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Pukka36:
Kitme,U r good




Nice ending...

Thanks ma, but it's not yet over...
We can't leave dear Afam hanging.
I mean it now, I have just one update left.

dimssy:
Hope you dont have a bf?i cant fight oo%-)

Lol...

hibroDon1:
Kitme...am stil waiting honestly

There you go..
I just updated.

meeabaz:
Kitme..pls I'm hungry for more updates..pls do me good and quench my hunger

It has been served.
Thanks.

flaky66:
calm down oooh....u knw too much luv z nor gud

Too much of love messes with one's thinking.
Am I right?

dimssy:
I just pray her bf doesnt see this

Lmao

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missuniverse:
feel for Diri

update! update!!update!!!update!!!!update!!!!!

Yes ma! Yes ma!!! Yes ma!!!!!!!
Thanks for following.

HENSEXIE:
Hi kitme,Ŧђɑ̤̥̈̊п̥̥̲̣̣̣ks 4 updatin,buh U̶̲̥̅̊я̩̥̊ update is 2 shrt.pls com aπϑ update o!aπϑ pls mek it longer tnx

Thank you, I will definitely make it longer.

flaky66:
Kitme i luv u (no homo) sweet updates....still followin

And I love you too...no homo.
Thanks for following.

dimssy:
Mi i love her gan ni

And I love like kilofesele..

mute4real:
Kitme, was there anywhere in the article where you were asked to limit your ambition? Your very first comment was a "Mtchew." Now, explain why you hissed at the article, you are beating about the bush. Where was it written in the article that you should limit your ambition?

I guess you are the op, right?
Yes, I said mtcheew because you are biased, you're speaking from the warped mentality of an average nigerian men
Anyways, if you don't see feminism as a threat, why the long, boring epistle?
To each his own, and may God grant you the wisdom to accept things you can't change..(Feminism)

thronekid:
Don't be a bi.
You can't clear your dad or husband's plates when either is done eating. Isn't it?

Why not?
My achievements doesn't stop that and I won't let any maid do my duties for me
But don't ask me to limit my ambition, I can fight for that

thronekid:
Wow! See the colleens 'mtcheeeewing' to real talk. What the bleep!

Your dad asked you to clear his dishes and you were taken aback! Like it's something unhumanely egrogious. God of mercy!

Instead of them changing the world into a better place for their gender, they are trying to be foolish. Is this how the first set did theirs? I'm finding every lass who's commented broken. Like those men whose loins they were sired from produced just gaffes. Like those men commited a very asinine act when they erupted in their mums. Even someone I held in high esteem couldn't make a positive difference. Hers was superbly fatuos.
This is what has been motivating them to get into polyandry, too. That pejorative reasoning their pea-sized brains has always been renowned for. Fûck Feminists - those wrong headed ones!

Mute4real, you spoke the truth.

hey throne....I have my reason for commenting in such way.
Girls (We) were raised to shrink ourselves, make our ambitions smaller, because men would get threaten if they were bigger, we were raised to cater for the delicate overbloated ego of men, at such they named us, 'weaker vessels',
Well, I don't entirely agree with a girl not doing her household work, there should be respect for your husband, but my problem is that I can't shrink my ambition for any man.
P.S--i'm not a feminist.

Okay....me like the action, it was as if I was watching it, Nice description, Dee.

Jollyjoy:
Hahahahahaha, op, there is no way you are gonna attract traffic to your site. You know why? Becos on the first place you are doing a very bad job, the story is nt even thrilling, no intrique,no suspense, all you want is for that link to be click, secondly,your story is not well polished so no point wasting my data, you ought to work harder... I pray make i even click that link o.

With all due respect, this isn't the nicest comment to make.
I agree it's too early to put up a link, you know why? Because we don't know where the plot is going yet, but the op's descriptions and diction were on point, but your comment goes along way in dampening his/her spirit.

Mtcheeew......

hibroDon1:
Welcome back n "wat a meaningful upate"...hope u stil ave more for us today? Gm!!!

I knew you would be the first to chop.
I don't think I have more for today
Good morning.

princessadeola:
Thanks for d update. Hoping for more

Thank you ma'am.

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kingphilip:
Good but some typographical errors or grammatical errors can still be seen around the last few updates.. So please always try to take even if it's 10 minutes to proofread ones or twice before posting

I'm so so glad Uju came back unharmed and never learnt her lesson the hard way atleast she'll be better I guess.. Uju welcome back jare atleast you've learnt never change good behavior for peer pressure or due to prevalent decadence in the society.. Most of those people wish they can be like you inwardly but don't have the power to

I'll prefer Ama ends with someone better.. Lola can have Awesome and Diri Afam..

Kitme thanks for the update

Errors? I'm well aware and I've modified some and I will take my time too.
I also think of bringing new character, but the theme won't be achieved, someone has to forgone his/her feelings.
Thank you, kingphilip..
Jah bless you a lot.

