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congrats on the delivery of a nice story........

this story had so many other possibilities in my mind

congrats on the delivery of a great story........

this story had so many other possibilities in my mind

Tunde is just too dense

now I'm officially scared. Not fair to leave me on this high suspense na Lleigh

this was such a beautiful read. thank you so much bibijay. more ideas to your sound mind.

funmi's not wicked. she's just an extremely naive and abundantly foolish girl.

Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Would have loved to unravel the mystery of this other daughter that inherited Dr Seyi"s wealth though.

thank you Skarlett for your consistency and generous spirit. You truly are a writer worthy of emulation.

poor Seyi.

Mabel is the real VVIP. talk about not showing your cards till you win!!!

thanks for the dedication boo. the updates are so hawt that we jump right in. lol

I thought uncle was a man. What's with d name set?
Good job OP

I'm beginning to understand the title of this story #almost perfect. If the twist you pull is what we're seeing here.............. waiting

this Uche should not try himself ooo

The story gets more intriguing by the day. can't wait for the mysteries to be revealed

thank youuuuuuuuuu

awwwwww. happy birthday Scarlett. God bless you richly today and always.
hope I'm not too late to the party? hottadiva@gmail.com

actor no dey die for film

bibijay123:
Thank u bt pls just comment n cc me instead of quoting a whole update. I am glad i made you laugh n thanks for reading.

my bad. guess it was over excitement. .. .lol. wouldn't do that normally ..


Meanwhile just finished reading this wonderful piece. Kudos OP. you know ur stuff. the ending though did seem unnatural with fast paced events and forced fairytales . But then it's fiction. lemme sleep now for work tomorrow and then digest all your other stories.

Hearty cheers again

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One Christmas day i took a short cut through Olusosun, where the boy I was crushing on lived. He was cute and had a brown skin, it was like he escaped from the grips of albino but he came out with the scars. Anyway I liked him, brown skin, red hair and all. I was all decked out in my red and purple readymade gown and I was rocking my Aba made shoes. My jerry curls was also on point, that very morning I had covered my head with the toilet sponge after smearing globs of gel on my fried hair. The relaxer I used on my hair made it look like the hair of a chick which fell into water. I had to use the toilet sponge because I didn’t know where the one I used I for bathing was. So I took a little mirror and picked my hair out of the tiny holes in the sponge with a needle. I was doing it all for Nathan.


I saw Nathan and his group of smelling boxers friends at the far end of the street, they had bangers in their hands which they lit and threw at young girls passing by. They were having a good laugh out of it. I heard them arguing as I got closer to them.


“I get six sounds, na five sound you give me!” one big headed akpu eating boy said.


“Your father Yansh! What of the seven sounds I give you?”

My crush was dressed in a faded baggy jean with that two phase fifty cent singlet. The net singlet with two colors. Red and Navy blue. Nathan had worn the red phase all through November and he switched to wearing the Navy blue phase in December. He was busy dancing to Yahooze while his friends argued about the missing seven sounds knock out.

I brought out my two shades red and pink rubber eye glasses mom had bought for me, I wore it to compliment my dressing. My palm was sweaty, I was so nervous and the boys had gone quiet. They were giggling while covering their mouth with both hands. Nathan was laughing too. I looked behind me; there was no one behind me, were they laughing at me?

“Ayamataga Your shoe don remove” one of the boys called out.

Lo and behold! Both soles of my shoes were behind me on the ground. I almost died in shame; I picked up both soles and ran down through the valley which leads to my house. My mother was making Moi Moi in the kitchen when I entered the house.

“Tomi! See how dirty you are! Did you roll around on the ground?”


It was then that I noticed the ice cream stains on the gown but it was late for me to care. I flung the useless shoes into the dustbin.


“Don’t buy me these shoes anymore! Why do you keep buying shoes that I wear only once?”



“The sole of these one too removed? Nawa oo……awon Omo Nna are just ripping us off ni o”


“How do you expect them to last when they are just 400 hundred naira?”


“Who told you they are 400 hundred naira? I bought those shoes for N450 naira o! Oya go and remove it from the dustbin, I will gum it for you and you will use it to do New Year”


I walked into my room and banged the door shut. I fumed in my room until I was called for dinner and a crazy thing happened right after dinner.
“I am going to my room Tomi, please go and cover the pot of Moi Moi well, if not rat will eat it.” Mom said before heading to her room.
After watching the re-run of Lorenzo’s wife and sunset set beach I decided to call it a night, thank the good lord I remembered mummy’s words so I went into the kitchen.


