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TV/Movies / Re: h by Ikamenze(m): 8:03pm On Oct 20, 2012 |
I have story by Robert Mckee....somebody actually sent it to me some weeks back...I haven't started reading it tho.. |
TV/Movies / Re: h by Ikamenze(m): 7:23pm On Oct 20, 2012 |
Honestly,this has been kind of a wake up call for me cos everything you wrote,I ALREADY KNOW....I guess somewhere along the line I got too concerntrated on d little things (like great dialogue which is also good by the way) and lost sight of the big picture...... For this particular screenplay, I got too attached with it (I do dat with all my work)...and dig dis,do you know I didn't even ON THE PAGINATION function on my Celtx app when I was writing it....that's why I was shocked wen u told me it was 177pages....I just kept on writing n writing and well I think it is a delight to read in terms of dialogue but to watch,not so much.....You know I've bn doing dis for almost two years now and at dis point I thought I had it all figured out,I WAS SO WRONG... After reading through your comments these last two days,I have downloaded over a dozen screenplays/ebooks in PDF formats into my computer...simply put,I'm going back to basics,its 2010 for me again... Villageboi..I can't thank you enough for waking me up,for reminding me dat I'm still a rookie..Thank you,Thank you,Thank you... Hopefully before the end of the month I will make another post,I'm thinking a short screenplay (as in short film script)...I will try and incorporate all I ll be learning dis week into it and you will tell me what you think okay...Peace. |
TV/Movies / Re: h by Ikamenze(m): 7:22pm On Oct 20, 2012 |
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TV/Movies / Re: h by Ikamenze(m): 12:16am On Oct 20, 2012 |
Briareos: This thread is getting hot! Yeah but make e nor too hot sha.....I don't want it to make front page pls... |
Music/Radio / Re: Lessons To Learn From Tonto Dikeh’s Music Adventure by Ikamenze(m): 3:44pm On Oct 19, 2012 |
okpara ugo: I will soon release my own song. Am looking for a good producer. Oh I'm so happy for you...u should be so proud of yourself.I know your mother will be too....First to comment,mehn dats something.....I'm impressed,I really am.. Mumu people dat just can't help demselves....I tot dis trend died sometime ago,I c u people want to bring it back again.....Oya go n cash d money wey dey put for your account because u b d first to comment...Mshewww |
Music/Radio / Re: Charles Novia's Critique Of Tonto Dike's Song by Ikamenze(m): 4:24pm On Oct 18, 2012 |
Pain: Tonto's Terrible Tremolo by Charles Novia. Simply put Charles,Its pay back time biatchh....lmao. But serzly tho..dis guy has bn talking too much lately.... It just isn't rite to publicly diss ur collegues or whatever they call demselves...it's kinda immature. Everybody knows d song was poo,u re not exactly saying anytin new sir. |
Celebrities / Re: Michelle Obama Vs Ann Romney: Who's Your Pick? by Ikamenze(m): 3:41pm On Oct 18, 2012 |
La Parisienne: Michelle is a very very smart woman. But I don't find her attractive U shouldn't...cos dat would have been weird...unless of course u play for d oda team...do u? |
TV/Movies / Re: h by Ikamenze(m): 3:13pm On Oct 18, 2012 |
VillageBoi: Oh I'm sorry... IT'S SO FREAKING AMAZING!!!! Even though dis got beta at the constructive yabbings part,I still felt a very strong desire to go HAM on you,I wanted to tell you how you are not one to talk since dat SWEET SIXTEEN short u did is d sillest thing I've seen in a while,I wanted to even go personal n start insulting ur looks n everything but I won't...I won't because I have a feeling dat you've bn here before (at d receiving end of d yabbing)....I won't because I know even d best brains in d game (filmmaking) have received bashing from critics at some point in their career,so I guess instead of trying to justify wot I've written,I should just get used to it now dat its still early in my career...But I will however address some of the things you wrote one after the other. First of all,I never said I was beta than anybody,if I was,I won't be putting out my work for you people to critic now would I? And we both know how those nollywood people steal oda people's work without giving d owners proper credit so I have no apologises for that. I told u about my background only so you will see that I learnt this shit on my own,I'm no professional and I don't claim to be. Adam n Eve is nowhere near my best work,dis is actually the second script I wrote n to