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PoliticsRe: Festus Keyamo Attacking Tinubu Over Forge Certificate 21years Ago On Magazine by marenx: 10:44pm On Oct 08, 2023
Now they're in the same party so he has to support him.
Foreign AffairsSmoke Looks Like Beasts Over Residences In Isreal by marenx(op):
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An attack from Gaza and an Israeli declaration of war. Now what? Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu is being pressured to launch a full-scale invasion that Israeli leaders have been scrupulously avoiding since 2005.

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PoliticsRe: I Was Diagnosed With Stage Three Cancer – Olumide Akpata Reveals by marenx: 9:43pm On Oct 08, 2023
This is one benefit of having more money. Money can be used to undergo expensive medical treatments. Thanks Olumide Akpata is alive.
PoliticsRe: Kaduna PDP Reacts To Yero’s Exit From Party by marenx: 9:31pm On Oct 08, 2023
PDP is ill in Kaduna and in entire middle belt region chiefly because the party is considered as Christian party instead of a party open for all religions. This is because in their campaigns, their words usually make people feel APC is a fulani or Islamic party. Meanwhile, using religion criticism as a campaign strategy usually fails woefully even after they win.
Foreign AffairsRe: Lebanon Moves And Israel Announces A General Alert by marenx: 9:10pm On Oct 08, 2023
Israeli government should hunt and kill only the terrorists and spare the innocent unless the innocent become attackers. Furthermore, both sides should make effort for reconciliation.
PoliticsRe: Jonathan, Jega Lead West African Leaders To Monitor Liberian Elections by marenx: 7:39am On Oct 08, 2023
You'll see them performing well with the fear of God when they go to other countries for assignments but here in Nigeria they're clueless.
TravelRe: How I Was Able To Get My Passport In Ikoyi Despite The Mammoth Crowd by marenx: 7:27am On Oct 08, 2023
You're really lucky. Even Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie, the celebrity, didn't find it easy. But shamefully, Benin Republic, a country that isn't bigger than Rivers doesn't have this skirmishes.
PoliticsRe: Tribunal Requested Us To Withdraw From Kano Guber Appeal – INEC by marenx: 7:19am On Oct 08, 2023
Nigerian judiciary is made clouded, twisted and jagajaga even to lawyers themselves especially when it comes to election matters.
Foreign AffairsRe: Over 300 Israelis Killed, 1000+ Injured And 100s Abducted in day1 by hama (pics) by marenx: 10:04pm On Oct 07, 2023
Stop planning evil all the time--it will haunt you forever.
Christianity EtcRe: 5 Scaring Pictures Of The Secret Societies by marenx(op): 10:14pm On Oct 04, 2023
Mhizzard:
i would say have never hear of the first four groups before.illuminate,i guess it is common among musicians.
Or rather it is common among owners of entertainment industries who initiate greedy musicians, writers, fashion stars, social media moguls, etc.
Christianity EtcRe: 5 Scaring Pictures Of The Secret Societies by marenx(op): 8:55pm On Oct 04, 2023
RingRoadMafia:
Illuminati is... due to the hype around it. Cicada 3301 is based mostly on an if you know you know basis.
Thanks RingRoadMafia.
Christianity EtcRe: 5 Scaring Pictures Of The Secret Societies by marenx(op): 8:25pm On Oct 04, 2023
RingRoadMafia:
1: The Bilderberg Group
2: Annunaki (Lizard People)
3: Skull & Bones
4: Cicada
5: Illuminati
Between Cicada and Illuminati, which one is more popular?
Christianity Etc5 Scaring Pictures Of The Secret Societies by marenx(op): 7:57pm On Oct 04, 2023
Politics. by marenx(op):
One Best Skill a Graduate Should Master to Overcome Mediocrity


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When a political leader visited our community to talk to youths, I was called to give suggestions.

But I wasn't prepared.

A man who didn't finish secondary school--but who prepared--gave great suggestions.

He could reason faster than me.

I started learning from there.

*If you're asked to enumerate functions of government, can you enumerate 3 now? If a teacher in your class ask you to define government, can you define it well now?

It's difficult because you didn't prepare, right?

Ability to offer solutions and smart suggestions at the right time is a valuable skill.

To begin to develop this skill, create a list of challenges your people or your community is facing.

Create a list of questions people can ask.

Be used to practising to explain or enumerate a list.

