Nancydearie:
Good morning @ all,T-Dan,how are you doing?Nice Update!! Following!!

Tipiflexy:
Morning to u girl.

sconp:
nice one here, hope am allowed to give some constructive criticism.

I know this work is fictional but it should also look real and the actions real.

You are making Nicholas look like a super human.

How can someone without police experience, do some of this things.

How was he able to jump the fence with Stella who was blindfolded and hand cuffed?

You are trying but try to make it look realer(sic)

Kudos!

Costlybabe:
Temi,u are doing great but you should try to be more realistic,i do agree with the points sconp pointed out

Flakeey:
what Frank has for Viv is not love but obsession
if you love someone, u will accept him/her with his/her luggage and baggage

i pray nothing happens to Anthony boy

well done Bro. Temitope

pricelesslove:
Good morning Daniel. how was your night? Hmmm this your story is very sweet. more ink to your pen

TemitopeDaniel:


sconP!! Howdy na??

Now, I'm writing this story the way I picture myself. Look at something, I am a type of person who can carry.. I don't even know how laborious it may be, I'm gonna carry it. It looks like this, if you see a loved one in danger, no matter how tough, no matter how, you will try to get em outta d problem. That's the kind of person I am. So for her to be handcuffed, I pictured it in a way as If if I was the one, I would try all my best since she was in danger.

By the way, the forest and other scenes too... it depends on what you want. If I was in his shoes, I'd do more than that... and many other people.

So, your critic is noted and greatly needed. I'll try tonreduce my superhuman behaviours too

Thanks bro, God bless you.

really?? anything??
no p bro flow on with the story

Nancydearie:
Good morning @ all,T-Dan,how are you doing?Nice Update!! Following!!

TemitopeDaniel:
love.... Amen Flakky.. Howdy?

sconp:
really?? anything??
no p bro flow on with the story

Princesschi:
Nooooooooo. Nick cant miss his way nau, dat Frank is such a beast, wat kind of devilish love is that? Pls T.Dan, Anthony must not die. Plsssssss!!

Flakeey:


me good and ya?

Trypa:
Temitope haba wat u are doing to mi is not fair o no prblm they is God in everytin we are doing, I will just reserve my comment



Nice update

seunviju:
Welldone T-dan,thanks for the update

onosj:
Temitope! Anthony must not die oooooo!!.... Frank na by force 2 marry single mother.

TemitopeDaniel:
All thanks to God and Tipiflexy.... m good.

TemitopeDaniel:
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TemitopeDaniel:
Ore mi
.. thank u oh... btw, what av I done na?

TemitopeDaniel:
Lol... ma ability no mean say I fit carry the world oh... jex trying to show it that when one is in danger u try to help no matter what or how.

and, Try to be a good boy.... why bad nah?

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