be honest,I knew d it was flawed from the start,d dialogues were abnornally long n d scenes just dragged on forever but in my defence,I literally had to build d story from stratch,I didn't have much to work with but I just knew its something I had to write and it really is a good story,a simple one but good nonetheless.....bottomline is,dis is nowhere close to my best work,if it was,I wouldn't post it on d most popular forum in d country for everybody to read.... I don't think its proper to call just 3 links an ADVERT...I didn't even leave d Entertainment section.... I admit I did it out of desperation,I tot nobody was reading afterall d main reason for putting it up n in d first place was to get feed back but apparently I was wrong,YOU WERE READING....u read d part were I wrote dat dis was actually my first time posting/commenting on nairaland ryt? I'm not fully abreat with the way things work around here but lesson learnt. You really think I would go as far as to change my Name so I could do.....whatever u wrote there.....I simply MODIFIED the topic n changed d file from just one scene to what's there ryt now...dats all. Dude..I've got no problem with you,maybe yabbing someone is your own way of encouragement..Its cool but in d future,just tone it down alil bit.... I really do appreciate your comments..I do...if anytin,you've made me wanna be an even better writer so thank you.. I await d oda part of ur constructive yabbings.......Or better still just chill till afta u read d whole tin (I know you will) I will be posting it on sunday.. |
TV/Movies / Re: h by Ikamenze(m): 8:39pm On Oct 17, 2012 |
VillageBoi: Just like little 15yr old George tells the woman on page 7 "Seriously??" Me sef go ask you - SERIOUSLY?? Thanks for reading the 7 pages villageboi n thnx for d criticism....U too much.. I know George bn d very first guy she meets seems alil plausible but its a small neighbourhood and everybody knows everybody plus.....u know what,there's no but..u re absolutely right n I ll definitely look into it (even thou it is a work of fiction n I have actually seen worse in nollywood) As for d “talking heads” part,sori but what exactly were u expecting to see? Talking Anuses? Did I state at any point it was an action film? D whole story is driven by d dialogue... 117 pages?? Really....I honestly didn't know it was dat much..and Yes,dis is no where near d middle of d story.. Villageboi..I think its only fair u know alil about my background...I'm a student studying Accountancy...I have absolutely no training whatsoever in film/scriptwriting....I'm just a guy who's in love with film making (scriptwriting in particular)..Its d passion dats has been my driving force n nothing more (did u c d price tag on dat thing)...Now maybe at d end I will do dis professionally,maybe I won't either ways..I'M GONNA KEEP ON WRITING..... I've bn on nairaland a long time and this is d first time I'm actually posting something...believe me,dis wasn't an easy decision to make because I know how d people on dis site are but still I went through with it and I've got no regrets..none at all. There's a huge difference between constructive criticism and insult my friend.. P.S..The story really does get better....AND I've seen some of ur work,no offence but you re not exactly d sharpest nail in the box if u know what I mean... Thanks again... |
Music/Radio / Re: Tonto Dike - Hi & Itz Ova by Ikamenze(m): 3:21pm On Oct 17, 2012 |
Mad Cow: MY GAWD..... Lmao...... 2 Likes |
Literature / Re: The burning cold by Ikamenze(m): 3:12pm On Oct 17, 2012 |
Mynd_44: Okay...nor vex,dis is actually my first topic so I'm still a rookie so forgive me.....That said,did u check it out? U like? |
Literature / Re: The burning cold by Ikamenze(m): 2:57pm On Oct 17, 2012 |
Mynd_44: It's working isn't it? |
TV/Movies / Re: Amaka Igwe Announces Launch Of QTV by Ikamenze(m): 12:49pm On Oct 17, 2012 |
TV/Movies / Re: Grammatical Errors (Gbagauns) Of Nollywood by Ikamenze(m): 11:55am On Oct 17, 2012 |
Celebrities / Re: International Celebs Of Nigerian Descent by Ikamenze(m): 11:51am On Oct 17, 2012 |
Literature / Re: The burning cold by Ikamenze(m): 11:42am On Oct 17, 2012 |
Celebrities / Re: A Picture Of Ice-prince With Gun by Ikamenze(m): 11:26am On Oct 17, 2012 |
TV/Movies / Re: h by Ikamenze(m): 8:11pm On Oct 16, 2012 |
It's a Text document so it might not open if you are using a mobile device unless you save it first... |
TV/Movies / h by Ikamenze(m): 7:41pm On Oct 16, 2012 |
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