Here are 3 questions of focus:

1. For graduates with interest in sport

What are the major challenges facing Nigerian Super Eagles?

Why is swimming neglected in most states of the federation?

Why are we not taking advantage of basketball for national development?

2. For graduates with interest in climate change (green house)

How can we stop people from cutting trees for fuel?

How can we make cooking gas very cheap for people in our community?

How can we recycle plastic wastes?

3. For graduates with interest in environmental health

How can we make our community and water ways clean?

In addition, if you hear of any debate club in your city or town join and become a member as it will help broaden your mind and make you sharp.

I know personal skills are important; I focus on learning and thinking.

Through communication skills and constructive criticism youths should pay attention to their communities to hold their political leaders accountable.

Angela Yvonne Davis, an American Marxist, feminist political activist and author, said:

“I think the importance of doing activist work is precisely because it allows you to give back and to consider yourself not as a single individual who may have achieved whatever, but to be a part of an ongoing historical movement.”

2.

He answers questions correctly in our class.

So I ask him:

"How can I easily retain more information in my memory?"

He tells me and invites me to join their reading group.

I join. We meet 5pm after school.

One member can define hundreds of English words accurately.

He says he learns one new vocabulary everyday following the advice a literature teacher, a youth corps member, gives.

One month later in the group I learn that words are sources of knowledge.

If you focus on learning new words everyday,

you'll notice that you don't have to attend classes to be intelligent.

You don't have to read many books.

If you understand words, it's easy to understand books.

But I have to ask him before he tells me the secret.

If you don't ask, it's assumed that you know.

How many times do you ask those ahead of you to tell you how they get there?

Your success sometimes depends on the quality of a question you ask yourself or someone.

You need to ask a special question that helps for you to have special knowledge that helps.

Ask people who are good at doing what you want to be good at doing.

Questions open doors of knowledge that transform the world.

Jesus says "Ask and it will be given unto you" (Matthew 7:7).

The #ForefrontWriter, Maren John Mafuyai
Poems For ReviewRe: In Love by marenx(op):
A good-looking, healthy Nigerian was breaking stones by the main road and he wrongly handled the explosive.

When the explosive exploded in his right hand cutting his four fingers instantly, the first thing that came out of his mouth was:

"My life has finished."

He spent over two weeks in Bingham University Teaching Hospital.

And I saw him after he was discharged.

Being frustrated and hopeless, he indulged in consuming excessive alcohol.

Even as he laughed, I could see hopelessness and frustration flickering on his face.

I could feel his unsaid grievances.

I knew if there was free healthcare, palliative or stipend for persons with disability in Nigeria, he wouldn't be hopeless. I knew if the society looked at persons with disability and extend a helping hand, he wouldn't have wished he died.

I saw he needed care and psychological and mental support this time. If the society cared, that wouldn't have happened.

We would have had several psycho-therapy and rehabilitation centers across each state. We would have seen citizens willing to visit psychiatrists without any one taking or advising them. We would have had less deaths from cancer cases. We would have had subsidized kidney, lungs and liver transplanting facilities in each state.

Let's demonstrate that we are humans by seeing and listening to persons with disability.

Let's extend our helping hands.

An American actor, director and television host, Levardis Robert Burton popularly known as LeVar Burton, said:

"In a society that functions optimally, those who can should naturally want to provide for those who can't. That's how it's designed to work. I truly believe we're here to take care of one another."


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Events5 Clean Pictures Of Lagos Blue Rail Line by marenx(op):
Poems For ReviewRe: In Love by marenx(op):
The Best Skill Every Graduate Should Master to Overcome Mediocrity


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When a political leader visited our community to talk to youths, as a graduate I was called to give suggestions and I wasn't prepared.

I had to start reasoning to give a well structured suggestion but I found myself unable to think clearly.

A man who didn't finish secondary school--but who had the skill--intervened and gave his great suggestions. He said if the leader came we should tell him the major challenges we faced and the major challenges were: lack of bridge to link our community with the neighbouring community; lack of clean water supply; and lack of electricity transformer.

He structured his suggestion as it should be when addressing news reporters.

I knew he could reason faster than me so I paid attention to what he did and I started learning from there.

Assuming you're asked to enumerate functions of government, as a graduate can you enumerate 3 now? Or if a teacher in your class ask you to define government, can you define it well now?

It's difficult because you didn't prepare, right?

