₦airaland Forum

Loving the story Nancy. Keep the good work coming

cbella:
Late but I'm here finally.... Amazing updates, larrysun


Gloryejims, Deeejah, Pearl05, I know you guys have read since last year...

Lol.
Been busy and offline for a while, but will start reading now. Thanks

cbella:
lolzxx.... see this ma'm ooo!!!

whats today's date? If we are in september then i started reading last year, before you

EvaJael, i suck at commenting on good stories like yours because i'm always overwhelmed and words fail me but will try after the story.

Purple25, Deeejah

Present ma.

Nice story but u shd work on your punctuations.
Following wt all seriousness

Pearl05:
She didn't call me .

No vex.

cbella:
Finally I found another one!!

Deeejah, Gloryejims.

Lets enjoy

Yaay!!! Thank you dearie

bakeuhappy:
.
On behalf of the author@Mancrimes I say thanks for pointing out. I have done the correction

U r welcome

Thanx for d mention and update. This update has really put me at ease because I was scared the killer was smarter than all of them.
Can't wait for the hide and seek that will take place in the second part .
I want to point out an error, pls. It is God-given talent, not God-giving. Must av been an oversight because u write well.
Thank you once again as we await book two.
Pls don't keep us waiting for too long cos I am allergic to suspense
Cheers

Thanks for d update.
If the killer keeps getting away wt his crimes while Kevin stays helpless, then ur beautiful story will lose its shine.
I tot Kevin would be careful after his encounter with the killer that night, but it seems he is just going about like everything is under control.
And how is it possible that despite all d distractions they killer had in the room, Kevin cldnt get to him especially with his karate skills? Kevin falling to a kick in d stomach is an insult to his fighting skill, and he just stayed on d floor till the killer returned for him? What happened to his survival instincts?
Your story started well, don't ruin it by giving too much power to the killer.

Did Kevin jilt some psycho's sister somewhere?
And dat inspector that didn't pick his call nor bothered to call back...hmm

Is wynter omo wobe?

Well done Mancrimes, the suspense is Smth else. Update soon pls.

cbella:
You took the inspiration in the story to another level! Would love to read yours first, then you get another story from me m'am

Will put Smth up soon. For u my mentor

Wow!!!
If I wasn't in d office ryt now, I wld be dancing to this happy ending. I had hoped for this end and i got it! Thank you cbella.
Marriage isnt about finding the perfect partner, rather it's about two imperfect pple working on each other's flaws. Some of us are born to get it ryt, some will get it ryt only wt a push while some will only get it ryt after several mistakes. What matters is making it ryt after we get it wrong.
Cbella, ur story has emphasized forgiveness and patience; the two things we need in d world ryt now.
Thank you for the wonderful story especially the beautiful end.
Not all beautiful beginnings have happy endings and ugly ducklings do grow up into beautiful princesses. That's the irony of life.
Hope to read more amazing stories from you soon.
Thank u!!!

Nice. Glad I stumbled on this story.
Cbella, I found a story u may be interested in.

A Beautiful and emotional ending.
It's hard to stay mad at some1 u love. Purple25 if dia is aso-ebi for d wedding, I will buy o.
Lol
Thanks for d good story, more stories pls.

cbella:
Drink some hot tea, it will help with the heart.......

Thank you so much!! Have you tot about our thingy yet

Lol @ hot tea.
About our thingy, yeah. Will get back to u soon.
Thanx dear

Cbella!! those are for saving kate and the twins.
Thank u! Thank u! Thank u!
As for pearl, what goes around comes around, but in a speed and force greater than how it went in d first place. I can't say I am happy she lost her womb, but she brought it on herself.
I love those slaps Nectar got, they were slaptastic!
Nectar acted foolishly tho but I still hope he will make things right somehow.
My heart is beating fast cos I am so tensed. Afraid of the events that will follow Kate's recovery.

cbella:
Awww!! LolZxx....

