Evangelio:

What is the deadline?

kizzykeziah:


Thought that was 6pm and timing was quite important

Divepen:

I checked the timetable and I saw that we should be given enough time for this...
So you have till 8:30pm to submit your work...

Divepen:
I checked the timetable and I saw that we should
be given enough time for this...
So you have till 8:30pm to submit your work


Divepen
Slap1
Cybershow
Kusibe77
Stuff46
tattesco
SCORE:12
Group2
Theorbiter
kizzykeziah
Chinweblinkz
Thronekid
Ionprince
princesssusan

thronekid:

Done already, now, lets face the rating thing, u think?

stuff46:


bro why two updates na? I guess the rule did'nt permit that. Your mission to kickouras.s is somehow o.

Divepen what do yu say about that?

Evangelio:
A finger raised tentatively, Any space 4 a rookie? Abeg i want in. @Slap1 hope u are getting beta?

Divepen:
Before you rate ...Read the instructions again

Describe what you see in the picture to the extent
that a reader who have not seen that picture before can
vividly imagine it...

thronekid:

No two updates Broh, and I think we'r privileged to modify whenever neccesary as long as the deadline is yet to be elapsed, abi, Divepen, I lie?
#mission_kick_as's

Divepen:



No...Once submitted it is submitted..

Cybershow:
Hmmm..... @thronekid i sight u
@chinweblinkz i sight u 2
@slap1 quick recovery o.

thronekid:

Sights u back using my powerful telescope!
'Hmmm, this guy just dy take d alomo only him sha, oda na'

Divepen:
,My Ratings
Remember, we are to use the picture to describe. My rating is mainly on vivid description, not grammar, not style or anything else.
Chinweblinkz:
*There was no crowd in the picture.
* His hand was not in the air
But you described somethings
Ratings: 4/10

Theorbiter
*You only talked about him on the car.

Rating: 2/10

Stuff46
*The uniform was not blue

You did talked about the policeman being on the car.

Rating: 2/10

Susrite:
You did talked about the man being on the bonnet of the car... Oh! You also described his uniform.
Rating: 4/10
Lonprince:
You talked about him being on the bonnet
Rating: 2/10

Kusibe77.
* You described that it was on a T-Junction
* You told us the car was a black Golf.
*The Uniform was not dark blue..It was black.
*You talked about the white Beret.
* You talked about him being on the car.
* You did talk about the hausa man.
Rating: 6/10

Thronekid
*The car was indeed a black one...err...Not peugeout.
* You described the men crossing the road.
* You told us about the guy putting on knicker.

I read your work before now and I did not all this information before that shows that you modify it. I can agree that you did not know about this law before but it will make me reduce the mark I personally will give you.

Rating: 5/10
Evangelio:
You did talked about the man on the bonnet.

Rating: 2/10
Kizzykeziah
* You talked about the golf car.
*You talked about the car been wound up.
*You talked about the the police on the cae
* You talked about the two men.
Rating: 6/10,

Divepen:

Lonprince:

losprince:

Read my lips dude, losprince not ionprince or Lonprince...

Cybershow:
#Crying..m realy sad abt dix group1 r u anoid at me dat i dnt show up..pls z nt my fault z just dat m a jambite..and i nid 2 study mor harder..pls pardon me..i atend tutorials..my chances r nt dat much as b4 pls #crying cybershow wish im group d best

Divepen:
First Person Re-teller: The story is told, not by a
witness to the events, but by someone who has
heard the story from yet another person.
Her stomach rumbled; I don't know why; it
probably was the sour 'moimoi' she had at her
CDS dinner early in the evening. You know how
sometimes you decide to risk eating something
even when you should know better. She had
thought it a good idea at the time, even though
she suspected that the meal



Written By Whitemosquito.

Divepen:
I said in the morning that to get bonus point, rate others work you get a point each, I.e a point for everyone you rate their work, and a mark for giving them reasons for your ratings.


ScoreBoard.
Chinweblinkz: 4+6=10/2= 5
The Orbiter=2+7=9/2=4.5=5
Stuff46: 2+3(points for rating 3 works).
Susrite: 4
Losprince:2
Kusibe77: 6
Thronekid: 5+4=9/2=4.5=5
Evangelio: 2
Kizzykeziah: 6
Divepen: 7 points for rating+ 7 points for giving reasons for his ratings= 14


Therefore
Group1
Former score+ Stuff46+ Susrite+Kusibe77+Evangelio+ Divepen.
I.E
12+5+4+6+2+14=43


Group2
Former score+Chinweblinz+Losprince+Thronekid+Kizzykezziah+Theorbiter
I.E
10+5+2+5+6+5= 33

THE BONUS POINTS WILL ALWAYS BE THERE FOR YOU TO TAP IN.



Tomorrow's Assignment: Write A story in The First Person Re-teller.
Not More than 200 Words.

Deadline 8:30pm tomorrow..
I will post articles regarding on this thread or our FBI page today and Tomorrow...
Tags.
Divepen
Theorbiter
Slap1
Kizzykeziah
Cybershow
Chinweblinkz
kusibe77
Thronekid
Stuff46
Losprince
Tattesco
Princesssusan
Susrite
Akposb
Evangelio