Since then, I begin to prepare myself to give important suggestions on how to communicate with political leaders to perform their duties in my community.

Ability to offer solutions and smart suggestions at the right time is a valuable skill.

And to begin to develop this skill, create a list of challenges your people or your community is facing (example: lack of basic literacy to communicate with the political leaders; irregular meetings to discuss the matters arising; poor communication between the community leaders and their members; etc).

Be used to writing a list and practising to explain or enumerate it to a group of people.

Here are other questions of focus:

1. For people with interest in sport

What are the major challenges facing Nigerian Super Eagles?

Why is swimming neglected in most states of the federation?

We have a lot of tall people but why are we not taking advantage of basketball for national development?

2. For people with interest in climate change (green house)

How can we stop people from cutting trees for fuel?

How can we make cooking gas very cheap for people in our community?

How can we recycle plastic wastes?

3. For people with interest in environmental health

How can we make our community and water ways very clean?

In addition, if you hear of any debate club in your city or town join and become a member as it will help you become a big voice not only locally or nationally but also internationally.

Focus on making life easy to your fellow citizens and luxury and glory shall follow you.

Before becoming a graduate, I thought if I become a graduate I'll become very relevant to the society but my university education isn't enough.

I know personal skills are important so I focus on learning and thinking.

As a writer, I'm calling on youths to pay attention to their communities to hold their political leaders accountable through using communication skills and constructive criticism.

Angela Yvonne Davis, an American Marxist, feminist political activist and author, said:

“I think the importance of doing activist work is precisely because it allows you to give back and to consider yourself not as a single individual who may have achieved whatever, but to be a part of an ongoing historical movement.”


About the Author

Maren John Mafuyai teaches Public Speaking and writing. He teaches English and French in High Schools. He's a passionate writer and a lover. He lives in Jos. You can only text him first: 08182469977 (text only).
Poems For ReviewRe: In Love by marenx(op):
Poems For ReviewRe: In Love by marenx(op):
Why Writers Use Big Words
Maren John Mafuyai


1. Experts use big words for business purpose to make their customers believe they're qualified to serve them. Agricultural experts use words related to agriculture while financial experts use words related to finance; medical experts use words related to medicine while astronauts use words related to astronomy, etcetra. If the big words serve their customers and no one is complaining there's nothing wrong with that.

2. Poems are written to entertain and to be appreciated and they're written for the mature minds or for those who understand literary devices. There's nothing wrong with big words in them.

3. Political writers use words to expose their level of intelligence to help politicians convince the masses to vote for them.

4. But fact is if a title lures a reader, a reader wants to know why and how but when a big word stands in the way, he must stop reading and start using a dictionary.

Mokokoma Mokhonoana who called himself a Philosopher, Social Critic, Aphorist, Copywriter, Mystic, Graphic Designer, Satirist, Poet, etc, said:

"Adults who use big words in order to seem intelligent are annoying, especially those who are not intelligent."
Poems For ReviewRe: In Love by marenx(op):
The Less Privileged
Communities in Nigeria
Maren John Mafuyai


Unlike villages the less privilege communities are ugly parts of most big and small capital and commercial cities in the world.

Known as ghettos or shanty towns, they may not look the same but they are similar in one aspect or another. No matter the amount of social amenities and tall buildings there, they require government and charity organisation attention.

A good example of these places is characterized by unplanned neighborhood where reeking gutters can be seen among houses.

There's one motorable road for more than ten or twenty houses and small corridors are left for people, domestic animals and wheelbarrow to pass.

If there's fire outbreak in one house it can spread to other houses and the federal fire service facilities can't reach there.

Dogs eat babies' excrets and dirt-smeared pigs can be seen roaming about the gutters.

The channel of communication between the people and the government leaders is far for the people are poor and uneducated.

The rate of divorce can be high or low and so does the rate of bastards. Police and military harassment can be also seen.

One with a wife has four or five children with whom he lives in one or two rooms.

One can't enjoy reading as neighbor is running a grinding machine or running a generator set or raising the volume of a radio set.

If someone dies there isn't much interest to ascertain or probe the cause of the death: the belief in God is high. The people live by doing more work for less wages and paying taxes that don't support their lives.

Unable to access three square meal a day, the people also have no prescribed diet; they depend on any grain they can afford.

