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At times to God praises we give, just for His intervention we cleave, downcast we be when not answers receive.

Bravo to us when God we praise then our needs we secondly submit, but being selfish at bay do we keep?

For who He is, oh yes, our praises He deserves, praises not of heart borne to induce, but just for who He is.

Then shall our problems know, really, who He is; to worship thee i shall ever live, not for me but for Who You Are- my everything.
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BiafranFirstSon:
I have read some poems here and i'm impressed. More effort will make u better. God bless

Thanks man!

Take a walk down d lane, in my shoes, only then shall u feel and know dat its d big toe dat pinches. Those nights filled with thoughts of uncertianties. D lonely walks in d park with no flashing smiles and d uninteresting routine. So u see why my hands remain stuck in my pocket!

Take a look through my spot, through my window and u will see why I write like this. D days of broken promises and nights without d moon. D days of long waiting only but to behold shadows, d laughter heights then silent cries. So u see why I wear the shades!

Take a ride into my world, a trip through my sphere and u will feel d writhe and cold, then would u know why my sun rises so late. Those times in d blind spot wishing u would come, days even weeks of long silence and cold, holding u close only to wake from a dream. Times I wished could be erased from d leaves of d calender, even from d heart of time. So u see why this picture still graces my wall!

Take a glance through my stuff, a look-see into my closet, then would u see why its blue. Times when loneliness seeks my arm of friendship. Days when the only friends i've got are my CDs, when I take solace in the speech of my speakers. When my world is in my hand-held, connecting me to those friends far ashore. So you see why its nokia!

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This is good. Keep d heart listening and ur pen writing, it sure can one day bring oil to ur lamp! Good work.

Take a walk down d lane, in my shoes, only then shall u feel and know dat its d big toe dat pinches. Those nights filled with thoughts of uncertianties. D lonely walks in d park with no flashing smiles and d uninteresting routine. So u see why my hands remain stuck in my pocket!

Take a look through my spot, through my window and u will see why I write like this. D days of broken promises and nights without d moon. D days of long waiting only but to behold shadows, d laughter heights then silent cries. So u see why I wear the shades!

Take a ride into my world, a trip through my sphere and u will feel d writhe and cold, then would u know why my sun rises so late. Those times in d blind spot wishing u would come, days even weeks of long silence and cold, holding u close only to wake from a dream. Times I wished could be erased from d leaves of d calender, even from d heart of time. So u see why this picture still graces my wall!

Take a glance through my stuff, a look-see into my closet, then would u see why its blue. Times when loneliness seeks my arm of friendship. Days when the only friends i've got are my CDs, when I take solace in the speech of my speakers. When my world is in my hand-held, connecting me to those friends far ashore. So you see why its nokia!

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Nice piece, keep d fire burning. Are u on facebook. Search me with okafor ekene michael and check out some of my writing in my notes. Take care!