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oluwashedy: You are just so talented. Nice story keep it up bro... Waiting 4 d nxt update.

Thanks so much... Your comment really made my night... God Bless You... Update rolls in tomorrow...

Stay Tuned...

SexySapphire: #Coughing violently# hmmmmmmmmm.

Just passing by

Anyone with a cough syrup should kindly give her some... Loooool... Why the cough?

zainharb: Na xo u take abandon sim card start on d run, I no even knw. Kingzpen its unfair. I dy beef u 4rm nw on

I'm so sorry Dear... Kindly follow me up On The Run... Love to see you over there...

I'm so sorry once again...

d4real890: May ur days be long in d land of d living kindzpen
U are genius
Can't wait to read to new story ann kindly send me d link to it cos I too gbadun ur style

Amen to your prayers... Thankz for reading... God Bless You... Join the train of my new story, 'On The Run'. The link below:

www.nairaland.com/1860069/run-blockbuster-series

kayemjay: Checked your thread out. Very good job I must say. I am impressed. Saw some stuff you probably borrowed from me but it is fine. Work on your narratives, and try and be a little bit more real to life. One very important secret: Don't rush your narratives nor dwell so much on them. It has to be perfect. Lemme spoil your mood small: I rushed through your 4 pages in about 5 minutes. I could not really read the narratives but went straight to the dialogue. Work on that.

Great Dialogue though, very good dialogue. Plus, I really could not understand the plot of your story sha o. Maybe with time.

You have got some way to go, but it is not impossible to bench me. Please try and stun me. Well done.

Smiles, borrowed? Knocks myself if I did... Got a whole lotta experience with lines from great writers like your very own best, John G, to borrow from yours... I love your way of writing but to be candid, you write to impress not to improve... You kinda tell more rather than show in your writing, which is kinda weak to me for someone reading from Grisham.

My Plot, you will understand if you read my narratives well... My Dialogues, I watch how I use them. I use them when necessary...

I'm a big fan of you and also J. Grisham...

One Love Boss...

kayemjay: Thanks bro for the challenge. I really appreciate. The rules:

1. It must be a crime, thriller, action story. I can allow you do adventure/fantasy e.g Royver's genre. (Othe genres are not tasking enough)
2. It must have no semblance to any of my stories or any other in this section
3. It must have more content than mine.
4. You must update regularly and deliver quality content.
5. It must garner plenty followers and fan base such that when you dont post they will chew you like they always chew me.

Hope you agree sir?

Perfectly agree... I'm so in... Infact, started before this challenge, 'On The Run', my current story... Check it out at your leisure... Gonna obey your rules hence this moment... Bet amma stun you so completely...

*smiles*

kayemjay: Asides from frank3:16, I am looking for someone to challenge me.

Loooool... With my lil knowledge in writing, I dare to challenge you... Challenge you in any genre of writing... Should Be Fun...

Welldone Boss... Keep The Flag Flying...

D9ty7: If Kingzpen and Queenxster are literally PrinceAdepoju's royal parents. Am wondering where on earth they got him. The last time I checked PrinceAdepoju doesn't write a story like his parents, maybe his grandfather doesn't too.
In an enraged Kingzpan's croaky voice: "Queenxster has to explain where she got this boy. He is not my son."
Btw you've been doing the best of jobs here. Keep up the good work and together we'll be at the top for many years to come.

Guess my noble son has answered you...

Looooolz...


I salute you Boss...

Queenxstar: You're indeed a product of unquestionable royalty. Well said dearest.

Dahz my Olori speaking... Good Mother, Good Queen...
*pats back with horse-tail*

PrinceAdepoju: Quite funny, boss
Well, I am no bastard.
I'm a writer too...and I write poems also(which I'm not sure my parents do).

A yoruba proverb says, "Erin kii fon, ki omo inu e tun fon" which means "A kid-elephant will not blow, when an Elephant blows."

I only want my literal parents to do the writing here on nairaland, while I do the reading.
The whole family should not post here at the same time

I'm indeed prouda you son. Your response was perfectly engulfed in royalty. You are truly my son. Omo Oba!

charijee: Another wonderful update.....thanks kingzPen

Your welcome Dearie... God Bless You...

Don't enjoy this alone, invite your peeps...

SexySapphire: Ask Kingzpen himself and he will giv u the confirmation u need

@PrinceAdepoju, she actually was the first... *smiles*
She left the remnant you crunched...

PrinceAdepoju: KingQueenPrince

PrinceAdepoju is now my son, literally... Loooool...

SexySapphire: I can't help buh laff reading dis story all over again. This story is da bomb. I trust dat the new story (On The Run) will be better and more captivating dan dis.

Sure the New story is hot and interesting... Keep Following... Thankz Dearie...

Queenxstar: Still following... Wonderful update King.

How wonderful could it be again, seeing a Queen comment on my amateurish story... *covers face*

God Bless You Boss...


Kindly Share The Story With Your Friends...

Onemansquad: Salewa nd ireti u ladies are fools ,instead of prayin 4 ur hubby u ar thr competin 4 a gateman when ur husband is out thr dyin...
oga kingzpen me dy salute o

No mind them... They wan die untop Dede matter...

I salute you too Sir... God Bless You...

Kindly Share The Story With Your Friends...

Lakeshizu: Gengen......

Action! Hope ur enjoying it?

Stay Tuned...

PrinceAdepoju: ###FirstToEat


Well done, boss.

Thankz my Prince... God Bless You...

Kindly Share The Story With Your Friends...

EPISODE 8







TO BE CONTINUED...

charijee: I think it's just due for another update kingzPen

Yes Ma... So due... Update dropping tonight... So help me God...

Stay Tuned... Love Y'all... And don't forget to share this story with your friends...

*winks*

I'm nothing but a Pen in the hand of my KING!!!

D9ty7: Longest time your highness.

How ve you been?

Highness ke? Abeg Ooooo... I am your boy o... Anyways, I have been lurking around, dropping few updates and reading awesome stories from my Boss them on NL...

Following you till the end...

Leggo Boss... Love to learn new twist and turns from you... Trust this gonna be wowing... Following Boss...

Storeburn: Interesting story, but one thing i've noticed about kings' pen stories is his trademark 'Knock on the door' when pre-intimacy is just about to happen. Hmmmm, well all the same, you're a good writer, i hardly comment on trend but i just did.

Can't help but laugh real hard... Glad you read my stories, thankz much... Loooool... No more knocks again... Lmaooooo... God Bless You Bro... Stay Tuned...

Jskelly11: nice story bro you are gifted BTW come and complete this tori oooo

Thanks much Bro... I'm trying my best to make the update come frequently. God hhelp me and God Bless You...

SexySapphire: Dis Ireti and Salewa matter get as e be o as they wan die on Dede's matter. I don't even knw wat to say to Sanmi. Well written Kingz.

The food is ready and served. Y'all shud come along wit ur plates and cutlery to eat to ur fill.

Loooooool... No mind the two of them... Just staytuned Dear... God Bless You...

EPISODE 7






TO BE CONTINUED...

Welldone Boss... Keep the flag flying...

Amazing writeup... More Boss...

Lakeshizu: bros wen are we to expect an update for "Salewa and Ireti" ?

So sorry for the delay... Something came up dahz why... But check later tonight or tomorrow morning... God Bless...

Onemansquad: Richard! U beta take things easy b4 u cause big troble oo... enjoy ur sleep bro we dy here dy wait u

Replied your mail Bro...