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BlissfulJeff:
nice one mr larry

Thank you, sir.

Adasun:
choi basky slump




Da guy self too da over love



hw would da both friends handle this is wat am thinking cos i knw they would be no tym for explanation.

No one can escape the rough hands of love when captured.

honourable356:
Like they say... every writers are unique in their own way. I can't agree more with this very assertion...

I read the whole story till the latest episode quietly for a long while and was highly impressed not just because of the intelligent choice and use of word nor the simplicity of those words but the highly educative lesson bar the sex scene in it.

Enter Larrysun..an unique writer defined by just one objective so far... "to educate the audience through story telling.

Never will I fail to appreciate a writer with an exceptional story whenever I read one.

Back to the story..
And Peter got caught, this is where the story would begins to get hot.. I guess things would never be the same again between both boys.

Trust is precious...
Guess what happens when trust is broken??


Well,we are about to find out!!!

Wow! Thanks a bunch. Your words mean a lot. I just screenshot this. *Covers face*

Joizy:
Chai i dey even fear wetin go hapen next.
Wat will basket think?
What actions wil he take?
Ohmagee

Lol! Gooseflesh.

pablobellins:
I guess this is the end of the journey for basket in this story... I hope he survives the hrt brk.

Basket is an important part of the tale.

AryEmber:
The sex was atleast worthy of the break up, Peter had his first mouth action, yipee! Hell can break out now.

Hehehe! I think that was the second time he got a blowing employment, but his first time of giving a head though.

Halyma:
Mr. Larrysun thanks for the update. The story has just began.

It has.

jayman00004:
chai ..... which kind wahala b dis ooooo... Black is in trouble big time chai ..... which kind wahala b dis ooooo... Black is in trouble big time

Lol! We shall see, won't we?

ftosino:
Black! Black!! Black!!! ,

See, you see what you have done, you should have resisted vehemently, but mr Larrysun, pls don't make them seperate.

that R.A.G of a girl should be stripped in public and be beaten by mob for the way she dresses cos her name already says it RAG.


THANKS OP, MORE POWER TO YOUR FINGERS.

She's a lady. She deserves to be treated with care.

kingphilip:
good morning boss

As usual you're doing something great here

Ride on

Thank you, sir.

phemocheee:
Nice update. I can't imagine what Basket will say/do when he wakes up. Being betrayed by your closest friend is too much pain to bear.

God bless you OP for this

God bless you too.

YoungDaNaval:
Peter was moaning, Rhoda was groaning, and mixed with the beating of groins; it was as if they were ancient saints worshipping the Almighty in tongues.







This op is something else. Wisdom shall never depart from you bro!

Amen, sir. Don't mind my naughty mind.

Mhizterauto:
Finally the world terrorist has been caught. hahahahahaha

Black is the terrorist? Hilarious!

Vicoch:
Wow.... really.....
This post was educative.
I didn't know it's
"All that glisters is not gold"
And not "all that glitters is not gold"


Nice one.

Blackie has just pricked the baloon-relationship between him and his friend.
If only he had resisted vehemently ..
.

Thanks for following, sir.

Fazemood:
WHAAT?? Like I've always expected this Rhoda have achieved her goal, hope she's glad now?


Basket I truly apologize on behalf of Peter, even though your relationship may end here.
Sadly.

Lol! Basket is piqued.

macpetrus:
Wow.... The story begins!!!!!

It begins.

Fazemood:
Bro what's the plan? I'm liking it already hehehe

I'm not telling.

Rick9:
But that was too gory anyway

Yes, it indeed is. Thank for following.

SNOWBOI360:
LARRY PLS GET OUT OF UR SICKBED WE'RE WAITING ON U LARRY PLS GET OUT OF UR SICKBED WE'RE WAITING ON U

Sick bed? I hope that's a figurative expression, because I'm perfectly healthy.

Darkcrisp:
LarrySun, shey you want to kill us with suspense before posting the next chapter. It's been one week already.

Posted. Thanks for following, dear.

Eddyella:
This z just d beginning of "BLACK MARIA".Mr Larrysun please come nd update o,d suspense z just 2 much.

Updated.

nkemdave:
After reading this paragraph, my heartbeat has increased.

The suspense is killing, please come and update ooo.

Nice work Mr. Larrysun

Thank you, sir.

daremiarchs:
Larry Larry
Don't separate our guys now

LOL! Twenty friends cannot play for twenty years.

Observer3:
This one you pple are saying the story is just starting



what have we being reading since

Epilogue??

garex:
As the friends rode happily into the sunset, what they didn’t know was that there was not going to be a next time, for this was the last time Peter Black and John Balewa would be robbing together.


now that's what I call suspense...

LOL! Wait for the real suspense.

omobs:
Hope something bad is not gonna happen to my peter

LOL! Let's hope for the best.

kingphilip:
As the friends rode happily into the sunset, what they didn’t know was that there was not going to be a next time, for this was the last time Peter Black and John Balewa would be robbing together.

This is the turning point and where the real story began


Nice one Larrysun

Hello King.

LogoDWhiz:
Larrysun. Suspense king. This story just entered another gear. Welldone larry.

It's a little twist of the knife.

Rick9:
Finally Caught up with you all, but am still disappointed that at Page 90+ the story has not ended, that's why I started reading in the first place.
Don't like incomplete stories anyway.


But O.P you write well but the beginning was some how, that was too much for a 9 year old boy.

Nice story anyway I admire Peter's intelligence.

He was actually ten. And anything can happen to anybody.

Eddyella:
I will buh Black z my real niga nd I can nt abandon him,I just dey feel him swaga.Ride on Mhizter am following.

LOL! He's all things good and bad.

Vicoch:
I love adventure and these crooks sure do know how to give it

LOL! Crookest of the crooks they are.

Fazemood:
So long I've waited for this revenge. Larry I implore that you make this revenge worth the time spent on planning it out. Salami deserves to suffer much bt die slowly.

Great work mentor.

There will be time for revenge. It's time to sort out the chaffs.