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"Did they hurt you?" Nike asked with concern written all over her face.
"Not really. I just had some minor cuts." He replied.
Nike left him in the sitting room and went into the kitchen to boil water for him so as to press his swollen head.
"Ouch." he whinced in pain.
"Is it painful?" she asked.
"Should i test it on you?" Segun asked scooping water with his hand pouring it on her.
"Oh my God! This thing is painful." She said laughing.
"So you don't know before." Segun teased her.
She gave him some painkillers against his wish but he took them to please her.
THIRTY MINUTES LATER.
There was a horn outside the gate. Segun was startled.
"Who could that be?" he thought.
"That should be my dad." Nike said heading outside to welcome her father.
"Welcome dad." Nike said hugging her father.
"How are you my princess?" he asked.
"Am fine. Hope you bought what i asked for?" she asked.
"don't you know i came home because of your birthday?" he asked.
"I trust you." she replied smiling.
"Daddy's girl." Joe the gateman said.
"Thank you." she replied playfully.
Father and daughter both went inside and met Segun sitting down.
Sighting her father, Segun stood up.
"Good afternoon sir." Segun prostrated.
"Oh! How are you?" he asked.
"Am fine sir." Segun replied.
"So you are Segun right?" he asked.
"Yes sir." Segun replied suprised. He looked at Nike for an answer but got a smile in return.
"Enjoy yourself and make yourself comfortable." the man said and headed for his room.
"I'll be right back." Nike said following her father.
"Okay." Segun replied and sat down.
Nike came back and they continued talking about stuffs such as their schools, friends and Emma and Jummy.
At exactly 4 o'clock Segun stood up and announced his departure.
"Wait and let me tell daddy." Nike said and went back inside.
Nike came back and handed one thousand naira to Segun.
As Segun was about stepping out of the house Nike's father came to the sitting room.
"Hope to see you on thursday." The man said.
"Definitely sir." Segun replied.
Nike escourted him back to the bus-stop where he'll board a bus to his house.
"Take care of your wounds." She advised.
"Okay, i will." he answered.
"Bye. I'll call you." she said.
"Bye." he replied hopping into a bus.
Segun got home thirty five minutes later but got the shocker of his life immediately he got into the sitting room.
Seated in the sitting room was his mother and Jummy.

--to be continued--

Temitope Daniel: Aiit, waiting... This tym around, I'm d 1 @ d front seat, I no take pop corn oh, na amala... Lolz

How many wraps?

ritababe: chaii see as una don put me for hotsit......abeg i nor go fit start now
abi una want make i start am and dey update every weekend?

We no want dat o. Afta u must av settled down u can start with ease.

Updates coming later in the evening afta i must have charged.

I want this story on frontpage as soon as possible.
https://www.nairaland.com/1447941/total-love/4

Hello guys.
I know i ddnt put my best in my last update cos i had to drop something for you all.
Shud incase u see any mistake, u can point them out so that i can adjust.
Signed:
d9ty7

--continuation--
Segun got to the exam centre very early in the morning on the 2nd of october (the last day of the examination)
He sat down and did his last minutes revision.
"Good morning." Nike greeted.
"Good morning." he replied.
"How was your night?" she asked.
"It was fine." he replied.
They chatted happily for like twenty minutes before Jummy entered the hall.
"I'll see you later." Nike said immediately she sighted Jummy.
"But, nobody is sending you away." Segun replied.
"I know but i don't want trouble." she explained.
Nike left for her seat. Jummy got to Segun's seat angrily.
"So you are still seeing this useless girl?" Jummy asked.
"Keep your voice down and moreso, am not seeing her." Segun defended.
"You finally allowed your mum to make decisions for you." Jummy said.
"Don't bring my mum into this." Segun warned.
They stood up against themselves before Olanike came between them.
"Segun. What's the matter?" Nike asked.
"Slut. What's yours in this?" Jummy asked.
Nike walked away with tears in her eyes.
"How dare you call her slut?" Segun asked but waited for no reply as he ran after Nike.
Jummy walked to her seat angrily. Segun apologised to Nike before the invigillator came in and distributed the question paper and the answer booklet.
After the paper.
Candidates were seen loitering outside jubilating on the completion of the exam.
Some were taking pictures while other were exchanging contacts.
Segun snapped Nike's pictures and vice versa. Jummy was looking at them from afar with a very angry face.
Segun chilled with Nike for some minutes before Emma and his boys numbering up to fourteen showed face.
They dragged them to a lonely part of the school.
Segun's phone was seized, his wristwatch and his chain. Nike was begging for their safety but the guys ignored her and warned Segun not to move close to Olanike for the rest of his life.
Segun voiced out angrily and requested for a man to man combat between him and Emma.
They accepted the contest and they were left to battle it out. Segun succeeded in pushing Emma to the ground and was raining lots of punches on him before the other guys joined in support of Emma. Nike seeing that they had dropped the things they seized from them picked it up and took to her heels.
Segun managed to stand up and ran away with a series of cuts on him. He took the school's back gate and walked towards the bus-stop where he saw Olanike waiting for him. Seeing him in his injured state. She quickly called a taxi and off they went to her house in the GRA.

