[quote author=Bennywrites5 post=71635256]We entered a long hallway, it was long and curved. We walked for about two minutes before we got to the door. She first slotted a card, then she used her fingerprint on the small screen. She then typed a long password very fast like she was hiding it from me. After all my knowledge she thinks I'm that dumb, even though she tried I saw the password clearly and it was "projectberries". Then the buzzer sounded before the thick door opened and we went inside. It was a wide hall, without chairs or any furniture of any kind. The hall was so cold that I thought I would freeze immediately. I met some soldiers and an older woman there. "Is this the project?" The older woman asked. "Yes ma" the beautiful lady answered. I kept looking at the both of them wondering who they were describing as a project or maybe they needed me to do a project before I get admitted to the institution, well I was ready if that was the case but the voice of the older woman interrupted my thoughts as I heard her say "boys do the needful" before I could say Jack Robinson the soldiers rushed at me and started beating me mercilessly. They tore my clothes scattered all my documents, took my phones from me. The women just kept staring at me with smiles on their faces. All that could be heard from the room was my scream of anguish and the sound of the slaps and blows being dealt to me till I couldn't see anything anymore.


I woke up naked on the bare floor. The hall had suddenly become so hot that the floor burned my skin a little. I couldn't even stand as the pains of the beating was still present in my body. I managed to sit and looked around. I was the only one in the room. My clothes, bags were no were to be found. I went to the door and knocked but no one answered me. I banged the door harder and even shouted but got no answer. After trying for about twenty minutes without answer, I sat down and started crying. What did I do to deserve this, but this was not the institution, I'm sure it was planned by that suspicious driver who was telling me trash in the car because I know Mama wouldn't approve this on me. I thought about my life from the orphanage, Belinda, Mama, Mrs Smith down to my current situation. There was nothing in this room except the small bulb that lit the hall. After sometime a portion of the door opened and a plate and a bottle of water was kept on the floor inside the hall and the door closed immediately. With the little strength I had, I ran to the door and banged it, I shouted but when I was tired, I started begging the person. After trying and no response, I sat down and opened the plate to find two slices of bread and little salad. It was so small that even a dog couldn't get filled up with it. I contemplated if I should eat out of it because it might be poisoned but I was already a dead man walking so this food won't make a difference. I devoured the food and the water in record breaking time 7 seconds. It was as if they had cameras watching me because immediately I finished the food and kept it on the floor, the buzzer sounded and the door opened. A white man came inside the hall and the door automatically locked after him. "Hey boy! On your feet!" He shouted at me, even though I had no strength, the sound and thick timbre of his voice made me jump to my feet. "Call me Blue. For the next 21 days I am in charge of you, your food, body, and well being, I am going to train you, all you have to do is obey eveyword I say. Now there is only one rule which is; don't talk or ask any questions" he told me. I just kept staring at him oblivious of the fact that he was asking "is that clear"?. His hard palms on my cheeks brought me back to my senses as I didn't even know when I shouted "Yes sir" and then started crying again.......


Within the next twenty one days I had learned how to assemble any type of weapon and even mastered the skill to use it, my body had also improved as I had intensive 6 hours gym session with him. I had also learnt different things like surviving for days with just water,little food and sleep, holding my breath under water for minutes, mastering physical combat, and manipulation. I have to say, Blue was a great teacher,he taught me everything he knew or so I thought. On the final day, he me that he will be travelling and his part has been settled, he then whispered to me something that changed my life forever "If you want to escape , use your light" he said in a way that I had to literally put my ears in his mouth for me to hear him. When he was done for the day he left me without any emotion, it was the last time I was going to be seeing him, I felt so sad because he was my only companion in this hell hole that I was. When he left I kept thinking what he meant by use my light, for all I know, I had no light, only darkness, the hall was always dark except for the bulb in it. Yes the bulb, it was the only light I could think of but still it was just a bulb so there was nothing special there. I looked at the bulb again and looked around the room, there was no light except from the bulb, I removed it and looked at it closely, it was just an ordinary bulb, I put it back in its place. I looked around again but there was no light, I went to the bulb again and removed it but this time I felt something when I carried it. I shook it and heard a sound, aren't bulbs supposed to be light and empty? Something pushed me and I smashed the bulb on the floor, it made so much noise and echo that I thought they were going to open the door and run inside to punish me but after I waited for sometime, there was nothing like that. I searched around and I saw a small paper that was inside the bulb, the paper had some words which read "underneath the light lies your panacea" mehn what was it with this riddles? I asked myself in anger. I sat down again and started thinking what was underneath the light, could it be the floor, it was tiled from corner to corner. I looked at the floor again and started kicking the exact place that was under the bulb and behold after just two trials it broke open and I saw something that was so unimaginable.......


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In Murky Waters
By
Kayode Odusanya

© 2018 Kayode Odusanya


The girl coughed a few times, and Frank turned around to look at her, naked under the sheets. Her bronze complexion shone under the white lights of the room; slim waist, wide hips, and big round butt. She told him she was 24, and when he told her his age, she didn’t even flinch. It was a rule of his never to go below 25, but with this girl, he had to make the exception. Apart from having a great body, her personality was so appealing to him. She reminded him of his ex wife earlier on in their relationship.
Never had he thought he and Esther wouldn’t work. They had been so much in love for years, but things changed after the marriage, and Esther’s family members started getting in her ear. It had gotten worse when Frank had started losing weight all of a sudden, and rumors started making rounds that he had gotten infected with the deadly virus. He had gone from having a 6 ft 2 athletic body, to an unattractive lanky stature that clothes looked horrible on. Esther didn’t care at first, but the freaking bloggers wouldn’t let the story die. People around her started asking about it was all the time, and she ended up losing her banking job over it.


