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Hey Ma'am, glad you took the bold step to wanna write. That's actually bold and awesome. But, I'd suggest you have a guideline when you wanna write any genre of literature.

Many writers here on NL and beyond have written wonderful stories, which you can trail their part. Watch closely how they start, and handle their storyline as it goes. Learn how they choose their words to sooth their readers, leaving them hungry to read on.

Your synopsis, it was more of telling than showing. Embed your description creatively, don't just tell us what it is. Eg Adaora is fair or Adaora is from a rich family. Those lines are too simple and quite a cliche.

I really must commend your zeal, it's amazing... It's in you... Keep writing... You will get there...

Queenxstar: My King has spoken in the multitude of his grey hairs.

Oh my Queen, thank you o jare... May The gods Of NairaLand be with you...

*pats back with horse-tail*

TemitopeDaniel: Lol! You never told me u were down! Anyways, we go talk on whatsapp better.

Make u no mind d person wey dey compare u with KMJ, some ppl are created to frustrate and discourage. Keep it moving, it's in uu!

I had to keep it within, cos I'd thought I would recover on time... And for that guy, it takes more than mere words or opinion to break me down or stop my grind... Love his comment though, wish KMJ could say that himself...

TemitopeDaniel: Hmmn... Boss I have been busy and struggling with my story.it ends SOON though, PROMISE to catch up. Weldone SIR.

Boss, I have been following your story even when I'm so down... Happy to know itz moving smoooooooooothly...

God Bless You my Bro, my Friend and my Boss... *winks*

oluwashedy: Where art thou oh kinzpen?

I am here now, friend... Update dropping soon...

Good to be back...

God Bless Your Heart Bro...

drsolob2: My dear you are not serious at all to insinuate that Kingzpen is better than Kmj,I see you have nt read A.E.W.E

Loooool... Glad to know you are a loyal fan of KMJ...

I'm a Boss in my lane, not competing with nobody... I only try to beat my best...


But next time dude, don't trash someone else's opinion, just make yours known... Life Too Short For That...


Love You Though(No Homo)

PrinceAdepoju: Your Highness, abeg come and feed us ooo

My son, Daddy has been down, but hez back on his feet...

God Bless You...

*pats back with horse-tail*

obstead200: OH MY GOD!!!!!!!
KINGZPEN KNOWS HOW TO F.U.C.KING WRITE A STORY.
HE IS MY BEST ON NAIRALAND. CLOSELY FOLLOWED BY KAYEMJAY

Looooool... You know how to read story... You are my true fan and I love you (No Homo).

God Bless You...

paulolee: Wow..nice wrk kinqspen...m nt dt used 2 nairaland bt av read some captivatinq n intrestinq stories by some qud lads n i must say dt ur very qud wt wt u ar doin...ur flick is superp, interpretation of lines ar off d hook, bt unpredictability of ur story is kinda averaqe n i was kinda dissapointed coz ur updates ar very short n i read u said u ar updatiqn once a week....dts 2 lazY 4rm ma point of view...qat 2 wrk on d unpreditability of ur story n plsss make d story lonq coz it onli contains 4-5 main characters n i dnt see much wrk in it...SHALOM

Thankz so much Bro...

Unpredictability? Yh, sure as expected, but I bet you can't tell where my story gonna end or predict my next scene... If you can, then try predicting my next update... And I promise not to alter anything in it...

For the short updates, I know they are, and I will work on it...

Thankz again...

God Bless You...

charijee: Where's the pen in the hand of the King?
Trust you're okay....bring us update plssssssss

The Pen had gone through a lot this past days... Anyways, he is here, hail and hearty...

Update cooking...

God Bless Your Heart Dear...

Lakeshizu: Kingzpen hope u ar good?.... Don't forget us here. almost a week since ur last update!!!

Thankz for been so nice to check up on me... I have been so down in all aspects...

I won't and I can't forget my fans, not even caring ones like you...

God Bless You Loadz...

tushwitch: finally!, I'm glad i read this...more ink to the pen
endeavour to post em on ivorytalk biko, I'd have missed this story if i weren't on nl....tanchu

Amen to your prayers Dear... You can request for the story on ivorytalk, so the admin would get to me... Thankz...

Enjoy my on-going story, 'On The Run'

oluwashedy: Dedicated a whole day reading this story now i'm through. It's xcellent i must confess i pray for more inspiration for you to write more.

Amen... Thankz Bro for dropping by... God Bless You Loadz...

emmabest2000: The update is too short for my liking , but you are always on point !

So sorry... Would work on that...

Onemansquad: *lolx* ireti can u see ..do bad tin nw hiding under the bed (a working class nd respectable lady lyk u)
kingzpen ur suspense na die

Lmaooooo... No mind her... She got what she deserves...

This isn't suspense na, just a lil break in transmission... Loooool... Thankz Bro... God Bless You...

d4real890: Haba pls just update more tonight before u go to bed
PlEeeeeeeeeeeeessssssseeeeeeee

Lemme get to the kitchen then...
*winks*

d4real890: There is fire on d mountain pls continue u av got me glued to ma phone
Thumb up

Glad I did... Action continues tomorrow...

EPISODE 9






TO BE CONTINUED...

tushwitch: just got admission to study Linguistics.... nice piece btw, you didn't finish it there too

I have finished it... Go and read ' My Life On Campus'
Congratulations, welcome to the first and the best...

tushwitch: I've seen this piece on ivorytalk before, are you by any chance a uite?

Yes I'm... U?

oluwashedy: Hope the manuscripts are intact?

Still searching... I would get this thread going soon...

oluwashedy: Try and update even if its once a week

You wanna stretch me... Dahz good... Amma think about it...

*dusting thread, searching for manuscripts*

oluwashedy: Mehn this is wonderful

Awwwww... My unfinished work... *sobs*

oluwashedy: Put your skills to test in that section i BEG you

Okies then... After this story... Sexuality Section Get Ready!!!

bookj: Wow! Dis is beautiful, I just started reading ur story 2days ago nd made sure I complete it. A wonderful piece bt d suspense almost kill person. May d kingz pen neva run out of ink

Amen Infinito... Loooool... Thanks so much Dear for reading... God Bless You...

You can join the train of my current story, ' On The Run'.
The link is below:

www.nairaland.com/1860069/run-blockbuster-series

D9ty7: You wanna improve? That's a good news for me. Then I will gladly lear from you.
@sexysapphire: Sorry about the cough but guess what. The cure on my thread. check it out.

Me learning from you na Boss...

oluwashedy: Kayemjay. He rekindled my interest on literature section. My most featured section is sexuality

Oh! I see... A good writer I must confess but I'm a crazy writer of sexuality... Just don't wanna go into it...

oluwashedy: Keep it rolling. One my favourite writers mentioned ur name in his post so i decided to search and follow ur stories ASAP. I didn't even notice when i xhausted my 15mb yle reading one of ur stories

Which writer is that Bro?

D9ty7: @Kingzpen: This one that updates rolls in tomorrow. Am begining to wonder. How many updates are we talking here?
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I can see Flakkydagirl viewing this thread. How you doing? Folake, Foluke... Which of the two is your name?

I am set and ready to make my fans happy by updating regularly, atleast an update a day... And bonus update once in a while...

Don't wanna rush my updates cos I wanna deliver well and improve myself...

Thankz Boss...