Not nice

cbella:
Lolzxxx....!! Some how she has to pay for running her mouth from the beginning

But not wt her life now. One is bound to run her mouth like Kate if caught up in her situation. For God's sakes, who hasn't betrayed her in one way or d other?
I was hoping she wld one day sit with her legs crossed, watching her twins sleep peacefully in their cots while she rocks her chair backing and forth saying " I made it thru this hell". But it seems d hell of a life is about to consume her.
I am so pained ryt now

My worst fear just came staring at me in d face, and probably laughing too. I tot they say after sorrow comes joy, then why is Kate going thru all these? I don't want Kate to die.
I feel like I am losing someone

Did wilson say Santa can not hurt a fly? He saw a cockroach all those times he was abusing Catherine Abi? Like mother like son.

How will Kate handle D news of Pearl's pregnancy? And is nectar waiting for his ancestors to flash him d greenlight before he confesses his latest misdeed?

I am glad Jane's secret is out before she does more harm, but what is she up to again?
cbella, pls deliver Kate from all evils o

princ007:
Ma'am not sir

Yepa! Another blunder? Not again!
I am sorry ma.

Leesah:
Deejah do u really have to quote d whole chapter twice?? it's annoying when I thought it's another update.

I am sooo sorry pls. Blame it on my poor network, didn't even kno it came twice until this morning. Make una no vex abeg

princ007:
I actually thought it was an update... With due respect ma'am, this isn't right

With due respect Sir, how pls?

cbella:
EPISODE 69

Nectar glared for a while and fixed himself for bed. He sneaked in quietly and tossed up restlessly. “Are you okay nectar”? Kate whispered.

I’m fine, you should turn off the lights then. Kate said and closed her eyes backing him.

Nectar stitched his eyes opened all night, trying to figure out what to do next. He couldn’t possibly think of an abortion. He is not heartless and he is a doctor. Is this baby even mine? Sleep took over before he could answer that question.

*******
Nectar knocked on the door nosily and furiously. He rushed from home when Kate’s phone kept ringing and messages popping in.
The door opened after some few minutes of fuming over his mistakes.

Didn’t you hear me knocking, Pearl! What took you so long to open this door? He asked angrily. Saint calm down, do you know the time, She asked calmly.

Yes it’s three in the morning, and I’m here to warn you for the last time to stop calling my wife at odd times. He said angrily, his hands flying in the air.

You haven’t seen anything yet saint. I hope you had time to delete the messages I left as well.

Pearl you are really stupid, you know that. This is no way to keep a man, whatever I felt for you, I had let go since I met my wife. Come to terms with it, I can’t love you now.

You can’t love me now right, tell that to your child when he/she is born. Pearl responded. You know what I’m not even sure that child is mine. Nectar said bluntly.

Oh really, who else have I slept with aside you, you forgot how you couldn’t have enough of me a month ago. A month? You are a month pregnant and you cared less telling me about it. Why now pearl.

Unlike you I have a conscience too, you think I want to hold you down with pregnancy. It just happened, I always take protection but the last time you came around helplessly I was just lost in your tears.

Believe me Saint, I just wanted my conscience to be clear, I know whatever I had with you when Keisha was alive was wrong but I couldn’t help it. I see myself doing the same thing to you and your new wife. I hate it but I wouldn’t want to be treated that way, so allow me tell Kate the truth.

I have plans of leaving once I do that. Pearl finally said and Nectar sighed.

Where do you have to go, he said now walking closer to her. She looked at him seductively and admitted she loved this man. Have a seat let’s talk, Pearl pulled him to the bedroom and they had a seat on the bed.

Pearl, bear in mind I know what you are up to, nothing will happen here. Take that from me, but I just need you not to bother Kate now, she is fragile. I want to be the one to tell her about your pregnancy.

Nectar said fighting the urge to respond to Pearls touch. Are you sure you don’t want to be a father to this beautiful child, Pearl asked while undressing him with her eyes.

Of course yes, if this child is mine. I definitely would take responsibility but allow me handle Kate, that’s all I ask of you. Nectar pleaded.
Saint if I keep my mouth shut, what would be my reward. Pearl asked instantly. Pearl get a grip on yourself, I have to go now. Nectar stood up instantly and pearl held him down.

********
I have to stop sleeping over. I’m not ready for a baby now. Drake said and got a frown from Matts. Matts have you seen my husband? Kate yelled out from the dinning where she was seated waiting for breakfast.

Which husband? Matts replied startled and got a waking up blow form Drake on the head. Drake what’s that for, Matts asked laughing.

Matts I can hear you laughing. Have you seen your brother this morning, he wasn’t on bed as at three in the morning. Kate said worried.

