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Try and modify d last update because i can see you use 'me' instead of 'him'.
Also i thought u said jeff was watching movie before kasimi entered. But after their first conversation u said jeff continued playing his game.
I know you will improve with time.

Queen you ar doing sooo great. Oliver twist mode activated.

Sleekicon i catch you veiwing this topic but pls dnt go without dropping a comment.

Can't wait 4 d next update.
The part 2 of the teenage love naivety has started o.

Oga the rock i dey gbadun you. Gloria is in trouble but wait o did i hear you say Mercy?
I don start the part two of my story o.

Boss T.Dan come and update before i vex beat u.
I have started the part 2 of my story.

I must confess you are a great writer but you are inconsistent with your updates. Try and include suspense in ur updates.
Success ma'am

Please guys i need your comments badly. I promise i won't disappoint you all.

¤¤¤¤PART 2¤¤¤¤
CHAPTER 1--->DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU WHO FOLLOWED PART 1 OF THIS STORY TO THE END THEREBY CONTRIBUTING TO ITS SUCESS......,.
7:45am monday 7th october.
The students of Brights comprehensive college all lined up according to their classes on the assembly ground.
After the recitation of the anthems(national & school) and recitation of the pledge. Mr Hastrup the principal climbed up the podium to address the students.
He started by welcoming the senior students who went for the just concluded waec gce back to school, he reminded them of their school fee and advised them. He concluded by saying
"All prefects, see me in my office." with this he walked back to his office and the students marched back to their various classes.
The senior secondary school 3 students got back in their class shouting and arguing about trival issues which is normal among secondary school students.
"You guys are matured enough, so stop making a noise." Wilson, the class monitor and the punctuality prefect commanded.
The whole class bursted into laughter.
"So, in short you are trying to say we are not matured?" Titi, the senior girl asked.
"Exactly." Wilson replied.
The class went into another round of laughter.
"Let's go and see the principal." Segun said immediately the noise subsied.
"Everybody?" Chioma, an igbo girl in the class asked.
"Are you a prefect?" Segun asked in a mocking manner which caused another round of laughter.
Mr Ige the Biology teacher walked into the class.
"And what is the noise all about?" he asked no one in particular.
"Goood mooorning sir." the whole class thundered.
Mr Ige walked to the chalkboard and wrote the days topic. He faced the class and saw about fifteen students making their way out of the class.
"To where?" he asked.
"The principal office." Wilson replied.
"Come back here, you have my class. You can go and see him later." Mr Ige advised.
"Uncle forget joor." Segun said as the whole class bursted into laughter.
During the cause of their laughter, the prefects including Segun left the class and headed to the principal's office.
They got to the principal's office in no time and the principal began his boring talks about leadership.
He ended by giving each prefect a project to handle. Segun was told to handle the practice for the upcoming football match against Steadfast comprehensive college(Nike's school).
The principal ended and dismissed them. On getting back to the class, Mr Ige had left the class when the period ended.
"Segun, Mr Ige asked to see you immediately you are back." Peter the shortest boy in the class said.
"Let him come and carry me." Segun said and went back to his seat.
"I am here to carry you." a thick voice thundered through the window. It was no other person than the said Mr Ige.

--to be continued--

Ba3 low. I av to go for today. Part 2 will begin in d next 24hrs.
Please bear with me.
Signed:
d9ty7

Hello guys, the 2nd part of this story will start tonight. But that depends if i am able to charge ma phone.
But while we wait for the nxt update why dnt we make this thread lively by saying wat we think of this story or our predictions for the second part.
Thanks,
Signed:
d9ty7

Nice work u've got here but try and improve on ur spellings.
We ar all learning anyways.

Queen xstar: Please don't just read and go. Do encourage me or better still criticise the work. Thank you.

Be consistent with ur updates.

Queen xstar: Thanks Durodola. I'm grateful.

U're welcome.

Nkpume Iko: Nkpume Iko is here now.

Welcome boss. Thanks for honouring my invitation.

ATTENTION PLEASE!!
Dearest readers of teenage love naivety i recommend a story written by a sister to you all.
This is d link;https://www.nairaland.com/1523879/fighting-back/1#19752104
Read and be glad u did.

Mr T.Dan when is d next update.
Plz guy while we wait on T.Dan lets all spare some minutes by reading a story by a sister https://www.nairaland.com/1523879/fighting-back/1#19752104.
Read and be glad u did.

Guys take ur time and read a story written by a sister with the link https://www.nairaland.com/1523879/fighting-back/1#19752104.
Read and be glad u did.