--to be continued--

--continuation--
Mrs Akinola was seated in her shop giving instructions to her workers.
Jummy walked into the shop dressed in a black mini skirt and red top. She walked through the sections of clothes, toys, jewelleries, consumable products and other varieties of goods based on the cashier's directives.
"Good afternoon ma." she greeted bending her knees.
"Good afternoon my dear." The woman replied giving her a searching look.
"It is me, Jummy."
"Oh! You are welcome my dear."
Mrs Akinola instructed one of her girls to give Jummy a bottle of chilled drink.
"So you are my son's girlfriend?" she asked.
"Yes ma." Jummy replied smiling.
"But don't you think you are too young for that?" she asked.
"Yes we are young but we are not going too deep with the relationship." Jummy explained.
"Is it a must for you to have a boyfriend now?"
"It's not a must but so that we don't have problems with relating in future and to know ourselves better." Jummy explained.
"I see." she replied.
Mrs Akinola and Jummy were together in her shop talking about relationships and their ups and downs before Olanike arrived.
"Good afternoon ma." Nike greeted kneeling down.
"Oh! Nike right?"
"Yes ma."
"you are such a beauty." Mrs Akinola complimented.
"Thank you Ma." Nike said kneeling down.
"Have your sit." mrs Akinola said pointing to a vacant seat beside where Jummy sat.
"Good afternoon." Nike said greeting Jummy.
Jummy ignored her and continued playing with her phone.
Mrs Akinola noticed the cold atmosphere between them and the jealousy in Jummy's face. She smiled.
"Do you know her?" Mrs Akinola asked Nike.
"Yes ma." Nike replied.
"Who is she to you?"
"She is my friend." Nike replied.
Jummy raised her head up and looked at Nike with an angry face.
"Who is she to Segun?" the woman asked.
She never saw that coming.
"I don't know but recently i discovered they are much more close." Nike explained.
"So there is a possibility that they are dating?"
"Yes ma."
Jummy's phone rang and she picked it. She dropped the call twenty seconds later.
"I have to go ma. My dad wants to see me."
"Okay." mrs Akinola replied handing a five hundred naira note to her as transport fare.
Jummy left after showing appreciation to segun's mum and ignored Nike's greeting.
"That girl doesn't fit my son." Mrs Akinola said to Nike.
Nike was suprised and did not know how to reply the woman.
Mrs Akinola gave Nike her number at the end of the day after giving her her own transport fare.

--to be continued--

Next update coming latest by 8pm. Plz bear with me.

Winnie was beggin immediately she saw a police van waiting for her. She bribed me by giving me her number and residential address.
Lekinz is forming macho man. A back heel kick was unleashed on him and immediately he dropped his gun and promised me his daughter's number.

Winnie1950: (points my ak47 at him) if u move i shoot. How dare u challenge my oga?

Now i understand it is 2 against 1. I knw wat 2 do. You and your boss shud get ready. A warrant of arrest has been issued for the possesion of firearm.

Points my bazouka at lekinz. He was beggin me just then Jumizie walks in with another plate of rice, drops the gun and began eatin the food.
Omg! I too lyk food.

lekinz: Ave always wanted to see today....***Loading d groundnut into my chicken lap ***Pointing it to D9ty7 mouth****oya dey vomit dt rice now now nd make e be like normal cooked rice b4 i baptize dt ur big mouth with dis groundnut****

Wetin i do sef. Shey person no fit eat again?
I don remember sey i get one bazouka inside my wardrobe.

T.daniel to be candid u shouldn't av ended the story this early. So you can attract more readers and hopefully make front page. But nothing spoil sha, i know say TOTAL LOVE promises to be a lengthy one.
Thanks boss.

lekinz: U did what....Ate the rice....Mtcheew...Hmmmm...Uhmmmm...Ehnnn...Ehy....I know its just a dream sha...

No be dream o. As a matter of fact u even asked for a grain sorry i mean a spoon.

Walks into the thread happily, sat down behind lekinz, discovered their was no update. Went outside, met Jumizie on the way with a plate of rice, kicks Jumizie acrobatically and grabbed the plate 4rm her, sat down on the floor and ate the rice and even broke the plate.
Uduak come update before i vex vomit all the rice i ate.

