₦airaland Forum

Limerick:
Kr0ne, oya na pidgin battle ma tell u say southerners sabi speak broken pass ibo bouys!

Taa! Comot for there. Southern wetin? if I begin throw slang self u fit confuse. I want make real Lagos boys judge our brawl o, no be all these omonna dem wey follow 911 come Lagos because the way wey I go take change am for u eh

gottoboy:
Lols, ♈όϋ Fo̶̷̩̥̊͡Я put ᵐᵉ Fo̶̷̩̥̊͡Я Gospel, anyways how many barz Fo̶̷̩̥̊͡Я ᵗᴴᵋ yoruba?

U know say Yoruba hard. So let's do 8 bars

Smh, why is this place dull? In fact, I don vex

Open various c/o's

Horrocore: Coogar or Bis

Pidgin Battle: Warriblood, Jigsawkillah, Limerick or Wrongturn

Gospel battle: Aromo, Elymax, Darkrebel or Michael

Ibo/ Yoruba battle: Giyazz/Guykhena OR Yeyenatu/Lagunna, Gottoboy

Gangsta battle: Fuckyouhard (u know how we do it)

Complimentary battle: for anybody who understands the rules

I'm serious o, if ur in just holla!



Make I add one more
Topical battle: Anybody

No be only horn free, na Humphrey. Go 3rd Mainland bridge and see danfo drivers blasting horns and trumpets. There are things u can stop in Lagos, but not this one

Flash, u tried but stop using threats. Try nameplay/wordplay and use one particular rhyme in a particular bar
I don't see any direct shots from Richie either; his verse can be used against somebody else. Watch Elymax vs Geo brawl or the recent Limerick vs Jigsaw. .that's how a battle verse is supposed to be. Ur dissing Flash, not 'this dude' or 'this biitch', use a play on 'flash' at least
Weak brawl IMO
Mvgt - Richommie

coogar:
what's up with her?

Coogar, introduce me to ur younger sis na I believe she's on NL too

Gladyys:
@krone,how do I get a battle here?

C/o anybody u know u can fight and ask Guykhena to pop the thread

Testerfuze:
Kr0ne ....are you on BBM or whatsapp,felt i could learn 4rm you too

Join Phoenix group on Fb, coz me too still dey learn

ELYMAXiimus:
krone na wicked man
see as hin give aromo sack letter from nairaland

or is he still around with one of his ghost accounts?

One is an understatement. Dude has almost 101 ids here

ELYMAXiimus:
lmao... This is very true... Getting the idea is not the problem(ideas are everywhere) but setting it up with the RIGHT WORDS which will also RHYME nd be WITTY at the same time is the p... Trying to fuse all these together is what often cause the STRETCH you see in bars.... .... These is why niggas should take it easy when giving verdicts. E no easy o.. Make una dey criticize POLITELY. The most annoying is that some of you can't do better, but cos you were told to vote, you start running ya mouth on how the bars were terrible. Lol ........
Easy

No mind them na the final punch dem dey look. They don't care about the build-ups

ELYMAXiimus:
Rhyming can prove rather challenging when you have a punchline to deliver.....
But as easy as f*ck when you're just stringing words together...

Make person lecture on rhymes naa.. There's a thread for this....

The punch is not difficult, the build-up matters a lot. And when u get one solid punch na so u go dey find rhymes wey go match with am
That shii can be annoying

coogar:
i pursued evilchapterz from here.
i remember telling him i would turn his evilchapters into a holyparagraph.

he never came back since then. that nigga is a püssy!

The guy is dope. He just has annoying attitude problem

coogar:
who is geoffrey & who is pein?
how do they know me, biko?

