@Marrianneada tnks for thrilling us wit dis gr8 piece. ur wrk is highly appreciated. one fact dat never ceases to amaze me is dat female writters on NL always stress hw easy it is for ladies to betray dia best friend or siz.

i woke up in a vry dark envr and d air was stale . i moved my hands only to discover am in a comfined envr wic luked lyk a box, and all of a sudden i began to hear strange voices, one of d voices said, ''can he make it out of dis grave to d world of d living''？at dat moment, i felt things creeping all over me. i tried to stand up but dit my head on d roof of d box housing me.no！ somebody help！pls somebody help me, i cried and to my horor d voices roke into wailing. i blinked my eyes to see if i was dreaming but no dis is reality.the creeping objecst suddenly increased in large number and they began to bite and chew my flesh, i cried out in pains, twist and turn and begged for help but none is coming.

tnk u @kimberlywest for putting 2gether dis interestin piece of wrk. i pray for more inspiration, and may ur fingers recieve d strenght to keep on typing.


lyk Kc and Nates, i used to boast d@ i can neva fall in love with any girl. but in my 500L i met a girl whom i helplessly fall in luv with. i tried to restrain myself but d more i was bn yeyerised by luv. nyz story, patiently waiting for more updates

shout out to aunty chumzypinky for doing a grt job... u ar d Real deal！red dis story from pg1 nd i am realy thrilled. had to create an acct to enable me commend u. hmmm, pls say me high 2 our nairaland twins. trust dey ar doin grt


Dike is not an ideal family man, he placed his job over his family wic is wrong. pls help tell ur pen to tell him（Dike）it shuld b #FamilyOverEverything# tho he might soon realised dis wen Shiv finally capture his hrt

Dora pls calm down and stop fighting over a lost cause, it is obvious dat ur era is gone so jst quietly retire to d bkgrnd afta all non of d other wives displayed such envy 2wrds u wen Dike gave u evrytin u desired.

Shiv... u broke up wit choudary in a very brutal manner. u ar too trusting. dont knw if it is d few yrs u spent away from home dat cuased it.not to worry Dora will soon teach u wot rilvary is in a polygamous home.


Mia, sory for all fate（aunty chumzy's pen）made u go tru. it is not easy to forgiv o, but if u can forgiv nd let go, i tink u may hav a hpy ending. ignorance is not an excuse for commiting incest, u and Dike need to undergo a spiritual cleansin to avoid incuring d wrath of d gods.


chinny baby my best character... will neva see d truth nd luk d oda way. i liked her b/c am an introvert who needs a charter box to keep my home lively, lolz.

will comment on d odas letter. once again tnku so so much for making out tym to entertain us. may ink neva lack from ur pen and may ur fingers neva go numb from typing...

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kelvin wass scared of claire's rxn if she found out w@ he did to her siz, and amara bn aware of dat fact used it as her means of getting a feel of kelvins johnthomas. any sane lady coming out of an emotional hrtbrk amd rape will hate all men at d@ moment and will not b desperate to jump into any relationship b/c she will assume all men are thesame.

Michael and amara can neva b satisfied wit just dating an individual.they are plagued with a wild lustful desire wic may neva b filled.

tnks @ pamelB 4 d update.



In lyf it is easier to apportion blame than to rebuke with love. d@ is d more eason y most of our contribution is filled with sentiment.

@ romanticnovella, u did a sound analysis of d story dishing out blames to whom u tink is worth it But u forgot 2 note dat it was amaras' ex dat broke her heart and not kelvin. tho kelvin treated her lyk a LovePeddler but it was clearly stated in d story d@ she enjoyed d act with kelvin. blaming kelvin for turnin amara into a beast is wrong.

Kelvin was wrong for not involving chief（kelvins dad）when he failed to reconcile claire and michael.


i tink Getrude didnt report d rape incident to claire immediately b/c d tot d news may damage d trust btw d couple and she wouldn't want 2 be held resposible for tearing claire and micheal apart and so she had to device a more careful pla of leaving dia home.

special tnks to all d great writers on nairaland...i must say d@ ur creativity is quiet outstanding nd ur stories can compete vry well withthose of d best scriptwriters in noolywood.


It is so unfortunate d@ Michael Njama lost claire.more unfortunate is the fact d@ he is not under d influence of a spell by any of d women he is frolickin wit.michael is sufferin from selfishness and immaturity.

Amara is a looser and will always b a looser b/c she will neva stop afflictind her soul with d lie d@ Michael is her man.

Claire...true defination of a wife material, simple, hardworking, loving, forgivng and humble. she met d true soulmate in Phil

Kelvin...i think has finally found a true love in Getrude. he is gonno enjoy a peceful home unlike michael

michael's ex-secretary...hmmm, no sin will go unpurnished even wen u repent, u will still suffer but d purnishment will drive ur desires to knw Christ d more. i pray u truely repent.

tnks @pamelb for ur excellent writeup, lukin forward to more interesting updates.