Literature › Re: Behind The Mask - A Short Story by donnie(m): 9:22am On Sep 30, 2017*. Modified: 2:17pm On Sep 30, 2017 |
DripDrop: Not impressed at all. Sincerely, I didn't read past the first few paragraphs (while cringing), and that's a problem if you can't hold your readers attention from the first few words.
Man, don't let anyone deceive you about how your writing is good. You have a lot to learn. For starters, your sentences are filled with cliches. That's a fail. Two lots of redundant words and even sentences. You will need to avoid those. Three, your conversations and characters need to be more realistic.
I just gave your work a free review. Sincerely, your writing (and construction) shows you haven't read much. Read more of the style you want to write, and that style will naturally stick.
Good luck. What type of stupidity is this? Are you saying that if your writing is good you suddenly have nothing more to learn? You can drop your comments without being a proud and arrogant snub. Abeg carry your "notice me" commit for hia. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Christianity Etc › Re: It Is Now Time For Healing. Jesus Is Here To Heal.get Yours by donnie(m): 9:37am On Sep 29, 2017 |
Originakalokalo: God is with you. He is always there.
Please continue to study his word and pray. And more importantly, Continue to live your life the way he wants.
He will make you holy.
God bless you. Thanks |
Celebrities › Re: Lady Who Looks Like Funke Akindele (Photos) by donnie(m): 9:26am On Sep 29, 2017 |
Is that why she's doing her mouth like that? |
Christianity Etc › Re: It Is Now Time For Healing. Jesus Is Here To Heal.get Yours by donnie(m): 9:25am On Sep 29, 2017 |
Originakalokalo: Thank God that you are not sick.
Are you a Christian sir?.... YOU SOUNDED like one.my apologies, I don't mean any insult. This is a public forum. It's ok... I'm a Christian. |
Politics › Re: State Governors Are More Powerful Than The President – Obasanjo by donnie(m): 9:19am On Sep 29, 2017 |
Why are they afraid of restructuring? Answer: they prefer the status quo. But The change the Lord has started in this nation is not of man so no human being can stop it.
Nigeria will be restructured. |
Christianity Etc › Re: It Is Now Time For Healing. Jesus Is Here To Heal.get Yours by donnie(m): 9:16am On Sep 29, 2017 |
I read but didn't pray.
I don't get sick.
Weldone and God bless you. |
Christianity Etc › Re: Youths Please Wait Behind For A Brief Meeting by donnie(m): 9:10am On Sep 29, 2017 |
See your life?  They one in black hat na youth too? |
Politics › Re: "President Buhari Not Opposed To Restructuring" - Femi Adesina by donnie(m): 9:04am On Sep 29, 2017 |
Mtcheew |
Christianity Etc › Re: Chris Oyakhilome Visits His Mum In Benin,see How She Welcomed Him(photo) by donnie(m): 5:09am On Sep 29, 2017 |
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Christianity Etc › Re: Chris Oyakhilome Visits His Mum In Benin,see How She Welcomed Him(photo) by donnie(m): 9:54pm On Sep 28, 2017 |
Something is wrong. That doesn't look like Pastor Chris' mum, facially. Also, his mum is hardly ever that dramatic. Always exhibits poise.
The man of God probably just favored some old lady as his custom is. |
Politics › Re: EFCC Arrests Ekiti Finance Commissioner, Accountant After Fayose Declaration by donnie(m): 8:14pm On Sep 28, 2017 |
Antipob777: See how you just spoke rubbish. I'm sure you are an iPod terrorist.
Why not told us why they were arrested before you spoke this rubbish And look at the rubbish you just spoke |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 7:22pm On Sep 25, 2017 |
ScienceWatch: The OP is well written and instructive. I enjoyed reading it. Well done Sir. thanks! |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 6:16am On Sep 25, 2017 |
hysteriabox: No, not sons after the flesh but after the spirit. Unfortunately, most sons are comfortable with the way things are and aren't desiring more not better. It's about Solomon doing greater than David, regardless of the feat his father accomplished I meant spiritual sons. Pastor Chris has no son after the flesh |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 11:03pm On Sep 24, 2017 |
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Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 10:57pm On Sep 24, 2017 |
Raddie: Any link I can read up on Pa Eltons' life before nigeria? Several. Just Google Pa S.G. Elton |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 10:55pm On Sep 24, 2017 |
Walelavender: Glory to God! I celebrate these servants of the Most high declaring the kingdom of God on earth. God has been faithful to their callings and there are many things we can learn from them.
For every nation, there are valid prophets and these ones have expressed the fulness of God's grace.
I bring to you goodnews of God's salvation through Jesus Christ. Jesus loves you.
For some of us who don't have the experience of His GRACE and hitting it hard on this thread- the word of the cross is like foolishness. The carnal man can't decipher the things of the spirit. I pray for a conviction from the Holy Spirit. Praise God! Amen |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 10:54pm On Sep 24, 2017 |
stevio: Are you the anti-christ or should we wait for another?  |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 10:46pm On Sep 24, 2017 |
buJu234: I think the yr 1981 was when the young men and women of Africa saw that the Holyspirit can work through a fellow black native African that's the person of the Archbishop B.A idahosa because the 1980s was when Idahosa ministry was in his prime.
