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| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:01am On Dec 16, 2014 |
Onemansquad:na u know o |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:02am On Dec 16, 2014 |
D9ty7, u must not become a terrorist ooo, if u shud become one, Nigeria don die be dat |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by profsomebody(m): 10:11am On Dec 16, 2014 |
D9TY7..... U r simply too good. This is the second or third time I'm commenting on one worthy thread and when such happens, you know it's simply beyond d limits. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 10:24am On Dec 16, 2014 |
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| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by okeoghene4real(f): 10:34am On Dec 16, 2014 |
Its. Indeed all in a circle. Nice story. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 10:35am On Dec 16, 2014 |
dunno y u let victoria confess like dat.. I mean, just easily?? Assasins don't behave like that Well hope kelvin succeedz in waheva he's planning to do.. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 10:37am On Dec 16, 2014 |
Onemansquad:Gerawt.. Stop disturbin me |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 10:38am On Dec 16, 2014 |
kocvalour:yong man u beta kip quiet b4 i ... |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 10:40am On Dec 16, 2014 |
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| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:28am On Dec 16, 2014 |
Gradually the circle narrows down. Kelv has a heart of rubber. It is useless at affection. Vicky Vicky! Is good to make new friends but the police is never a friend. I pity Clement o. Ngozi shd better wise up as a policewoman. No beating yet and Rahmon wants to die .D9ty7 I'm so in love with the story. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:30am On Dec 16, 2014 |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by profsomebody(m): 11:54am On Dec 16, 2014 |
kocvalour:If she was nabbed while still in the business, she wouldn't have done that. It's her brother we are talking about here and remember she has put an end to the job. part of the things that come with change |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 2:36pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
D9ty7 feed us more na. ![]() |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:58pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
*Buhari's voice*Chai!Victoria i don enter me for cell |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tescoleps(f): 4:27pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
D9ty7:9ty7 u r doing a good job here. Welldone... I'l find time to read ur other stories. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 4:28pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
coughs*** Karl corp injury time |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 4:45pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
i just dey observe |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 5:10pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
--continuation-- Kelvin opened the door from outside and hopped into the car. "Hope I didn't keep you waiting?" He asked. She ignored him and kept starring at her hand which was placed on the steering wheel. "Ngozi!" He called tapping her. "Don't you ever touch me." She screamed. Kelvin knew she was still hurting from how things played out between them because no sensible lady will decided to hang out with a guy that forcefully had the carnal knowledge of her. But when one's thinking has been beclouded by either of love or lust, then you could invite someone who tried to kill you a few days ago to dinner with you alone in the house. Kelvin knew better not to ask questions from her, because he knew it will further ruin his chances of getting anything from her. "Tell me what you have to tell me and leave." She said. He weighed his chances and decided to play the game of capturing hearts with her. "Ngozi, I was listening to the news yesterday and I heard something about how a police team invaded an uderground situated in Mr Ayo Okorie's compound."He began. "How does that concern me?" She asked. "It concerns you baby. Your name was mentioned, we were made to understand that you were the officer that discovered the underground." "So?" she was now getting impatient. "Don't you think your life is in danger? Considering the fact that this terrorists listen to the news too, they may want to get back at you." He said. "And why will they attack me? Its not like I was the one who led the police troop into the underground." "Its because I care about you, that's why I am telling you this." "You care about me and you molested me? Kelvin you made me look cheap. Kelvin you hurt me." She cried. Now he was getting his desired result, the next thing to do now is to buy her trust. "Baby, I still regret my actions, which was why I have decided not to call you. I am left wondering how you'll feel, a whole me, that was in the position to protect you, make you feel loved and never lack support, I am the one that made you feel insecure, I am the one that hurt you." He said soberly. The trick was working, she was crying the more he talked, the tears were flowing freely. "But I am here now to protect you. No terrorist will come near you or harm you. I ought to be in my office now, but I sneaked out without permission just to speak with you and I am sure I'll face the panel as soon as I return. But I am ready to face the damn consequence provided it is because of you." He said