Teenage single mothers, teenage malefactors, drug abuse, poor access to basic literacy, poor power and water supplies, unaffordable health care and more are other major characteristics.

The people hope that one day God shall extend a helping hand to rescue them to live better.

China Tom Miéville FRSL, a British speculative fiction writer and literary critic, said:

"It had acquired a name, Spatters, that reflected the desultory randomness of its outlines: the whole stinking shanty- town seemed to have dribbled like shit from the sky."

Thomas Clark Durant (1820-1885), an American executive of the Union Pacific Railroad and a major force behind the first transcontinental railroad, also said:

"I was raised in a shanty town in Hell's Kitchen. The only difference between us and the rats was that the rats were well fed, and cleaner."

If we pay attention to less privileged communities in Nigeria, I believe, our sense of generosity shall arouse.
Poems For ReviewRe: In Love by marenx(op):
Prosperity go to useful citizens.

Maren John Mafuyai


The time I know life, I ask my dad a lot of questions and he laughs.

Maybe he laughs because he remembers when he knows it and how he reacts too.

But he advises me to be patient with where and how I find myself and to receive education and he says educated people demonstrate ability to understand how to make more of the society.

He wants me to learn more and he shows me that good life means being useful to the society.

When I acquire more knowledge, I see the world isn't only what I can see, hear and feel but also what I can't see, hear and feel.

I value people more than ever and giving back to the society becomes my top priority.

I'm grateful that I become a writer and I live in my country to help the less priveleged.

I write real stories that people to be born will find useful and become inspired.

My education shows me that it's important to be aware of what other people are passing through and the major role of a good citizen is to identify a human problem and commit to solving it.

Martin Luther King Jr., an American Baptist minister and activist, said:

"I choose to identify with the underprivileged. I choose to identify with the poor. I choose to give my life for the hungry.... If it means suffering a little bit, I'm going that way. If it means sacrificing, I'm going that way. If it means dying for them, I'm going that way, because I heard a voice say, 'Do something for others.'"


About the Author

"I don't only teach people how to speak for their right, but I also teach them to write for their right." Maren John Mafuyai teaches Public Speaking and writing to lesspriveleged Nigerians. He teaches English and French in High Schools. He's a passionate writer and a lover of beautiful and luxurious homes. He lives in Jos. You can reach him at 08182469977 (text only).

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I appreciate that my parents worked all their youthful age to make me suffer less than they did.

They don't want me to learn through bitter experience and they taught me that the key to be successful is to be more useful.

My parents believe that those who have Ph.D. are more useful than those who have Masters and those who have masters are more useful than those who don't.

At first, I agreed with them, then after I read and observed the society, I disagreed with them.

If I must have a certain certificate to be more useful in the society where someone who hasn't finished secondary school can establish a university, then there's something fishy.

Between the owner of university who is not even a graduate and the Ph.D holder who teaches in university, who is more useful?

Think and answer it yourself.

I know that the man who pays you salary to teach is more useful than you whether you're a professor while he's an illiterate.

This is a simple logic that many so-called educated citizens including scientists are yet to understand.

If you don't remove your head for a while far from career or professions that are established by university courses and start reading other books, you'll become a victim of brainwash that has been taking place since early 20th century.

Most of these university courses existed before modern university was discovered by Muhammad, the founder of Islam.

To brainwash us the more, in school even in history classes, they don't tell us that the current university system is founded by Muhammad.

That means people who establish the foundation of those university courses did not even go to university.

Are they not useful?

I'm not saying going to university is bad.

Do not allow certificate to define your usefulness in the society.

Be wise.

Help and advise your children to read more to be more knowledgeable and reasonable enough to be more useful even without certificates.

University is good but taking certificate more important than knowledge, talent and wisdom is not.

Certificate doesn't make anyone reasonable. Rather it sometimes even make you afraid to talk in public in order not to commit grammatical error as a Ph.D. holder.

You're now behaving not as an Igbo, Hausa or Yoruba that you're but as a Ph.D holder.

Certificate is the problem.

D. I grew up in a working-class community and find that the key to be successful is to be useful.
Poems For ReviewRe: In Love by marenx(op):
This is what happens when PWDs apply for a job in Nigeria


I was employed as a teacher of French and my table was near a young female hard- working teacher. She taught English but the management didn't know that her right hand decayed.

