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Funmilayojummy, I officially welcome u to this thread.. Try and read this story, ayam sure u going to love it

Comrados please come.. we need to discuss something, courtesy by dasilver20

cc: kajsa08, comelyjummy, johnsown1, alamiendagash, wizsolzy, obimgbo, divepen1, ladysuperb, harameede99, yewandequeen, yungtemy, spdazzy, missperfect28, gabbyraze, melekan, zika1, heemah, lecheM, janetessy, donpoker, queenbetsy, kingphilip, ginagold01, xolocious, cerewo, chumzypinky, skillful01, azeequeen, rachealfst, uniqueogo, everton4life, creeza, chizzymaris, pepperoni55, michelle55, queenitee, samyfreshsmoth, yorhmienerd, dannybomb, smizel, gtin, abefe99, fam24, bibijay123, nastynic, jagugu88li, damibiz, gotee11, saraphina, blueflowers, ftosino, kevwelo, spiritman99, latbas, ikombe, souloho19, ritababe, cherrybrown, waluga, atayis, olatex25, odochime, do4luv14, toshiba49ja, nikz, swiz123, engrseries, iamlynn, bukkiminat, asodane, hormobolanle, lankyannie, adesina12.

To be honest dasilver20, u're trying buh ur story look kinda disjointed and disorganized.. Here are the things u need to work on in ur write_up

(1) You need to do away with shorthand typing, it's so annoying and can be additive and it can affect ur literacy work as a writer. So make sure u type sentences and words in full.

(2) Learn to paragraph ur story

(3) Before u post, proof read ur work first

(4) Punctuate accordingly.. I noticed in most of ur posts when u end a sentence with full stop, u start another one with lower case letter(small letter) which is wrong..

dasilver20:
Invite every one on this thread lets have a family meeting

Before i proceed, lemme give u my positive critism

dasilver20:
Na wa o nairalanders what have done to deserve this treatment u guys did not see my updates and not a single soul could ask questions itp so dis couraging obimgbo,redbeans,hadampson,comelyjummy,shurley22,lankyannie its not good o

Am sorry.. i have been busy dat why. So tell me what can i do to make it up to u, my fake wifey?

I don show(cool)
*walks majestically nd sit beside spdazzy* spdazzy dear hwfa, hope u're enjoying urself


obimgbo keep it coming dear, i got this.. btw u r a great author nd i luv all ur work.... #simply following


By the way, thanks 4 d mention

SPDAZZY:
You are welcome dear, though I ran to the blog to read up cos I so love the story and couldn't wait.

Spdazzy dear, what's up? itz bin a long tym o

mercyymai:
nice story that got me glue to my fone for hours....... can't wait for more update.

I know that Dave just want to use amaka becos she is from the village and amaka too no try at all. she shu have take her time before giving in to Dave.

thumb up sis

Lets nur conclude yet.. bcoz he greeted hz ex doesn't mean they r still lovers.. Let wait till marianneada updates the story then we can say whether he iz cheating on amaka or nt

Marianneada, ayam enjoying diz, biko give us more updates

Eniqurl:
This girl gt craze...
Hadampson thanks for the mention.

You are welcome

sunshine46:
I'm so sorry,i've been busy with school work, exams' around the corner... my boo is fine

Okay.. i wish u success in ur oncoming exams.. my regards to him

harameede99:
oya i don show

Welcome dear..

Yewandequeen:
Hadampson don't U know ure meant to always be on standby?

Y me??

Njokunonsochukwu:
Sorry for not posting, School activities got me on Hook..

Hadampson(bring your register)
Chizzymaris
Hormobolanle
Lankyannie
Adesina12
Nastynic
harameede99
micstarboi and the rest..

Harameede99, queenitee, oly23, samyfreshsmooth, dapo97, fam24, cherrybrown, ritababe, everton4life, missperfect28, sunshine46, angelinastto, dannybomb, michelle55, dasilver20.. anoda one

sunshine46:
Thank you Hadampson

You are highly welcome.. where have you been? I mentioned you in almost every story buh no reply.. sirorubebe nko?

hormobolanle:
Lol
broda Wic planet u dy Biko come down to planet earth
Richard Na mama pikin
Mimi Na papa pikin
so dem marry derself Wic der pikin ni o. I kn say dat Yeye hadampson no fit do dat kin tin......

well make I dy observe.............

Hmmm.. Hormobolanle!!! okay sha

hormobolanle:
Abeg wu Elep me c Dtobs I need to yarn am one Tori I hear Biko call am come hadampson........ ur way no pure o

Ogini kwanu

Johnsown1:
Thanks bro,ur welcome onboard. Come to enugu and take ur cakes na

Enugu is too far nah..

Hbd johnsown1.. wish u long life, fame, joy, sound health and prosperity.. sorry that its coming late.. wish u the best in life

btw where is my bday cake

Wow! waow!! wow!!!


I must admit everton4life it worthy of note in the manner and way you have kept this thread going with all the suspense, action and love.. You are 2mussh bro.. abeg give us another update biko kwanu


P.S_ you have just got to find a way to harness that talent of yours.. You have it in you like peak

marianneada:
more updates coming this night.

Okay...

Wow.. interesting More updates please