Money from his writing wasn’t coming in abundantly at the time, and things got pretty hard. Esther finally decided to go for a test, and when she found out she was negative, she left him; five years of marriage gone. They didn’t even have a kid together. Even when he finally went for a full medical checkup and found out he was also negative, and that he had lost all that weight because he was diabetic, she still didn’t want him back. He wouldn’t say he was a saint either, as he had had a couple of girls on the side at the peak of his career. Now, he was 41, 4 years after the divorce, and he still hadn’t found love again.


A flash of bright light from the Plasma TV on the wall caught his eye; he robbed his nose bridge a few times and Put his glasses back in place as he focused on the TV. There was news about a terror attack in Paris. A couple of Arabs had gone on a crazy rampage, stabbing and killing multiple people in a park, before they were gunned down by the police. He wondered how the family members of the victims would feel knowing their loved ones had lost their lives. Why do innocent people always have to die this way? He thought to himself.


The girl turned around, and without opening her eyes, she found his arm and put it over her body, making him resume the spooning position. He moved in closer, holding her tightly. She moaned silently and went back to sleep. After his divorce, he had sworn not to ever fall in love again. He didn’t ever want to put another woman through what he put Esther through, so he lived a solitary life, and paid for sex whenever he needed to. Tomorrow morning, the girl in front of him would be gone, and maybe he would never see her again. He felt it was best that way; no one gets hurt, and everyone leaves happy, no strings attached. The way he looked at it, he always got inspired to write a new novel with every new girl he got with, so at least he got something out of his philandering ways.


His phone started to vibrate on the side stool by the bed on his side, and he quickly turned around to get it, not wanting to disturb the girl’s sleep. He scratched his beard as he stared at the caller ID, wondering why his agent would be calling him this late. He sat up in bed before picking. “Hello.” He said into the phone as he sat up in bed.” He said with a low voice.
“I knew you would be awake.” The person on the other end said.
“Why are you calling me this late? It’s…” He was saying then stopped to look at his wristwatch.
“I have a job for you, and you need to get here ASAP!”
“What are you talking about? Where is here?”
“Are you at home?”
“No. I’m…I’m somewhere on the island.”
“Perfect. Please come right now to Federal Palace hotel. Someone wants to meet you.”
“Who?”
“Fatai Mohammed.”
“I don’t know who that is.”
“Fatai Lion.”
“What tha…” Frank was saying and lowered his voice before continuing with, “Why does he want to meet me?”
“He wants you to write his biography.”
“What? Can’t you get him someone else to do that?”
“Frank, I can’t tell him no. Just get here as soon as you can.” His agent said and the line went dead.

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Nice storyline, keep it up sis

Bennywrites5:
On a normal day I wouldn't bother to introduce myself but for the purpose of this story I would give you a brief introduction. I'm Rex and it's safe to say that I'm a ladies man. I mean I'm tall, spotlessly fair (they said I escaped albinism though), well built, and dangerous. Don't worry you would understand the dangerous part later on. I was dumped in an orphanage when I was quite young. I grew up moving from one orphanage to the other because they said I was possessed by the spirit of women and sex. I mean its not my fault that all the girls and even women in the orphanage took advantage of a young boy like me but whenever they caught us they would always say Rexford is at it again this time he was caught with two girls. It all started one day when I and Belinda my only true friend in the orphanage slept in the same room and Belinda innocently rested her body on mine while we were asleep but then a lady who usually took care of our food came in and saw us, she told me to stand and exclaimed in shock when she saw my trousers had expanded. She then called me to her private room and started performing different things I cannot mention here. Soon enough she told the rest of her colleagues and they started passing me around like a ball. It was awkward to me at first but soon enough I began to enjoy it. The attention was good I got extra food and meat which I always secretly shared with Belinda. It was safe to say I loved Belinda with my heart and she was the only one that truly cared for me even though we were young, sometimes I would promise her that I would run away, make money then come and marry her, she was my best friend and confidante. Everything changed when a lady who was in her thirties came to adopt me against the wishes of the owners of the orphanage home, there was nothing they didn't say about me, even things I didn't have any idea of. I smoked, I drank, I womanised, I was rude, arrogant etc but man proposes God disposes. The woman was hell bent on taking me along with her. I was so sad when everything was finalised. I wished I could take Belinda along. On the day I was to go, I searched for her and found her crying in the kitchen, I went there and hugged her. "Promise me you'll never forget me" she said in tears. "I promise" I said in tears also. She kissed me for a long time before I left her and followed my new guardian.

"The house they took me too was the kind of house I and Belinda used to see in magazines in the orphanage. It was a three storey mansion located at one of the choicest estate in lagos. The lady showed me a room and gave me some new clothes, ,"freshen up and come down immediately" she said and walked away. I went to the bathroom and had difficulty in regulating the temperature, I had to manage the hot water like that. When I was done freshening up, I went down to meet the lady who has changed her clothes to a nightgown. Then she asked me some series of quick questions. It went like this; name- Rex, Age- 15, state-I don't know ma, class-ss2 etc. She then told me from today your name is Brian Rex Johnson. You are from Lagos state lekki to be precise and you will travel abroad next month to continue your education. You will address me as Mama" She said as she walked away. These events were what shaped me into what I am today. Well, relax and sit tight for the story of my life.....

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