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theorbiters:
So finally, it is over.... Although, I really don't like happy endings but hey, kitme, you were just 'Golden'. Looking forward to your next story.

My fingers have a mind of their own, I swear, the end wasn't what I plotted.
I love tragedy too... Thanks!

hibroDon1:
Dear kitme...am stil waiting for d next story, hope u doing wella?

Story bawo?
When I haven't draw any plot yet?
You would see it when it arrives.
Thanks!

Dotun42:
This is an interesting piece. I couldn't stop for a second phew!!!. I reccomend this book too https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/555089 the site would be useful to aspiring authors.

More about the site please?
Thanks by the way

Andropod:
gud morning kitme,it may happens but i still believe it is unrealistic because awesome is a fool and ama,a bigger fool,my heart bleeds for the other guy,what if they have been married b4 awesome returned from overseas,would she leave her husband for awesome? And again why is well disposed towards awesome 2 d extent of accepting his child from another woman and cant accept afam's child....

Obviously, you didn't read the story, if you did, you didn't understand it a bit.
A quick summary
*Amaka was not TOTALLY in love with Afam, then she met Awesome, her bestfriend.......they kind of rekindle their past desires.
*Diri was the one who had a child for Afam, but refused to disclose his identity for the sisterly love in her.
*Awesome had a child with Lola too, and he never reject the child.
*Lola was the one who forgone her feelings.

Don't bother replying.

theorbiters:
Aww.. My golden.. Good to have you too. Nice story you got too.

Thank you....Glad, you're back fully.

Queening:
afam's child from her sister?....hmm hypocracy,ur @ bleds for afam and doesn't for ama...so dey should hv tied d knot b4 she finds out dat her nephew is fathered by her husband...nice story kitme...pls do something about the other story

Thanks!

dimssy:
I give you a clapping oviation for this wonderful piece..

Lol, tnx sha

Queening:
afam's child from her sister?....hmm hypocracy,ur @ bleds for afam and doesn't for ama...so dey should hv tied d knot b4 she finds out dat her nephew is fathered by her husband...nice story kitme...pls do something about the other story

Thanks!

flaky66:
Smehw i feel u sqeezed everytin into an endin but all d same twas a fantastic story....involve me in ya nxt one oooh

Ehya, i know it was rushed, due to some things...thanks..i would involve u in my next story.

Divepen1:
You are seeing talents abi...

As in...i'm speechless.. btw,whatsup wt you and 'bidemi',you always bring him back in all ur stories.

wow!

Andropod:
okay,thanks goodness you came around.hopefully your next story will be enjoyable

toykathy:
short story but filling. Thz kitme for concluding this. Hope to read frm u soon.

Thank you..i appreciate

Andropod:
okay,thanks goodness you came around.hopefully your next story will be enjoyable

Shebarh:
haba kitme u don't v to be rude to him... he was just saying his mind... he didn't insult u neither did he insult ya story

Transfer of aggression, it was.
Thanks!

Andropod--sorry, I'm not always like that, guess I was in a bad mood, your opinion counts, sweetheart.
Sorry for the subtle insults, I threw. I'm sure my next story would be berra than this.

Andropod:
whatever..just that the story is unrealistic,even if u wana write fiction,show yourxelf as a gud writer.....

I must have been delusional to think you have an atom of sense in you.
Which part of 'your opinion don't count' didn't you understand?
Quote me no further!
The story is unrealistic to you? Thanks! Kindly unfollow, no need for word exchange.
P.S- I'm not writing to please any body, I'm not in a competition with anyone.

Andropod:
[s]gud morning kitme,it may happens but i still believe it is unrealistic because awesome is a fool and ama,a bigger fool,my heart bleeds for the other guy,what if they have been married b4 awesome returned from overseas,would she leave her husband for awesome? And again why is well disposed towards awesome 2 d extent of accepting his child from another woman and cant accept afam's child Am sorry if i sound rude but dear kitme,your story lacks creativity.even though such happens,you didnt present it well......[/s]

Blah blah blah...
The story has ended, the way I want it to end, the unfollow button is your friend.
I don't care what you or any other person thinks about it, this is my first story,so mistakes are allowed.
Your ridiculous opinion doesn't counts.

hibroDon1:
so dear kitme when shud we be expecting another "saga"...am so eager to read anoda1

Dunno yet

pmc01:
Kudos!