Orlolahdey:
I feel sorry for Ama......Kitme tanx for dat short update sha

Thank you.

toykathy:
iffahear? Lazy to gini? Come and update jhur. Dis one u put up here is too small o. Abi maka change eye for u ni

Haba! No change eye for me o
I try small nao...

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toykathy:
kitme, u wanna kill someone wit suspence i guess? Why is there no update? Dark roses, i go dey wait u o. Hw re u honeypie?

Kathy of life.
Honeypie has been lazy.very lazy to write actually.
I don't really know, Glad you're here
Thank you.sweetness.

hibroDon1:
maybe am d only 1 dat knows dat u're not lazy..."am i rite?"

Lmao...I'm a lazy writer, I kinda rush this story, the plot was longer and I just decided to ignore some part..

hibroDon1:
i for don change am for u...lolz

Thank you jare

hibroDon1:
Your taut may be like "where is hibroDon1" to comment but i dey observe like "proffesor JEGA"...dont mind i keep following just like twitter

Thank you..I miss your comments.

[quote author=Orlolahdey post=36134648][/quote]Baby..I'm sorry.

prisomic:
Hi kitme this one sounds more interesting,can't wait for you to start it......more power to you!!!!?

Hthanks.....if only my laziness allows me.

Wow!

grocery:
Its just using present tense when its suppose to be past tense and vice versa, maybe later you can read- proof your work.

Thanks! Most times,I don't proofread at all..it's stressful to. Say the least
Duly noted!

ajaxtea:
Peeps at the next story.. This one gonna make sense ooo..
Give us a link to the new story once it starts dropping..
I might not be able to comment regularly again, coz ave started my exam today but will comment once am chanced...

Aww...season of exams
Goodluck..pray,read and eat well
Much love..

He's back! welcome!

Alright...before the end of this story, I just felt like introducing my next story here.
The title is.......*drum rolls*
'DARK ROSES'
Lets give out a taste..

Rose pulled open the curtain's blinds on the windows and was dazzled by the sunlight flooding into her long, rectangular room.
The morning sun shone its entire glory, and she was greatly amazed that time was far gone. No matter how she

HENSEXIE:
Hi Kitme,update pls,cnt wait anymore.Ŧђɑ̤̥̈̊п̥̥̲̣̣̣ks
BTW I wish Ÿ̲̣̣̣̥ø̲̣̣̥u̶̲̥̅̊ the best in U̶̲̥̅̊я̩̥̊ 4thcmin xamz.kip it real

Sweetie..thanks a lot
I will try to type the last update now..

Captainswag225:
kitme, u are too much. The story gets more interesting with every chapter as more secrets are revealed. Anyways am glad uju is safe. More grease to ur elbow kitme.

Thank you captain.
I always love your comment

dimssy:
Hey kitme,thanks for the update,have a grace filled week

Bless you! Thank you.

PrincessB1:
Lovely.... Waiting for d next episode

The last, you mean?
Thanks tho'

ajaxtea:
We are more than cool... Such a touching story, never expected Lola to make that sacrifice, I feel for her like......

Lol..thank you!

oghenekome51:
That was quite easy(lola)! But so far, this is WOW!

Thank you ma'am
Glad you liked itzm

grocery:
kitme, very good work you have here with little error

Wow...
Kindly point out the errors

Divepen1:
aww
Thanks...
I might not have been commenting on your story 'selfless desire' because I don't like 'you are the bomb ' comments.... I will like to tell how you did well and what you can improve on. But you've got a really really great work going there.

Yipee! I thought you weren't reading and I was already sobbing, silently though...lol
Thank you, and please I'm very open to criticisms.
You're awesome,Dive

Niklausa:
Yourself.

This is so unnecessary..
You're obviously looking for a way to dig up what has being buried.
Btw, Dive is not biased, he apportioned blames accordingly.

Divepen1:
I've been trying to drop one more updates but one would have tightened the rope. So, please bear with me.

Still contemplating whether to forgive or not...
Just kidding, I will gladly wait, regardless of the time

Divepen1:
I have sharp eyes for gentle girls, though the last caused kasala but I'm still here.


Why should I be the one that needs more attention.

Lmao.....I guess those you've met were pretending


Well, because you're unpredictable!
Btw, you left us hanging in your thread...Not fair

Divepen1:
Starts fully on wedz..

I must have sharp eyes for you now..

My prayers are with you.... Go and show 'em the stuff you're made of!!
I'm writing my exam very soon too...

Sharp eyes for me? I'm a gentle girl now, I should be on the look out for you....

Divepen1:
Kitme, how far?

Sharp eyes! I'm good and how are you doing?
How is your exams going??

missuniverse:
thanks for the update Darl,
looking forward to the next

Thank you, Ma'am!