One month later, the management saw the wound was almost revealing her wrist bone. When the principal attempted to give her support, I thought she'd be allowed to continue her job. But two weeks later, she was laid off.

Worse things usually happen to such people after applying for an offline job in Nigeria.

The employers who are after profits would think how their customers would feel and react when they see them serving, and, if it's irritating, they'd dump their CVs and never call them.

The employers are protecting their businesses and the law doesn't prohibit that, but here's the problem: the victims are made frustrated and helpless.

In a country that cares for the masses, persons with disability (PWDs) shouldn't have even applied to work in companies that need persons without disability but here they're facing challenges.

As a writer, I believe by creating awareness, their hardship will come to an end.

A celebrated Neuroscientist, Bestselling Author of 100+ books and World's First Poet with 1000+ sonnets, Abhijit Naskar said:

"We need more attachment, attachment with the suffering of others - attachment with the miseries of others - attachment with the sweat and tears of others...-we need attachment with each and every depraved soul on this earth."


About the Author



Maren John Mafuyai teaches Public Speaking and writing. He teaches English and French in High Schools. He's a passionate writer and a lover. He lives in Jos. You can reach him at 08182469977
(text only).
Poems For ReviewRe: In Love by marenx(op):
Seeing His Condition Makes Me Afraid to Stay in This Country.

Maren John Mafuyai


A good-looking Nigerian is breaking stones by the main road and he mishandles the explosive.

When the explosive explodes in his hand and cut his four fingers, the first thing that comes out of his mouth is:

"My life has finished."

Then he spends over two weeks in Bingham University Teaching Hospital.

I see him after he's discharged.

His affected hand makes him frustrated and hopeless he indulges in consuming excessive alcohol.

Even as he laughs, I can see hopelessness and frustration on his face.

He has become poor and his body is thinning.

There are many others in Nigeria passing through something similar.

They don't only need financial support to revive or start a new business or a new chapter of good life but they also need proper rehabilitation services.

I write this to remind us.

An American actor, director and television host, Levardis Robert Burton popularly known as LeVar Burton, said:

"In a society that functions optimally, those who can should naturally want to provide for those who can't. That's how it's designed to work. I truly believe we're here to take care of one another."

The ForefrontWriter, Maren John Mafuyai

Entrepreneur | Teacher | Believer




About the Author

"I don't only teach people how to speak for their right, but I also teach them to write for their right." Maren John Mafuyai teaches Public Speaking and writing to lesspriveleged Nigerians. He teaches English and French in High Schools. He's a passionate writer and a lover of beautiful and luxurious homes. He lives in Jos. You can reach him at 08182469977 (text only).
Poems For ReviewRe: In Love by marenx(op):
Maren John Mafuyai

(This happened in 2022).


Abandoned by her biological father, my 11 year old niece got admission into JSS One in government secondary school.

When NGO came to take responsibility of paying the enrollment and 1st term fees for JSS One and SSS One less priveleged female students in her school, I gave them her name.

I can remember they showed me a class where all the female students were the beneficiaries. I can still hear the man who registered her saying the NGO would pay.

I know they were also convinced that the NGOs are not liars. I'd never passed through an NGO that lies.

But now almost a year later, after most of the beneficiaries have dropped out of the school because no one pays their tuition fees, I'm doubting.

I hope the NGO are not liars or scammers who take advantage of the less privileged and low income earners to write grand proposals with names and addresses of female students to obtain and syphon funds.

I know this can happen.

As a writer, I am writing this to remind meaningful Nigerians that we need to help each other and our children are out of schools due to lack of funding: some in school lack reading and writing materials--text books and exercise books.


Take note: As I write this report on 27 July, 2023, my niece is in school going to JSS two because her maternal grandfather pays her tuition fees. While those who have no one to pay theirs are out of school.

Michael Eric Dyson, an American academic, author, ordained minister, and radio host, said:

"Charity is no substitute for justice. If we never challenge a social order that allows some to accumulate wealth.... while others are short-changed, then even acts of kindness end up supporting unjust arrangements. We must never ignore the injustices that make charity necessary, or the inequalities that make it possible."



About the Author

Maren John Mafuyai teaches Public Speaking and writing. He teaches English and French in High Schools. He's a passionate writer and a lover. He lives in Jos. You can reach him at 08182469977 (text only).
Nairaland GeneralRe: Olufemi O. Taiwo’s Theory Of Everything by marenx(op):
CORRECTIONS


BEFORE:

What is passive voice?

