cbella:



Thanks, I appreciate your comment

Nobody liked the ending, will modify with one sentence boldy... Hope that helps.

I guess I'm just anti bad ending

alrite dear

what an amazing story... nice one nd pls kip up d gud work @OP though i didnt expect it to end like that

captain247:
What a wonderful story that made me glued my eyes to my phone just as Mary and Samuel does to their TV till past 1am.
Most females cannot tell what love is from sex and affection that was what Mary lacks. She doesn't know what she wants but couldn't confide in her mother who could have helped her out with good advice.
Most of the time our parents are also our friends, they play both roles in our lives but many are afraid to discuss relationship issues with their family.
Being secretive to your partner is very wrong and not safe at all. It makes you to start telling lies upon lies.
What if her first love happens to be a chronic Armed rubber would she have continued with him all in the name of first love?
Ladies first love doesn't mean best lover or best man on earth.
Op you're a very good writer. Thanks

i totally agree wit u.. nd to d ladies he is ur first love does nt mean he is goin to b d best tin dat will ever happen to u,wen true love comes again appreciate it nd move on...nice story@Op kip up d gud work

Optional2:



you can finish it here.

http://gospelbreed.com/2016/01/story- common-mistakes-ladies-make-in-a- relationship-episode-39/

thanks dear i really appreciate