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LarrySun: Rough review.

thank you sir, correction taken.

[quote
author=Therock5555]Am in dude. Dis story go make sense. But first
things first.
1. Avoid approximation
2.Make ur updates longer pls to hold readers attention
3.Space your work and work on your punctuations, eg. ("" Should be used
when someone makes a statement. (? , . all those in bracket are very
important, use them well.
4. Don't rush an update, settle down, think wella, project ur storyline,
focus. U obviously choked up that your first update, I could barely get
anything sensible there except the last part.
5. Your spellings also, u can use auto correction tool on your phone
6. Be ur self bro, in any thing u do, do it well. The sky is ur starting
point.[/quote]thanks bro.

Therock5555: Well bro am actually a science student to the core but I read everything that comes my way, I mean anything(koran, Bible, Novels, dictionary, newspapers, porn magazine sef etc) mehn just be ursef, we all started from humble beginnings. I was editing my first story and I saw the bloody mistakes I was doing, twas damn funny mehn. Trust ursef, u can make it o.

Quote me when u start ur story.

thanks bro,,thats my story's link at my signature

abeg, super moderators help me move this my topic go literature writing section abeg

i've actually started... Letmme post the link in my signature

i'm leonard509 a newbie to story writing.This is actually my first story,i hope you guys'll enjoy it. N.BPlease correct me if i'm wrong in anyway.








WHAT TH FVCK ? GET DOWN!!!


It was too late, mike is Dead, just like josh, shot in the head.
Who is this guy, what does he want?

3 blocks away.


The bullet is 12 blocks away. Elevator door opens, a lady walks out with her suitcase.

Sexy! Is'nt she? Tunde asked George. When are you going to finally settle down?? Stop flirting dawg., hey George I'm looking for the right one. The right one indeed! Said george.


MUM I'm home, deji whatsup where's mum? She's asleep, said deji. How was work today? As usual ,temi answered on entering her room. She walks to her bathroom, inputs the code to her secret safe, brings out her dairy,in it was a sheet of paper, she then draws two parallel lines on the name "mike adebayo". Two down ..... Her phone rings, she puts her stuffs in place and heads for her for her cell phone.

i'm in

OTHERS( fictions actually), not romance

yes ooo,, good day to the legends of this section,, i've read many stories here and i must say you guys are the best. from kayemjay(m), 360prince(m), FoxyRebirth(m), FoxyUltimate(m), Therock5555(m), flow1759, repogirl(f) to the rest i'm yet to come across,, abeg,please,biko ,i need your help cos i actually envy you guys, i wanna be like you guys too.so i need your help cos i didn't read literature in secondary school, i'm actually a science student. straight to the point. DEAR ELDERS OF LITERATURE ADEG MAKE UNA TEACH UNA PIKIN LEONARD509.