him but he wouldn't stop. He is in chapter sixteen now. His full name is richy nelly richmond

Thanks for the info man... I'll do something about it.[quote
author=Deefuray]D9ty7, one richy nelly richmond guy is uploading this
story on his timeline on facebook without giving u credit. I would have
posted d link here but I don't know how to. Try to stop him[/quote]Please what's the guy's full name so I'll be able to get him.

Thank you emzy for answering my call at once. I can see your handiwork on some real big threads around here.
Cheryluv, lets see where this one takes us to.... Before we use another approach.

I will tell him to work on it at once.

cheryluv: sure...dt wud b nyc

Now you are working on your thread.[quote
author=cheryluv]Battery low o...i ll b bck wit more updates before
2:00. In d meantime, pls kip dos comments coming[/quote]Am I permitted to help you post the link to your story on my story threads and some other threads am sure of?
I'll contact my man Emzypaz to do it at once.

This is the most important aspect of story writing. Length.
Are you posting with your laptop or your phone?
Try to post at least 4,000+ letters. I've nt seen a phone lesser than that. If you won't update regularly, let ur once in a while update be lengthy.
It has worked for many of us here.

A piece of advice on how to make your story known:
The only way to make your story thread a bustling place is if you update regularly. This way it won't leave d first page of the literature section and more people will see it and if it is good enough they'll comment.
Ask Temitope Daniel, he will tell you how he made it big.

Cheryluv, the only way people will get to know about this thread is if it is active i.e if you are updating and there are comments, no matter how little.
I will try my best in dragging the few followers that I have gathered over the years down here so they can read and comment.
Work on your description and spelling. Good to go you are.
At least one more update before 2pm.... Try it and you'll see results.

Larry why? Let your brother win it nau. Afterall if I win it is because you are here. #Yougerrit?

LarrySun: Really? May God bless your pockets. When shall we start. In Jesus name, I must win!

Dnt mention.

marioking: Thanks man

They are in fact an error.[quote
author=JigsawKillah]I lik

I want to believe the bolded word there was mistakenly omitted


that breakfast part is so real
I hate that part when there's about to be an occasion. most of the time,
I end up having eaten too much and when I need rest, I sleep on the
bare floor[/quote]

Why start the story when you know you won't finish it. At this infant satge. Tell me how you wanna get more views and comments. You readers are waiting.
Just my two cents tho!
PeAcE.

This is getting serious. A is still chasing Eve.
I have glucose here to boost your energy. You know how it works right?

Dnt beg for comments, you'll definitely get them if your story is good enough.

marioking: Please i will need to see comment to know if am not alone on this thread