I saw a big rat with scalded back trying to get into the moi moi pot, I stood back and watched it get into the pot before I hurriedly got a cover and covered the pot. I was still angry at what happened earlier so I felt I should pour out my anger on the rat. I got another big pot and placed it on the pot cover. The rat was struggling to escape so I got yet another pot which I placed on it .I stood back and watched the pot with satisfaction. Serves him right! The heat from the pot should kill him by morning and I went off to bed.


My mom’s shrieks woke me up the next morning. I jumped happily out of bed thinking the rat was dead if not why was mommy shouting? I also screamed in shock when I saw what the foolish rat had done! It ate all the Moi Moi and escaped. Ha! I don’t know what I was thinking! Who would believe anyone would still be that silly at fourteen?


this was epic! ! had to come comment quickly. had me holding my belly in laughter for real. Good job dear. Would comment again when I've read through the story.[b][quote author=bibijay123 post=48966051]*Continues*



One Christmas day i took a short cut through Olusosun, where the boy I was crushing on lived. He was cute and had a brown skin, it was like he escaped from the grips of albino but he came out with the scars. Anyway I liked him, brown skin, red hair and all. I was all decked out in my red and purple readymade gown and I was rocking my Aba made shoes. My jerry curls was also on point, that very morning I had covered my head with the toilet sponge after smearing globs of gel on my fried hair. The relaxer I used on my hair made it look like the hair of a chick which fell into water. I had to use the toilet sponge because I didn’t know where the one I used I for bathing was. So I took a little mirror and picked my hair out of the tiny holes in the sponge with a needle. I was doing it all for Nathan.


I saw Nathan and his group of smelling boxers friends at the far end of the street, they had bangers in their hands which they lit and threw at young girls passing by. They were having a good laugh out of it. I heard them arguing as I got closer to them.


“I get six sounds, na five sound you give me!” one big headed akpu eating boy said.


“Your father Yansh! What of the seven sounds I give you?”

My crush was dressed in a faded baggy jean with that two phase fifty cent singlet. The net singlet with two colors. Red and Navy blue. Nathan had worn the red phase all through November and he switched to wearing the Navy blue phase in December. He was busy dancing to Yahooze while his friends argued about the missing seven sounds knock out.

I brought out my two shades red and pink rubber eye glasses mom had bought for me, I wore it to compliment my dressing. My palm was sweaty, I was so nervous and the boys had gone quiet. They were giggling while covering their mouth with both hands. Nathan was laughing too. I looked behind me; there was no one behind me, were they laughing at me?

“Ayamataga Your shoe don remove” one of the boys called out.

Lo and behold! Both soles of my shoes were behind me on the ground. I almost died in shame; I picked up both soles and ran down through the valley which leads to my house. My mother was making Moi Moi in the kitchen when I entered the house.

“Tomi! See how dirty you are! Did you roll around on the ground?”


It was then that I noticed the ice cream stains on the gown but it was late for me to care. I flung the useless shoes into the dustbin.


“Don’t buy me these shoes anymore! Why do you keep buying shoes that I wear only once?”



“The sole of these one too removed? Nawa oo……awon Omo Nna are just ripping us off ni o”


“How do you expect them to last when they are just 400 hundred naira?”


“Who told you they are 400 hundred naira? I bought those shoes for N450 naira o! Oya go and remove it from the dustbin, I will gum it for you and you will use it to do New Year”


I walked into my room and banged the door shut. I fumed in my room until I was called for dinner and a crazy thing happened right after dinner.
“I am going to my room Tomi, please go and cover the pot of Moi Moi well, if not rat will eat it.” Mom said before heading to her room.
After watching the re-run of Lorenzo’s wife and sunset set beach I decided to call it a night, thank the good lord I remembered mummy’s words so I went into the kitchen.


I saw a big rat with scalded back trying to get into the moi moi pot, I stood back and watched it get into the pot before I hurriedly got a cover and covered the pot. I was still angry at what happened earlier so I felt I should pour out my anger on the rat. I got another big pot and placed it on the pot cover. The rat was struggling to escape so I got yet another pot which I placed on it .I stood back and watched the pot with satisfaction. Serves him right! The heat from the pot should kill him by morning and I went off to bed.