Hello guys, while u wait for Mr Iko's update why dnt u take ur time in reading this story https://www.nairaland.com/1523879/fighting-back/1#19752104. It is written by a sister.

Let me help u advertise ur story on threads whr av got brothers and sisters. Be rest assured that u'll get comment b4 2day runs out.

Queen xstar: Happy Sunday. I Pray every day of this week is a blessing to you!

Amen. But wait o am i d only follower of this wonderful story?
Don't just read but read and comment.

Don famous: Hello op. You made something unclear. When segun went to his cousin's centre and got beaten by segun and his hang b4 mike came to his rescue. You made it known to us that his father had a spy in that centre. But you neva told us who the spy is. But good work bro

kip ur fingers crossed. Everything will be revealed in d 2nd part.

Nice work bro btw jumizie hpe no problem?, its been a while i saw u last on my thread.

Questions to my dearest readers.
1. Who do you think Segun will go for <a.> Jummy <b.> Nike.
2. Will Emma carry out his threats?
3. The next chapter will involve their resumption back to school. What do you think will happen at school?
4. Considering the distance and individual differences. Do you think Segun and Nike will have a blissful relationship.
5. Considering the family ties between Jummy's and Segun's family do you think they can actuallize their dream?
More questions to come. And i hope to find answers to these questions. Failure to answer these question brings the thread to an indefinite strike. Part two will commence on Monday, i'll be glad to entertain your questions and answers before then.
Signed:
d9ty7

--continuation--
FLASHBACK
Mr Akinola was walking on the street very close to the secretariat. He walked past a black Nissan Altima.
"Akin." Rose the occupant of the Nissan altima called.
"please i don't know you." he replied.
"It's me Rose Bolakale." she explained.
"Oh! Now i remember. Rose, Magaret's sister." he stressed.
"Yes."
She opened the door to the passenger side for him and drove off.
She discovered that the man who helped her pass her exams is in dire need. So she fixed him up a capital to start his own business in partnership with her husband's business.
Akinola thrived and made a name in the business.
*TWO YEARS LATER*
Rose was on the sickbed with Beatrice by her side.
"Beatrice, can you do me a favour?" Rose asked.
"Anything for you my sister." Beatrice replied.
"I want you to unite your family with mine." Rose replied.
"We are already united." Beatrice replied.
"Let's become inlaw. Let your son Segun and my only daughter Jummy be made one." Rose said.
"Consider it done but first you have to get well." Beatrice advised her friend.
"Beatrice. The only way you can repay my kindness to your family is by doing what i asked for. I'll forever be unhappy with you if my desire is not made possibe." Rose explained and gave up the ghost.
"Doctor....doctor....doc....d..d." Beatrice called on the doctor.
*BACK TO PRESENT*
"You can now see why i am concerned about you dating Jummy." she said.
"But mum why can't you tell me all these before." Segun said sadly.
"I never knew you will meet so soon and moreso, she was adopted by a family member when her mum died because she was still a baby then." she explained.
"So what do you want me to do now?" Segun asked.
"Break up with whatever girl you are dating now and stick with you wife." she advised.
"That's not possible." he countered.
"Make it possible son." she begged.
"Okay i'll think about it." he said and left his mother in the sitting room.
He got back into his room and sat down on the bed with his face buried in his palms.
"What sort of promise is this. I can't afford to loose Olanike after all i had gone through. But come to think of it i can't disobey my mother but i don't love Jummy." he thought.
"Then there must be a solution somewhere." he concluded before laying down on his bed to sleep round two.

AND THIS MARK THE END OF THE FIRST PART OF THIS STORY.
Lets kip our fingers crossed and see how things goes in the second part.

Hameenat94: chapter 1 or part 1? Nyc job all d same

Sowie i mean Part 1

Queen xstar: Wanted to apply. I am only joking please.

I undastand u perfectly.
4 application.
Bring ur C.V with your results attached to it. You must have at least 5credits including home management and food science and two months experience. And you come for interview tomorrow. Lol...

The next update which is the flashback marks the end of PART 1.
Kip ur comments coming.

My advice for u!!!
You can't sit down in ur thread alone and expect pple to comment. You can attract readers when you paste your link on other people's thread coupled with your own comments about their stories. And withing a day or two you'll feel like updating every minute.

Queen xstar: Do you have a gf?

What is dat supposed 2 mean?

Queen xstar: Hey Sweet, guess what I did today, I spent time reading your book till I got to Where you stopped. It was lovely! Thanks.

Thanks for the compliment