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EPISODE 12





TO BE CONTINUED...

oluwashedy:
How long are gonna wait 4 d package u said u av 4 us?

The package is not an update, but a gift I wanna throw to my noble fans...

Just Keep It Locked...

obstead200:
Haba!!!!!!!!!!
No update yet?? I know update comes once a week but I tot my kingzpen will give us a sallah gift by updating today. Chai!!!

Kingzpen, what are u doing in kmj's TCA when u'v got a story to complete and fans to satisfy ehn??

Abeg try give us a small sallah present

I'm so sorry Friend... I have no excuse... Update dropping now... I'm so sorry once again...

kayemjay:
Excuse me ma. Did u miss the part where I said I have already begun typing? You are the least person I expect to make such a comment.

No wahala sha.

If this month pass, and I no finish this story make everybody unfollow me.

Oga Boss, it hasn't come to that... I understand and certainly could feel how some of our fans feel when we don't keep to our words... Yes, I do... We shouldn't see these pressure from them as critique but as an encouragement that you possess what they want... Anytime I stumble on my thread and see any grumbling at all, I utter, "thank you Jesus for this gift." Afterwards, I go into the lab to write...

You have it in you... That's absolutely correct, no doubt... Time? There isn't enough... That also is correct... But, when your word comes into play, and at the end it fails, that's where the issue is...

Man will only plan, but the only Supreme God is the one who could make it happen... That is, never throw your cap over the tall wall when you ain't tough enough to go get it... All I'm saying is, just do your thing without making any promise...

Write because you wanna, then you will find writing fun and fulfilling... But, if you write cos you wanna beat time or please someone, then you will find it tedious and frustrating...

I Love Your Work And Zeal... I also love your Pride... And I most of all Love You (No Homo)...


Still You Write Boss...
Still I Follow...

Flakkydagirl:
Nice nice story..
Oh mi God...
D̶̲̥̅̊ɪ̣̝̇s˚˚˚° is getting more interesting...


Please get well soon dearie..
Xoxo love boss me





Kingzpen..boss of life,i sight you o.

Boss of what?

Pls don't let them ban me Oooo...

You be ma Oga madam Oooo...

I remain loyal...

princesssusan:
Thatz very kind n considerate of you, first n foremost who is d most dearest person in ur lyf, n who is (are) ur mentor(s), last but not d least in ur own perception what do u understand by been born again? Tnx alot

1. For now, my mum...
2. John Grisham and Chimamanda Adichie
3. I can talk on that like forever... My sole view about born again, is a change of heart... A heart ruled by LOVE. LOVE, I mean agape kinda love; brotherly love...

princesssusan:
Eeeyah i missed d question time

You can ask your question Dear...

Wooooooooow... Eyah, my fans and friends are nowhere to be found...

Crying!!!

I'm sincerely sorry for my absence for days now... It was due to unforseen events dah came up during this past week...

I have you all in mind. And most importantly, I have a package for my noble fans... Just watch out for it...


Would get to work asap to feed you guyz...


Love You All...


Keep It Locked...

ESIXLOVE:
Öga Kingzpen i dey see you ö,

Carry On Boss... Can't help but learn from your table...

HOW TO MAKE PEOPLE LOVE OR HATE YOUR CHARACTERS

I would outline my view of the above topic under seven points:

1. Make your characters exceptional at something.
This alone could drive the love of your readers towards these characters. Or perhaps, arouse the jealousy in your reader towards them. Example is a CEO of a noble company who has everything she wants at the snap of her fingers, but still takes time to cook her meal.
2. Make your characters care about someone/something.
This is another way of making your readers love or hate your characters. Their excessive care for something, at the detriment of another, can either make your readers love him or wish they punch them in reality. Example is a boy who left the school premises, thirty minutes before his final examination paper, to check on his sick mother in the hospital.
3. Make your good characters do bad things and your bad characters do good things.
4. Give your characters a unique voice.
All your characters shouldn't sound same. As we are all characters in this world, some can’t speak broken-English while some can’t even speak English save it’s broken and some can mix both in a single sentence.
5. Give your characters something to be passionate about.
Passionate people are interesting. That’s just it, they just are. Their passion points their weaknesses and power points as the story unfolds which could either attract them to the readers or otherwise.
6. Know what your characters fears.
Ones you point out their fears to the readers, make them face it. Thereof, the result is fun.
7. Bring up their past.
How your characters handle their past tells a whole lot about them. This can hereby make your reader want to hug them or slap them as the case may be.

Bonus Point: As some writers do, they save their characters from dying or protect them from passing through hell. It’s a no no. Impose them to pain and reveal their strength to your readers. Don’t over-protect them. Let them die if they have to, then raise up another.

Bonus Bonus Point: Too many characters isn't good. Try working with few at the beginning of your story. And most importantly, there are some characters you don’t have to create or even emphasis on. Little description would just do.


My Lil Cents...

Thank You...


Got these ideas from MenWithPens.ca

Niwdog: As a military man,where are you currently serving?is there a woman in ur life?if you were asked to date one actress in the nollywood,who would that be??what is your real name??