Any grammatical element is geared towards helping a speaker or writer to deliberately pass a particular information or message to a reader or listener. One of those elements is passive voice.

Passive voice is a form of a lexical verb in which the subject of a sentence receives the action of the verb rather than performing the action. The opposite of passive voice is called active voice.


AFTER:

What is passive voice?

There are many grammatical elements that helps a speaker or writer to deliberately pass a particular information or message to a reader or listener. One of those elements is passive voice.

Passive voice is a form of a lexical verb in which the subject of a sentence receives the action of the verb rather than performing the action. The opposite of passive voice is called active voice.

BEFORE:

Passive voice is usually used in expository essay explaining a process of doing something like cooking, experiment, industrial work, etc. Creative writers are advised to avoid using it as it weakens a creative story. They are told "Mary runs the school" is more effective than "The school is run by Mary."

AFTER:

Passive voice is usually used in expository essay explaining a process of doing something like cooking, experiment, industrial work, etc. Creative writers are advised to avoid using it as it weakens a creative story. For example, they are told "Mary runs the school" is more effective than "The school is run by Mary."
Poems For ReviewRe: In Love by marenx(op):
I live in Jos and I've never teach in government school til that day.

I'm a teacher of English and French and I'm posted to teach French in government secondary school. I'm given JSS Two for
a start and the total number of students is 40. Most JSS Two students are supposed to be between 12 and 11 years old, but here the case is different: they're between 16 and 15.

As an experienced teacher with private secondary school, I assume government secondary school students are the same as private secondary school students in terms of learning speed. But I'm wrong.

Here the students aren't prepared to receive education.

When I ask them a simple question, to my surprise they can't answer it.

I think they were joking. I ask them another question, simpler than the previous one, but they aren't joking and none of them can answer it.

What's wrong?

I talk with their former French teacher and what she tells me is true.

According to her, most of the students are nannies or those living with their uncles or aunties and due to so much house chores given to them, they don't have much time to study. And worse than that, on several occasions, most of them aren't allowed in their class for not paying their tuition fee.

I haven't seated one on one with any of them, yet the picture is clear: they're abused and they're another category of less priveleged Nigerians looking for help.

These students are not only in the school I teach and not only in JSS Two but in all forms of most government secondary schools across Nigeria--they need someone to pay their tuition fee on time, buy them books and give them extra lessons.

As a writer, after asking some questions, I noticed apart from Rotary Club International, only Rochas Okorocha Foundation is putting smile in the faces of many less priveleged Nigerian teenagers.

Indeed great Nigerians should visit those secondary schools to see it for themselves.

David Robert Jones OAL, known professionally as David Bowie, an English singer-songwriter and actor, said:

"And these children that you spit on
As they try to change their worlds
Are immune to your consultations.
They're quite aware of what they're going through."



About the Author

Maren John Mafuyai teaches Public Speaking and writing. He teaches English and French in High Schools. He's a passionate writer and a lover. He lives in Jos. You can reach him at 08182469977 (text only).
LiteratureRe: A Different But More Effective Way To Use THANK YOU by marenx(op):
One day I opened a shop to put in practice what I learnt about giving value, then I discovered this power of value.

A step to my shop is hard to climb but it surprised me to see customers insisting to reach me.

Looking within, I realized I couldn't do without certain things: books, modern medicines, soap, etc. I couldn't do without foam mattress, electricity, modern means of transportation, audiovisual, etc.

This shows me why capitalists are the richest people in our democratic societies--because they offer what people are desperately in need of.

Recently, I was on Facebook when Robert Kiyosaki posted a poll suggesting having two types of conventional school system in the world: the one that teaches people how to be rich from the grassroots (capitalism) and the one that teaches people how to be employees from the grassroots (socialism).

I knew his suggestion can improve human society since even before he suggested it.

He, Napoleon Hill and Dale Carnegie are famous for saying you mustn't go to school if you want to be rich.

What they said is true although most senior government employees, who are favored by having "big" certificates, won't "simply" agree with them.
LiteratureRe: Read This Interesting Comprehension Passage by marenx(op):
I have so much trouble when I know I'm made to be a billionaire.

All the money I have is not up to N50,000.

My teaching profession almost killed me.

I'm not exposed to any kind of investment that I can start with less than N10,000.

My younger ones are looking up to me.

