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I'm finally caught up and recovering from Lucan's 'kponjaing' as Ishilove put it!

I think Efemena did a good job directing the tone of the plot by introducing the Avengers. I did't think Oahray could write well but he did manage to keep me interested. Ishi did a good job of course, I expected her to follow on the Avengers angle and she did nicely. Frosti, Mazi, HBG, uniquexty I loved your twists, I don't know what else to say.

I get why Mynd introduced the lesbian officer, I only wish it was done earlier. That would have channeled the story better cos in actuality, common policemen would not be leading such an investigation relating to a serial killer.

When you guys actually publish this, please edit all that medical jargons out abeg cos I suffered reading thru that but I appreciate the effort that went into the research.

I hope this is the last round cos I want this see the end of this

I have been so disoriented of late and can't keep up with my reading but I'm earmarking this thread for the nearest future. I swear on chocolate fudge cookies!