Nl has more guest viewers than members, so they know. Ibime is well-known in almost every site u find many Nigerians. I remember one guy impersonating him back then on 2go and we were all scared to diss him. The guy even use the name dey fu-ck Stu.pid girls wey wan learn rap by all means, until we blew his cover. He was stealing Ibime's lines
Meanwhile, 2go is not really a place for kids like some claim. Evilchapterz was once there and evn almighty U3 has an account there too

richommie:
am sorry sire.. But we decided to drop 2day. I dnt knw wotz keepin flash. .tomorrow's gonna be very busy day.. Ion think i can script dat tomorrow.

@sarimah bae. .pls delete ur comment. .tnx dear.

Ok, unless so

coogar:
okay - we are watching.



who is david pein?
the dude even referenced my name.....see me see wahala.



someone should please bring david pein here....he's got some explanation to do.




https://www.nairaland.com/1936826/nairaland-rapbattles-learning-thread

That's Geophrey's verse, dissing Pein that he's fond of u
Pein doesn't have account here yet

Richommie, do u understand what ur doing? Tell Sarimah not to comment on that thread. I no know why u go call am self, and ur deadline is tomorrow. Why the rush?

coogar:
link, please.....
how come you guys don't copy/paste battles from the other forums here? we should be seeing these battles - not everyone use facebook or 2go or whatever.

there should be a thread where we can view "foreign" battles. besides, i suspect you have been writing for teddy. her set-ups have been real good of late. there's a change in the style of writing too.

Nah! If I do that it would be cheating and won't be encouraging her na. I only show her examples and advise her to practice. Me I don't even have time
The verse is on FFR. Posted already

coogar:
FYH is dopë
he puts in the work, i like his tenacity. he's always willing to learn & his scripts get better and better every time.

teddymiyaki started as a clown - with incomplete letters & text-typing slangs. she has improved a lot too though but her bragging no get part 2.

Yeah, she used to write her words incomplete
As for the bragging, what else do expect from a lil girl whopping his elders
Check out the battle from Pein I posted on FFR

coogar:
this is revealing.....
so you coached teddymiyaki? and that skinny girl would be bragging like she's foxy brown.

Yeah, she can brag now, same way Fyh Is bragging, but God know say I don try for dem

Lagunna:
okay..i wan battle u sef

Lmao! Tell Guykhena na

Lagunna:
Ehen, so teddy na phoenix member

Nah, both of them ain't Phoenix members. Whatsapp

[size=20pt]GEOPHREY's VERSE[/size]

DAVID PEIN NAGATO??

.........I'm faster friend/and u the wacker nerd. . .d0pes u don't even batter them. ./so in this battle, u gon' go with Black eyes. .bruises and 'SKIN CUTS'. .and I do it better than Babers them!!/

.........Me?? I'm a born vet. ./with strong techs. ./i've got babes, chicks. .when I insert my dick they all dead!/but u broke, and that's the only way u bleeped mehn!/but this ur love for 'COOGER' only means. .u even way broke 2 afford Young Girls!!/(Cooger. .cougar)

.........He's gon' go through terrible labour. ./i'd inflict him with pain or. ./death but if he keeps forming tough..........I'd beat him till his parents shout 'MY SON IS GONE' when I smash his head on 'A WALL!!'/(a wall. .Awol. .gone)

........This nerd is one retarded victim. ./i'd amputate him. . .have my soldiers rape the cadet swiftly. ./but if he fights back, and puts his life 'ON. .LINE' I'd quickly kill him by shutting down all internet systems!!/(Online)

.........Sparring with me? That is dangerous. ./u'd talk bout hw I lost 2 u, but u tink with that'd be heinous. .?/niccur stop dreaming.......cus even if u got 10, 000 army. .I still got 'ONE OVER YOU' like math's 'quation!!/(one over you. 1/u)

........I'd punch him bad, and have the nigga die. ./amputate his legs, destroy the inner thighs. ./and he can't do nothing, cus him hoping 2 'BEAT ME' is as impossible as him destroying that Twitter site!!/(Beat me.....Bitme)

