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 Literature › Re: Poison By Muyisbanire Seun by Divepen1(mod): 9:45am On Jun 11, 2015 |
54artistry:You are welcome |
| Literature › Re: Poison By Muyisbanire Seun by Divepen1(mod): 9:43am On Jun 11, 2015 |
54artistry:You are welcome |
| Literature › Re: Poison By Muyisbanire Seun by Divepen1(mod): 2:49am On Jun 11, 2015 |
Stolen bread is sweet. Please change 'am' to I'm |
| Literature › Re: Reincarnation by Divepen1(mod): 7:16pm On Jun 10, 2015 |
LarrySun:Lol |
| Literature › Re: The Oracle by Divepen1(mod): 7:15pm On Jun 10, 2015 |
the paragraph need improvements. After that let's work on it together. Making sense |
| Literature › Re: Extreme Encounter by Divepen1(mod): 7:05pm On Jun 10, 2015 |
Writing from the third person omniscience make sense but try to make it tidy by not moving us from one character to another almost immediately. Reducing it will bring a great closeness between your reader and main character..... You are the boss. Ebuka should let go of the past experience. I smell love brewing somewhere in the corner . That nature healing reminds me of Celestine prophesy. Waiting patiently for update. |
| Literature › Re: Literature by Divepen1(mod): 6:55pm On Jun 10, 2015 |
Take = took |
| Literature › Re: TITANIC by Divepen1(mod): 12:24am On Jun 09, 2015 |
Jezcallmeshaxee:I know but do you know few people can do that way |
| Literature › Re: TITANIC by Divepen1(mod): 8:55pm On Jun 08, 2015 |
You are doing good. I'm still mesmerized by your way of writing. |
| Literature › Re: Pls Mod! Chalk Me Buy Taking This Piece To The Front Page. Pls I Beg You. Thanks by Divepen1(mod): 8:52pm On Jun 08, 2015 |
*grins*
Well, you've got a lot of work to do.
Let's with *callment*, it is COMMENT.
Your story should answer
Who?
Why the act?
Where?
When?
*sigh* Keep writing. |
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