Famebaby:
the best story ever I just love the short story

thanks for reading

I don't understand the literature seg any more. What have the mods done to it?

I'm on it

Follow me on twitter. @madera001 let's talk literature and politics

Thanks all

Please show some love to my other story-------> THE CHRONICLES OF TAOFIK SHAKITIBOBO

100K plus views is what I'm looking forward to

Wow! I'm honored. Thanks

povicky1:
Tarasha used to be my best until today wen I read

The Enemy within by Madera001

povicky1:



Wow Bro, this ur story Issa blast, one of the best I have ever read, please I have a Facebook page, it's more like an inspirational page* not a story sharing page, but I would like to ask for your permission to share this amazing story with my audience

Please go ahead. Be sure to send me the link when you did

I'm working on a new project, might take a while, but I'm sure you guys will like it when it is finally out

I'm grateful to ennyy2013 for mentioning this story as best story on NL. You are an inspiration

Sensitivity1254:
How much is the story?? I need a PDF copy of it.

bros hit me up in my mail box


maderainthehood@yahoo.co.uk

Pray for me!

Vulcanheph:

If your plan was to make me fall in love... congrats it worked

cheers to that!

genius43:
Perseverance and consistency brings the attention and comments you so much desire. When the writer of kings started the audience and comments were low but he didn't relent and now he is getting the attention and he is running four stories concurrently.

ok

zephaniah11:
Na so u just stop story wey sweet like this.. Chai... God go see matter Judge oo. ��

so the story sweet ehn? Abeg explain to me why the comments con low na

wizsolzy:

Who be dis fine girl

see you!!! Common! goan marry!!!!!

I don't understand anymore. This NigerArea person taking over my story. Admin help!!!!

opalk:
Madera001
Abeg write another story

Yes sir! I'm on it

Kneephy:
Series story to serious!
Taofeek ride on

Na so

gtcoolboy:
nice story man, thanks

thanks

borisyeltskin:

A huge number of nairaland writers just enjoy disappointing their readers...

bros ayaf update now on before you use English finish porzon

There was no point elongating.a story like that, if you ask me, I thought the story had the perfect ending. Meanwhile.....yes oo, I fit even do tangs now sef . No more OP comman update ooooo

horwa140:
you fit yab person nw cause u don finish ur story .....don't get me wrong its a lovely story it jst kind of short that's what I meant ...I really love it

THE CHRONICLES OF TAOFIK SHAKITIBOBO - WAKA WAKA






Guys were no longer normal; they have become citizens of another realm. So many conversations were reigning in the air. Some guys can lie sha! This one guy who is actually a bricklayer was telling the whole gathering about how one Oyinbo lady he worked for had already concluded arrangements to take him abroad to go and help her build her house but he couldn’t make the trip because he came late to the airport for visa interview. So the Oyinbo girl just collected her own visa and boarded the plane immediately. He said the Oyinbo girl even waived at him when the plane was taking off. Another guy was telling us about the other day he went to Dominos Pizza, he said he eat Pizza and Egusi soup because they didn’t have Ewedu and he didn’t want to stress the waitress. I wasn’t in the mood to burst anybody’s bubble; I was enjoying every bit of it.


All this was going on when a set of cars parked in front of the uncompleted building that houses School 2. They were about 5 cars and they came around like a convoy. They were playing loud music, each car with its own sound, some of the guys in the car are well known guys on the street, and some aren’t. Of course there were ladies among them. In total they were about 15 in number, six ladies and 9 guys.
There is one particular lady among them that caught my eyes. Her shape and body structure looks like one that I have seen before, but the curly hair falling from her head to her shoulder prevented me from catching her face.


I paid more attention to her, the more I looked the more she became familiar. The guys she accompanied were already causing a lot of frenzy at the arena, they declared free booze and so much hysteria followed. I wasn’t interested in the booze anymore, I was more interested in the lady, who by now is clinching tightly to one guy who I presume should be the Alpha male of the pack.


I stood up from my sitting position and moved closer to the lady, I tapped her gently on the shoulder from behind. She turned and gave me a glance, her eyes and mouth was simultaneously wide open on seeing me. ‘Taofik! What are you doing here?’ ‘Bimpe, I should be asking you same na and besides this is my Zanga’ we hugged briefly and I could notice we were already drawing the attention of the guy she was holding on to. Bimpe clapped her hands together briefly below her jaw as if saying a prayer before using both hands to point at the direction of the guy beside her who by now was already facing me with a questioning look on his face. She said ‘Taofik meet Demola, sweat heart meet Taofik. Taofik is actually my colleague from work and my small baby, very stubborn’ I was looking unconvinced. I wanted to know who my babe at work was with. She must have noticed the look on my face so she went further ‘Demola actually just got back from the US, I haven’t seen him in years and he wants me to hang around him like bodyguard, he doesn’t trust any of these guys so I’m just here to make sure he gets home safe. We shook hands briefly and exchange a few pleasantries.

So would you have preferred a different ending?

horwa140:
Honestly I wasn't expecting this story to end like dis cause this story is of the hook ......

First of all I'll like to say I'm really honored to be mentioned. You have a great story here, your use of English is good. However, you can do with a little more imagination by playing each scene over and over again in your mind. I'll be following this story.

Wow!!! That means a lot. Thanks for reading.

Enny2013:
My best story of d year....d only story i saw d end on NairaLand..kudos to d writer