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Frosti: Larry-sun, am yet to receive the mail.

Your name has been included. You'll be writing Chapter Eleven.

Thanks.

Oahray: Now it's my turn, dem wan turn am to chat thread

In other news, I think any time saved from early updates should NOT be added to that of the next writer. That way, the total time it would take to complete the story would reduced.

You mean I should cut down your time? I'd gladly do that if it'd be okay by you.

Wow! I've nearly forgotten totally about the discussions, been quite preoccupied with some other issues.

Chapter Three:
This portrays the desperate Richard finding himself knocking at a gate for a job least befitting for his academic status. However, a consolement came rather when he beheld the lady with whom he had been particularly fond. This didn't last long though, as he was later confronted by a very ugly Cain, the antagonist of the novel, I presume.

Chapter Four:
Here, a new character has been introduced, and quite a delightful one at that. This brings my mind to the popular saying of unlike poles. Barrister Kish was an opposite physical image of the legendary Cain Martins, and it's quite ironic to realize that this seemingly harmless lawyer is one man in the world whom Cain feared. There appear to be something about this new character than meets the eye. Granted, he showed Cain hell back in high school, but I'm thinking his countenance his more daring than the schoolboy of years before. And Richard getting entangled in-between these two giants won't spell peace in the least. Maybe he should have read that signboard in the first place.

Chapter Five:
It seems like the writer was trying to build a history for every character in the story. This chapter concentrates mostly on the affairs of the gateman, it shows that even the feeble-looking old man has much more arrow in his quiver than any other character. He's had the most amazing adventure; he is an ex-soldier who has fought in the Biafra, and he's sent robbers to their early grave. What has poor Richard gotten himself into?

Wow! I've nearly forgotten totally about the discussions, been quite preoccupied with some other issues.

Chapter Three:
This portrays the desperate Richard finding himself knocking at a gate for a job least befitting for his academic status. However, a consolement came rather when he beheld the lady with whom he had been particularly fond. This didn't last long though, as he was later confronted by a very ugly Cain, the antagonist of the novel, I presume.

Chapter Four:
Here, a new character has been introduced, and quite a delightful one at that. This brings my mind to the popular saying of unlike poles. Barrister Kish was an opposite physical image of the legendary Cain Martins, and it's quite ironic to realize that this seemingly harmless lawyer is one man in the world whom Cain feared. There appear to be something about this new character than meets the eye. Granted, he showed Cain hell back in high school, but I'm thinking his countenance his more daring than the schoolboy of years before.

Hi Cud!

There are some comments on the Nairaland Writers Collaboration thread that I'd like you to please hide. A guy even made an impolite comment which warranted my replying him. Please hide all these unnecessary comments (including my reply) and kindly find a way to warn the rude guy about his arrogant conduct. Thanks.

https://www.nairaland.com/1189817/nairaland-writers-collaboration

Diamondeva: emyo is here too? Na wah o

Diamondeva: emyo is here too? Na wah o

Is Emyo not human?

You need to work on your tense constructions, you're mixing past and present. Also, try to organize the script, no paragraph.

[quote author=Yellow_Mosquito]Dear Readers,

Apologies to Mazi Omenuko for using his thread for something of this nature but I still had to since it was this same thread that led to the banning of Foxy_Rebirth.

Though the issue surrounding Foxy's banning is controversial but as a close friend to him and as a confidant, I find it really appaling and annoying. It is normal for one to post pictures on a thread to butress his point, as long as the pictures passes on the required message but when someone is banned after his post was hidden tends to point hand towards partiality.

Though a comment was reported and a request made for pictures posted by Foxy to be brought down, the same request did not state for him to be banned. This so far has awakened a zeal in him to contribute his quota in derailing any thread by a threat he made before being banned again of opening numerous accounts using Foxy as his first Moniker. Now that thread should be taken as written words except when it is put into action.

I will categorically state here that Foxy_Rebirth meant no harm or had any intention of derailing the above thread by posting pictures and was about to bring down the pictures as he had stated only for him to discover he could not comment on the thread and every other thread he opens.

This is a gross abuse of the ''Freedom of right to speech''.

I'm using this medium to solicit on his behalf and ask that his account be unbanned but if it would not be, an email should be sent to his mail box telling him how long he is to spend ''in exile''. As this will give him the time to contact Larry-Sun and the rest of the Collaborating writers via another Moniker even though it will change the original plan. Itz been 3 days now since the last time he could post on any thread.

I also want to ask the good office of Cuddlemii to look into this matter specially as this is her Section and anything or report that is sent out reaches her directly.

Do unban Foxy_Rebirth with immediate effect if after reading this you are still not convinced that ''Freedom of Speech'' is part of the Constitution of the Federal Republic of Nigeria.

Once again I apologise to Mazi on Foxy Rebirth's behalf for posting this stuff here. But as we all know, a matter should always be solved from the origin of the problem.

Thanks.


Yellow Mosquito
(Attorney-in-Practice)[/quote]Yellow Moss, I'm thinking this request would fair better on the complaint thread. The chance of Cuddlemii seeing this complaint here is slim.

Bless you.

brokoto: coming right away ma'am!

Baddest boy!

Oahray: Yeah... Good point.

I know you're going to deliver a blow to our solar plexus.

Let's not forget that time factor is also particularly important, we should be definite about when the actions are being performed (morning, afternoon, evening or night). We may even go as far as describing the weather, what day of the week and the month the event is happening.

Ishilove: Oya, uncross them sharp sharp and decree thy troth!

Not this night! I'm so enamoured by your writing style that I'd so much like being...

Ishilove: Mmmmm. . . I will sure as heck accept thy plight, if it is really troth.

Arms crossed

I'm really learning a lot from you guys. If I may say, I'd like Lucan somehow managing to jailbreak and become a fugitive while he tackles the problems looming over his dome.

You still haven't mastered the use of 'I'.

Rap maestro: Mr Corrector,it's not raider or rader,it is Radar

Thanks a lot, bless you. I guess error is inevitable. Next time you're placing a comment, try to space your letter after every punctuation mark. Thanks again.

Frosti: Actually, it is radAr and not radEr.

Radar is short for RAdio Detection And Ranging

To fly under the radar.

Shrewd mind, God bless you.

Frosti: Didn't know there was such a criteria. My bad.

Sadly, I have no work on the Lit section. Am more of an onlooker/spectator/reader in this section, I normally hangout more in the tech/computer sections.

But I can assure you that I love reading and have quite a creative mind.

Had a couple of unfinished stories way back in high school. I guess it's time to pick up that pen again.

Okay, no big deal. I'll get back to you. Wait for a PM from me.

Ishilove: O Sir Grammer Larry, my crush for thee doth grow in leaps and bounds as the days flit by. . .

Ishilove dear, would you plight my troth?