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bestestgirl: Wow Dan Wow!!!! I stumbled on this story at about 5pm and couldn't stop till i just finished it now. My credit is finished and my thumbs ache from scrolling but it was a great experience.
I am grateful to pple like VV who inspired u to continue posting but somehow i'm glad that i discovered the story late because the suspense could have KILLED me, i wuld have been having dreams of Ola or nightmares of the witches (depending on ur last post for the day). I absolutely loved Nene but funny enuf, my fav character is Ikem who was always rude to all who deserved it, (lmao at his response to those who came to beg his sis).
I think that u shud separate ola and the prince, we all know that she must sacrifice sumthing to hold the incredible power of the moon girl and that would make the story more real.
When Ekuku mentioned that she was related to the priestess, i thot that u were preparing us for Nene's 'call to bar' (the land need a priestess na).
I almost died with laughter when the silly Efu named herself.
Finally, there are places where u mixed up tenses, you started the narration as a reported speech and completed it in present continous tense. When i log on with a PC, i'll try to quote them.
All in all i had a blast and will definitely watch out for more from u. Thumbs up and more ink to that amazing pen of urs

Thanks a lot Bestest...expecting the instances

Thankgodtt: Wow----- u re gud.

Gratitude Thankgodt

OmoKhary: This piece reminds me of the book "pot of life",you took my breath away with this piece.

Glad you enjoyed it.

Udeme288: Its 5;19am nau nd i started reading this piece since 3:25pm yesterday. i pity my ba3 sha.I had all the sceneries in my head,even faces of people, this was a page-turner. i coudn't drop my fone for once. you will go place DAN. anxiously waiting for the contiuation.

Lol..Thanx bro

vitrendy4eva: Totally breathtaking I must tell you! A true masterpiece! I've been glued to it all day. Thanks @DanWrites. Keep up the good work.

Thanks a lot Vitrendy.

AYODEJI4LOVE: ..this is interesting...glue to the first page for a long period of time...

Tnx bro

Obinnau: Happy that it made fp?

Elated. One keg of wine for you.

bejeria101: Oga pls dnt look for error,you are doing an amazing job,more ink to you pen

Thanks Bejeria.

Vigorous V: den she did d ryt tin 2 chalenge ha....bt Dan abeg giv ha powa so dat she wil nt fail...bt wen ar we 2 expect it

In no time VV...

Vigorous V: am curious pls b fast o bt y wil Ola chalenge d goddess

It was her rule that moon maidens of Odu do not marry.

noble4d: be calm bro...when the time comes, your story will surely make the FP

Really wanted to know if any of the rules were violated. It was baffling because no one attended to the endorsements...no quotes, no explanations, no nothing.

jjagz: Dan, I last commented as you just started the tale. I was kinda cut off from connectivity, boy am I glad, I won't have been able to stand the suspense. Good work bro. Just ebook this s#!t abeg and quick with the second book of the trilogy(it has to be biko) . Well done.

Tnks a lot jagz...considering that.

Hi mods,
I want to know why my story didn't .make the front page despite several endorsement s from my readers.

lindybest: FINALLY!!....this was a wonderful piece@Dan...can't wait though 4 d continuation...when should we xpect it

Still working on it Lindy. I like to take my time. But I can tell you its tough...especially the part where Ola has to challenge the mighty Goddess herself.

Vigorous V: Wow wow wow oh Dan dis is wat i wud cal AWESOME ......DAN tanx so much 4 dis MARVELOUS story nd i cnt wait 2 read anoda of ur wondafu stories.....nd cm 2 tink of it i tot i 2ld u My beautiful Ola must mari My handsum Onyema so wat hapened na....*waitin patiently 4 ur ansa*

Hahaha...VV, a moon maiden getting married is not that easy. But it nothing is impossible when hearts are true.

kamia: For a moment Dan, I was beginning to think the whole story was real, and wanted it to continue each day, I was taken unawares when it ended abruptly, but you know what? I think I'll conclude this story in my head...

There sure is a continuation...

kamia: I'm deeply saddened by the passing of Ikenna... Those witches must be dealt with!

They sure got dealt with.

lilll: Bravo! Bravo!! Dear. Love ur write up. I pray dat God keep d flame burnin in u. Do hv a fruitful 2014.

Gratitude Lilll

kamia: I'm enjoying this story, really can't get my eyes off it, since I saw it two days ago, but I hope boju won't mislead these people cos he's so slimy and its description reminds me of smiggle in Lord of the Rings. I'm already hating that creature...

Oh Kamia...pls don't hate Boju. Boju good and Boju likes u so very much

Queen xstar: Woah! You rock Danny dear.

spicyuzo: Wow......Dan.....Wow
Thank you for a job welldone....
You are indeed a seasoned writer....
I await your international recognition.....cos for me u have nothing more to prove...
U are great....

Thanks a lot guys!

Juderejoice: Me I no gree oooo tell me wetin happen to madam ola and frnds ooo

Hahaha...the story was long enough na.
Anyways if I must tell u, moon maidens don't marry...but then Ihe has to come down herself to stop the searing desire between Ola and Onyema.

Juderejoice: My dear i cant help bt notice that ola suddenly came to knw ajulu's name even though she has neva been told d name. And also how did ugedu get the fake stone? I tot ajulu stole it from their ezenwanyi??

Other than these, wen is the tym for dancin?? I wanna shake dis jigida loaded waist cos i am so happy that evil has been eradicated for good!!

Moon maidens have several powers...even in this story I have not been able to explore their full potential. In the next story may be.
As to Ugedu, she is an old witch and if u can recall, she was even older than Ezenwanyi.
But how she came about the stone mystifys me too...but then she is an old witch. She probably just allowed Ajulu do some of the work for her.

The old woman telling the story smiled. “It was the happiest day in Odu that night,” she said.

“Grandma, please tell us what later happened to Ola and Onyema,” one of three children clustering around her asked.

“Yes, Grandma,” another child added. “Did they later marry each other?”

“And Nene and Azu too?” another of the children— a girl and the older of the three, about sixteen or seventeen in age, asked.

The old lady smiled again. “My children, that’d be a story for another day,” she said. “Grandma must retire now.”

“Thank you, grandma,” the children chorused.


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Juderejoice: meeeeeeeeeeeeeee. I cant miss it for the world

Hahaha...hope u putting on enough jigida with matching br*ast and waist cloth.

Guys make una talk o... who is ready to attend the festival dis night??

bigoduni: @dan, hope we are nt forgeti some stueepid people
we need 2 kno the fate of Efu and her boyfrnd
was d chief priest actualy right dt Nne was a witch?? cos he cud tell ola was no witch but powerful
wat about ugede,.
in short let d land be cleansed ooo

Nne was no witch. It was a mix-up that day because Ayuka saw something he didnt understand in one of the women. Remember the story of how Nne was pointed out?

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