No Katie, I only saw your Grams pulling out her luggage this dawn. She said to tell you she had an emergency back home. Matts narrated and caught Kate’s attention.

She walked from the dinning with her belly shaking in front of her to the Kitchen.

Drake don’t spit inside my breakfast. She said smiling and Drake staring with his eyes in surprise. Kate ignored him and walked to meet Matts. So as you were saying, why didn’t you wake me up?

Gram wanted to talk to me the other day and I totally ignored her, not on purpose but I had a lot going on then. Hope she didn’t leave angry. Kate said worried.

Katie call her and find out, besides as we spoke about the last time you should be careful with her. Matts said focusing on the breakfast.
Where could nectar go? She asked once again. Katie your husband is a Doctor and could be called in any time, so relax. Matts interrupted her thoughts.

But he normally wakes me up or leaves a note. I’m just worried Matts as he didn’t look himself last night. Kate further complained. He didn’t look himself as in bed mood or the other thing. Matts asked winking and almost shying away.

Silly girl, don’t get any ideas. I mean he looks troubled. I’m tired let me have a seat at the dinning. She said and paused realizing Drake hasn’t said anything yet, he just kept staring.

Matts tell your guy to stop staring at my belly. If he wants a baby, he should get one already. Kate said teasing and walked away from him.
Matts practically had to shake him out of his trance. What was that for she asked?

I was just wondering how tired that pregnant beauty is but wouldn’t admit it. He said to defend himself when he was actually lusting over her.
Matts couldn’t help but just frown. Don’t get like that, you know I’m with you now. Drake said to console her.
******
Stacy did you talk with Dad already. Kate asked instantly when Stacy picked up the call. Yes, we talk…ed and he wanted to ask you for perm…ission so I get to spend some time with him. Stacy stammered to say.

Are you stammering because you don’t think you deserve some time with your Dad, or because you think I wouldn’t give you some time off? Kate asked.

No Miss, I was thinking how you would feel about it since he has never done that with you before. Stacy said honestly.

Wow Stacy, you care about me that much. I never knew! Well, that’s fine provided you don’t turn him down. But wait, how did you know he never had a sit down with me. Kate asked and there was silence for a while.

Don’t worry, it’s obvious whoever planted you in my life fed you with every information. She said confused at that point in time.

Stacy I would call him and approve, just don’t forget you still owe me a new contract which you were supposed to deliver earlier. Kindly let me have that soon. Let me know how it goes, Kate said and tried to hang up when she spoke up. Mrs. Glover, can I come over to your house? Stacy asked and Kate was confused.

You don’t need to ask permission to visit my house. I’m fine with that and don’t worry about that issue with my husband, I will talk to him. Kate said and hanged up.

Talking of husbands where has he gone to, I hope he hasn’t run back to Pearl. She thought for a while, Kate could feel the tears almost coming out then she dismissed the thoughts.

She heaved a heavy sigh when Matts dropped breakfast on the table.

At long last, the salted omelet is ready. Kate said teasing while Matts smacked her on the back gently while returning back to the Kitchen. She smiled and tried to fix herself.

*******
Was that Kate, Jane asked Stacy. And she nodded while staring at her Moms luggage still sitting on her couch.

Mom you still haven’t told me what your mission here is. As I texted you back yester night, Dad was here and he wants a sit down with me.

Thinking about a lot things, all these became clearer when he asked me who my mom was. Seeing you in Kate’s house made me realize a lot of things. Kate called you Grams.

Jane was just staring at the little girl she rescued twenty seven years ago.

Did she actually rescue her or she stole her to satisfy her own loneliness and to use her in destroying Catherine. She kept thinking when Stacy spoke up again.

I did some checks, I never thought of it until last night. If Wilson is your son, then you are actually my Grand mom.
I always knew you were not my mom but I played along just because whatever it is you did for me, you obviously loved me enough to have taken me away from my parents.

But I demand to know who my mom is right now, or you leave my house this very moment. I can’t believe I was naïve all these while. You clouded my mind and I could barely think for myself.

Stacy said sternly while Jane looked on surprised and obviously angry.

Is this how you intend to pay me back? Jane angrily grabbed her by the arm. Mom let me go now. You could hear Stacy shout even a mile away, until she finally broke free.