like he had crammed them. She heaved deeply as her eyes finally fell on him. "What gives you the impression that the khal corp are after me?" She asked finally. "I didn't say they are after you. All I am trying to say is that they may be after you, you know how these people work don't you? We watch them in films." Kelvin explained. She looked into Kelvin's eye for a minute without blinking trying to see lies in what he just said. "And what if they are not after me?" She asked. "We are lucky then. But I'll want you to be very carefull." He said. She smiled for the first time, but the next second, she was frowning. "According to newsmen, we were told that the underground was located in one of the most secretive place in the house. How were you able to discover it? And how did you know it was an underground?" Kelvin asked. "I saw a map lying carelessly in the living room and out of curiousity, I saw it there." She replied. Kelvin could vividly remember Mr Ayo Okorie's reaction the moment news reached him that the underground in his house had been discovered. "There is only one way to see the underground. The map." He had said. "But, how can you be so careless to let such a secretive material fall into the enemy's hands?" Maleek asked him. "That was a huge mistake, but to stop further disasters, we need to get the map as soon as possible. Anyone with the map will find it easier when locating the Khal corp, but without the map, they will find it difficult, then we can attack them and keep them at bay." Mr Ayo explained. This had prompted Maleek to send Kelvin on the assignment to get the map of the police force, most importantly, Ngozi. "The map? Where is it?" He asked. "No one is talking about it in the office, so I guess it should still be there in the house." Kelvin knew how bad he needed to get the map back to Mr Ayo, but the problem is how to get into the house. Ngozi should be able to do this for him, but won't he look desperate? He'll have to device another means. "What's that tattoo on you chest?" She asked. --to be continued-- |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 5:11pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Weldone my dear. time to act......................... more grace |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by summerflame(m): 5:39pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Guy wetin concern you?.. Lol. I will sue u to court.. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:13pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Mhen,Ngozi just asked the million dollar question |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 6:20pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Gbam i knw kelvin wil lie his way out #Team Danger-kelv #Team clement |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 6:31pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
kelvin b smart.. I de ur back.. Dunno y victoria should confess easily oo.... D9ty7 come & answer ddaatt question |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 6:35pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
profsomebody:I don't buy dat jorrhh... Once an assasin, always an assasin.. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 6:40pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Dis Ngozi sef ![]() ![]() |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 6:42pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
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| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 7:19pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Ow many times I want to comment ehn ![]() ??..........big head monitoring spiritOnemansquad: |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 7:23pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
adewealth027:*removes tongue* ![]() |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 7:24pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Kelvin you made me look cheap. Kelvin you hurt me.... "RUBBISH"... |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 7:55pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Oh boy see question ![]() |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 8:19pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Kocvalour: I think the question you asked has been answered. But I have a question for you which is "what do you expect Vicky to do then?" Prove heady and keep telling lies and keep digging her grave? Don't forget she had made the resolution not to be involved in anything related to being an assassin and the best thing to do is come out clean with the hope of getting pardon. Don't forget, she is a woman. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 8:27pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Hey guys, I have a not so good news for everyone here. Its not like someone died o. Its just that tonight's update will be dropping after 10pm because I have a project I am working on here alongside other nairaland writers. Its my turn to post tomorrow, so I want to go and prepare my own chapter, then save. Sorry for the disappointment, and don't forget, it could be a blessing in disguise. ------------------ To those who have commented today or had something to say about the story, I am using this opportunity to thank you all. Kocvalour, Emmykul4love, Onemansquad, Adewealth027, macpetrus, haydot95, summerflame, codedbaby, Flakeey, stuff46, tescoleps, formula89, tecno4life, profsomebody, Bluestarry, Ogbarmey, okeoghene4real, Fatalveli and a host of others whom I couldn't mention. |
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