........My killing. .no delay/when I break his bones, they'd be no remains. ./this David aint tough. And god regrets making him in his own image!/cus here my lines would simply get him 'VEXED' and that's hw I 'RUINED THE DA'(Ruined the Day, 'Da' from David)




[size=20pt]DAVID PEIN's VERSE[/size]

They gon stop ur drive here . . av got niggers in the repo/ ur rhymes are wack and ur fillers,we detest tho/ U all knew I wuld be "passing diz test" ..cause "geo free" . . like the teachers giving expo!!/

Ur igbo tongue must be twisting em words ..u spend all day tryna see if da accent rhymes/ mum sends u to school ..thinkin he's got some talent, right? / But geoffrey's life is 'truancy . . cos even in his "school-of-thought" . . he's still an absent mind!!!/

Am the gallant child . . .

Nd his fams that pushed him for a rematch . .best pull dur weakling/ ..Bleep "geo writtens" . . I rather settle for field trips!!!/

Cos av got niggaz with techs,gat . .

Nd he'll start cryin ..wen my "mac swell" like dat psg left back!!/ Cos am goin ta gun his whole house ..leave his family dead ../ We don't feel his old-school rap ..geo,get ur "eyes open", "evrything has changed" ..see how I give taylor swift a reality cheque!!!/ (mac swell/maxwell)

Dz squeegee merchant ..a brittle sissy ../ he can't rap ..look at him ..wat a feeble pity / Let's keep it 'clean . . cos da moment "the dust settles" ..I'll "sweep to victory!!!/

Cos dz dummy weak head/ can't bring anythin shockin,cos the crowd-knows, diz nigga sucks' like the black-hole/ Nd he couldn't handle finest" ..so I wonder how he'll survive . . wen tinz get "ugly" in here!!!/

Cos am the buddy he fears

But his rap wouldn't be fly . . if he was spittin frm the top of ah . . pluto space-ship . ./ He knows his "flows" won't make the "waves" . .if he tried . .to go main-"stream!!!/

Dz phantom dude/ will mke my mac confuse/ i'll pounce on u/ in business,my pounds come true/ but Its a lie if he says he's "lavish with pounds" . .u all should "weigh it" . .no "ounce of truth"!!/

Nd his punchz are way way weak . . we never thought he was da tough dawg . ./ Cos with d way he "bites and recycles to fight" . .u'll mistake him for UPCHUCK!!!/

Nd ma witty rhymes bust up . ./ even da punchlines be murdering plenty vets . ./d w/plays re top class, d way I "cross-words" with a "jig-saw" ..surely gon leave u wit a "puzzling" experience!!!/

He'll talk bou bringin hefty guns and nines . ./ but I'll best diz brother lines . ./ Cos he's a "weak cat" . .while am the "alpha dog" . .like ben in foster drive!!!/

Hey mavericks . . get dz thug alive . ./ I smoked him b4 . .so now maybe,the rebel be beastly / My whoopin made him serious . .now dey told me "express trains" . .but watch awt!! diz lines is a "special delivery"!!!/

My metals be leading . ./ Supper-time . .geofrey's on the plate .. I'll rather have a sandwich or tuna . ./ Cos truth is,if "beef steams up tonight" . .dz geek wuld rather settle for "cold sardines for dinner"!!/

I jez bashed the prey ../ Cos wen my guys invade . ./Nd deir macs be cray/ ..Its the end . .geofrey "hangs himself on d roof". . .like the chandelier!!!/

coogar:
nice one, kr0ne!
can you include yeyenatu & lertee in the phoenix crew? they need you to smoothen their verses & punches.

Lmao! most Phoenix members picked up on their own, or say by observing others. Like that Gladyys girl that just dropped a free on FFR. I remember how sloppy she used to be then. PaulThor is usually the one doing the coaching.Me I no dey get chance at all
The only two people I can boast I coached are Fyh and Teddybiyasi
There's one other guy, Pein, the one fund of u. If that boy join NL he go wound many people here. I'll post one of his recent brawls on FFR

coogar:
i would avoid the repetitive use of the word "similar" in that verse.......that's for modo's level.