I’m sorry I had to lay my hands on you for the first time. I will leave now, you know where to find me. Jane said remorsefully and packed up her things.

*****
Grams, I’m sorry I couldn’t make time out for you while you were around. I was busy with some family issues.
Are you around so I come over so we talk about what you asked me to see you about the last time over lunch? Kate tried to be smart.

Don’t worry Kate, I got what I needed, so there is no need coming over besides am on my way back to the states. Jane said her goodbyes and hanged up.

Just then Nectar came in obviously out of his thoughts, because he had his shoes in his hands while walking bare footed into his bedroom.
Nectar are you okay, Kate asked and he snapped.

Do I look not okay to you, stop asking me every seconds if I’m okay. It’s starting to get on my nerves. He said without regrets.

Sorry gentle man, you obviously walked barefooted from outside while holding your shoes, haven’t seen you this lost before. I won’t ask again if it bothers you. Kate said and walked out of the room.

Nectar realizing he snapped just dropped his shoes and rushed into the shower. Kate I’m sorry forgive me someday. I was a sheep in wolves clothing, I obviously don’t deserve you Kate.
He murmured in the shower. Kate who realized she shouldn’t have walked out earlier came back and looked on sadly while he talked to himself, then she walked away before he could even notice.
******
Matts who was sadly leaning against her bedroom door after yet another marathon with Drake got startled by Kate who tapped her on the shoulders.

She turned around with her eyes filled with tears, what’s going on! Kate asked instantly. Ask your lover boy there, I can’t believe he was playing me all this time. Matts cried silently.

Drake who was on phone earlier with Anthon mentioned he was only playing along with her feelings for him since she couldn’t stop crushing on him. His feelings are running wild now since he is obviously starting to like her.

He was tired of holding on to a failed love, he wants to continue with whatever feelings he is starting to have for Matts.
Obviously Matts only heard the first part of Drake’s conversation with Anthon and couldn’t handle it.

Kate barged in and he jumped up from his sitting position with Matt’s towel wrapped around his waist. Get out now! She yelled. Kate take it easy, what did I do this time. Drake asked innocently.

I said get out, she said again, running out of breathe. She grabbed the chair by Matts work table and sat down. Kate are you okay, he asked and tried walking closer. Don’t even attempt touching me, just pick up your stuffs and walk out. Drake obeyed.

He dragged his attire on, not minding if Kate was watching him naked. He walked out and paused by the door. Matts who finally grabbed the floor as her comforter was still in tears.

Matts what’s going on, Kate kept yelling at me and you sit here with the juice I asked earlier crying. Did someone die, or did I kill someone? He asked while fixing his buttons.

Matts whose face was up against the wall brought her eyes to meet his gaze. Drake, yes someone died. My love for you died, and you know who killed it. You son of a bitch. I can’t believe when you came back to apologize you were actually playing games with my feelings. Matts said angrily.

Drake’s eyes opened at once and he remembered what he mentioned to Anthon earlier, Matts might have overheard him. Please hear me out, you misunderstood my conversation with Anthon earlier. Drake tried to explain.

Then he heard a voice coming down the stairs. Nectar who wasn’t sure what the noise was about decided to come out. Dude get out before I do something I might regret, he yelled while walking down. She asked you to leave, just get out.

Drake looked back at Matts who obviously wasn’t ready to listen to him and then headed for the door.

******

To be continued


So i didnt the 15 comments so will upadte half the full episode.

Matt's shd learn how to eavesdrop, u don't do it half way. As a lawyer, I expected her to listen to d whole conversation, no matter how painful it may be.
And Drake, wat was he thinking having dat kind of conversation at Matts' residence? That aside sef, hope Nectar didn't sleep wt Pearl again o cos this one he didn't return home until morning.
As for Pearl, I pray her period comes back from d public holiday it went on, so dat her delusion will end.

cbella:
EPISODE 69

Nectar glared for a while and fixed himself for bed. He sneaked in quietly and tossed up restlessly. “Are you okay nectar”? Kate whispered.

I’m fine, you should turn off the lights then. Kate said and closed her eyes backing him.

Nectar stitched his eyes opened all night, trying to figure out what to do next. He couldn’t possibly think of an abortion. He is not heartless and he is a doctor. Is this baby even mine? Sleep took over before he could answer that question.