Thanks dear

Interesting....keep 'em coming.

Now, I'm definitely following this

Mattkent:
I will, for the fun of it. cos I know I can't win. I have not yet matured well as a writer.

What a great mindset!

heemah:
Well done kitme. Hoping to read from u soon..

Thank you....I appreciate.

labaski:
u did a good job kitme. I enjoyed it right from d start..

Glad, you liked it.
Thanks.

Missmossy:
Awww beautiful conclusion Kitme kudos. You really did a wonderful job, I love happily after ever end

Haha....thank you missy.
I appreciate.

Dsparker:
Cool piece of art. keep it up.[color=#000099

Thanks dear. I appreciate.

Captainswag225:
kitme, weldone..., u did great with the story. I cant wait for more stories from u. congrats!!!

Thank you..Captain.
I appreciate.

underage:
Awww....what a happy ending.

Looking forward to more of ur works. More MB to ur fon. Stories lyk dis make me want to go into my study and write.

Thanks for dis beautiful piece

*Sips my Tea*

Thanks....I appreciate.
Kindly share the link to ya story when you start.

Shebarh:
hmmmmmm.. dunno what to say but to be honest wasn't xpctn dis kind of ending...but anyways u gave it ya best and i appreciate

Eish.....which ending were you expecting?
Sad one, I guess?
Thanks all the same.

hibroDon1:
nice write up @kitme n i really love:* ur courage to kip upd8n despite ur taut of maybe it wont be followed @first...am hibroDon1 and i wil love to tel u dat am a big fan of u..."a milo clap for ur self (if u rmb)"

Thank you....Hibro.
It wasn't easy jor

prettydiva89:
hey kitme how you doing love

Lol....look who we have here?
Where have you been?
Welcome jare..

churchkilo:
and you gave it a happy ending Kitme,I enjoyed it cos I so much love reading especially interesting piece like this,more grace to your ability

Thanks dear.
Your username is unique, me like...

Pukka36:
Nice and happy ending...


U were very consistent!@Kitme

Thank U

Thanks dear
And you were consistent in commenting too.

underage:
This is Awesome . Found it just a few minutes ago and I am here already. Can't wait for d ending.

More grease to your elbows Kitme......

Lol....@ Awesome.

Thanks dear. Means a lot.

THE END.

flaky66:
lerrit end in marriage if u dnt mind

Lol..I don't mind.

SwaGUnLimiTeD:
DONT KNOW Y U HATING , I ENJOYED THE STORY BUT THINK ITS FICTIONAL OR IS IT A TRUE LIFE STORY

You don't expect me to answer that, do you?
Hating on you? Seriously? Wake up, dude

Okay guys, the last update is ready and I just feel like saying a big thank you to some people
Tobiee- for being the first person to comment on this thread, thanks dear.
Kingphilip- Thank you so much, Jah bless you.
Hibrodon1- My only able reader, thanks sweet.

I want to say a big thank you to some people, whose personalities influenced this story.
UJU EBERE and SISTER LOLA.
And I'm saying a big thank you to every one, you guys took me as I am, not minding the amateurish way I penned this story down, you urged me on.. What can I say? Thanks!
I know my next story would be better than this in every dimension.
And those 'unrealistic' group, thanks sha, at least you read it. I appreciate the views.
And those who didn't comment all through the story, you are all appreciated.

Signed
KITME!

SwaGUnLimiTeD:
WAT EVS

Like I care.

SwaGUnLimiTeD:
... ME TOO THEM NEVER BORN THAT KIN LOVE FOR THIS UNIVERSE ....

*sighs
The unfollow button would do you a whole lot of good.

Andropod:
am i the only one that thinks this story is unrealistic??

Funny, because it happens and I've seen cases like this before.
I know it's rare, because most people are bent on holding on to that person they adore so much.
It happens, dear!

ArrowAssassin:
I just like what I see @Labaski's D.P.

Labaski is a pretty lady....no doubt!

flaky66:
as in.....it scarras one's thinkin nd i wud nt want ur thinkin to be scatterd

Thanks for looking out for me.
I believe love never ends well....
it either ends in breakup or marriage(At the dating segment), if its marriage, it either ends in divorce or death, so what's the deal

oghenekome51:
hmmmm, go on kitme, wer waiting! Bsides, weldone and nice updates!

Thank you, Ma'am.

Vantee20, hope you're okay?
Been a while you updated.