Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 6:20pm On May 21, 2018 |
Joshudinho: [color=#990000][/color] @TBM your post makes me Join NairaLand Have been reading your story since Last year I join the chemistry + the Physics of your brain together with biology to locate the Geography of your brain I couldn't find any all I could find is that you are just The Blessed Man That is blessed with lots of Knowledge I hail you o May the Lord continue to Water the Garden of Your Knowledge Joshudinho_Cares
TBM craze man. Ahah |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 12:02am On May 21, 2018 |
Longtime people! Manuelforbes is back! |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 11:27am On May 07, 2018 |
Oga boss, monday don knack o. Abeg o..pls no us suspence kil persin. |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 9:01am On Apr 14, 2018 |
I was out 4 sum weeks and dis story has just two updates? Anyway... God save tbm say those updates are great and fantastic. If not.... Boss we dey behind u. Take all the time u need. We ain't going nowhere. |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 9:03am On Feb 17, 2018 |
Boss. Any weekend update? 4 ur boiz. Abeg |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 8:37pm On Feb 11, 2018 |
Theblessedman"stop talking please..." She cuts in sharply in a tone that got me worried. "why?" I asked with a shaking voice. "so I can say YES!..yes I will Marry you Darous!." She shouted delightedly. I inserted the ring into the appropriate finger and a round of applause and hootings followed instantly. Atlast! wow. Am mesmerised by those words. Best romantic proposals. Keep it up Tbm. Joke you're in for this. |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 12:39pm On Feb 10, 2018 |
Chai! Tbm.. U sha know how to keep me in oliver twist mode. Always wanting for more. Chai..this guy sabi no be small. Joke...no gree 4 dat idiot o. That sex-starved son of thunder  Next update plz. Am loving diz |
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Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 1:26pm On Feb 05, 2018 |
Divepen1 we don hear u o. Anyways our op is doing great with or without Fp |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 1:24pm On Feb 05, 2018 |
4 surest things of life.
1. Arrival of The next day.
2. The sun to shine.
3. Theblessedman to drop a great and funny update.
4. REAL MADRID.
Keep em koming oga mi. You are certainly doing great. 2 Likes |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 7:39pm On Jan 27, 2018 |
IjeleNwa: [color=#990000][/color] you sound so retarded u be born idiöt. No sense 4 ur big head. Mumu |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 7:37pm On Jan 27, 2018 |
Darous baba agbalagba. Update nau. We dey beg o |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 11:44pm On Jan 23, 2018 |
SmartestPopQUEEN: Can this story ever stop getting more interesting? I don't think so. Tbm, you're great. apparently, i dnt tink it can |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 11:43pm On Jan 23, 2018 |
lekkxydinho: Havnt seen a story so captivating, thrilling, funny and comically written dan thdis story. I don't know whats stoppin Divepen1 and other mods to from takin diz stori to front page. This is arguably the most viewed stori on Nairaland. Unless am wrong. Divepen1 oga do d needful to encourage our gr8 writer jare. Theblessed man too good. i absolutely agree wit u broda |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 7:49am On Jan 18, 2018 |
honourable356: I Just finished reading the story up to the latest episode...an I have this to say, a learner doesn't just pick up a pen and write something as lengthy, intriguing, and entertaining as this.
This is unarguably something inbuilt or inborn ... or should I put it this way? an untapped talent that the owner probably just discovered few months/years ago..
Yeah, it has been there all long but it just need someone, something, or an event to touch the right spot for it to explode...it did and COUNTLESS was born.
And what a story it was! The literacy giants would attest to this even though they were hitch here and there screaming "I am a first timer"!
I won't be surprise if this story ends and he came up with another one.. capable of pulling the crowds in their thousands.
**Criticism** I couldn't go as far back as episode one and read again in other to be able to give a full review but I base my criticism judging by what I could remember and most on the few months updates...
Even through the story hasn't been concluded yet, major characters in the story are forgotten totally or left completely in oblivion as the story wore on? It doesn't work that way and it is a no no no...however, I have this intuition that you have some surprise up your sleeve for your audience.
Every major characters in the story must be involved one way or the other in bringing the story to a grand conclusion unless we are looking at a PART 2 which at the moment appears highly unlikely!