And I'm in my 30's.

Is it not too late to start from zero?

This is what I ask myself while gasping for air.

At that moment I know if I continue teaching full time in my present work place I will die before October.

Because the stress is too much to bear.

I tell myself I didn't go to school to be a slave teacher.

I didn't acquire more knowledge to settle for less.

So I say "No, it's not too late to start from zero."

I immediately change my mindset and begin to grow rich.

Now growing rich is my passion.

I thank God for giving me the fortitude to share this with you.

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Review
The Use of passive voice in chinua achebe's dead men's path

Reviewer: maren John Mafuyai

Review date: 7/11/2022





Dead Men's Path" is a short story written by Chinua Achebe and published in 1953. The story follows a young headmaster who is assigned to manage a mission school in a place where African traditional religion is fully in fashion.

The headmaster wants to prove that he's self-oriented, highly educated and therefore good at running the school. However, he ends up blocking the path that connects the people with their dead people--a move that results in a serious conflict.

This is a kind of a story one can see featured in most African history books. It is therefore no longer a new thing that it's difficult to make one forsake his/her inherited religion especially in totality.

To attract people to read this kind of a story, a creative writer needs to employ a device to hook them. That may be why Achebe relies on passive voice.

What is passive voice?

Any grammatical element is geared towards helping a speaker or writer to deliberately pass a particular information or message to a reader or listener. One of those elements is passive voice.

Passive voice is a form of a lexical verb in which the subject of a sentence receives the action of the verb rather than performing the action. The opposite of passive voice is called active voice.

Example:

Passive voice: Okon's promise was fulfilled.


Active voice: Okon fulfilled his promise.

In passive voice the sentence begins with Okon's promise. However, in active voice the sentence begins with Okon. In passive voice Okon receives the action of the verb rather than performing the action. Passive voice can appear in present tense, perfect tense, past tense, future tense, present and past continuous tense, etc.

Present tense: Okon's promise is fulfilled.
Perfect tense: Okon's promise has/had been fulfilled.
Past tense: Okon's promise was fulfilled.
Future tense: Okon's promise will/would/shall/should be fulfilled.
Present continuous tense: Okon's promise is being fulfilled.
Past continuous tense: Okon's promise was being fulfilled....
Etc.

Passive voice is usually used in expository essay explaining a process of doing something like cooking, experiment, industrial work, etc. Creative writers are advised to avoid using it as it weakens a creative story. They are told "Mary runs the school" is more effective than "The school is run by Mary."

But the major concern is sometimes a situation can be best explained through the use of passive voice. For example, it's better to say "The school is short-staffed" rather than "The mischievous proprietor short-staffs the school."

There are often situations in creative writing where it's more preferable to use passive voice. In 'Dead Men's Path', for example, Chinua Achebe demonstrates his intelligence and accurate sense of observation through employing the voice.

The Use Of Passive Voice in 'Dead Men's Path'

Chinua Achebe wishes to begin his 'Dead Men's Path' featuring the main character, a young energetic man named Michael Obi. He has no any effective option than to use a passive voice in both the first and the second sentence. He writes:

"Michael Obi's hopes were fulfilled much earlier than he had expected. He was appointed headmaster of Ndume Central School in January 1949."

The use of passive voice, his "hopes were fulfilled" and he "was appointed headmaster", is very interesting and impressive. A reader must want to know more about this man Michael Obi.

After Michael Obi's wife says something in reply to Michael Obi, Achebe wants us to know more about them. Again he chooses to use a passive voice but this time in a long sentence. He writes:

"In their two years of married life she had become completely infected by his passion for 'modern methods' and his denigration of 'these old and superanuated people in the teaching field who would be better employed as traders in the Onitsha Market.'"

Notice that "who would be better employed" and "she had become completely infected" are all forms of passive voice. Further, passive voice appears in conversation in what Michael Obi says to his wife:

"I was thinking what a grand opportunity we've got at last to show these people how a school should be run."

"How a school is run" and "how a school should be run" are both correct forms of passive voice. But a man who uses "how a school is run" may however be considered less professional in handling English Language than the one who uses "how a school should be run." Maybe that's why Achebe puts the later in Michael Obi's mouth since "Michael Obi was appointed headmaster of Ndume Central School."

Now Achebe has proven that he can more often use this technique effectively. He further uses it twice in one sentence as he writes:

"A high standard of teaching was insisted upon, and the school compound was to be turned into a place of beauty."