My mom’s shrieks woke me up the next morning. I jumped happily out of bed thinking the rat was dead if not why was mommy shouting? I also screamed in shock when I saw what the foolish rat had done! It ate all the Moi Moi and escaped. Ha! I don’t know what I was thinking! Who would believe anyone would still be that silly at fourteen?


this was epic! ! had to come comment quickly. had me holding my belly in laughter for real. Good job dear. Would comment again when I've read through the story.[/b][quote author=bibijay123 post=48966051]*Continues*



One Christmas day i took a short cut through Olusosun, where the boy I was crushing on lived. He was cute and had a brown skin, it was like he escaped from the grips of albino but he came out with the scars. Anyway I liked him, brown skin, red hair and all. I was all decked out in my red and purple readymade gown and I was rocking my Aba made shoes. My jerry curls was also on point, that very morning I had covered my head with the toilet sponge after smearing globs of gel on my fried hair. The relaxer I used on my hair made it look like the hair of a chick which fell into water. I had to use the toilet sponge because I didn’t know where the one I used I for bathing was. So I took a little mirror and picked my hair out of the tiny holes in the sponge with a needle. I was doing it all for Nathan.


I saw Nathan and his group of smelling boxers friends at the far end of the street, they had bangers in their hands which they lit and threw at young girls passing by. They were having a good laugh out of it. I heard them arguing as I got closer to them.


“I get six sounds, na five sound you give me!” one big headed akpu eating boy said.


“Your father Yansh! What of the seven sounds I give you?”

My crush was dressed in a faded baggy jean with that two phase fifty cent singlet. The net singlet with two colors. Red and Navy blue. Nathan had worn the red phase all through November and he switched to wearing the Navy blue phase in December. He was busy dancing to Yahooze while his friends argued about the missing seven sounds knock out.

I brought out my two shades red and pink rubber eye glasses mom had bought for me, I wore it to compliment my dressing. My palm was sweaty, I was so nervous and the boys had gone quiet. They were giggling while covering their mouth with both hands. Nathan was laughing too. I looked behind me; there was no one behind me, were they laughing at me?

“Ayamataga Your shoe don remove” one of the boys called out.

Lo and behold! Both soles of my shoes were behind me on the ground. I almost died in shame; I picked up both soles and ran down through the valley which leads to my house. My mother was making Moi Moi in the kitchen when I entered the house.

“Tomi! See how dirty you are! Did you roll around on the ground?”


It was then that I noticed the ice cream stains on the gown but it was late for me to care. I flung the useless shoes into the dustbin.


“Don’t buy me these shoes anymore! Why do you keep buying shoes that I wear only once?”



“The sole of these one too removed? Nawa oo……awon Omo Nna are just ripping us off ni o”


“How do you expect them to last when they are just 400 hundred naira?”


“Who told you they are 400 hundred naira? I bought those shoes for N450 naira o! Oya go and remove it from the dustbin, I will gum it for you and you will use it to do New Year”


I walked into my room and banged the door shut. I fumed in my room until I was called for dinner and a crazy thing happened right after dinner.
“I am going to my room Tomi, please go and cover the pot of Moi Moi well, if not rat will eat it.” Mom said before heading to her room.
After watching the re-run of Lorenzo’s wife and sunset set beach I decided to call it a night, thank the good lord I remembered mummy’s words so I went into the kitchen.


I saw a big rat with scalded back trying to get into the moi moi pot, I stood back and watched it get into the pot before I hurriedly got a cover and covered the pot. I was still angry at what happened earlier so I felt I should pour out my anger on the rat. I got another big pot and placed it on the pot cover. The rat was struggling to escape so I got yet another pot which I placed on it .I stood back and watched the pot with satisfaction. Serves him right! The heat from the pot should kill him by morning and I went off to bed.


My mom’s shrieks woke me up the next morning. I jumped happily out of bed thinking the rat was dead if not why was mommy shouting? I also screamed in shock when I saw what the foolish rat had done! It ate all the Moi Moi and escaped. Ha! I don’t know what I was thinking! Who would believe anyone would still be that silly at fourteen?


this was epic! ! had to come comment quickly. had me holding my belly in laughter for real. Good job dear. Would comment again when I've read through the story.