*******
Nectar knocked on the door nosily and furiously. He rushed from home when Kate’s phone kept ringing and messages popping in.
The door opened after some few minutes of fuming over his mistakes.

Didn’t you hear me knocking, Pearl! What took you so long to open this door? He asked angrily. Saint calm down, do you know the time, She asked calmly.

Yes it’s three in the morning, and I’m here to warn you for the last time to stop calling my wife at odd times. He said angrily, his hands flying in the air.

You haven’t seen anything yet saint. I hope you had time to delete the messages I left as well.

Pearl you are really stupid, you know that. This is no way to keep a man, whatever I felt for you, I had let go since I met my wife. Come to terms with it, I can’t love you now.

You can’t love me now right, tell that to your child when he/she is born. Pearl responded. You know what I’m not even sure that child is mine. Nectar said bluntly.

Oh really, who else have I slept with aside you, you forgot how you couldn’t have enough of me a month ago. A month? You are a month pregnant and you cared less telling me about it. Why now pearl.

Unlike you I have a conscience too, you think I want to hold you down with pregnancy. It just happened, I always take protection but the last time you came around helplessly I was just lost in your tears.

Believe me Saint, I just wanted my conscience to be clear, I know whatever I had with you when Keisha was alive was wrong but I couldn’t help it. I see myself doing the same thing to you and your new wife. I hate it but I wouldn’t want to be treated that way, so allow me tell Kate the truth.

I have plans of leaving once I do that. Pearl finally said and Nectar sighed.

Where do you have to go, he said now walking closer to her. She looked at him seductively and admitted she loved this man. Have a seat let’s talk, Pearl pulled him to the bedroom and they had a seat on the bed.

Pearl, bear in mind I know what you are up to, nothing will happen here. Take that from me, but I just need you not to bother Kate now, she is fragile. I want to be the one to tell her about your pregnancy.

Nectar said fighting the urge to respond to Pearls touch. Are you sure you don’t want to be a father to this beautiful child, Pearl asked while undressing him with her eyes.

Of course yes, if this child is mine. I definitely would take responsibility but allow me handle Kate, that’s all I ask of you. Nectar pleaded.
Saint if I keep my mouth shut, what would be my reward. Pearl asked instantly. Pearl get a grip on yourself, I have to go now. Nectar stood up instantly and pearl held him down.

********
I have to stop sleeping over. I’m not ready for a baby now. Drake said and got a frown from Matts. Matts have you seen my husband? Kate yelled out from the dinning where she was seated waiting for breakfast.

Which husband? Matts replied startled and got a waking up blow form Drake on the head. Drake what’s that for, Matts asked laughing.

Matts I can hear you laughing. Have you seen your brother this morning, he wasn’t on bed as at three in the morning. Kate said worried.

No Katie, I only saw your Grams pulling out her luggage this dawn. She said to tell you she had an emergency back home. Matts narrated and caught Kate’s attention.

She walked from the dinning with her belly shaking in front of her to the Kitchen.

Drake don’t spit inside my breakfast. She said smiling and Drake staring with his eyes in surprise. Kate ignored him and walked to meet Matts. So as you were saying, why didn’t you wake me up?

Gram wanted to talk to me the other day and I totally ignored her, not on purpose but I had a lot going on then. Hope she didn’t leave angry. Kate said worried.

Katie call her and find out, besides as we spoke about the last time you should be careful with her. Matts said focusing on the breakfast.
Where could nectar go? She asked once again. Katie your husband is a Doctor and could be called in any time, so relax. Matts interrupted her thoughts.

But he normally wakes me up or leaves a note. I’m just worried Matts as he didn’t look himself last night. Kate further complained. He didn’t look himself as in bed mood or the other thing. Matts asked winking and almost shying away.

Silly girl, don’t get any ideas. I mean he looks troubled. I’m tired let me have a seat at the dinning. She said and paused realizing Drake hasn’t said anything yet, he just kept staring.

Matts tell your guy to stop staring at my belly. If he wants a baby, he should get one already. Kate said teasing and walked away from him.
Matts practically had to shake him out of his trance. What was that for she asked?