Secondly, it seem the length of the story is beginning to take a toil on the writer that he sometimes fail to give fill description of the event probably afraid of prolonging the story (he smiled). Don't do that! No mater how long it takes, the audience can wait provide you are updating consistently when you should.
PFolar....did you say that Theblessedman claim that he is not a higher institution student (and temigurl and smartestpopqueen agreed with you) inspite of the words he made use of in writing this story which I could very much argue that it is not words used frequently by secondary school students to mingle? Funny enough, either he is home schooled or he is probably the "BLESSED" man and a true son of sango as he claim. @bolded. Its true he's not of any higher institute. We practically liv in d sam area. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 7:30am On Jan 18, 2018 |
Marry her? Is that even up for a debate? Mumu boy. |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 10:24pm On Jan 12, 2018 |
SmartestPopQUEEN: I honestly can't fathom anything that can hinder a man with yhur intellectual talents from attaining the top Mr TBM. Considering everything yhu've stated about the level of yhur education is what really makes it ironically unbelievable seeing what yhu've done with the story so far.
Pleas don't relent. Continue...yhu' gonna end up at the top someday. our very own mama. Happy new yr o |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 3:17pm On Jan 12, 2018 |
paqman: [b][/b]we hail the son of shango my acknowledgment, the suspense is astonishing my criticism, slow update but and you are forgiven with reason . your mistake in the story, you should just try and add a little self control to the character, but it really spice up your story . na my mind I talk ooo , who am my to critisicise another man work , all the same brother I hail am compelled to second your opinion bro. Tbm is the best. |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 6:30am On Dec 26, 2017 |
Merry xmas to my amiable WrITer. Sir T.B.M. Your story is very great and I remain your number one fan. Thru thick and thin. Darous don enter one chance o...that girl Chyoma na witch or devil...na only sango fit save darousmart. Ride on sir. |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 5:57am On Nov 28, 2017 |
Truly a blessed crippled man. Tbm...i wonder wetin go happen to Darous oö...keep em coming |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 11:07pm On Nov 26, 2017 |
Tbm update na. Ah really feel your profile picture o |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 10:33pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Boss! Ah dey feel you! Ride on boss. Your number1 one fan! |
Literature › Re: Nairaland Literature Awards Of The Year- Poetry Included-- Voting Thread by manuelFORBES(m): 10:32pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
NOVEL
1. Romance : Countless by Theblessedman
2. Thriller/mysteries/Detective
: Oyinprince
3. Horror: Ghostwritter, by a
distance
4. Comedy: Countless by Darous Emmanuel.
5. Magical/fantasy/
scientification: I go for.. Apollux
6. Most consistent novelist : Chumzypinky. 3 Likes 1 Share |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 6:07am On Oct 29, 2017 |
Sir Tbm, u're the real deal bro. Always making people laugh. Please dnt stop the momentum o. Much respect and love have gat 4 u bro.. |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 11:24pm On Sep 21, 2017 |
Lets all pray for the young genius to get well soon. The dude has been on sick bed since monday. Please guys and ladies, lets pray for him. Its not an easy tasky o. |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 3:34pm On Sep 04, 2017 |
darousmart d baddest nigger |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 12:24am On Sep 02, 2017 |
I seriously wish this great story never ends. So I can always have something interesting to read whenever I come online. Sir TBM, please feed me more sir. Your namber one fan.... |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 6:34am On Aug 09, 2017 |
Next update plz. Am enjoying every bit of this story. Kwantinue |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 10:35pm On Jul 24, 2017 |
Karma just gave u d opportunity to deal with that idiot Jide. No waste am o. TBM u be boss |
Literature › Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 10:06pm On Jul 20, 2017 |
Can't believe its 5years already. Seems like yesterday when I heard abt the traggic news of your P-man's demise Darous. May his soul continue to rest in peace.
Tbm you r doing fantastically great. Keep it up bro. |
Literature › Re: Introducing Top 10 Stories Of The Week ( Nomination Thread) by manuelFORBES(m): 10:01pm On Jul 20, 2017 |
To read the most funniest tori
on NL. Abeeegee, just click on
thiz link o. Countless by
Theblessedman. That tori
sweet die.
Thanx me laterr. http://
www.nairaland.com/3696077/
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vengeance 4 Likes |
Literature › Re: Introducing Top 10 Stories Of The Week ( Nomination Thread) by manuelFORBES(m): 11:25pm On Jul 04, 2017 |
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