@ op- intriguing story. exciting plot. I'm subscribing too

Angelsss:
hello good morning, I am sorry I was so mean@ the other comment, truth is, I planned on deleting it before sleeping, but I slept off and someone hungry for gossip picked up on it...
do forgive me, hope we can be friends?
I was just pissed when you said "nl writers", I don't think you've read any of my stories, I update frequently... except for this one and another story which I had my reasons for not updating.

I hope you understand, if you don't then it's totally fine, everybody.
hello good morning, I am sorry I was so mean@ the other comment, truth is, I planned on deleting it before sleeping, but I slept off and someone hungry for gossip picked up on it...
do forgive me, hope we can be friends?
I was just pissed when you said "nl writers", I don't think you've read any of my stories, I update frequently... except for this one and another story which I had my reasons for not updating.

I hope you understand, if you don't then it's totally fine, because I was so mean.

awwww. she apologized already. Me too I take back my temper

Angelsss:
hello good morning, I am sorry I was so mean@ the other comment, truth is, I planned on deleting it before sleeping, but I slept off and someone hungry for gossip picked up on it...
do forgive me, hope we can be friends?
I was just pissed when you said "nl writers", I don't think you've read any of my stories, I update frequently... except for this one and another story which I had my reasons for not updating.

I hope you understand, if you don't then it's totally fine, everybody.
hello good morning, I am sorry I was so mean@ the other comment, truth is, I planned on deleting it before sleeping, but I slept off and someone hungry for gossip picked up on it...
do forgive me, hope we can be friends?
I was just pissed when you said "nl writers", I don't think you've read any of my stories, I update frequently... except for this one and another story which I had my reasons for not updating.

I hope you understand, if you don't then it's totally fine, because I was so mean.

awwww. she apologized already. Me too I take back my temper

Angelsss:
hello good morning, I am sorry I was so mean@ the other comment, truth is, I planned on deleting it before sleeping, but I slept off and someone hungry for gossip picked up on it...
do forgive me, hope we can be friends?
I was just pissed when you said "nl writers", I don't think you've read any of my stories, I update frequently... except for this one and another story which I had my reasons for not updating.

I hope you understand, if you don't then it's totally fine, everybody.
hello good morning, I am sorry I was so mean@ the other comment, truth is, I planned on deleting it before sleeping, but I slept off and someone hungry for gossip picked up on it...
do forgive me, hope we can be friends?
I was just pissed when you said "nl writers", I don't think you've read any of my stories, I update frequently... except for this one and another story which I had my reasons for not updating.

I hope you understand, if you don't then it's totally fine, because I was so mean.

awwww. she apologized already. Me too I take back my temper

Angelsss:
hello good morning, I am sorry I was so mean@ the other comment, truth is, I planned on deleting it before sleeping, but I slept off and someone hungry for gossip picked up on it...
do forgive me, hope we can be friends?
I was just pissed when you said "nl writers", I don't think you've read any of my stories, I update frequently... except for this one and another story which I had my reasons for not updating.

I hope you understand, if you don't then it's totally fine, everybody.
hello good morning, I am sorry I was so mean@ the other comment, truth is, I planned on deleting it before sleeping, but I slept off and someone hungry for gossip picked up on it...
do forgive me, hope we can be friends?
I was just pissed when you said "nl writers", I don't think you've read any of my stories, I update frequently... except for this one and another story which I had my reasons for not updating.

I hope you understand, if you don't then it's totally fine, because I was so mean.

awwww. she apologized already. Me too I take back my temper

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Small madam! hottadiva thank you, you wey no get issue. , you wey your head correct thank you o, the only madam with integrity, I thank u o.Hottadiva with better attitude, thank you.
so that's the only thing your eyes could spot in this thread abi, you better repent from "Amebo" lifestyle, painting me black won't do you good and hey
go check out my pix, AM ALREADY DARK!!!!![/quote]Trolololool. At least your sense of humour won't depart.
I know you'll think of what I said my big madam. Cheers

Angelsss:
nobody forced u to read...

madam Angel, you do have some issues. You that I've seen would take this as an insult but trust me, your attitude is not it at all. Hope you achieve what you want to with your stories though..... A writer's long living asset is integrity!!