I was just wondering how tired that pregnant beauty is but wouldn’t admit it. He said to defend himself when he was actually lusting over her.
Matts couldn’t help but just frown. Don’t get like that, you know I’m with you now. Drake said to console her.
******
Stacy did you talk with Dad already. Kate asked instantly when Stacy picked up the call. Yes, we talk…ed and he wanted to ask you for perm…ission so I get to spend some time with him. Stacy stammered to say.

Are you stammering because you don’t think you deserve some time with your Dad, or because you think I wouldn’t give you some time off? Kate asked.

No Miss, I was thinking how you would feel about it since he has never done that with you before. Stacy said honestly.

Wow Stacy, you care about me that much. I never knew! Well, that’s fine provided you don’t turn him down. But wait, how did you know he never had a sit down with me. Kate asked and there was silence for a while.

Don’t worry, it’s obvious whoever planted you in my life fed you with every information. She said confused at that point in time.

Stacy I would call him and approve, just don’t forget you still owe me a new contract which you were supposed to deliver earlier. Kindly let me have that soon. Let me know how it goes, Kate said and tried to hang up when she spoke up. Mrs. Glover, can I come over to your house? Stacy asked and Kate was confused.

You don’t need to ask permission to visit my house. I’m fine with that and don’t worry about that issue with my husband, I will talk to him. Kate said and hanged up.

Talking of husbands where has he gone to, I hope he hasn’t run back to Pearl. She thought for a while, Kate could feel the tears almost coming out then she dismissed the thoughts.

She heaved a heavy sigh when Matts dropped breakfast on the table.

At long last, the salted omelet is ready. Kate said teasing while Matts smacked her on the back gently while returning back to the Kitchen. She smiled and tried to fix herself.

*******
Was that Kate, Jane asked Stacy. And she nodded while staring at her Moms luggage still sitting on her couch.

Mom you still haven’t told me what your mission here is. As I texted you back yester night, Dad was here and he wants a sit down with me.

Thinking about a lot things, all these became clearer when he asked me who my mom was. Seeing you in Kate’s house made me realize a lot of things. Kate called you Grams.

Jane was just staring at the little girl she rescued twenty seven years ago.

Did she actually rescue her or she stole her to satisfy her own loneliness and to use her in destroying Catherine. She kept thinking when Stacy spoke up again.

I did some checks, I never thought of it until last night. If Wilson is your son, then you are actually my Grand mom.
I always knew you were not my mom but I played along just because whatever it is you did for me, you obviously loved me enough to have taken me away from my parents.

But I demand to know who my mom is right now, or you leave my house this very moment. I can’t believe I was naïve all these while. You clouded my mind and I could barely think for myself.

Stacy said sternly while Jane looked on surprised and obviously angry.

Is this how you intend to pay me back? Jane angrily grabbed her by the arm. Mom let me go now. You could hear Stacy shout even a mile away, until she finally broke free.

I’m sorry I had to lay my hands on you for the first time. I will leave now, you know where to find me. Jane said remorsefully and packed up her things.

*****
Grams, I’m sorry I couldn’t make time out for you while you were around. I was busy with some family issues.
Are you around so I come over so we talk about what you asked me to see you about the last time over lunch? Kate tried to be smart.

Don’t worry Kate, I got what I needed, so there is no need coming over besides am on my way back to the states. Jane said her goodbyes and hanged up.

Just then Nectar came in obviously out of his thoughts, because he had his shoes in his hands while walking bare footed into his bedroom.
Nectar are you okay, Kate asked and he snapped.

Do I look not okay to you, stop asking me every seconds if I’m okay. It’s starting to get on my nerves. He said without regrets.

Sorry gentle man, you obviously walked barefooted from outside while holding your shoes, haven’t seen you this lost before. I won’t ask again if it bothers you. Kate said and walked out of the room.

Nectar realizing he snapped just dropped his shoes and rushed into the shower. Kate I’m sorry forgive me someday. I was a sheep in wolves clothing, I obviously don’t deserve you Kate.
He murmured in the shower. Kate who realized she shouldn’t have walked out earlier came back and looked on sadly while he talked to himself, then she walked away before he could even notice.
******
Matts who was sadly leaning against her bedroom door after yet another marathon with Drake got startled by Kate who tapped her on the shoulders.