Aimedrey: Buh isnt d guy supsd to have scars or cuts? "JUST SAYING"

Nice observation. Actually he had series of injuries which i included in d previous updates when he had an encounter wit his dad.
I left it out so i won't bore you guys.
Thanks 4 d observation tho! And i promise to improve.

hibty: we started from the bottom now we here......i dey ur back always.tinking of putting up my story here too sometime soon dou it wud be my first ever public write up.i av dis problem,m never confident abt my writing buh ur story however inspired me to start sumtin....peace

Start it as soon as possible. I promise i'll be there for you #winks#. Sorry i mean i'll be there to comment and edge u on.

Goodmorning to my dearest readers. Hope you had a nice night rest?
The next update is coming up later in the day and hopefully part 1 will finish today or 2mao.
Signed:
d9ty7.

--continuation--
Segun got into his room, undressed and went into the bathroom to take his bath. He came out, took his phone opened his whatsapp and chat with his online friends. As at the time he logged out he had another verbal combat with Mike.
He laid down to sleep but was interrupted by a kock on his door. He sluggishly stood up and opened the door and their stood his Father and mother.
He opened the door wider for them and closed the door after they entered.
He sensed he is in for hours of councelling.
"Segun, Segun, Segun. How many times did i call you?" His mother asked.
"Three times." he replied.
"I am your mother and i don't want you to make mistakes." she said.
He kept his face down.
"I want to ask you some questions and i want nothing but the truth." she explained.
"Okay, go ahead ma." he replied.
"Who is Jummy. I want nothing but the truth." she emphasized.
"She is my girlfriend." he replied looking at their faces to know their reaction but was suprised when he saw them smilling.
"How old are you?" she asked.
He already saw this coming.
"Am sixteen." he replied.
His father stood up when he became bored of the conversation.
"i want to see Jummy and Olanike before this week runs out." she said.
He was wondering how his mum got to know about Olanike.
"Don't be suprised. I read everything in your diary." She informed.
It was then it dawned on him that he had been careless with his things.
"Let them see me in my shop and you must be there with them." she said standing up.
"Okay ma." he replied.
His mother stood up and left his room. He quickly picked up his phone and informed Jummy about the latest development.
Jummy was happy that she would be meeting his boyfriend's mum.
His phone rang after the call then he discovered it was Nike.
"Hello." he greeted.
"Segun am very sorry about what Emma did to you today." she said.
"It's nothing." he replied.
"Are you sure?" she asked.
"Yes i am." he replied.
"Thanks dear." she responded.
"Nike, i want to tell you something." he said.
"Go on am listening."
"My mum wants to see you in her shop tomorrow."
"Me? Hope no problem?"
"None at all."
"How will i get the place?" she asked.
"I will text the address to you." he replied.
"Okay."
"Goodnight."
He said and ended the call. Immediately he dropped the call, he text the address to her.

--to be continued--

Oga The rock. I'll love to take up any of these posts. But the most important thing is u starting this mind blowing story.

--continuation--
Segun walked into his father's room and waited for him. Twenty minutes later his father came inside looking angry.
"Why did you come late." The man asked.
"I was stucked up in a traffic jam." he lied.
"That means i flew home back from office, that was why i didn't witness hold up." The man said.
"I took another route." he explained.
The man went out angrily and entered with a leather belt. He commanded Segun to lie down on his stomach.
Without complain, Segun obeyed his father.
"Daddy, you have a call." Mary said knocking on the door.
He opened the door, collected the phone and picked the call. He spoke on the phone for the next ten minutes keeping an eye on the criminal before him.
He dropped the call and gave Segun twenty two lashes.
He told him to remain on his knees and carry a stool on his hands.
Segun's phone rang, but he pretended as if he didn't hear.
His father commanded him to pick the call and put it on loudspeaker.
"Hello sweetheart are you home?" Jummy asked from the other end.
Segun looked at his father but got a smile in return.
"Yeah, am home." he replied.
"Okay. I just want to comfirm." she said.
"Okay, good night." Segun said
"Love you." she replied.
Segun quickly ended the call and waited for his father's judgement now that he knew that he had a girlfriend. But was suprised when his father told him to go to his room.
"Go to your room, loverboy." His father said jokingly.
Segun stood up and left for his room thinking maybe his father did not hear what Jummy said to him.
"Wonders shall never end sha. So this man even understood my parol." he said to himself laughing.

--to be continue--

Thank you all for your understanding. Am gonna subscribe this morning and post at least 3 updates before 9pm.
Signed:
d9ty7

Dearest readers it is with a heavy heart that i announce to you that the next update will 2mao in the evening.
Don't see me as being proud or sumtin. Please forgive me and keep ur fingers crossed.
Is my apology accepted?

Jumizie13: 4 ur story or real life?

Story

Temitope Daniel: Wao.. Fenks 4 d dedication bro..

U deserve it boss

Queen xstar: Missing all my friends here, So I am urged. Start another story before the week runs out.

Can't wait to see u start a new story.

J0nyb0y: Gobe part2... Segun is in 4 it 2day..
btw Happy sunday 2 u @D9ty7

Same 2 u