AYODEJI4LOVE: ..this is interesting...glue to the first page for a long period of time...

vitrendy4eva: Totally breathtaking I must tell you! A true masterpiece! I've been glued to it all day. Thanks @DanWrites. Keep up the good work.

bestestgirl: Wow Dan Wow!!!! I stumbled on this story at about 5pm and couldn't stop till i just finished it now. My credit is finished and my thumbs ache from scrolling but it was a great experience.
I am grateful to pple like VV who inspired u to continue posting but somehow i'm glad that i discovered the story late because the suspense could have KILLED me, i wuld have been having dreams of Ola or nightmares of the witches (depending on ur last post for the day). I absolutely loved Nene but funny enuf, my fav character is Ikem who was always rude to all who deserved it, (lmao at his response to those who came to beg his sis).
I think that u shud separate ola and the prince, we all know that she must sacrifice sumthing to hold the incredible power of the moon girl and that would make the story more real.
When Ekuku mentioned that she was related to the priestess, i thot that u were preparing us for Nene's 'call to bar' (the land need a priestess na).
I almost died with laughter when the silly Efu named herself.
Finally, there are places where u mixed up tenses, you started the narration as a reported speech and completed it in present continous tense. When i log on with a PC, i'll try to quote them.
All in all i had a blast and will definitely watch out for more from u. Thumbs up and more ink to that amazing pen of urs

Thankgodtt: Wow----- u re gud.

OmoKhary: This piece reminds me of the book "pot of life",you took my breath away with this piece.

Udeme288: Its 5;19am nau nd i started reading this piece since 3:25pm yesterday. i pity my ba3 sha.I had all the sceneries in my head,even faces of people, this was a page-turner. i coudn't drop my fone for once. you will go place DAN. anxiously waiting for the contiuation.

jugbada: Wow a 9c 1 pls keep it up

jugbada: Wow a 9c 1 pls keep it up

cherriex: Wow Dan u got me real good beautiful work I must say,I read the whole story picturing every scene as if iam there,saw it lastnight and am already through patiently waitin for ur next tale.it was fast because I made it easier by openin each page nd saving for ofline readin thereby saving my Mb.keep it up,I wish ders a hard copy to keep for my future kids.

white mosquito: Ok Dan, this is a nice one. But my first ish is with the title. Is it the moon that is young or the maiden? Cos if its the maiden, we all know maidens are young so there rili is no point in repeating young/maiden. If its the moon, well.... It cant be the moon, can it? Really, OLA- THE MOON MAIDEN sounds better. That having been said, I LOVE the simplicity with which you tell the story, I can already imagine the village scenes, and Iv never been to one.

vandac: nice one, its quite intrestingnd intriguing but i tink some of d names looks or beta still sounds like yoruba names or western names, plz try nd work on dem.

pius15: This is awesome,i can't wait to read the next chapter. Don't keep me waiting please

Juderejoice: Boju reminds me of smegol in Lord of d rings

Lerrie John: Dear Dan, I must commend you on a finely plotted piece of art so far. I came across your post this afternoon n I have been wonderfully captivated as the events unfold. Pity I didn't see this post when you started. I have one or two critics for now but will be saving them for the end. I love reading and I read books from authors with strong captivating characters, the like of Stephen king and Dan Brown and so far you have not bored me with your plot.
So far my best character ( only because I haven't seen a flaw yet) is Nene. The rest of the characters are all beautiful though.
Would love to write more but I have to get back reading. I'm only on page 3 and still have a lot to cover...will fill you in on my opinion gradually...

cheruv: смегол(smegol) hates nasty hobbituses

omotoyiwa: Dats nice,more pls

dedarkman: I must say I spent my whole on bed ,not going to church not that I am proud of it.i am not a fan of reading novels and story but I will say you are really very to have got my attention.you are very good keep up the good work.
Dan you are good

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kamia: For a moment Dan, I was beginning to think the whole story was real, and wanted it to continue each day, I was taken unawares when it ended abruptly, but you know what? I think I'll conclude this story in my head...