She turned around with her eyes filled with tears, what’s going on! Kate asked instantly. Ask your lover boy there, I can’t believe he was playing me all this time. Matts cried silently.

Drake who was on phone earlier with Anthon mentioned he was only playing along with her feelings for him since she couldn’t stop crushing on him. His feelings are running wild now since he is obviously starting to like her.

He was tired of holding on to a failed love, he wants to continue with whatever feelings he is starting to have for Matts.
Obviously Matts only heard the first part of Drake’s conversation with Anthon and couldn’t handle it.

Kate barged in and he jumped up from his sitting position with Matt’s towel wrapped around his waist. Get out now! She yelled. Kate take it easy, what did I do this time. Drake asked innocently.

I said get out, she said again, running out of breathe. She grabbed the chair by Matts work table and sat down. Kate are you okay, he asked and tried walking closer. Don’t even attempt touching me, just pick up your stuffs and walk out. Drake obeyed.

He dragged his attire on, not minding if Kate was watching him naked. He walked out and paused by the door. Matts who finally grabbed the floor as her comforter was still in tears.

Matts what’s going on, Kate kept yelling at me and you sit here with the juice I asked earlier crying. Did someone die, or did I kill someone? He asked while fixing his buttons.

Matts whose face was up against the wall brought her eyes to meet his gaze. Drake, yes someone died. My love for you died, and you know who killed it. You son of a bitch. I can’t believe when you came back to apologize you were actually playing games with my feelings. Matts said angrily.

Drake’s eyes opened at once and he remembered what he mentioned to Anthon earlier, Matts might have overheard him. Please hear me out, you misunderstood my conversation with Anthon earlier. Drake tried to explain.

Then he heard a voice coming down the stairs. Nectar who wasn’t sure what the noise was about decided to come out. Dude get out before I do something I might regret, he yelled while walking down. She asked you to leave, just get out.

Drake looked back at Matts who obviously wasn’t ready to listen to him and then headed for the door.

******

To be continued


So i didnt the 15 comments so will upadte half the full episode.

Matt's shd learn how to eavesdrop, u don't do it half way. As a lawyer, I expected her to listen to d whole conversation, no matter how painful it may be.
And Drake, wat was he thinking having dat kind of conversation at Matts' residence? That aside sef, hope Nectar didn't sleep wt Pearl again o cos this one he didn't return home until morning.
As for Pearl, I pray her period comes back from d public holiday it went on, so dat her delusion will end.

cbella:
You sure you want them going their separate ways?

I saw the thingy, will revert as soon as possible. I tried tho but......
Thanks

I don't want them going their separate ways, I love them together. I av even nicknamed dem NecKate in my mind .
If Kate wants to punish Nectar, I won't feel sorry for him. But she shdnt punish him with divorce, pls cos storms like theirs always pass.

Beautiful story which shows the anguish some women pass through daily.
U did a good job but i want to draw your attention to Somethings I noticed, so you can overcome them in your next story.
1. Be mindful of ur use of tenses, let ur past events be in past tense/participle.
2. You shd also take note of ur verbs, not all verbs take 'ed'.
3. Homophones are words that av similar pronunciation but different meanings & spellings. Eg sight, site,cite, burst, bust etc. So u shd take cognizance of such words so that u don't use them wrongly.
Finally, If u can, I will advise you have someone edit ur stories.
That's all. Pls no offence intended. I hope to write soon too and I will welcome your corrections as well.
Sannu da Aiki

cbella:
Who feels this story is already coming to an end or wants it to end already.

Should Kate really keep holding on or just let go. (Personally, I may just let go, patience is my strongest value but not this) just a joke tho

Those supporting nectar earlier, was he really wrong or he was just caught in a love web. (my next story title) don't push it Pearl05! It will take years

When I get 15 comments I would post the next update

Purples25, hope you are healing fine, pls update my morning tea

Pearl is such a killjoy! And nectar? He shd kno beta that a desperate chick will go any length to hook on to him. All these pple in Kate's life sef!
Poor Kate! What did she do to deserve all these? No matter how strong sm1 is, there is alws a weak link somewhr. I like Nectar but cant keep supporting his foolishness.Whatever Kate decides, I am wt her.

Hey Purple25!
This update is a relief & Hope u av recovered fully.
Take care of u for us pls.