I serve at 2Mech Div Ibadan...
I'm single and happy...
I'd like to date Mide Martins(a Yoruba actress, guess you know her)...
My real name is Israel...

Ride On Boss... Enjoy the story...

Keep The Flag Flying...

Following...

Lakeshizu: Ok any question?
When is the next update?

Lmaooooooooo...

To be candid, I'm repairing a system now. The very moment I finish, I will enter the kitchen and cook up something delicious.

Hopefully before the day runs out.

Cashio: owk...how old are u...wen did u graduate from school....what do u do for a living now....how did u come about the inspiration to write.//

I'm 25...
I finished this year, B.Sc Computer Science
I am a military personnel.
I really don't know if I was actually inspired to write. I just write. I have been writing back in secondary school, JSS 3. I just love it. But music and documentaries play a lot on me when it comes to inspiration to write.

princesssusan: Is it general question or basically abt diz story?

General... Anything you wanna know about me...

Onemansquad: "ogirikpakpa" chai dix kingzpen man funny

Lmaoooooooo... Don't mind me...

Niwdog: I got lost at the first to 5th paragraph of ur last update,but thanks to ur writing skills that put me to the right direction.so dede one day is a twin?i hope his twin brother is swimming in money

Loooool... I was confused myself till I figured out... *winks*

Swimming in money? Lips sealed!

Keep It Locked...

Super Thursday

I'm gonna entertain any question you'd like to ask me...

Just roll it in and amma answer you...

Love You Guyz...

EPISODE 11







TO BE CONTINUED...

Tuntheycr7:

So yu don get anoda story running ?
So yu can't even notify us
Na so life b sha.. Forget old friends and shining ya with new ones ...

Yaaaaay, Tunde where on earth have you been?
Not seen u around dahz y na... Perhaps, you are never forgotten...

Missed Ya Oooo...

Anyways, come onboard on my new thread...

You're most welcome...

leonard509: Thumbzup kingspen. you are great!

Thankz Bro... You are sure great too...

Do join me on my ongoing story, 'On The Run.' The link to it is : https://www.nairaland.com/1860069/run-blockbuster-series

God Bless You Much...

plumule: na true life story be this abi na fiction

Purely fiction...

Emperorjames: @kingzpen u are too good in writing. Just look at how u took the story to it's climax: when u slapped ya roommate and he tried to retaliate by coming to ya friends rum to fight u, that brought the hardship on the lead character Banji. Kudos to u.

Comments like this always pricks me to write more, and even more better...

Thankz so much for dropping by...

Do join me on my ongoing story, 'On The Run.' The link to it is : https://www.nairaland.com/1860069/run-blockbuster-series

It promise to be awesome...

God Bless You Loadz...

Babycharaoku: Hmmm...you really know how to keep one in suspense, and am like
Your story really got me going....I can't think of something else to read untill i finish this one.
Thanks..please keep it up!

Wooooow... Now, my head is really really swelling...

Thankz so much for reading... Glad you enjoyed every bit of it...


God Bless You...

Join me on my current story, 'On The Run.' The link to it is : https://www.nairaland.com/1860069/run-blockbuster-series

It promise to be amazing...

Cashio: does this worth the wait?

oh yes i think it does

You added a little suspense in your comment O, 50:50.

Glad you didn't break my heart... Loooooool...

Thank God you did enjoy it...

Keep Following...

God Bless You...

Onemansquad: haba king of suspense ah hail oo wetn dy shele na u don use style 4gt us ba
#chai i jst dy laf tru out dat salewa nd ireti part..hw i wish she jst sneeze her own 4 don enta 1 chance

I can never and I will never forget my lovely fans, not even fans like you...

I laughed as well when I was proof-reading the episode... Loooooooool...

Keep It Locked...


Updating soon...


God Bless You...

codedbaby: Kingzpen am yearning for moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. pls more strength to u

CodedBaby, I'm in the kitchen cooooooooooooooooking... Looooooool...

I should drop another update soon...

Keep it locked...


God Bless You Dearie...

Promzone: I've read coupe of ur stories kingzpen.......
and I must confess u're 1 of d best nairaland av got....
Kip it up bro, 1 luv

Woooooow... My head is swelling...

*runs to grab a bucket* *Buries head in it to prevent further expansion*

You just sparked up something in me...

God Bless You Bro...

obstead200: I've read an evening with Eva. KMJ is good. Very very good. But king pen knows how to give me a higher level of suspense. Plus he is also very funny in a way.

Am I really funny?

*shrugs*

Thankz for been a true fan...

God Bless You Loadz...

MoriYanu: Me fell on this thread, me love it, with Sammy. O here with me, me need to keep following..... first time of reading ur story tho, buh v heard a lot about you..

Wooooow... Glad you're here on-board. Hope it's good stuff you heard about me sha? Loooooooool...

God Bless You Bro...

After A Sick While...


EPISODE 10







TO BE CONTINUED...

bookj: kingzpen, I hear say u were down bt no let d ink down , anyway takia of urself nd b strong. Luv ya

Yes I was... The ink has been refilled, bless God...

Thankz Dearie... Luv U too...