The author depends on passive voice throughout the story. It produces formal, original and mature language that reveals a clash between European and African belief. The following is the rest of the sentences where passive voice appears:

"Although [the path] is hardly used, it connects the village shrine with their place of burial."

"'But [the path] will not be used now'..."

"Heavy sticks were planted closely across the path at the two places where it entered and left the school premises. These were further strengthened with barbed wire."

"'...this path was here before you were born and before your father was born."

"...it is the path of children coming to be born."

"A diviner was immediately consulted and he prescribed heavy sacrifices to propitiate ancestors insulted by the fence."

"The beautiful hedges were torn up not just near the path but right round the school, the flowers trampled to death and one of the school buildings pulled down..."

All the sentences sound interesting, entertaining and easy to access, follow and interpret. Passive voice is a good ingredient to use to cook a fascinating story.

Conclusion

Great writers are aware that a key to great writing is identifying literary and grammatical devices and using them effectively. Through Dead Men's Path" Chinua Achebe demonstrates that passive voice is the best device any creative writer can take advantage of. The tool can be shaped and transformed to refine any dirty or weak sentence into the most wealthiest one.

It's far better off to tell up-coming creative writers to learn how to effectively use passive voice rather than scaring them that passive voice spoils a story.
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Nairaland GeneralRe: Olufemi O. Taiwo’s Theory Of Everything by marenx(op):
7.

I pushed my small white bicycle as I passed by a shopping mall.

An elderly neighbor saw me and shouted:

"This bicycle is too small for you. Dont use it."

I waved and shouted, "Thank you."

Though I was embarrassed.

A bicycle is small for me only if I can't ride it comfortably.

Any bicycle I can ride to a reasonable distance is my size.

My bicycle is taller than a motorcycle that can carry three men to their destination.

But I calmed down and shook the embarrassment because this isn't the first time I experienced someone whose joy comes from someone's sadness.

Every adult should know these:

-If you assume something, don't state it. Turn it to question.

If the man asked me privately, "Is this bicycle not too small for you?" it wouldn't have caused him this kind of writing here.

-Never believe you know.

From a distance or because you don't understand my bicycle, it may look too small. But wait until you see me riding it before arriving at your conclusion.

During my school days I lived in a hostel with someone similar who moved to disapprove of almost everything I said eventhough he knew he was wrong. My relationship with him was never connected.

Why did I share this story?

You may be facing or causing similar challenges.

But it is good to know you shouldn't judge a book by its cover.

Ask good questions to recognize that someone has emotions too.

8.

Coming up from work, I appeared on a path near a house...
Someone appeared from the house and gave me a handshake. When I accepted it, friendship was established between us...
Later he visited me, have a nice time with me. Began to visit each other and cook together...
Then I realized a negative site of him.
Though he was well educated, a good story teller and an interesting conversation creator, he is a cheat and I had to quit the relationship in order to maintain my image as a professional teacher.
But I really missed him....
I want to tell you that missing someone you enjoy is painful.
-missing a valuable customer
-missing a best friend
-missing a valuable influencer or a motivational speaker
-missing a valuable employee

All are painful.
Some years back I was following an influencer by the name Jeff Haden on Linkedin...
When he retired to Incom and my browser couldn't reach him, I felt a part of me was missing.
Though my writing style isn't similar to his, his influence is still with me eventhough I have never seen him.
I ever told him on Twitter that I wanted to write like him.
Life is really tough whenever you miss a gold.
I develop a let-go strategy that often helps me(I call it uplifting strategy).
It can help you too.
To uplift myself back to normal after missing someone, I use visualization, affirmations and meditation.
I keep myself inside me for a while.
And escape.


9.
The first time I carried over a course, I felt my heart would burst...
I put my hands over my head as I walked towards a bush.
"All my junior course mates will know it and I may fail again", I kept on telling myself.
If you have ever carried over a course, got fired from work, become pregnant out of wedlock or caught doing something disgraceful, you probably understand this.
The major cause of this pain is asking one or all of the following questions:
-What will my friends say?
-What will my parents say?
-Will my neighbours ever look at me the same?
Asking these questions can lead to committing suicide, abortion or change of location.
Be patient, feel free to criticize yourself.
Remember no one is perfect.
Come very close to God.

10.

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