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alleviate2002us: i wish u culd substantiate on the above since u were tutored by Soyinka......how can u say such nasty words wit out pointin out specifics wit suggested corrections!

All dez Nland I.T.K self, wen una go sabi somtin.....u even contradicted ur self sayin hez a good writer...SMH

O.D.B.:
Dull, uninteresting and out right depressing.

You introduced your story fluently but it flat-linned almost immediately.

You story lacks content and substance. You know how to write but you have no creativity.

Uniquexty: It was a still dark night. Stars had gone into hiding. The moon had one eye open. Trees breathed silently.
I looked deep into his eyes and it spoke evil. His lips sealed with smiles of mockery. That was it. He had me in his hands and i was at his mercy. Tears sneaked into my lips and my tongue held unto it for comfort. He stared into my heart and saw what was inscribed on it. It was more of a whisper but it screamed into my heart. '' you are going to die''. That was the first and only word he said to me. I was to weak to move. My eyes were d only things alive in my body, as it rained a flood of tears.......

Okstefens: I ve about 50 unpublished drama, story bøok, and xtian discipleship manual which i wrote and now wasting away on d shelf. So i like to see what u got