Your bars ain't REALLY THAT NICE/ coz I've seen SIMILAR LINES/ from whack rappers with INSULAR MINDS/
I'm SPILLING YA SPINES/ cuz you'd have to spit with throat cancer for ya shiit to sound ILLER THAN MINE

Yeah, that's right. If actually I was doing a complete verse I'd avoid that. Just wanted to show him how a bar should be

Gladyys:
What manner of lady am I

D question keeps invadin my mind/degradin my might/tho!no more dos d answer spring/nor does anybody want to answer me/

d question hails from summer to winter/still it doesn't change or wither/

i read books/
questioned d wise,even begged fools/
still,no mortal could tell/
i took a trip to hell/
inquired from sinners n lucifer himself/he was uneasy,restless....with fear..who is dat?,he said/
are you Nigerian?cos dat aint an answer/


i left hell,feeling despaird/my heart also did shred/i was about to return to earth,downcast n sad/
wait!I wasn't sure of what I heard/it came again,clearer dis time......"rejoice n b glad"/
no wonder,mortal men did nt understand/
n lucifer could nt decipher d questionaire/
woo!to men,for worries has turned d nation/
woo! to lucifer who knws only sorrow n condemnation




YEA! LET THEM NOW REJOICE AND B ME.......

Nice one, Gladys! Seems u have a good head for poetry

Ochon

Your bars ain't REALLY THAT NICE/ coz I've seen SIMILAR LINES/ from whack rappers with SIMILAR MINDS/
I'm SPILLING YA SPINES/ cuz you'd have to spit with throat cancer for ya shiit to sound ILLER THAN MINE!

^ ^ ^ That was a bar made of 5 lines with 4-syllabic rhyme scheme (the ones in caps). Always note that ur punch must come last, while the rest are referred to as build-ups. Unless wanna make it complex like Coogar and the rest. . so u can start with a punch and u MUST end it with a punch.
See what I mean by 4 syllables. .taking the last line: ill-er-than-mine.

Gladyys:
thanks.........

Lmao! See Gladys, who taught u how to quote? Ur learning faster than Flash

yeyenatu:
Open c/o
Horrorcore

12 lines! Who wanna be an act in my Scary Movie?!!! Don't be shy, just be very scared.



YeaYeaNot2.0

Accepted! But hope u know what horrocore means?

Tiyazman:
Hey bro, no hard feelings, but I don't have time to start pointing out mistakes, I'm in the lab now.

But if you wanna learn, ELYMAXiimus, show him that your thread real quick!

Absurd! If dem no teach u, u for learn?

Ochon, u have the potentials!! U would be brawling the likes of Coogar and Bis once u fully understand the rules. I was really impressed with that 8 - 2 wordplay, it wasn't forced at all! And u had some personals too
First thing I'll tell u is to work on rhymes. U were doing mostly one-syllabic rhyme. For instance, "for skirt" doesn't rhyme with "bucket". Skirt would rhyme with 'first, thirst, bird, church, nerd, etc. While bucket would work with "locket, socket, pocket" . . .
Second is ur flow. I understand ur very good with words, but before u deliver a punch ur build-up should harmonise with it. Don't stretch the lines too much! When the next rhyme after the last comes late it becomes a stretch, and it kills ur flow too. Just try using 4 lines for each bar, and let each line have at least 3-syllabic rhyme

Guykhena don sleep!

ochon:
Guykhena, since it's a no-show, with the brawl called off, tell Adaobi to open the thread, then post my lines.. I want y'all to assess my lines so I can learn from my mistakes. Corrections should be done on that thread.


I'll be happy if the vets can tell me how good or bad I was. Thanks.

Very good! I second that

See as people dey wait