@op not only these 3 men of God oo there are hundreds of others in several african countries that caught that fire too, including Richard Bonnke  |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 10:42pm On Sep 24, 2017 |
bigtt76: 1981 was the year when people realized others could be made gullible by twisting the Bible to suit their needs. Have you noticed that back then most church posters have the perceived image of Christ, Angels and cross? Nowadays it's the images of the pastor's and their wives adorning such posters meaning they now rely on their own personality than of Jesus Christ in hoodwinking the congregation. And you think that those pictures of Christ and angels are scriptural? |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 10:39pm On Sep 24, 2017 |
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from what I heard when I was serving, It was also his prophecy that birthed Nigerian Christian Corpers Fellowship (NCCF) correct |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 10:35pm On Sep 24, 2017 |
dbynonetwork: I doubt if CHRIS OYAKLOME is a real man of God. You doubt is inconsequential. He is nonetheless. |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 10:23pm On Sep 24, 2017 |
hysteriabox: Nice one op. It's sad when I notice that most believers aren't sound when it comes to history. The moves of the Spirit within nations has character-peculiar requirements, time frame, covering... Pa Elton practically influenced the lives of all Church greats today- late Pa Idahosa, Kumuyi, Adeboye, Oyedepo, Oyakhelome... These happen to have influenced others as they went- Bakare, Abioye, Oritsejafor... Most times- even in Scripture, the Spiritual move lasts 30 human years before it is established and multiplied. So, expectedly once an anointed vessel runs with a mandate for 30 years, it's expected that he reproduces. So, a generation will have 30-40 years to maximize their God given grace and hand over to the next. David, moses, Daniel, christ, paul- all showed The same signs. Now if your were born from 1979 to the late 80s, its expected that you take the spiritual posture-the mantle should have shifted from the Fathers to their sons. The great American prophet Bob Jones prophecied these same things back in 1978. It's left for us to see it and take our place. The final lap will not be run by our anointed fathers but by their sons. Thanks bro. And their sons have taken off already |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 10:16pm On Sep 24, 2017 |
gregyboy: wic benin is it benin republic or benin city Benin City |
Health › Re: Civil Servant Killed By Thunder In Oro, Kwara (Photos) by donnie(m): 9:42pm On Sep 22, 2017 |
na thunder tear him cloth?  . RIP |
Business › Re: Tony Elumelu Visits The Pyramids In Egypt (Photos) by donnie(m): 3:56pm On Sep 22, 2017 |
Looks humble. I remember meeting him in Lagos in 2003. He gave me a warm smile as we shook hands... that was the days of STB. |
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Jobs/Vacancies › Re: Do People Really Get Jobs In Nigeria Using Linkedin? by donnie(m): 2:15pm On Sep 20, 2017 |
Of course they do. I got two. However it'll help if you have good referrals, recommendations or endorsements |
Politics › Re: IPOB Stands Proscribed, Terrorist Group – FG by donnie(m): 5:11pm On Sep 19, 2017 |
Odianose13: The FG just wanna frustrate any legal effort IPOB is pursuing for independence. It was too conclusive and premature to term them terrorists.
As a termed terrorist group, they may not get help from the UN and after a while, it will be illegal for any person in diaspora to openly demonstrate (even if peaceful) in the name of IPOB. Its really more frustrating now. you think the UN is made up of fools. you think they don't know this current government? |
Crime › Re: Keystone Bank Staff Charged With ‘theft’ Of N3m From ATM by donnie(m): 4:48pm On Sep 19, 2017 |
That is how one bank security guy stole money from the ATM and later called my friend (the staff in charge) who had forgotten to lock the place afterwards.
He was exposed that same night after my friend (a Christ Embassy guy) declared openly that he cannot be finished. The security guy had hid the money (1.5million) in a nearby bush. |
Christianity Etc › Re: Does Satan Have The Power To Control The Weather? by donnie(m): 7:11pm On Sep 16, 2017 |
uvalued: kosmos! Okay. The word kosmos is commonly rendered "world," when applied to the material universe, or physical world (comprising trees, buildings, cars etc.) The "World" I was referring to is not "kosmos" but "aion", for which I sited Romans12:2 and John 17:14,16. Aion properly denotes an age, or generation of people... systems... political, philosophical, education, etc. |
Christianity Etc › Re: Does Satan Have The Power To Control The Weather? by donnie(m): 5:45am On Sep 16, 2017 |
uvalued: how can you conform to something that is ALREADY yours...and you are Christ and Christ is God's? Confirm exactly which "world" is yours; "kosmos" or "aion". |
Christianity Etc › Re: What Really Happened In 1981? Pastors Adeboye, Oyakhilome, Oyedepo? by donnie(op): 10:31pm On Sep 15, 2017 |
icon007: It's wonderful having such great apostles from our land and in our generation. I believe in Bible based prophesies like that of Elton u quoted. However, the prayer now is that God should give Nigerians a heart of love for one another, morality in all we do and contentment. This country need His presences more than ever.
Thanks op Amen! Thanks and God bless you. |